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ARKAr LEKHATI ARO KHUB BHALO HOTE PARTO. ZEBHABE SURU O SESH HOLO EBONG MAJHKHAN THEKE JE BISHOYTI AMRA PELAM TATE LEKHATI JE MAGIC TOIRI KORTE PARTO TA HOLO NA. EBONG RYTHMER KHUB OBHAB THEKECHE KANE O THOnTE. TOBE ARKAr KOBITA KHUB BHALO DIKE JETE PARE BOLE MONE HOY.
ER AGE BHASKAR AMAKE KICHU KOTHA BOLECHILO. AMIO BOLECHILAM. SEGULO BHULE GIYE BOLI BHASKARr LEKHA THIK AGER MOTO MONE HOLO. DUKKHITO BARINDA, APNAR BHALO LAGA AR AM,AR BHALO LAGA JE MILLONA EBONG BOLA JAY AMI THIK ULTO KOTHA BOLLAM. MAINSTREAM BA PARALLAL BOLE KICHU BOLCHI NA. KINTU APATO DRISTITE LEKHATI ETOTAI BALoKHILLO JE ER POR KI HOBE TA SOHOJEI ANUMAN KORA JAY. AMI KOBITAY MAGIC, MYSTRY O MUSICALITY KE PRADHANNO DEI BESHI. ELKHANEI BHASKAR ER KOBITAGULI HOCHOT GHEYE JAY. BHASKAR ARO BHALO LIKHBE JANI. OR ARO BHALOLEKHAR JONNO OPEKKHA KORE ACHI.
ASTONIRJON KHUB BHALO LAGLO. ETOTA KOM JAYGAY ETO BESHI SPACE DEOYAR KHOMOTA JAR ACHE SE NISCHIT BHALO LIKHCHE ARO BHALO LIKHBE.
DEBANJANr LEKHA BOLTE GELE BOLTE HOY MELOPOIYA R KOTHA, JEKHANE SOBDER ORTHO TAR ASOL MANE THEKE URDHE CHOLEJAY, EBONG SOBDOGULI EKTI SPECIAL MUSICALITY TOIRI KORE JEKHANE KONO HOCHOT NEI, KONO EXTRA BURDEN NEI. KOBITA NIJER MOTO KORE CHELTE THAKE. BHALO LAGE.
ANUPAMr KORATOL DARPANRUPE BYABOHAR KORO- EKHANEI KOBITATIR EXTREM SUCCESS. ER POR AR KONO KOTHA HOBE NA. EI 1TI LINE DIYEI BOJHA JAY KOBITATIR KOBITA HOYE OTHA.
Ei je kabitar kotha bala hachhe, bola hachhe rupak asrita kabitar kotha, kabitar parabastabata swapnodarshner kotha, esaber urdhe uthe dainik rojnamacha ki nite pare na kabitar sarir?
ANUPAM, TUMI AMAR KOTHATA THIK DHORTE PARONI BODH HOY. BHASKAR BHASKAR KORTE KORTE AMAR BHASKAR CHAKRABORTYr KOTHA MONE PORE GELO. UNIO TO KICHU KICHU KHUB SOHOJ LIKHECHEN, JEMON AMADER BHASKAR. KINTU TAR MODHYE JE PHYLOSOPHY TAO AMRA JANI. AMADER BHASKARJYOTIR KHETREO TO ANEKTA TAI. AMI KONO DOSHAROP NA KOREI BOLCHI BHASKARr LEKHAY AMI AMARMOTO KORE PAI NI. TAR MANE KOKHONOY EI NOY O KHARAP LEKHE.
SOROL LEKHA MANE JODI BHEBE NAO JE LEKHATI KHARAP TAHOLE KHUB BORO BHUL KORA HOBE. O SOROL LEKHE. KINTU OBOSSOI TAR DORSON TI MOHOT O BRIHOTTORO. AMI SUDHU SEI DORSONTIKE EKTI MAGIC ER MODHYE PAOYAR OBHABER KOTHA BOLECHI.
