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Aryanilda,ami HRISHIKESH likhchhi... gatobarer poste anek katha hochhilo kabita niye. sei sutra dhare kichu katha bolte ichhe korchhe. amader bloger je nam tate bola jai amra jara likhchhi tara motamuti nabya shatabdir likhie. ei satabdir kabider aneke bolchhen SHUNYA DASAKER KABI. ebarer boi sankhya dese o parchhilam ei natun kabider niye lekha. jake Shankha Ghosh tar CHADER VITOR ETO ANDHAKAR kabyagranther dhange bolechhen SHUNNER VITOR ETO DHEU? ei poste jara likhechhen amar moto nimnamaner medha bad diye sabai kintu ek arthe khub intellectual kabi. sabar kabitar vasa jeno adhunikatar rase jarito. amar prosnotao ekhanei je, ei natun brigade tairi holo, tader manifesto ki? amra jara natun dasaker ba SHUNNYA DASAKER KABI tara ki likhbo? surrealist, impressionist erakam ki kono natun dharar chhanche eder fela jabe? nyaka nyaka lyric chhere amra je natun dhang sristi korechhi sei rachanar bisoibastu ki hobe? janaiko pragya kabir prabandhe porchhilam,adhunik kabitai niguda atmakathan ar chhaichapa jounatar prakas chhara ar kichhui balar nei.kabi sadharan pathaker katha vebe likhben na, samajer anusasaner protio kabir anurag nei, slogan deoa kabir kaj noi,kabir mathai nei vubaner var-- tahale kabi kar janya rachana korben? e ki sudhui atmakathan? ar ses prasna natun ekta jug ele sei kabira dekha jai europeo kono kabir dwara provabito hoyechhen. kokhono Bodlaire, kokhono Pound, Elliot, Neruda ba Jimenez(?),ba hungry generation er kabider dwara. tobe ei shunnya dasaker kabira mulata kon europeo kabir dwara anupranito? adou ki keu achhen jake niye ekta ism gare uthchhe ?
Hrishikesh, prothamei boli apnar lekha khub valo.amar to besh valo legeche...nimnamaner bolata uchit noy.....
ebar ekta kathay asi,ami janina apni kon "janaiko pragya kabir" katha bolchen, tabe amar mane hoy na "samajer anusasaner" proti kobitar kono day thake..kobir thakte pare, karon tini o ekjan sadharan manus....kobita jodi samajer anushasam phiriye ante parto, tahole aaj porjonto j poriman kobita lekha hoyeche, tate amadr samaje r kono problem thaka uchit chilo na.... school-colg er katha bad dile, amar to mane hoy na, .01% manus o kobita poren, ba vaben.....(eta kono statistical porisankhan noy, mangara porisankhan) r jara, kobita porte valobasen se sob pathok ra nischay nijedr pachondo mato kono na kono kobir lekha beche nen. eta nitantoi baktigata, apni ba ami bole karo pachondo change korte parbo na, r ditiyata change korte jaboi ba kano?tabuo, nishay kothao na kothao kono na kono pathok nischay ache(apnar ba amar mato)m jata ei shunnyo dasaker kobita porte valobasen, esob niye chinta korte valobasen...
ei ekhanei j kati kobita ache, tar sob gulo ki niguda atmakathan ar chhaichapa jounatar prakas???? motei na....tahole nischay bolte hoy j , ei du er baireo shunyo dashak er kobita ache...
amar ati simita gayan e bujte pari na j egulo kono ism dara provabita kina, tabe amar to eke ZEROISM ba SHUNNYAISM bolte iche korche.
eta keno ? kono dashak-er safilyo o byarthota nie purber kono dashak-k er aage kaaj korte dekha jae ni . holeo byaktigotovaabe hoechhe .
ekti dashak-k nie probondho likhbe poroborti dashak . taarai ei kaaj koraar odhikaar raakhe . je projonmo-k perie ekti projonmo elo , se ki kore sei projonmer spordhaagulo niropekkhovaabe chinhito korbe ? korleo ta ki biswasjogyo ?
taarpor bujhi etaai or swechha-e bechhe neoaa khela . baatasvorti ekta gobesonaagaar-e bose o roj natun kore baatas aabiskar korchhe . sei aabiskaar-er khobor roj aamader deoaar himmot or aachhe .
or chaaite sawt kobi kaake bolbo ! ekta line-o baanie lekhe na .
avisek mukhopadhyay . or kobita aamake tibrovaabe ekjawn kobi-r katha mone korie dae . tini dhiman chakrabarty non . haa ha h
tini JOHN DONNE .
or kobita = cocentration + arguments + fondness for conceits + persuation of a desired concept + hunger + explicit sexuality + intellectual approach to love in unusual contexts ... witty ... quaint ... obscure ...
avisek
tomaar jonne Jonne Donne-er ekti kobita :
A Valediction Of Weeping
Let me pour forth My tears before thy face, whilst I stay here, For thy face coins them, and thy stamp they bear, And by this mintage they are something worth, For thus they be Pregnant of thee; Fruits of much grief they are, emblems of more, When a tear falls, that thou falls which it bore, So thou and I are nothing then, when on a diverse shore
On a round ball A workman that hath copies by, can lay An Europe, Afric, and an Asia, And quickly make that, which was nothing, all; So doth each tear Which thee doth wear, A globe, yea world, by that impression grow, Till thy tears mix'd with mine do overflow This world; by waters sent from thee, my heaven dissolved so.
O more than moon, Draw not up seas to drown me in thy sphere, Weep me not dead, in thine arms, but forbear To teach the sea what it may do too soon; Let not the wind Example find, To do me more harm than it purposeth; Since thou and I sigh one another's breath, Whoe'er sighs most is cruellest, and hastes the other's death. On a round ball A workman that hath copies by, can lay An Europe, Afric, and an Asia, And quickly make that, which was nothing, all; So doth each tear Which thee doth wear, A globe, yea world, by that impression grow, Till thy tears mix'd with mine do overflow This world; by waters sent from thee, my heaven dissolved so.
ekti link -- http://www.poemhunter.com/john-donne/poems/
3. Anupam, Whitman, Frost, Dickinson-e America sheshh hale kintu mushkil. oraa 19th century-r, early 20th ero. 20th century te English bhaashhaar sabacheye ullekhaJogya kabitaa aamaar mate esechhe America theke. William Carlos Williams, Objectivist kabiraa [Pound-er taruN bhaktaraa - Zukofsky, Reznikoff, Oppen etc]. aar 2nd half of 20th century shreshhTha English kabitaa America thekei kintu. kichhuTaa Australia o New Zealand thekeo. aar England-er saba cheye barha contribution Jeremy Prynne. aar keu nan. abashya esab aamaar nijasba mat. WCW, Pound aar Objectivist der baad diye. oder kaaj sarbajanasammata.
4. Ireland er kabitaa kintu teman ullekhaJogya kichhu nay. shudhu Yeats ke dharale habe naa. Heany aamaar kaachhe khub average kabi.
5. Mushkil halo aamaraa Nobel Prize paaoaa kabider chhaarhaa kaauke hay chini naa baa paattaa di naa. ete aamaader bRitta o jaanaashona chhoTo hay. jaanaTaa aage khub kaThin chhilo. kintu aaj aar nay.
6. Hrishikesh, surrealism, impressionism esab praay 80/90 bachhar aagekaar jinis. aar Jesab bideshee kabider naam karale taaraao aaj institutionalism er kabale. aajaker Mexico, Spain, Argentina, Chile-r taruNara Neruda ke asbeekaar kare lekhe. taake chhi`nrhe fele lekhe. pratirodh theke lekhe. Nicanor Parra-r xetreo taai.
7. Anupam....ki adbhut aami astanirjan er kabitaa dekhate paachchi naa. kena baloto? paataar Thik kon jaigaay aachhe?
8. Anupam tomaar oi linegulo apUrba. atyanta sundar o suThaam kabitaa. natun dharaNer to baTei. kintu pa`mkti bhaabanaa nisarga-sUtreeya. eiTaai aami balate chaaichhi Je baa`mlaa kabitaar si`mhabhaag kaabyabhaabanaa, pa`mkti bhaabanaa o kaaThaamobhaabanaa nisarga baa prakRiti-kendrik. aamar tsunami baiTaai dharo naa. oi Je bRixabhabanaar kabitaa - sekhaneo dekho structural implication er jaigaay gaachh, bRixa. eTaa kintu limitation. er theke beriye aasaa darakaar. maajhe maajhe nishchay thaakabe. kintu line-e line-e kena thaakabe? sakaler kabitaay praay samasta pa`mktite kena thaakabe. Secondly dRishyabhaabnaar adhikya. eta chhabi aa`nkaar chaap kena thaakabe? nisarga kendrik baa`mlaa kabitaay 3Te jinis laxya kari - prakRiti o/baa nisarger a) bandanaa, b) bibnaraN c) barNana. Krittibaas baa Desh khulalei parishhkaar. tomaader lekhaa anekaTaai taar baire. kintu.....kintu....bhaabanaar basis Taa, ingredient sab nisarga theke aabahaaoaa theke prakRiti theke dRishya theke neoaa. taar opor base karaa. kintu er baaireo to jeeban aachhe. maanushher jeeban o sabhyataa. sthaapatya, film, market, baaNijya, khelaar jagat, medical science, astronautics, anthropology, archaeology, manastattba, nandanatattba, natun shilpa - eman haajaar haajaar bishhay aachhe bhaabaar. taai naa ? kena kabitaar kono kono a`mshake ei samasta bishhayer opor bhar karaano Jaay naa. eTaa tomaraa bhebe dekho.