EKJON KOBIR PROTINIOTO ONUBHUTO CHALCHITRO TAR KOBITA. EBAR JODI BOLA JAY ETAKE KABITA BANANO JAY KI NA, TOBE BOLBO BOHUDIN AGE THEKE EI CHALCHITROI KOBITA HOYE ESECHE. SUTORANG KEU SURU KORBE BOLA BHUL HOBE, BOLA JETE PARE NOTUN KORE SURU KORA JAY KI NA. SURU HOYECHE BOLLAM EI KARONE : Artur Rembo আর্তুর র্যাবো AJ THEKE ONEK DIN AGEI TAR JIBON JONTRONAR PRATTOHIK NAMCHA REKHE GACHE TAnR "A SEASON IN HELL" BOITITE. BOITIR KOTHA ULLEKH KORLMA KENONA ETIR NAM I PROTHOM MONE PORLO.
eto kichu alochana hocche, bhaskar-er sahaj saral upasthapana theke rangeet er ekdam alada rakam presentation. kintu amar mate ei post er sobcheye sundar kobitati likheche debanjan da.ki mane hoy??eto sundar vabe shabder babahar, kothao proyojan er besio jamon bola hoyni,abar kothao kono khamti o nei....
abar lekhar moddhe asi prothomei bolbo- dujoner nam jader lekha chuye dekhlam-- abong anubhab korlam-- astronirjon abong anupam-- astro ar ageo amake suniyechilo lekhata- sedin o bolechilam sabasss- ajjo bolchi- ar anupam er darpan lekhata durdanto--
torjoni lekhatate 4 no line e deben na debe hobe aktu dekhis -- lekhatao chamotkar--
somnath sen-- lekha kharap ki bhalo ato baro pondit ami noi ar ami nije biswas kori protiti lekhar modhei je lekhe tar kichu anubhuti abong seta antorik haoatai swabhabik lukiye thake-- tabe amar mone hoyeche lekhta experiment er dik theke besh sundor hote hote kothao aktu chere geche - hay aktu beshi agiye niye jaoa hoyeche kimba kothao lekhata sei rhythm rakhte pareni- ata akantoi bayktigato anubhuti theke bollam..
bhaskar er lekha bhalo legeche abar lageni-- dutoi bola jete pare- ata a jonno nay je bhaskar er kach theke aro kichu beshi demand etc. karon kono kobir kach thekei sabsomay aki jinis demand kara jay na-- lekhar bisay ta besh sundor tobe amar mone anupam jeta boleche sahoj katha sahoj bhabe bola sakto seta 100 percent thik kintu ta satteo manik er katha tene bolte hay hayto lekhatar modhe kichu sabder karikuri dile akta bishal byapti pete parto karon bisay ta atoi baro abong sundor akta jinis ke tule dhara je sekhane kolomer khelar sujog tao mone hay aro beshi chilo--
debanjan er lekha besh sundor-pathok ke dhore rakhar rasod ache --
arka ar manik er lekhao bhalo-- asole sabai kombeshi ato tai bhalo likhche je sotty barin dar surei bolte hay chok sarano jayna
tabe rangeet prosonge boli presentation ta besh sundor abong rangeet er aitate akta nijjossata ache kintu lekhar moddhe amar temon badhon mone hay ni---
aro akta prosongo bhaskar er kobitar nam diye anupam boleche "tobe kobitatar naam nie aamar ektu aswosti aachhe . khub tell tale mone hoechhe aamar ."- atocho jatodur amar mone hay prothom diker kono post ei ai kobitar namkoron o kobita bisay ta niye besh alochona hoyechilo jekhane kobitar namkaron ke sudu matro akta acchadon hisbei alochona kora hoyechilo abong eo bola hoyechilo[jodio akhono se post atota mone nei]- je namkaron er sathe kobitar serakom kono prosongikata nai thakte pare-- tahole bhaskarer kobitar nam karon tai ba ki dosh korlo? taltayle kon arthe?--
Ramit da, tumi j post er katha bolle seta ami porini, tao bolchi...namkaraner sathe kobitar prosongikata kono na kono vabe thakei, aprasongik namkaran er bapar ta amar bodhgamyo holo na. eta niye mane hoy ektu alochana howya proyojan....