9. Aparaajitaa Jatoi here Jaak naamakaraNe, Jaar kaachhei haaruk amaar oTaake asaadhaaraN bai mane hayechhe eisab kaaraNei. Sabyasachi Sanyal er Aprilataa naame deergha kabitaaTiteo ei dishaa aachhe. Subhro Bandopadhyay er natun bai, Amitava Praharaaj er ekaTi baiteo aami egulo laxya karechhi. phale lekhaa hachchhe. sa`mkhyaay kam. saamaanya. seTaai hayato sbaabhaabik.
Somnath, tomar kabita pare bhalo laglo. samudra niye nana jaigai anek kabita porechhi. samudra niye likhlei dekhi duto jinis ase... bisad ar jounata. tomar surur diker linegulote ami ektu jounatar chaya dekhlam (jadio eta amar mane hoa), ar kabita jure chharie achhe ekta romantic bisad ar mrityuchetana. Shaktiro samudra niye ekta kabitai dekhechhi eirakam bisader sur- chale jabar dak " ebar tabe asi." Ar "kabitar cheyeo kabita hoe achhi aj" ei uktir madhye ekta tanmoita achhe, atmaleen bhab achhe je upalabdhi amader apurba boro kono sristir samne ele hoi. ta paharo hote pare ba samudra. ar samudrer antaheen dheugarjaner madhye die jeno uthe ase mrityuchetana, sunte pai chale jabar dak.
aryanil da...o anupam da ....eta ekta sotty adbhut bapper amader besirvag kabitay nisorgyavittik...er karan hoityo choto bela theke oi je banglar didimani ba sir er kachh theke jana prakiti i....ba jibonananda te tader kabita ese ses hoye gachhe sei bimugdhya vason sonar pratikriya...aryanil da jeta bolechhen sei kathya ami manindra gupter chader opithe boi te porechhi ba tar akhay malberi teo...je amader ei asmanyo des e...jibone e...ekjon jele...pilot...bekarir mistiry..astronot keno kabita likhte aschhen na...keno kabita eto sulolityo hoye jachhe sob somoi....samastya nie kabita asuk...eta ekta khub important bapper...
ei bar kabita ke hoityo annyabhbae dekhar ekta nesa lagchhe amar...nesa bhalo na...bhalobasa ta bhalo...ami sab somoi chai ekta kabita koisik jol theke uthe asuk...ha ha jadio pari na...
anupam dar jar nam aparajita...ami porchi ekhon....maje majey...er adbhut sab line amake chomke dichhe....boita theke kotota parchhi seta na...ami boitar praty ekta adbhut monobikar nie bose achhi..er amake se bolchhe cholo...tumi ekhon o kabitar kichhu i bhojo na...ekta sujog dichhi tomay...
er er pasapasi ami totemvog...rakha hoyechhe kamlalebu o ramya rachana porchhi....
aryanil da apnar prabandhher ami ekjon gunomugdhya pathok...tai bidesi kabitar r kichhu bhalo mondyo amar bola batulota matro ..jehetu amar porar sankhya simityo....porte chai.... er anupam dake ki bolbyo ...amar kabita nie sotty bolar bisoy tamon nei...athacha emon ekjon serious pathok amar kabita ke etokhani dekhechhen er theke boro paoya amar er ki hate pare..
Bhaskar, Hrishikesh likhchhi... tomar kabita edik odik parchhi, ekhane okhane porchhi. tabe anupamke bolechhi sabar kabita niye amar anuvuti likhbo, tai ebar tomarta niye lekha. Tomar kabitai nisarga esechhe darshanikatar hat dhare. khudrar madhye je purnata setai jeno fute uthechhe tomar anukabitai. sei sange brihat ar mahater proti prachhanna achhe abagya. tader akhyamatake byanga kora hoechhe. kabitata pore mane holo hathat ses hoe gelo. jekhane kabitata ses sekhan theke jeno aro dure chhariye achhe kabitar byapti. ei kabitar anuvuti niye jeno aro satadhik kabita lekha jai. Eo jeno dirghya kabitar prati ekta prachhyanya byanga. ek samudra byapto hoeo jochhna dharte pare na je kabita, tin lainer anukabita hoe eta jeno gota chandkei dhare bose achhe
tomaraa Jadi sabaai ekaTu collectively kaaj koro. sakale ekaTu extra effort daao, Je samasta bai yer kathaa ekhaane hachchhe, bisheshhata ateeter kabider baa bayojyeshhTha kabider, taader bai theke kichhu lekhaa aamaake scan kare baa type kare dite paarabe?
taahale ekaTaa central jaigaay eguloke e-book kare raakhaa Jaay. taahale sakalei parhate paaraben. baigulo aamaraa haaraabo naa. Jadi bachhare ekabaar Thik Thaak back-up neoaa Jaay, little magazine library karaar seraa jaigaa internet. Sandipda ki karachhen aamaar maathaay Dhukachhe naa. Oraa to anek Taakaar project peyechhilen.
anyway, keu kichhu naa karale aamaaderi karate habe. anupam, dekho naa er janya ekaTaa team garhaa Jaay kinaa...
jaTaayur bhaashhaay - preservation of historic monuments :-)
aryanilda eta ekta darun bapper habe....onek boi pora jabe...kabitayo...ami achhi....avishek o nischoi thakbe...anupam da ...bapper ta korle kemon hoi...tumi bolo...ekta nijeder porar moto e pathagar...boi er gondhyo ta pabo na hoyto....tabu kabitar scan to hoi na...kabitay hoi....dekha jak...
hrisikesh ami astanirjan....eta thik kothya je ekta natun matter likhte bosle..pathok chok kopale tole...kintu ...apni jakhan nije pathok ..?...take asiwakar korar khomota apnar nei...se jadi bole thik korechho?...pathoker katha maje maje bhulte hoi...mene nite hoy apnar ekjon o pathok nei....sei sunnyota kintu asadharan...
apni voi peye kabita likhben...na nijer kabita likhben...ei post eo onek kabi achhen jara proti ti patrikar janya lekha tairy koren...what a machine...ha ha....vabun...
des er janya ekrakam...kabita campus er janya ek rakam...korrav er janya ekrakam...
eta ki attyohottya noi?...eta ki nijer prati nijer pechon pradasarson noi....?
jadi swavikvabe nijeke annya kichhu likhte hoi....take kau kabita na baluk....apni barandar chaer cupta apnar thik thoter kachhe rakhte parben....
kabita likhe apni poisa pan..?..khabar pan..?
ta hole pith chapranir love pathoker kathya keno sobsomoi apnake mone rakhte habe?
je khane dumutthyo poisa nei...sekhane ekdam dayboddhyota nei...?..kau kau sarajiban sulolityo yea likhe galo....pathoker voi e...thik pathok noi...ei khane sex er ekta adbhut gondogol achhe....oi je sundori adhunika ti apnar annya kabita ekdam pachanda korchhen na...atachya tar moto likhle apni ekta dupure take purota pete paren..se nijey jechhe bolchhe...eta ekta maratook jinis...er etao ami kam besi dekhhechhi kabider jagat e...
baps...roilo jhola chollo vola...bes korechhi amar moto likhechii...etai ei dasaker ism...ekdam voi pai na ami...amar jetuku durbal ta lukonor kono day nei amar....antatyoto kabitay...
hnya . naam hobe BAAK . sompurnorup-e 2000 poroborti kobitar kagoj . no child's play .
er porer post thekei ei blog-o taar naam bodlaabe . naaam hobe sei BAAK . ei blog aamader vobissot potrikar electronics mukhopotro hisebe kaaj korbe . je kobita prokashito hobe , taar boro ekta ongso printed BAAK-e jaabe .
Anupam da, Prokiti bahirvuta kobita hoyto hoy na, karon amra ja kichu niyei kobita likhina kano , seta kono na kono vabe prokitr e angso hobei. karon prokitir bapti mahasunyer matoi bishal....eke kono simana diye bandha jay ki??? tabe amar jeta mane hoy, seta holo vabnay poribartan darkar, vasar babahare poribartan darkar, prakiti k dekhar chokhe poribartam darkar....
jamon sonali dupur, rupoli chand, erakam vabe prokiti bandana poribartan proyojan. nisarga thak tabe, sei nisarga ta oi kursi k ghirei hok na. se kursi prokitir antarvukto holeo, sekhar oi purano kobitar pichutan ta hoyto thakbe na...... tai noy ki??
adbhut question....asadharan question... let me explain..
ekta chair...se darate pare na sorte pare na... eta chai er parikiti..
ekta class room...ekta chair...ekta student...eta school er prakiti...but the chair is alredy exist...
ekta multinational company er boser chair...se darate pare bna....sorte pare na...kintu prakiti holo companyer...ekta voi er sradhyar...pratijogitar..
ekta chair...apnar baba bose achhen...praibarik prakity..
ekhon gach...tar kath se khan theke chair...mul prakiti..origin...
badbaki samastay inharite kora...sei inharitance...jekhane tar parbarty rup purbabarty ruper sab kati charitra o ved nie achhe..ebang nijer kicchu extra fiture nie niechhe...
samastay prakitik...sudhyu inheritance e kichhu nijessoyo baysisthya jog hoye jachhe...
er eisamasta i kabita...samastatukui ja orijin o orijin theke paoya...je kono jougik sottya kabitar kachhe moulik....kabitar kachhe parisrutyo...tar sabtuku nie...ekpese nie noi... amar mone hoi...astanirjan..
Anupam da, amar mane hocche na j aryanil da prokiti k bisarjan dite boleche....jodio aryanil da seta better bolte parbe.
sedin tumi jakhon facebook e sei bangla kobitar poribartan er prosanga tulechile, sedin o aryanil da eki katha bolechilo....tarpor jeta mane holo, j tathakathita prokiti bandana, ba kobitar bahupurano vabna gulo(hatasha, man kharap etc)r poribartan er katha bolcche...
amra bodh hoi ei ekpese kaj ta maje majei kabitay kore feli....sudhyu prakiti...ba tar origin ..ba inheritance er kichhu nichhe neme ese abar orijin er dike chute jaoya...
ekdam last inherit theke lekhya kintu khub kosto kor... er etay korte hoi amader...kabitay...baps khub tuff...
:) ei re, ami eto vebe change korini....... even j nisarga mukto korchi setao vabini!!! just likhlam...
eat satti j ami nije kakhono eto vebe likhina, tabe takhon katha prosange oi katha gulo bollam...tabe eta satti j ami ghathan e poribartan korar chesta korchi, vabnar poribartan parchi na......tabe chesta kori, jano tathakathita prokiti bandana ta jate ektu kam ase, ei ja....tabe amar kobita ba vabna akhono sesob theke sampurna mukto noy. anek samay e cholei ase, r ele kintu take jor kore poribartan kori na.....
Anupam- digha chilam kayekdin tai blog e aste parini re- aj i alam--
1- abarer lekhar moddhe amar jia hawk er 2nd lekhata--" kayekta din jodi astroprochar kore bad deoa jay..."- asadharon-- khub i bhalo
astronirjon er lekhata agei suniyechilo -takhono bhalo legechilo aj abar laglo-
bakider moddhe somnath ,jayshila, hrishikesh er lekhao amar bhalo legeche
2- abar asi astronirjoner sesher diker akta post er byapre jekhane o boleche-" keu keu desher jonno ekrakom- kaboita campus er jono ak rakom-- kaurav er jonno akrakom lekhen.."-- akhane amar akta prosno ache-- amrato ai blog e anek alochona kori-- kintu ki niye?-- nischay kobita niye? tai to-- tahole kono kobi ba lekhok jodi bibhinno jaygay bibhinno jinis lekhen sekhane ki kobi amader kache prodhan hoye othe na kobita? amar to mone hay jodi tar kobita sot hay anubhutir moulikkatto thake tahole kobitar alochonay ta aste baddho abbong sekane kotahy ke ki bhabe likhlo setar thekeo sacheton alochonar upojibbo haoa uchit kobitata kemon--
"besh korechi amar mato likhechi- atai ai dashoker ism"-- ai byapare ami hayto anektai sahomat kintu ata ki sotty ai dashoker modhe simito?> amar mone hay na - proti dashok proti satokei samosamoyik kobi lekhok der atai mone hay amra likhchi amader mato-- natun abong likhch besh korchi---
sotty ki pathoker kache daybaddhota amra sotty puropuri sariye agote perechi ai dashoker hoyeo? ami nije biswas kori pathoker kache kobir cheye kobitar kache kobir daybaadhota anek beshi kintu ai dashoke dariyeo jodi sot bhabe nijeder ke prosno kori tahole hayto akta jinis sposto hoy je pathoker kache kobir sotty daybaddhota ache kina sei baypare bistar tarko haobar par o sotty ki amra pathok bimukhi hote perechi?- hayto na --kobi daybadho nay pathoker kache -- sudu tar anubhuti mile jete pare pathoker mononer sathe- se ki anuprerito hay na?- hay-- atai natural-- abong sekhan thekei akta addrisso daybadhota kaj kore ja kobike tane kobir agochorei-- se nijeo jane na pathoker bhalolaga ta catalyst er o kaj kore kono kono samay--- ai pathoker kache katokhani daybaddho ki nay ata atotai relative je hajar tarko er pareo bibhaktikaron thekei jay - thekei jabe--ar sotty jodi nunnotamo ai jinista na thakto tahole to likhe amra sabai dairy er pathay rekhe dite partam puriye phelte partam kuti kuti kore akashe chure dite partam--- kintu amader sabar inner self akta jinis ke pracchonno bhabe agiye niye jay-anubhutir mishikaron--miliye deoa onnoer sathe -- blog to tar i phosol---kono kichur daybaddhota theke muktir seshe akta soru rekhao pore thake seta daybaddhota theke sore asar- tai nay ki--
BAAK...... darun... sune bhison bhalo laglo r akta alpo kharap laglo
bhalo keno seta bolar appekkha rakhena -- karon sabar i bhalo lagar jinis aita
r kharap ai jonno je -blog theke jante holo-- anupam nijer mukheo janate partis---:[-- jai hok-- tabe jinista darunnnnn-- suru kor suru kor-- amra sabai achi...
anya prasange jaanaai Je aagaamee July maaser sheshhe aami Kolkata aasabo 3 saptaaher janya. John Ashbery-r opor Je gabeshhaNaa o anubaad prakalpe kaaj karachhilaam. seTaa sheshh halo. Patralekha Ashbery-r copyright peyechhe eba`m aamaar kaajaTaa bai haye oi samay berobe. sab Thik Thaak gele.
aami cheshhTaa karachhi Ashbery-r kichhu kabitaa paaTh shoot kare video Taa sange niye aasate. taahale seTaa book release er samay dekhaano Jaay.
bai Taa sheshh karale mathaa o kaa`ndher bhaar kamabe.
apraasangik kathaa balalaam hayato. kintu oi samaye, oi release-e tomaader sange dekhaa hale bhaalo laagabe. John Ashbery ek asambhab jinis....eiTuku balate paari.
Bhai Rangit, ei bloge ami dujaner kabita kichhu bujhte pari ni. ekjan tumi, arekjan Avisek. tomar agerbarer kabitata bhalo legechhilo. tumi jadi bolo tomar kabita bujhte hole ki dharaner purbapath lagbe tahale khub bhalo hoi.
hrisikesh babu Barin Ghosaler ati chetanar katha baita parun ,anekta sahaj habe.r niyamita kabita parte prte sbujhe jaben,anekta cinema dekhe hindi sekhar mato kare.
esnips.com a archive acchhe. prochur mangla boi free te download korte paoa jay. r 5gb free upload kora jay. ekhono porjonto 99% bangladeser kobi o pathok upload kore . epar banglar bikkhyato lokgulo chhara annoder sahotto pray nei. kobitato aro kom . ami nije duende upload kori . scanner nei bole anek pochhonder boi upload korte parina. apnara jodi paren khub upokar hobe bangla sahitter . oi sob bohumullyo boigulo upload korun amrao pori . bangladeser lokgulo k amar kano janina anek besi dayboddho mone hoy banglavasar proti. okhane antyata aryanil dar durdanto kathatar moto kono adrisso east-india company aj r nei. a prosonge avisek mukhopaddhayer kotha boli , online a kichhu valo bangla boi peye amay nije mail kore pathie diechhilo jeche, ei sohoj jouthota ta harie jacche , boro dorkar , kaurab a hole to kathai nei ..jkhanei hok jano valo mondo sob pai ..mondota pore tobe jano take mondo boli ...ekpese holei tal kate
ReplyDeleteaabaar anek chhoTo chhoTo kabitaa. anek mishTi line. man bharaano. nisarga, chhabi, man khaaraap-er mejaaj, anek deerghaayita bayasandhee. kintu ekaTaa kathaa mane hachchhe. jeebane teman kichhu ghaTachhe naa. pretty stale life. uneventful. aamaar kintu dhaaraNaa chhilo taruN kabider jeebane anek kichhu ghaTe. bai o ghaTanaa. cinema ghaTanaa.
ReplyDelete21st post-e aamaar priyatama kabi Joyshila o Somnath.
Aryanilda,ami HRISHIKESH likhchhi... gatobarer poste anek katha hochhilo kabita niye. sei sutra dhare kichu katha bolte ichhe korchhe. amader bloger je nam tate bola jai amra jara likhchhi tara motamuti nabya shatabdir likhie. ei satabdir kabider aneke bolchhen SHUNYA DASAKER KABI. ebarer boi sankhya dese o parchhilam ei natun kabider niye lekha. jake Shankha Ghosh tar CHADER VITOR ETO ANDHAKAR kabyagranther dhange bolechhen SHUNNER VITOR ETO DHEU?
ReplyDeleteei poste jara likhechhen amar moto nimnamaner medha bad diye sabai kintu ek arthe khub intellectual kabi. sabar kabitar vasa jeno adhunikatar rase jarito. amar prosnotao ekhanei je, ei natun brigade tairi holo, tader manifesto ki? amra jara natun dasaker ba SHUNNYA DASAKER KABI tara ki likhbo? surrealist, impressionist erakam ki kono natun dharar chhanche eder fela jabe? nyaka nyaka lyric chhere amra je natun dhang sristi korechhi sei rachanar bisoibastu ki hobe? janaiko pragya kabir prabandhe porchhilam,adhunik kabitai niguda atmakathan ar chhaichapa jounatar prakas chhara ar kichhui balar nei.kabi sadharan pathaker katha vebe likhben na, samajer anusasaner protio kabir anurag nei, slogan deoa kabir kaj noi,kabir mathai nei vubaner var-- tahale kabi kar janya rachana korben? e ki sudhui atmakathan? ar ses prasna natun ekta jug ele sei kabira dekha jai europeo kono kabir dwara provabito hoyechhen. kokhono Bodlaire, kokhono Pound, Elliot, Neruda ba Jimenez(?),ba hungry generation er kabider dwara. tobe ei shunnya dasaker kabira mulata kon europeo kabir dwara anupranito? adou ki keu achhen jake niye ekta ism gare uthchhe ?
Hrishikesh, prothamei boli apnar lekha khub valo.amar to besh valo legeche...nimnamaner bolata uchit noy.....