somnath-- post-2 e ai bisaye akta alochona hoyechilko sankhipto-- manik er lekha se samay ANUSWAR---- ta niye ami nijei comment korechilam je kobitar sathe kobitar namkaron ta thik bujhe uthte parini bole- abong sotti bujhe uthte parini---
se samay i anupam bolechilo:- "jemon manik er nam manik, amar nam anupam- keno amra kobitke sudu seibhabe takate parina?"- jodio sathe namkaroner pshychological impact er prosno tao anechilo.-- ata kono tarker jonno nay- amar aktai jiggasso tahole bhaskar er lekhatar namkaron takeo to sudu sei bhabe dekhle hay --
Bhaskar or kobita-r je naam rekhechhe , naam raakhte hole ekhaane setaai raakhte hoto . kintu naam-t somokaalin mone hochhe naa . othocho kobi-r kono option nei jodi se naam raakhtei chae . taai bolechhi ... er chaite erokom khetre naamhin kobita hote parto .
kobita-r naam raakha holo kina setaa adou aamar kaachhe matter kore naa . aami school-e poraai . chhatrosankhya prae 1000 . aami borojor 20 jon-k naam-e chini . baakider sokolkei chini . kintu taader naam aamar mone thaake na . borong roll number mone thaake .
ei post khub valo laglo. Bhaskorjyoti-r kobita abaro valo laglo. ore kobita amar besh valo lagey, eivabei bola jaye boley mone hochhe ekhon. Debanjan-er kobita valo laglo..ekta hariye jawa shomudro-snan, ar jhauboney shurjer bohemia gaan pelam..kichu tukto tukto harano mukh pelam..valo laglo..
Anupam-er kobita ajo contemporary ebong valo. Sayantan besh valo..besh...
Aritrar chhobita too good. ei series er aro chhobi ashuk. Post-er header-e eky chhobi kyano? Ota palatano hok..
eta kemon kotha likhle: biponon kobita. kobita to bikrir jinis noy. sutorang otake biponon kobita na bole pathok nirbhor kobita bolle bhalo hoy.
EBAR ASI NAMKORONER KOTHAY; RAMIT DEY KOBITARr NAMKORON NIYE BHISON BICOLITO HOYE PORECHEN. ETA THIK JE EI BLOG EI EK SOOY BOLA HOYECHILO KOBITAr NAMKORON KHUB EKTI MARATTOK BISOY NOY. KINTU ETAO THIK JE JOKHON KONO NAM DEOYA HOLO TAKE KICHUTA SPACE TO DITEI HOBE. JEMON AMAR :ANUSWAR" NAMTI. ANMTIr SADHARON ORTHO BER KORLEI KINTU AR BISESH CHINTA KORTE HOY NA. ETIKE DHORA JAK KHUB CHOTTO KONO AAOYAJ.
NAMKORON PATHOKER MODHYE EKTI SUSPENCE TOIRI KORBE ETAI SWABHABIK. EBONG KOBITAy TA PATHOK KE MUGDHA KORBE. EI MUGDHOTAr JONNO KOBITAr JE NAMKORON KHUB SWABHABIK TAR THEKE SORE ESE SAMANNO EKTU BISES HOLE KOBITAti PATHOKer KACHE ANNO MATRA ENE DEY. KHUB SOHOJ SOROL NAMKORON PATHOKER MONE KONO EXRA FEELING ANTE PARE KI, JA PARE EKTU ANNOROKOM KICHU?