ReplyDeleteebar ekta kathay asi,ami janina apni kon "janaiko pragya kabir" katha bolchen, tabe amar mane hoy na "samajer anusasaner" proti kobitar kono day thake..kobir thakte pare, karon tini o ekjan sadharan manus....kobita jodi samajer anushasam phiriye ante parto, tahole aaj porjonto j poriman kobita lekha hoyeche, tate amadr samaje r kono problem thaka uchit chilo na....
school-colg er katha bad dile, amar to mane hoy na, .01% manus o kobita poren, ba vaben.....(eta kono statistical porisankhan noy, mangara porisankhan) r jara, kobita porte valobasen se sob pathok ra nischay nijedr pachondo mato kono na kono kobir lekha beche nen.
eta nitantoi baktigata, apni ba ami bole karo pachondo change korte parbo na, r ditiyata change korte jaboi ba kano?tabuo, nishay kothao na kothao kono na kono pathok nischay ache(apnar ba amar mato)m jata ei shunnyo dasaker kobita porte valobasen, esob niye chinta korte valobasen...
ei ekhanei j kati kobita ache, tar sob gulo ki niguda atmakathan ar chhaichapa jounatar prakas???? motei na....tahole nischay bolte hoy j , ei du er baireo shunyo dashak er kobita ache...
amar ati simita gayan e bujte pari na j egulo kono ism dara provabita kina, tabe amar to eke ZEROISM ba SHUNNYAISM bolte iche korche.
Hrisikes
ReplyDeleteaapni Desh-er probondho-t-r katha tule vaalo-e korlen .
ekti dashak kotota ki korte paarlo , kothae byartho holo , sesob bojhaa jae dashak ses hoaar onek por . kono dashak-e aaj porjonto sei nirdisto dashak-t-te nijeke sompurono to durer katha aangsikvaabeo khub prokaas korte paareni . aapni Bhaskar-k dhorun , onaar prothom boi beroe 1971 . setaa katha noe , kintu ekti dashak taar poroborti kaalkhonde nijeke mele dhore . nijer dashak-ei jnaara khub aalokito hoechhen , jemon ananya roy baa brata chakrabarty ... tnaara pore sei aalor maatra baarate paaren ni . aryanil 8o-er kobi . kintu uni onaar vaalo kaaj korechhen 2000-er pore .
dashakvaag ekhaane ektu orthohin hoei pore . tobe aalochona-r subidharthe ei vivaajon khaarap noe .
ekhon ektaa jinis dekhaa jachhe . 90-er kobi-ra , bises kore jaara protisthaansofol , tnaara uthe pore legechhen 2000-er por likhte aasa kobider certificate dite . Kabisammelan-e ekti kaaj korechhilen angshuman kar . ebaar desh-e korechhen sunchhi bivas roychoudhury , aami porini , rangeet mitra aamake jaaniechhe .
eta keno ? kono dashak-er safilyo o byarthota nie purber kono dashak-k er aage kaaj korte dekha jae ni . holeo byaktigotovaabe hoechhe .
ekti dashak-k nie probondho likhbe poroborti dashak . taarai ei kaaj koraar odhikaar raakhe . je projonmo-k perie ekti projonmo elo , se ki kore sei projonmer spordhaagulo niropekkhovaabe chinhito korbe ? korleo ta ki biswasjogyo ?
aryanilda
ReplyDeletesomproti facebook-e aami ei kathatai likhechhilaam . bangla kobita-e kichhu hochhe naa natun kore .
kintu dada , astanirjan-er lekhaata ki mone holo ? nisorgo nie likhechhe . kintu RAINDROP STROKER JHAAU ... SORU PAATA-R HAAOA ... HNETE GELE JIPARER DAAG ... egulo ki nehaat nisorgo ? aamar to mone hoe nisorgo-k describe korar chhol-e o prokriti-r rahasyer doroja-r doorbell-ta haatrachhe , paachhe naa .
ektaa beer-er botol chhnure deoaa holo , baataser nun taake chhore dilo . astanirjan ter pelo botol-tar roktopaat . kintu seta likhlo naa . paathoker upor chhere deoaar confidence dekhaalo . seta ter ki paaoa gelo naa ?
aar ki osombo erotic ektaa baatas ei kobita-e , lokkho korechhen ?
aanondo kemon bisaad-er mukhos porechhe dekhun .
aamar kaachhe to ei kobita sera .
bhaskar-er kobita porle prothomei mone hoe sekele . cliche .
ReplyDeletetaarpor bujhi etaai or swechha-e bechhe neoaa khela . baatasvorti ekta gobesonaagaar-e bose o roj natun kore baatas aabiskar korchhe . sei aabiskaar-er khobor roj aamader deoaar himmot or aachhe .
or chaaite sawt kobi kaake bolbo ! ekta line-o baanie lekhe na .
'duende' shobdo-tar maane jaanen , paathok ? wikipedia dekhun please . taarpor bhaskar-k dhorun .
avisek mukhopadhyay . or kobita aamake tibrovaabe ekjawn kobi-r katha mone korie dae . tini dhiman chakrabarty non . haa ha h
ReplyDeletetini JOHN DONNE .
or kobita = cocentration + arguments + fondness for conceits + persuation of a desired concept + hunger + explicit sexuality + intellectual approach to love in unusual contexts ... witty ... quaint ... obscure ...
avisek
tomaar jonne Jonne Donne-er ekti kobita :
A Valediction Of Weeping
Let me pour forth
My tears before thy face, whilst I stay here,
For thy face coins them, and thy stamp they bear,
And by this mintage they are something worth,
For thus they be
Pregnant of thee;
Fruits of much grief they are, emblems of more,
When a tear falls, that thou falls which it bore,
So thou and I are nothing then, when on a diverse shore
On a round ball
A workman that hath copies by, can lay
An Europe, Afric, and an Asia,
And quickly make that, which was nothing, all;
So doth each tear
Which thee doth wear,
A globe, yea world, by that impression grow,
Till thy tears mix'd with mine do overflow
This world; by waters sent from thee, my heaven dissolved so.
O more than moon,
Draw not up seas to drown me in thy sphere,
Weep me not dead, in thine arms, but forbear
To teach the sea what it may do too soon;
Let not the wind
Example find,
To do me more harm than it purposeth;
Since thou and I sigh one another's breath,
Whoe'er sighs most is cruellest, and hastes the other's death.
On a round ball
A workman that hath copies by, can lay
An Europe, Afric, and an Asia,
And quickly make that, which was nothing, all;
So doth each tear
Which thee doth wear,
A globe, yea world, by that impression grow,
Till thy tears mix'd with mine do overflow
This world; by waters sent from thee, my heaven dissolved so.
ekti link -- http://www.poemhunter.com/john-donne/poems/
aar aryanilda , aamar kaachhe English poetry maane british baa irish kobita . american kobita noe . aamar kaachhe american kobita mane 3 jawn . whitman ... frost ... dickinson ...
ReplyDeleteaar ... melville-k ki kobi bolben na ? hemingway-k ?
khub khub backdated na ami ? haa ha h ...
anupam, pare bhaalobhaabe likhabo. aami kintu 80-r kabi noi. jan 90 te aamaar pratham lekhaa beroy. anyway....aaj melaar sheshhadin tomar bai berolo tumi gele naa. eiTaa aamaar bhaabale kintu man khaaraap laagachhe. bai berolo ekabaar Jeo.
ReplyDeleteaami sedin ekajan ke ThaaTTaa kare balalaam anupam amir khan. award nite Jaay naa. bai berole Jaay naa. Amir Khan kintu chhabi release karale Jaay.
aryanilda ,
ReplyDeleteamar kaachhe boimela ekta kolkata-r moddhe aarekta kolkata . jete ghanta 5-6 laagbe . borojor 1 ghanta thakte paarbo . taarpor feraar chinta korte hobe . ki laav bolun gie . thaakaro upaay nei . school-e porikkha cholchhe .
sabaai
ReplyDeleteanek kuyaashaa aasachhe aamaader kathaabaartaay. fog-Taa kaaTaanor ekaTu cheshhTaa kari.
1. aami kintu 21-er post er kono kabitaakei "nimnamaaNer" balini. balachhi natunatara bhaabanaar jaigaa kam. natun bishhayabhaabanaa kam.
2. aami kintu 80-r dashake kichhu likhini. ami 25 bachhar bayaser aage kichhu likhini. eba`m 10 bachhar antata 300 kabitaa prakaashita haleo bai karini. kenanaa aamaar lekhaa keu parhabe bishbaas karataam naa.
3. Anupam, Whitman, Frost, Dickinson-e America sheshh hale kintu mushkil. oraa 19th century-r, early 20th ero. 20th century te English bhaashhaar sabacheye ullekhaJogya kabitaa aamaar mate esechhe America theke. William Carlos Williams, Objectivist kabiraa [Pound-er taruN bhaktaraa - Zukofsky, Reznikoff, Oppen etc]. aar 2nd half of 20th century shreshhTha English kabitaa America thekei kintu. kichhuTaa Australia o New Zealand thekeo. aar England-er saba cheye barha contribution Jeremy Prynne. aar keu nan. abashya esab aamaar nijasba mat. WCW, Pound aar Objectivist der baad diye. oder kaaj sarbajanasammata.
4. Ireland er kabitaa kintu teman ullekhaJogya kichhu nay. shudhu Yeats ke dharale habe naa. Heany aamaar kaachhe khub average kabi.
5. Mushkil halo aamaraa Nobel Prize paaoaa kabider chhaarhaa kaauke hay chini naa baa paattaa di naa. ete aamaader bRitta o jaanaashona chhoTo hay. jaanaTaa aage khub kaThin chhilo. kintu aaj aar nay.
6. Hrishikesh, surrealism, impressionism esab praay 80/90 bachhar aagekaar jinis. aar Jesab bideshee kabider naam karale taaraao aaj institutionalism er kabale. aajaker Mexico, Spain, Argentina, Chile-r taruNara Neruda ke asbeekaar kare lekhe. taake chhi`nrhe fele lekhe. pratirodh theke lekhe. Nicanor Parra-r xetreo taai.