Pathokmukhi kobita ar bipononmukhi kobitar modhhye tofatgulo ki ki? ja pathokmukhi taa bipononmukhi kobita na holeo, ja bipononmukhi taa ki pathokmukhi na hoteo paare? kivabe..
e aabaar ki prosno bhaai ! eto ek katha-e mite jaae : bipononmukhi kobita maatroi paathokmukhi kobita , kintu paathokmukhi kobita maatroi bipononmukhi noe .
kobi nijei to tnaar kobita-r prothom ebong onibaryo paathok !! nije satisfied hoben , tobe to chhapte deben !
ARITRA SANYAL ebaar comment post korte paareni kono technical golojog-er kaarone . comment aamake mail korechhe . aami copy-paste kore dilaam :
ami ektu golakhakri dei.
souvik er ekti kothay utsaho pelum, tai ekta flirting mood'e proshno churchhi...
dhora jaak duti bibhag:
likhte para
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likhte jana
jara duti'r mishel gothachchhen tader safolyoi dhora jaak ei prathomik storiyo alochona theke tader uttirno kore dilo. kotha hochchhe likhte para ba raw talent
ebong likhte jana, ba craftmanship.
classicist ra dwitiyo bibhag niye ajibon kirtoniya hoye theke gechhen. byaparta eliot janten, thomas STERNE eliot tai ei bishoyok godyosoili te tnaar eto gamvirjo, eto ketadurosto chal bojay rekhechhen.
amar proshno holo kobitar spark-kalin nascent abeg ta ki nijer sotichchhod rokkha korte paare sesh porjonto?
pls amra jeno wordsworth'er dike dhalu kono prosonge na pichhle jaai.
within a fraction of second seta kono line ba shobde dhora dey...shobde jokhon dhora dey to mone mone holeo sei shobder shoriri ostitwo kichhuta nijer daabi khatay...
sutorang ase dwitiyo shobdo ba line'er daayboddhota, pokkhantore jaake boli samonjosyo.
samanyo manosik prostuti porrbo seshe jokhon likhte bosi, takhon vashar somyok aain kanun tackle kortei hoy...takhon aar ek abeg ja prothom khonomuhurter theke amader shift kore dey
udgaarer por, kichhukkhon ba kichhudin por, jege othe pather abeg...jege othe editing er chetona...
ekaTaa prashna raakhalaam. eTaa ki kaaro mane haya naa Je baa`mlaa kabitaay, bisheshhata taruNader madhye [ 40 anurdha ] du-ekajan baad dile kono academic kaaj nei kaaro? ateeter kabi o kabitaa niye, agrajader lekhaalikhi niye, ateeter apexatara bhinnadhaaraar haariye Jaaoaa kabider niye kaaro kono kaaj nei. kaaj karaar mata maanasikataa nei, ichchhe nei, rashad nei - eman ki mane haya naa kaaro?
pashchimer praay samasta deshe, emanaki apexaatara daridra pUrba-iuroper desh guloteo taruN kabiraa aneke, balaa Jaay beshirabhaag, agraja kabi o kabitaa niye gabeshhaNaadharmee kaaj karachhen.
baa`mlaa kabitaay ei scholastic void kena ?
taachhaarhaa ei raashi raashi kabitaa lekhaa, eba`m atyanta kam kabitaa parhaa - egulo ki ekasamay sbaarthapar ek pracheshhTaa bale mane hay naa? kebal nijeder lekhaaTaai ki important? aamaaderi mata ateeter anek kabi haariye gechhen. taader baipatra-o paaoaa Jaay naa. nijeraa ekaTaa bai kam likhe ki taader kaaro kaaro bai punarmudran karaa Jaay naa?
aamaader kabitaajeeban Derrida-r Of Grammatology diye shuru hachchhe. eTaa bipajjanak. aajo ek adRishya East India Company aachhe. aamaraa taader golaam haye aachhi.
aar ekaTaa kathaa. taruN kabiraa nijer bai chhaapiye bandhuder free deben naa kakhano. ei bhul dashak dashak dhare haye aasachhe. America-y ekaTaa sundar jinishh dekhi. ekhaane magazine culture Taa joraalo nay. Press culture Taa joraalo. kintu keu nijer poisaay bai chhaape naa. ki hay, aneke bandhuder bai chhaapen. bandhuraa taar bai chhapen. kichhu close bandhu baad dile baakiraa bandhuder bai kine ney. phale basic economics Taa ek. kintu approach Taa sbaarthapar nay. aamaader ulTo. aamaraa nijer poisaa diye bai chhepe bandhuder free copy di. kintu Jadi bandhuder sab bai kinataam aar bandhuder keu ekajan aamaar baiTaa chhepe dito seTaai ki bhaalo hata naa?
aami to nijer bai free te di naa kakhano. saamaanya kayekajan kaachher maanushh chhaarhaa. eTaa aapanaar kare dekhun. culture badale Jaabe. aamaraa Kaurab-e cheshhTaa karachhi bachhare antata ekaTaa-duTo bai nijeder kharache karate.
Aryanil da ke pronam....ami ekjon khub samanya pathok...er ei prasna ta amake sanghatik nara dilo....dilo...dullam ektu....
ami pranabendu dasgupta khujechilam 2 bachar...se boi ami amtolar ek boi melay peyechilam adbhut ek stall e...ek kone...tar kabita samgra er 1 khandya...er lafie nechhe chilam sedin....onek ratre gargidike messege korechhilam...aj ami raja..pranabendu porchi...eso amake chumu kheye jao... ami ananya ray khujechilam pai ni...ami manik chakrabarty khujechilam....kichhu peyechhi mon vore ni...tar boi pai ni....ami jugantor chakarbarty....na na..na
ami sahitter lok noi...sudhyu kabitar janya jibon baji rekhechhi...rekhechhi ki?...hya...
keno pai ni tabe...?...hatat ekdin narayan mukhopadhay...dhay jeno...hatat ekdin biswadeb mukhopadhay....pa rekhechhen param...hatat....swades sen er rakha hoyechhe kamlalebu...er ami sarnya khanir modhhey bose thaki....ami dekhi...aruna jay theke aruna ase....ami dekhi...nolok porio...uha ruper lagiya nahe ...mane rkahio ..porio...ami dekhi ek kak vanga harir kinaray darie tar andhakar dekhhe nay...
mone hoi cholo aj rate ami bichana jure ei sab pangtimala boiye die swa-maithune dube jabo...
ami porte chay... visan visan.. sudhyu khete na paoyar ekta voi theke badda gham hoy majhe majhe...
amar onek vul hoye gachhe...onek vul hoye jay...ami ki korbyo...eksiter rate sei sab bhul nie ul bunte pari sudhyu...sei soyetar tumi nebe aryanilda?...anupam da?
sanju, good. khub bhaalo kabider bai khu`njachho tumi. ekaTaa kathaa bale raakhi. Rakha Hayechhe Kamlaalebur sab kabitaai "Swadesh Sen-er Swadesh-e" aachhe. baiTaa Kaurab-e aachhe. ei bai ekhano firiye Jaayani eTaai baa`mlaa kabitaar lajjaa.
Ananya Ray-er bai aamio khu`nje paaini. Amish Rupakathaa je khu`nje paaoaa Jaay naa eTaai halo classic third-world syndrome. Je ei muhUrte be`nche aachhe sei kebal be`nche aachhe. Jei se chhaai, Je se kabarer marmarer niche, taar baiyer paataagulo gaachh kerhe ney.
aami haa-hutaashane bishbaas kari naa. ke kabe ki karabe taate bishbaas raakhinaa. keu naa karale aamii karabo - ei bhaabi. kintu aami anek dUre thaaki. naagaale paainaa esab.
aamio bhaalo kare jaaninaa. tabe JataTuku aami jaani taatei aamaar nijer bai purhiye felate ichchhe kare.
netibaachak mane hate paare aamaar kathaa. I am great at shaming people. e kathaa maarkin kabiraao aamaake balen. But shaming burns a man. And a new phoenix rises from those ashes.