7. Anupam....ki adbhut aami astanirjan er kabitaa dekhate paachchi naa. kena baloto? paataar Thik kon jaigaay aachhe?
8. Anupam tomaar oi linegulo apUrba. atyanta sundar o suThaam kabitaa. natun dharaNer to baTei. kintu pa`mkti bhaabanaa nisarga-sUtreeya. eiTaai aami balate chaaichhi Je baa`mlaa kabitaar si`mhabhaag kaabyabhaabanaa, pa`mkti bhaabanaa o kaaThaamobhaabanaa nisarga baa prakRiti-kendrik. aamar tsunami baiTaai dharo naa. oi Je bRixabhabanaar kabitaa - sekhaneo dekho structural implication er jaigaay gaachh, bRixa. eTaa kintu limitation. er theke beriye aasaa darakaar. maajhe maajhe nishchay thaakabe. kintu line-e line-e kena thaakabe? sakaler kabitaay praay samasta pa`mktite kena thaakabe. Secondly dRishyabhaabnaar adhikya. eta chhabi aa`nkaar chaap kena thaakabe? nisarga kendrik baa`mlaa kabitaay 3Te jinis laxya kari - prakRiti o/baa nisarger a) bandanaa, b) bibnaraN c) barNana. Krittibaas baa Desh khulalei parishhkaar. tomaader lekhaa anekaTaai taar baire. kintu.....kintu....bhaabanaar basis Taa, ingredient sab nisarga theke aabahaaoaa theke prakRiti theke dRishya theke neoaa. taar opor base karaa. kintu er baaireo to jeeban aachhe. maanushher jeeban o sabhyataa. sthaapatya, film, market, baaNijya, khelaar jagat, medical science, astronautics, anthropology, archaeology, manastattba, nandanatattba, natun shilpa - eman haajaar haajaar bishhay aachhe bhaabaar. taai naa ? kena kabitaar kono kono a`mshake ei samasta bishhayer opor bhar karaano Jaay naa. eTaa tomaraa bhebe dekho.
9. Aparaajitaa Jatoi here Jaak naamakaraNe, Jaar kaachhei haaruk amaar oTaake asaadhaaraN bai mane hayechhe eisab kaaraNei. Sabyasachi Sanyal er Aprilataa naame deergha kabitaaTiteo ei dishaa aachhe. Subhro Bandopadhyay er natun bai, Amitava Praharaaj er ekaTi baiteo aami egulo laxya karechhi. phale lekhaa hachchhe. sa`mkhyaay kam. saamaanya. seTaai hayato sbaabhaabik.
Somnath, tomar kabita pare bhalo laglo. samudra niye nana jaigai anek kabita porechhi. samudra niye likhlei dekhi duto jinis ase... bisad ar jounata. tomar surur diker linegulote ami ektu jounatar chaya dekhlam (jadio eta amar mane hoa), ar kabita jure chharie achhe ekta romantic bisad ar mrityuchetana. Shaktiro samudra niye ekta kabitai dekhechhi eirakam bisader sur- chale jabar dak " ebar tabe asi."
ReplyDeleteAr "kabitar cheyeo kabita hoe achhi aj" ei uktir madhye ekta tanmoita achhe, atmaleen bhab achhe je upalabdhi amader apurba boro kono sristir samne ele hoi. ta paharo hote pare ba samudra. ar samudrer antaheen dheugarjaner madhye die jeno uthe ase mrityuchetana, sunte pai chale jabar dak.
aryanil da...o anupam da ....eta ekta sotty adbhut bapper amader besirvag kabitay nisorgyavittik...er karan hoityo choto bela theke oi je banglar didimani ba sir er kachh theke jana prakiti i....ba jibonananda te tader kabita ese ses hoye gachhe sei bimugdhya vason sonar pratikriya...aryanil da jeta bolechhen sei kathya ami manindra gupter chader opithe boi te porechhi ba tar akhay malberi teo...je amader ei asmanyo des e...jibone e...ekjon jele...pilot...bekarir mistiry..astronot keno kabita likhte aschhen na...keno kabita eto sulolityo hoye jachhe sob somoi....samastya nie kabita asuk...eta ekta khub important bapper...
ReplyDeleteei bar kabita ke hoityo annyabhbae dekhar ekta nesa lagchhe amar...nesa bhalo na...bhalobasa ta bhalo...ami sab somoi chai ekta kabita koisik jol theke uthe asuk...ha ha jadio pari na...
anupam dar jar nam aparajita...ami porchi ekhon....maje majey...er adbhut sab line amake chomke dichhe....boita theke kotota parchhi seta na...ami boitar praty ekta adbhut monobikar nie bose achhi..er amake se bolchhe cholo...tumi ekhon o kabitar kichhu i bhojo na...ekta sujog dichhi tomay...
er er pasapasi ami totemvog...rakha hoyechhe kamlalebu o ramya rachana porchhi....
apatato vore achhi...swavik bhabey kabita aschhe na...kintu sira theke jol khose ghase pore jachhe....
aryanil da apnar prabandhher ami ekjon gunomugdhya pathok...tai bidesi kabitar r kichhu bhalo mondyo amar bola batulota matro ..jehetu amar porar sankhya simityo....porte chai....
er anupam dake ki bolbyo ...amar kabita nie sotty bolar bisoy tamon nei...athacha emon ekjon serious pathok amar kabita ke etokhani dekhechhen er theke boro paoya amar er ki hate pare..
bhalo thakun sobay...er hater kachhe apnar priyo boi thakle amake ek copy xerox pathan plz...thikana debo?
Bhaskar, Hrishikesh likhchhi... tomar kabita edik odik parchhi, ekhane okhane porchhi. tabe anupamke bolechhi sabar kabita niye amar anuvuti likhbo, tai ebar tomarta niye lekha.
ReplyDeleteTomar kabitai nisarga esechhe darshanikatar hat dhare. khudrar madhye je purnata setai jeno fute uthechhe tomar anukabitai. sei sange brihat ar mahater proti prachhanna achhe abagya. tader akhyamatake byanga kora hoechhe. kabitata pore mane holo hathat ses hoe gelo. jekhane kabitata ses sekhan theke jeno aro dure chhariye achhe kabitar byapti. ei kabitar anuvuti niye jeno aro satadhik kabita lekha jai.
Eo jeno dirghya kabitar prati ekta prachhyanya byanga. ek samudra byapto hoeo jochhna dharte pare na je kabita, tin lainer anukabita hoe eta jeno gota chandkei dhare bose achhe
Ruchira, tomar kabita darun laglo. ami tomar kabitar anache-kanache sariri anusanger pratyakhya jog pelam. Anekta amar prio kabi Mandrakantar sariri kabitagulor moto. mokhhom sarirsambhog ke kabitai jeno dur theke ektu chhue jaoa holo. athacho jarano holo na. bristir votai jege uthlo je sarir take to anya sarirer kachhe jetei hobe, jale pure marte habe bhalobasai. ei bhalobasa sakhyamer. tai buro nimgach bratya karan ghate gechhe tar angahani.
ReplyDeletetobe ei bhalobasai dambandhya jounata nei. nei Shaktir kabitar moto "puruse puruse" naripuruser milaner dambandhya ratichitra. ei kabitai prem esechhe swavabbase,je sarir jege uthechhe bristir fotai, je sarir beye uthechhe vindesi sourav, mangsagandha na pele tar nistar nei.
tomaraa Jadi sabaai ekaTu collectively kaaj koro. sakale ekaTu extra effort daao, Je samasta bai yer kathaa ekhaane hachchhe, bisheshhata ateeter kabider baa bayojyeshhTha kabider, taader bai theke kichhu lekhaa aamaake scan kare baa type kare dite paarabe?
ReplyDeletetaahale ekaTaa central jaigaay eguloke e-book kare raakhaa Jaay. taahale sakalei parhate paaraben. baigulo aamaraa haaraabo naa. Jadi bachhare ekabaar Thik Thaak back-up neoaa Jaay, little magazine library karaar seraa jaigaa internet. Sandipda ki karachhen aamaar maathaay Dhukachhe naa. Oraa to anek Taakaar project peyechhilen.
anyway, keu kichhu naa karale aamaaderi karate habe. anupam, dekho naa er janya ekaTaa team garhaa Jaay kinaa...
jaTaayur bhaashhaay - preservation of historic monuments :-)
Souvikbabu, apni sabsamoi amar ekjan prio kabi.kabita apnar kachhe bagdhwanir moto. mukher sathe saral vaber sathe rachito hoi kabihridoier sarasari jogajog. kabita apnar kachhe jibaner saral o satyavasan. tabu apnar kabita ses hole kothai ekta nara lage, dola lage. ar otai apnar kabitar pran.arthya ar vaber marpyache jarie jaoa kabitar birudhhye apnar kabita jeno sibratrir salte.
ReplyDeleteSONADADA, tomar post ta khub akarshanio. tumi kabitar je baichitrer kotha bolechho seta vebe dekhar moto. bes ami chesta korbo. asale etao to thik je sabsamoi gaviratar pechane dourale chena jiban achena hoe jai.
ReplyDeleteKabitai baichitromoita ele seta pathaker pakhhe khub sukhakar hoi.
aryanilda eta ekta darun bapper habe....onek boi pora jabe...kabitayo...ami achhi....avishek o nischoi thakbe...anupam da ...bapper ta korle kemon hoi...tumi bolo...ekta nijeder porar moto e pathagar...boi er gondhyo ta pabo na hoyto....tabu kabitar scan to hoi na...kabitay hoi....dekha jak...
ReplyDeletehrisikesh ami astanirjan....eta thik kothya je ekta natun matter likhte bosle..pathok chok kopale tole...kintu ...apni jakhan nije pathok ..?...take asiwakar korar khomota apnar nei...se jadi bole thik korechho?...pathoker katha maje maje bhulte hoi...mene nite hoy apnar ekjon o pathok nei....sei sunnyota kintu asadharan...
ReplyDeleteapni voi peye kabita likhben...na nijer kabita likhben...ei post eo onek kabi achhen jara proti ti patrikar janya lekha tairy koren...what a machine...ha ha....vabun...
des er janya ekrakam...kabita campus er janya ek rakam...korrav er janya ekrakam...
eta ki attyohottya noi?...eta ki nijer prati nijer pechon pradasarson noi....?
jadi swavikvabe nijeke annya kichhu likhte hoi....take kau kabita na baluk....apni barandar chaer cupta apnar thik thoter kachhe rakhte parben....
kabita likhe apni poisa pan..?..khabar pan..?
ta hole pith chapranir love pathoker kathya keno sobsomoi apnake mone rakhte habe?
je khane dumutthyo poisa nei...sekhane ekdam dayboddhyota nei...?..kau kau sarajiban sulolityo yea likhe galo....pathoker voi e...thik pathok noi...ei khane sex er ekta adbhut gondogol achhe....oi je sundori adhunika ti apnar annya kabita ekdam pachanda korchhen na...atachya tar moto likhle apni ekta dupure take purota pete paren..se nijey jechhe bolchhe...eta ekta maratook jinis...er etao ami kam besi dekhhechhi kabider jagat e...
baps...roilo jhola chollo vola...bes korechhi amar moto likhechii...etai ei dasaker ism...ekdam voi pai na ami...amar jetuku durbal ta lukonor kono day nei amar....antatyoto kabitay...
golmaalta suru hoechhe prae 3 bochhor aage . aapni sebaar raattire aamake phone korlen , prothom phone , aamar jiboner prothom ISD . aami bollam aamar somoprojonmer moddhe aapanar lekhaa amar khub khub valo laage . aapni khub aantorikvaabe aamake bollen ,'' anupam , aami kintu thik tomaader generation noi . aamar lekhaalekhi suru 80s theke .'' ekhono mone aachhe . mone aachhe kaaron sune kosto hoechhilo , aryanil mukhopadhyay aamar generation non .
ReplyDeleteaamra koyekjon mile ekta byapaar suru koraar katha vaabchhi . aami , avisek , bhaskar , astanirjan . ekta potrika berote cholechhe koyekmaaser moddhei
ReplyDeleteBAAK
hnya . naam hobe BAAK . sompurnorup-e 2000 poroborti kobitar kagoj . no child's play .
er porer post thekei ei blog-o taar naam bodlaabe . naaam hobe sei BAAK . ei blog aamader vobissot potrikar electronics mukhopotro hisebe kaaj korbe . je kobita prokashito hobe , taar boro ekta ongso printed BAAK-e jaabe .
aryanilda jetaa bollen seta obosyoi vaaba hobe . uni aamader songe thaakben ei asha naa thaakle kaajtae haat deoa jaabe naa .
aamara jodi dnaarate paari , ekta jomi paai , onek kichhui bawdlaate suru korbe bangla kobitar . maatragotovaabe . gunogotovaabe .
ebaar ekta torko .
ReplyDeletejodi kono kobita-r kaathamo-e ekta brikkher bodole ekta kursi thaake , se ki nisorgomukto hote paare ?
keu likhlen : BAWTPAATA-E ROKTO LEGE AACHHE . keu likhlen : EKHON GHAWRER MODDHE AAMI ROKTO DEKHTE PAAI . khub difference ki holo !
prokriti bohirvuto text aami kolpona korte paari na . maanus nije ki konovaabe prokriti bohirvuto hote paare ? se jodi prokriti-r biruddhe dnaarae , taaholeo praakritikvaabei dnaarabe . bujhte hobe prokritir ekti upaadan prokruiti-k dhwangso korte cholechhe .
aaamar kaachhe ekti computer tototai praakritik , jotota ekta baabui paakhir baasa .
ei nisorgo birodhita aamader sei baudlair-er kaachhe nie jachhe naa to ? tini nogno nari pochhondo korten naa ... tabil-er paaya dheke dite hoto ... aranyo-r bodol-e sohor-er joygaan korten , kaaron taa maanus baaniechhe .
kichhudin aage Soumitra Chattopadhyay bollen tnaar naaki sei rong vaalo laage jaa maanuser baanano , praakritik rong tnaake aakristo kore naa .
kobi nije ekta praakritik praani , se kon adhokar-e prokriti bohirvuto pongti rochona-r katha vaabte paare !!
aryanilda ,
ReplyDeletemaanushher jeeban o sabhyataa. sthaapatya, film, market, baaNijya, khelaar jagat, medical science, astronautics, anthropology, archaeology, manastattba, nandanatattba, natun shilpa --- aamar kaachhe er konotai kintu apraakritik noe .
nijeke prokritir baaire vabar kono obokaas maanuser nei . maanuser sobkichhui praakritik . atom bomaa ... hydrogen bomaa ... godard ... bunuel ... kiarostami ... picaso ... pollock ... sob sob sob .
hatya-r drishyo , dhorsoner drishyo ... sob prakritik drishyo . taai noe ki ?
Anupam da,
ReplyDeleteProkiti bahirvuta kobita hoyto hoy na, karon amra ja kichu niyei kobita likhina kano , seta kono na kono vabe prokitr e angso hobei. karon prokitir bapti mahasunyer matoi bishal....eke kono simana diye bandha jay ki???
tabe amar jeta mane hoy, seta holo vabnay poribartan darkar, vasar babahare poribartan darkar, prakiti k dekhar chokhe poribartam darkar....
jamon sonali dupur, rupoli chand, erakam vabe prokiti bandana poribartan proyojan.
nisarga thak tabe, sei nisarga ta oi kursi k ghirei hok na.
se kursi prokitir antarvukto holeo, sekhar oi purano kobitar pichutan ta hoyto thakbe na......
tai noy ki??
aryanilda ,
ReplyDeletedekhun aapnar 1st boi KHELAAR NAAM SOBUJAYON , 2nd HAAWAMOROGER MAWN , 3rd TSUNAMI-R EK BOCHHOR PORE . sobgulo naam sorasori prokriti theke uthe aaschhe . emonki ekta saabdhaanbani-r sur aachhe sobgulotei . sotorko korchhen jeno prokritir hoe !
hwataat aapni departure-tar katha vaabchhen keno ? etaa jaana dawrkaar . keno hawtaat kobita theke prokriti-k baad dite chawa ?
adbhut question....asadharan question...
ReplyDeletelet me explain..
ekta chair...se darate pare na sorte pare na...
eta chai er parikiti..
ekta class room...ekta chair...ekta student...eta school er prakiti...but the chair is alredy exist...
ekta multinational company er boser chair...se darate pare bna....sorte pare na...kintu prakiti holo companyer...ekta voi er sradhyar...pratijogitar..
ekta chair...apnar baba bose achhen...praibarik prakity..
ekhon gach...tar kath se khan theke chair...mul prakiti..origin...
badbaki samastay inharite kora...sei inharitance...jekhane tar parbarty rup purbabarty ruper sab kati charitra o ved nie achhe..ebang nijer kicchu extra fiture nie niechhe...
samastay prakitik...sudhyu inheritance e kichhu nijessoyo baysisthya jog hoye jachhe...
er eisamasta i kabita...samastatukui ja orijin o orijin theke paoya...je kono jougik sottya kabitar kachhe moulik....kabitar kachhe parisrutyo...tar sabtuku nie...ekpese nie noi...
amar mone hoi...astanirjan..
Anupam da, amar mane hocche na j aryanil da prokiti k bisarjan dite boleche....jodio aryanil da seta better bolte parbe.
ReplyDeletesedin tumi jakhon facebook e sei bangla kobitar poribartan er prosanga tulechile, sedin o aryanil da eki katha bolechilo....tarpor jeta mane holo, j tathakathita prokiti bandana, ba kobitar bahupurano vabna gulo(hatasha, man kharap etc)r poribartan er katha bolcche...
amra bodh hoi ei ekpese kaj ta maje majei kabitay kore feli....sudhyu prakiti...ba tar origin ..ba inheritance er kichhu nichhe neme ese abar orijin er dike chute jaoya...
ReplyDeleteekdam last inherit theke lekhya kintu khub kosto kor...
er etay korte hoi amader...kabitay...baps khub tuff...
aare Somnath ...
ReplyDeleteaachha aami tomaake ekta line dichhi :
BAAIRE EKTA MEGH TAAR AATMOHATYA-R KHAWSRA SOMPURNO PURIE BRISTI AANCHHE .
tumi MEGH ebong BRISTI shobdo 2t-k protisthaapito koro .
tumi aamake bojhaabe Aryanilda ki bolchhen ? aamra ekjawn aarekjawn-k haare haare chini . dada-bhai aamra dui baamunpo .
eta ekta khela . aamader '64' porechhile ? kemon legechhilo ? aabar jaante chaeo naa '64' ki !
Astanirjan,
ReplyDeletekasto kore korte hobe kano??atirikto kasto kore likhte gele abar kobitar moulikatta hariye phelbe na to????
Anupam da,
ReplyDeletetumi ki vable ami ekpese hoye katha bolchi??? :)
just kidding....
jaihok,ami jetuku bolte chaichi j sedin aryanil da bolchilo j kobitay vabnar poribartan hocche na, sei sob eki rakamer vabna mane man kharap, bisad, nari sarir etc etc, ami takhon jigyes korlam j egulo to chirakal e kobitar bisay.jar poribartan hoyeche ta holo gathan , vasa ebang shabdo. tarpor aryanil da bollo j ekhono ki vabna etukui thakbe???amra kano nutan vabna niye vabchi na......
64 mane daba, tai to????
porechi.....khub khub sundar.
ami prothisthapon korlam na, poribartan kore dilam.