Aryanil da, Anupam da, sobbai k bolchi...eta satti j amra jara ei dashake ese kobita niye samanyo charcha kori,tader modhey anekei Professionally emon kono kajer sathe jukto, jar sathe sathityer jogajog ekebarei nei....ebang savabik vabei nanan jaygay ghure berate hoy, kono thikana porjonto thake na...r tader bangla kobita porar sujog satti kome jay, eta swikar kortei hoy...r english kobitar boi j katotuku powya jay ta ekhaner book stall gulo na dekhle biswas kortam na!!ami chennai te j tuku peyechi, tate keats, pablo neruda bad dile khubjor allen ginsberg er du ekta boi er besi kichu paowa jay na...khub baro ekta boier dokane sorbosakulye hoyto 10-20 ta kobitar boi thake......
savabik vabei iche thakleo sujog hoy na.ja bolchi segulo sob e amar katha, sobai bole iche thakle upay hoy, kintu upay baroi kam...Atleast jara banglay MA korechen, tara hoyto parasunor chape holeo kichuta porar sujog peyechen, amar mato manus der se sujog o chilo na,r jakhon theke kobitar proti tan anuvab kore koboita kei jibar kore nite cheyechi takhon theke poraar sujog o kome gache visan vabe.........
jaihok, jeta bolte chaichi...ta holo, banglay boipara bole ekta website chilo, jekhane anek boi online pora jeto, setao bahudin jabat bandho.amar to mane hoy ebar sobai mile ekta udyog nile kamon hoy?jar kach ejetuku boi ache, segulo k antata scan kore kore kono ekta website e tule dite thaka...bandhura kobitar boi chapanor taka na dik, antata ektuku kora ta hoyto khub kastokar hobe na....bangla kobitar eto web sait hocche, eto online magazine hocche , sob jaygatei sudhu lekhar charachari kintu ager satabdir kobider lekha kothao thake na....erakam cholche tahkele du ekta baro magazine chara, online magazine er vabisat o j khub ekta valo hobe na tar sposto ingit paoya jay.....
anupam da uni subrata sarkar non...subrata chakrabarty...nil opera....ei prasange boli...60 er chakrabarty paribarer praty amar asim durbolata achhe...bises kore oi group ta...
vaskar chakrabarty....jar kabita pore aj ei blog prajantya hete chole esechhi, manik chakrabarty subrata chakrabarty samser anowar...uff ki dekhte chilen...nijey joljantya kabita budhhadeb dasgupta ebong debaraty mitra..
eder praty amar mugdhotya furabar noi...khub mone achhe ekbar ami er amar ek bandhyu...manju...manujurul islam..se kaj kortyo ek cycle er dokane..er asomvob sab kabita likhtyo...se ajo debaraty di ke ma bole dake...jay hok ...dujone chole gachhe kolaghat theke soja garia...manindra gupter bari...(sedin okhan theke anjan sen er bari o gechhilam..tini amake bidesi cigarette khayechilen..)..amar pocket e soloana...er manju baper pocket fak kore 100 taka..ufff se je ki paoya peyechilam...debaraty di amader macher jhol vat khaiechilen...er mone achhe monindra babu...amader glass e jol vore dichhen...er bhujte parchhi...amaar sira beye sei jol neme jachhe ajo...sei machher jhol...sei dupurbelar balika bela...se din kabita kamon kore hoi bhujini...sudhyu bhujte perechilam kabita kamon kore hoi na...manindra babur boi o ki amra khub pori...ajo...ami sudhyu onar mahatyoder mora sisu ei kabita ta porar anuradh kori sobay ke...je kabita ta ajo ami puro porte pari na...kichhuta pore bhoi peye uthe jai...