জমাট বেঁধে থাকা বিন্দুগুলি আত্মহত্যার কথা ভুলে
সিক্ত হয়ে পড়ল
kamon laglo janio
tomra j eke aporke har hare chono set ato janie :)
ReplyDeletena hole joutho rachana korle kivabe....!!
khela cholche valoi, choluk..sobai alochanay mete uthuk.....
amader mato jara sobematra kobitay pa rekheche, tader j anek anke upokar hocche , etuku bolte pari......
bindu . apraakritik ! big bang ... setaa dekhha-r jonne tumi aami chhilaam naa bolei bindu-k nisrgomukto kore dile vai !
ReplyDeleteaar bindu-gulo jawmaat bnaadhchhe kon shakti-te ?
ekta bindu kintu aasole dhorte chhailei dheu hoe othe .
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeleteei re, ami eto vebe change korini.......
even j nisarga mukto korchi setao vabini!!!
just likhlam...
eat satti j ami nije kakhono eto vebe likhina, tabe takhon katha prosange oi katha gulo bollam...tabe eta satti j ami ghathan e poribartan korar chesta korchi, vabnar poribartan parchi na......tabe chesta kori, jano tathakathita prokiti bandana ta jate ektu kam ase, ei ja....tabe amar kobita ba vabna akhono sesob theke sampurna mukto noy. anek samay e cholei ase, r ele kintu take jor kore poribartan kori na.....
acha, anupam da tomar ki mane hoy setai to janale na.....!!!
ReplyDeletetumi kirakam vabe nutan kobita k dekhte chao??
, aanugotyo bigoto sob kathabarta-k atmikrito kore sampurnorup-e nijer je lekha , je lekha tumi chhara keu likhchhe naa , jekhane tumi ekaa ebon adwitio , tomaar kono sohopathik nei , kintu onek bondhu achhe , jemon ekta railpaater pash-e aaro rail-line fisfaas dae , kono manifesto chhara chhara , oudhattyr proyojon chhara ... kabita . samantoraal noe . apor noe . bhaswar . ujjwal . sekhaane tumi ekoraat . sekhaane tumi nijer noe , bangla kabitar hoe likhchho .
ReplyDeletekichhu chhapar vul holo . ghum pachhe . sarirta valo nei . kal katha hobe .
ReplyDeletegood night .
Anupam- digha chilam kayekdin tai blog e aste parini re- aj i alam--
ReplyDelete1- abarer lekhar moddhe amar jia hawk er 2nd lekhata--" kayekta din jodi astroprochar kore bad deoa jay..."- asadharon-- khub i bhalo
astronirjon er lekhata agei suniyechilo -takhono bhalo legechilo aj abar laglo-
bakider moddhe somnath ,jayshila, hrishikesh er lekhao amar bhalo legeche
2- abar asi astronirjoner sesher diker akta post er byapre jekhane o boleche-" keu keu desher jonno ekrakom- kaboita campus er jono ak rakom-- kaurav er jonno akrakom lekhen.."--
akhane amar akta prosno ache-- amrato ai blog e anek alochona kori-- kintu ki niye?-- nischay kobita niye? tai to-- tahole kono kobi ba lekhok jodi bibhinno jaygay bibhinno jinis lekhen sekhane ki kobi amader kache prodhan hoye othe na kobita? amar to mone hay jodi tar kobita sot hay anubhutir moulikkatto thake tahole kobitar alochonay ta aste baddho abbong sekane kotahy ke ki bhabe likhlo setar thekeo sacheton alochonar upojibbo haoa uchit kobitata kemon--
"besh korechi amar mato likhechi- atai ai dashoker ism"-- ai byapare ami hayto anektai sahomat kintu ata ki sotty ai dashoker modhe simito?> amar mone hay na - proti dashok proti satokei samosamoyik kobi lekhok der atai mone hay amra likhchi amader mato-- natun abong likhch besh korchi---
sotty ki pathoker kache daybaddhota amra sotty puropuri sariye agote perechi ai dashoker hoyeo? ami nije biswas kori pathoker kache kobir cheye kobitar kache kobir daybaadhota anek beshi kintu ai dashoke dariyeo jodi sot bhabe nijeder ke prosno kori tahole hayto akta jinis sposto hoy je pathoker kache kobir sotty daybaddhota ache kina sei baypare bistar tarko haobar par o sotty ki amra pathok bimukhi hote perechi?- hayto na --kobi daybadho nay pathoker kache -- sudu tar anubhuti mile jete pare pathoker mononer sathe- se ki anuprerito hay na?- hay-- atai natural-- abong sekhan thekei akta addrisso daybadhota kaj kore ja kobike tane kobir agochorei-- se nijeo jane na pathoker bhalolaga ta catalyst er o kaj kore kono kono samay---
ai pathoker kache katokhani daybaddho ki nay ata atotai relative je hajar tarko er pareo bibhaktikaron thekei jay - thekei jabe--ar sotty jodi nunnotamo ai jinista na thakto tahole to likhe amra sabai dairy er pathay rekhe dite partam puriye phelte partam kuti kuti kore akashe chure dite partam--- kintu amader sabar inner self akta jinis ke pracchonno bhabe agiye niye jay-anubhutir mishikaron--miliye deoa onnoer sathe -- blog to tar i phosol---kono kichur daybaddhota theke muktir seshe akta soru rekhao pore thake seta daybaddhota theke sore asar- tai nay ki--
Aryanil dada----
ReplyDeletetomar oi boi er net bhandar karar prostab ta asadharon--- anupam amio achi- suru korle amake janas hath lagabo - ato bhalo akta kajer jonno-----
BAAK...... darun...
ReplyDeletesune bhison bhalo laglo r akta alpo kharap laglo
bhalo keno seta bolar appekkha rakhena -- karon sabar i bhalo lagar jinis aita
r kharap ai jonno je -blog theke jante holo-- anupam nijer mukheo janate partis---:[-- jai hok-- tabe jinista darunnnnn-- suru kor suru kor-- amra sabai achi...
anek kathaa haye gechhe er madhye. taai aar kathaa barhaachchhi naa. sa`mxepe bali -
ReplyDelete1. BAAK daaruN idea. ekaTaa generation er nijer kaagaj thaakabe er cheye bhaalo ki hate paare. aamaader generation-e [90] bhaalo kaagaj dUrer kathaa, kaagajai saamaanya chhilo. taar madhye Angshuman Kar er NaaTmandir ek samay kichhu bhaalo sa`mkhyaa karechhilo. aami likhechhi.
2. kaagaj supported by blog aaro bhaalo idea.
3. prakRitir biruddhe aamaar kichhu nei. aami ataTaa moTaa daager kathaa balini. khubai subtle bhaabanaa. Somnath Thik balechhe. Nothing against prakRiti. kintu ekaTaa trend Jebhaabe toiri hay eo temni. adhikaa`msha kabitaa baa pa`mktir shikarhe nisarga thaakale eba`m nisargajanita bhaabanaay aabaddha thaakale ek samay seemaabaddhataa aasabe.
4. nisarger byaapaare aami netibaachak kathaa balachhi naa. balachhi ei trend theke berote. sabujayan sampUrNa paribesh bhaabanaar bai chhilo. 15 bachhar dekhaa Jaachche sei paribesh ekaTaa real issue. kintu paribesh kabitaay teman dekhi naa. maane taar concern gulo dekhinaa.
5. e-book archive niye Jaaraa excited o samarthan karachho idea Taa taader prati kRitagga. e bishhaye aami anupam ke email karabo ekaTaa prastabanaa niye. ekaTaai anurodh bhaai. ekaTu lege thakaa jaruree. nay nay kare 20 bachhar haye gelo. ei dharaNer effort niye lege thaakaa khub beshi dekhini. khub effort darakaar nei. dheere susthe karalei chalabe. pratyeker aalaadaa ownership thaakuk. eiTaa dekhalei parishkaar habe. ei Translation Archive er prati paataar ekajan owner aachhe.
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anya prasanga -
ReplyDeleteanya prasange jaanaai Je aagaamee July maaser sheshhe aami Kolkata aasabo 3 saptaaher janya. John Ashbery-r opor Je gabeshhaNaa o anubaad prakalpe kaaj karachhilaam. seTaa sheshh halo. Patralekha Ashbery-r copyright peyechhe eba`m aamaar kaajaTaa bai haye oi samay berobe. sab Thik Thaak gele.
aami cheshhTaa karachhi Ashbery-r kichhu kabitaa paaTh shoot kare video Taa sange niye aasate. taahale seTaa book release er samay dekhaano Jaay.
bai Taa sheshh karale mathaa o kaa`ndher bhaar kamabe.
apraasangik kathaa balalaam hayato. kintu oi samaye, oi release-e tomaader sange dekhaa hale bhaalo laagabe. John Ashbery ek asambhab jinis....eiTuku balate paari.
aryanilda
ReplyDeleteaapnar songe mail-e katha hobe . ekhaane baakbistaar korchhi naa . haa haa haa ... amake BAAK paechhe dekhchhi !
aami bujhte perechhi aapni ki bolte chaan . etukui bolbo : bangla kabita theke nisorgo vaabna sorie nile taa-k kotota chena jaabe sondeho achhe .
protyek vaasa-r kobita-e ektaa anibaryo lokkhon thaake , aamader ekhaane setaa nisorgo-vaabonaa ebong valobaasa . taar kathamogoto bibortan ghotaano jae , kintu taake muchhe dite chaile bangla kobita jotokhani dry hoe jaabe ... khub korun byapaar hobe . kobita theke inllect khoraak petei paare , kintu kobita-r dike emotion baad die sudhumaatro intellect nie jaoa bangla kobita keno kono desh-er kobitai sojjho korte paarbe bole mone hoe naa kono din .
aami kokhono nisorgo-prodhaan likhi naa , prem nie kabita 2-1t likhechhi . aapni jaanen . kintu khub conscios-vaabe aami NODI , PAAHAR , AKASH , GAACHH ... ei shobdogulo raakhi . jemon aami ekhono MOTO , KINTU , JODI , TOBU , EBONG ... ityadi shobdogulo-o raakhi . KAURAB-e aami goddyo likhechhilaam etaa nie .
mone hochhe NISORGO nieo ekta godyo aamake ebaar likhte hobe . eto kathabaarta-r pore seta joruri hoe porlo ebaar .
aasole ekta katha vaable helpless laage Ramit .