na academic kathya tar songe jata economy jarie achhe...tatotay asukh jarie achhe...amar to mone hoi ...kau engineeering porechhen...er dinrat kabita kabita kore chutchhen...se academic in respect of literature....er anupam dar colig academic in respect of natbaltu ka...dujoney barthya bodh hoi..jadi engineer jaygay amake rakha hoi ...jay hok
asole ekta tan manus ke chutie nie jay...setay tar academic..se khane somajer leg naratio chole na...isrya rai er hasio...
jini bolchhen kajer chape...anyya bisoyer chape kabita pora kome jachhe take sordhya..kore boli ..apni binoy majumdar o sambhu rakhiter jiboni parun...problem habei...apnar kag nastya habe..kabita nastya habe na..
apnar vetore je apni...besi chintya korben na...apnar life take hell kore debe...karan se vul kore...er vul gulo chorate chorate ekdin pasapasi ese..flowar-vas hoye jay..
totemvoj nie ami pore kathya bolbo....5 bar pore...2 bar porechhi....er amar har er pajore...ekta bhul raktya ese jurchhe...asadharan.....sotty jadi sedin tomar kachhe na jetam?....aha....
Aryanilda, apnar katha sune khub bhalo laglo. apni jeno gyaner mul bhittite aghat karechhen. Jibanander Kabitar ki o keno - boite bolechhen bhalo bhalo kabya sahitya porar kotha ebang nijer maddhye samalochaksulov manovab gare tolar katha. Uni balchhen biswa kabya sahitter mogno pathaker pakhhei kabitar sathik mullyan kora sambhab. T.S.Elliot samparke bolte giye bola hoi tini tar medhar tulonai khubi kam likhechhen. kintu ja likhechhen It came as an event. Elliot nijeo balechhen "work of poetry needs extreme labour." Apni amader banglai sankha Ghosher kathai dharun. uni tar dirghya jibane koti kabya grantha likhechhen? 15 ki 16. kintu onar rabindra sahitter bislesan ba samasamaik kobider rachhana niye kaj dekhun. ta onar kabita rachanar theke anek besi. Arun mitra onar "kabita, ami o amra" boi e bolechhen " ami likhi khub kam, ar jakhan na likhi takhan chinta kori keno likhi." Amader nabya kabider ei atmabisleshan tao khub jaruri. Ar ekta jinis darkar seta holo praisthito kabider proti sradhabodh o tader darshan grahan karar manasikata. Amra sabai jani TS elliot tar The waste land lekhar por jakhan agraja kabike porte den uni tar ardheki uri den. karan uni balen annera agei ja likhe gechhen ta tumi likhbe keno? Elliot ta ekkothai mene nen. ebong the wasteland prokash koren. bakita itihas.
thik bolecho anupam da, kobita kano likhi tar bakhaya hoy na! kobitar proti ekta nisartha valobasa thekei kobita lekha suru hoy hoyto.....r porao.... se jaihok, kajer chape ba anyo karone kobita pora kome jacche eta noy, ami takhon sujog er katha bolchilam.dure thakle boi pete satti asubidhe hoy, tar opor jodi karo bari o kolkatay na hoy....tahole to r kathai nei.
Aryanil da, tumi j kaurab-er server e jayga debar katha bolle, tar jonyo anek dhnyobad...ami amar samartha mato help korar sampurna chesta korbo.jodi ei udyog ta neoya jay, janio....
anupam, charJaapada sambandhe tomaar kathaa satyi. kintu English poetry to saadhaaraNata Chaucer theke dharaa hay. maane 650 bachhar. 650 bachhar aager baa`mlaa nishchay badlechhe kintu temani badlechhe English-o. Anglo-Saxon to aajaker english nay. aamaar aabaar English kabitaa bhaabale Americar kathaai aage mane hay. taader kaabya saahitya to mere keTe 200 bachharer.