ReplyDeleteMichael Madhusudan Dutta theke aamader Astanirjan Dutta ... maajhkhaane maatro 150 bochhor . 2t century-o kaateni .
Chaucer ( 1340 - 1400 ) theke Spenser ( 1552-1599 ), Spenser theke Shakespeare ( 1564 -1616 ) , taarpor Milton ( 1608 -1674 ) ektu taratari . taarpor Pope ( 1688 - 1744 ) , Dryden( 1631 - 1700 )-k aami baad dite chaaibo . taarpor Wordsworth ( 1770-1850 ). er moddhe important poets esechhen , jugaantokaari keu aasen ni .
maane Chaucer ( 1430 - ) theke Wordsworth ( - 1850 ) . somoykaalta pray aadh-haajar bochhorer . er moddhe maatro 4-5 jono kraantikari kobi .
Rabi Thakur-er mrityu-r por ekhono 70 bochhor hoechhe . er moddhei aamra koto shoto major poets kolpona kore bose aachhi .
ekta katha dekho sobaai , koto sohojei aamra Pope ebong Dryden-k kobi hisebe baad dite paari , kintu Wordsworth-k paari naa .
ReplyDeleteei byapaarta nie vaabar aachhe . shikkha neoaar aachhe .
Thanks, Hrishikesh ..ami evabei likhi, ar likhbo-o hoyto..kichuta choice, kichuta valolaga...
ReplyDeleteAnupam, 'Baak' khub valo idea..Rangeet ar Avishek amar baRi esechhilo..tokhony bawley..namtao tow tomar dewa, valo naam..blog-ti website hoye uthuk..ei niye Boimelay Atanu Bandyopadhyay-er shongeo ekdin kawtha holo,,unio utshahi..
jai hok, tomar Marigold_Connected poRchhi..ami onader jiggesh korechilam tumi esecho kina, onara bollen gotokal tomar ashar kawtha chhilo, tao bodhoy ashte paroni..poRchhi..kichhu line ghurchhe mon-e..poRa holey janabo..awnnyorokom kaj, eta bolai jaye ei muhurtey..
thanks , souvik
ReplyDeleteBAAK kintu tomaar-o . ruddho jaate naa hoe , tomaakeo dekhte hobe . aamra sokole mile kaajta korbo .
aamader generation-er ekta kaagoj chaai . ekta KRITTIBAS , ekta KAURAB .
suruta to kori sokole mile !
Anupam da, prothamei tomake ei rakam ekta udhyog neoyar jonyo suveccha janai....baak kakhono ruddho hobe na, eta ei shatabdir sobcheye baro udhyog hoye uthuk....ei asa rakhi.
ReplyDeletetabe amar ekta icher katha boli, ei patrika ti kolkatar simanar baireo ber kore ante parle khub valo hoy...
eti niye ki kichu kora samvob???
ANUPAM, aj tomar kabita niye likhbo.tomar kabita jakhan prothom porlam, keman ekta rahasyer gandha pelam - namheen, jatichinhaheen ekta kabita. takhani mane holo eti kabitar adale ekti dhanda. ebong kabitatar sonjarjyatao ekhanei.
ReplyDeletePratham jakhan kabitata porlam amar mane holo eta mrityuchetanar kabita. pora dhupkathi ar bichhanabadaler madhye ami ekjan mritamanuser shabjatrar drishya dekhlam. ainai pechhaner chul thik korar madhye natun projanmake. chintata ekhane atke gelo ar egute parlam na.
Pare hathat kare kabitatai ekta jounagandha pelam. bichhanabadaler madhye diye jeno ekta shariri premer jhapta laglo.ainai chul thik karar madhye nari-puruser vinna chehara vese uthlo.kintu oi melate parlam na.
Aj Burdwan theke traine ferar pathe,SUJIT SARKARER KABITA KENO KABITA boiti porte porte hathat amar tomar kabitake ekta natun vabe dekhlam. amar mane holo tomar kabita jeno natun ar purono kabider niye lekha. purono kabira tader dhupkathi sugandha chharachhen. natun kabira ainar samne niye elo natun style, natun lekhani.purono kabira chale jachhen. purono bichhana badal hoe jachhe.kintu natun bichhana ki aschhe? na natun bichanai purono bichana ekhono paribartito hoi ni. keno hoi ni? hoi ni karan ekhana natun kabi purono asakti sampurna bisarjan dite pare ni. kabira sab tairi hochhen pujoi lekhar jannya. pujota ekhane pratiki. pujor anusange asche protistha ar jasalaver basana. ar sei lover base sahaj pathe hatte giye kabir ar bichhana badal kora holo na. karan pujo ese gelo. kabi badlate parlen na nijeke.
Eta amar nijer bislesan. bhul na thik eta arthyaheen. karan kabita kakhna ekkedrik hote pare na.
Kabita sarthak na byartha tao jani na. karan oto gyan amar nei. tobe kabitata amake vabalo. amar sathe sathe trene chorlo,medical college gelo, abar bari fire elo. ei dirghyasthaitya ei kabitata amake dite parlo. ei kabitatar tan ei karanei. ei karanei eta kabita hoe uthechhe. kastakalpana holeo kalpanalata chhari dite perechhe.
anupam, nisarga-bhittik aalochanaa kare tumi Jadi prabandha lekho bhaalo habe khub. prabandha lekhaar samay lekhaker mane ekaTaa intellectual discourse hay Jaa khub laabhajanak.
ReplyDeleteaami kintu "naaker badale naruN" karate balachhi naa. nisarger abhibhaab baad debaar kathaa hachchhe naa. Jeman sangeete hay, eTaake tone down karo oTaake ekaTu tolo, aabaar gaan anuJaayee eTaake badalaao oTaake phike karo, khanjani Je baajaachchhe taake ekaTu egiye daao, mRidanga-olaake pechhane basate balo...ei rakam.
tumi Thik. shudhu baa`mlaa baa bhaarater nay, praachyer kabitaar ekaTaa charitrai halo nisarga, darshaN, chitraayan etc.
bak suru hoye galo...darun....darun lagchhe....er modhey achhi vabtey ekta darun bapper....kabita likhchhi...vabna gulo visan ghurpak kachhe....
ReplyDeletekichhudin ki dhakna bandhyo korbo?..astanirjan
onekdin ese porefellam kota...
ReplyDeletejothariti ei bloger nijosso mejaj bojaye ache...bhalo laglo...bes kichu lekha ...kichu line...
bhalo laglo..tobe aami akhn aamr bhitore gutiye acchiii...
ReplyDeleteaamr lekha kemn hoche?tar kono uttor neye....jnai na.....
likhte parchi na...jokhn likhte pari na....tokhn khub koste thaki...
ae blogta dekhii..aabr bneche thakar onuprerona pai.....
anupamda
ae blogta darun legechee
darun lagchee
khub bhalo...
rangeet
Bhai Rangit, ei bloge ami dujaner kabita kichhu bujhte pari ni. ekjan tumi, arekjan Avisek. tomar agerbarer kabitata bhalo legechhilo. tumi jadi bolo tomar kabita bujhte hole ki dharaner purbapath lagbe tahale khub bhalo hoi.
ReplyDeleteHrishikeshda,kobita ki bojhar jinis?,amar to mone hoy kobita bujhte gele byaparta bojha hoye othe...
ReplyDeleteAnupam -er 'Marigold_Reconnected'..poRlam..
ReplyDelete'poRlam' e vabey bola jabena, bawrong bola jaye
vashlam, firey gelam, abar vashlam nijer moto..
'Notun Kobita' maane ki? 'Notun Kobita;, 'Aro Notun Kobita', 'Notunotomo Kobita', 'Nittyonotun Kobita' - eshober moddhhye kyano jabo aamra? kobita 'just kobita'..nijer moto express korai 'notun kobita', Anupam shetai koreche ei boi-tey..
Ami porey line dhorey dhorey kawthabarta bolbo hoyto..tobey ei blog-er shobaike awnurodh 'Marigold_Connected' poRe ekhane reaction diin..
tobe boiti-r namkoron niye amar ektu confusion ache, amar mon-e kichu nijosshyo explanation ache, Anupam ki vebe namkoron koreche sheta jante chai..
sorry reconnected na, connected,,prothome vuul likhechi boi-er naam, porey thik likhechi..asole amar mon-e byaparta kyamon jyano 'reconnected' 'reconnected' hoye ache..tai hoyto vuul..sorry..
ReplyDeleteAvisek, kabita akebarei bojhar jinis noi, ba bujhte parlei kabita ar kabita ar kabita thake na, eta hoito thik noi. asle byanjana ekta sarthak kabitar pran. amar bolar uddeswa holo ami tomader kabitar madhhe dhukte parchhi na. asahai lagchhe. sei maner starer kachhakachhi pouchhotei parchhi na. kintu antarik bhabei ami pouchhute chai. tai ami kabitar artha bislesan korte bolchhi na. bolte chaichhi, tomra bolo tomader kabitar prena ki? kon dharaner lekha porle ami tomader kabitar kachhakachhi pouchhote parbo?
ReplyDeletehrisikesh babu Barin Ghosaler ati chetanar katha baita parun ,anekta sahaj habe.r niyamita kabita parte prte sbujhe jaben,anekta cinema dekhe hindi sekhar mato kare.
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