subrata chakrabarty-r kathaa kamal sir balaten. naam kaane aasato. bai parhini. astanirjan kothaa theke oi bai pele ? gata bachhar alpa parhalaam. etadin par teman saarhaa dey ni. bhaskar er xetreo taai. khub bhaalo kabi kintu uttar kolkatay seemaabaddha bhaashhaa aar oi chira-bishhaNNataa bodh, aaj aar nite paari naa. tabe bhaskar barha kabi nishchai. manik chakrabarty sambandheo subrata chakrabarty ke niye Jaa balalaam taai balate hay.
but that's not the point. e`nraa aaj nei. eder kaaj karma guchhiye raakhaar daayitba aachhe. seTaa ke karabe? bhakta paaThakader keu karuk.
online archive maintain karaar daayitba aami nite paari. goTaa katak CD baa DVD - byaas taatei 200 bachharer baa`mlaa kabitaake archive kare raakhaa Jaay.
Hrishikesh, tumi Elliot sambandhe sheshher dike Jaa likhale taar anekaTaa Thik. kintu sabaTaa nay. tumi bodhhay Pound er kathaa balachho. Pound praay onaar editor hisebe kaaj karechhilen. Yeats-ero. ekasamay. kintu Elliot Jakhan eisab karachhen takhan onaar cheye bayase chhoTo ekaTi American chhele maaraattak kabitaa likhachhe, Jaa reetimata uttaraadhunik. Elliot sei lekhaake paattaa dichchhen naa. chheleTir naam Louis Zukofsky. taar ata parhaashonaa nei kintu lekhaa durdaanta. Pound kintu dujanakei oskaachchhen. March er kabisammelan-e eTaa niye likhachhi. adbhut ghaTanaa. keu ekhano jaanen naa ei byaapaaraTaa.
"work of poetry needs extreme labour" quote Taar janya dhanyabaad. anupam kintu 15-16Taa bai niye Thik balalo. se kam ki. aar sankha ghosh er ki satyii 15-16Taa kabitaar bai? beshi naa ?
uni rabindranath ke kaaj karechhen Thik. kintu kabitaa niye? kabitaa o kaabyapaaTh niye onaar kono prabandha mane daag kaaTe naa. rather mane hay kabitaa kibhaabe parhate hay seTaa uni satyi jaanen. kebal chhanda-i ki kabitaa? dhbanii ki kabitaa? 50 dashaker kona kabi aajaker kabitaa chinate paaren naa. durbal, conventional lekhaake bhaalo balen. sunil-sankha-saratkumar-...praay sakale.
Anupam,aha tumi SHITKAL KABE ASBE SUPARNA r kotha balle, sakale uthei manta valo hoe gelo. satti Bhaskarer anabadya rachana. bises kare nam bhumikar kabita to anabadya. aro chitramoita chharie achhe boitite. bises kare amar ei muhurte mane hochhe, TUMI HESE UTHLEI traffic police cigarette dharai- ami jatabar pori ei lineta amar mathai ghurte thake. aro anek achhe etai amar ei muhurte mane porchhe. Ar ekta kotha na bole parchhi na, bhai, ami to tomader moto gavirchari pathak noi, bhalomanda gyano tai amar kam. Joy amar khub prio kabi. Jar samalochona kari take bhalobasi bolei kori. tomakeo basi tomar kabita niyeo korbo. kintu tomar katha shune mane holo jeno anekta joydar upar angshik byaktigata stare akraman hoe gelo. Joydar upare eto rag keno bhai? karan ta ki jante pari?
photograph-t Aritra sanyal-er . or bes kichhu chhobi haate paechhi . series hisebe ki pes korbo ?
ReplyDeletenischay korbe...chobi ta darun!!aro dekhar apekhay....
ReplyDeleteki chamatkar kobita sab! tahole kobita jato choto hoye asbe tatoi jombe? ei orirek mukto kobitai ami bhalobasi. ebar sabcheye bhalo legecge shreebhaskarer, astanirjoner ebong sabar. kintu dirghotaro holei ba kkhoti ki? somnath je likhlo 'dristipater adole aro bristipat'er kathaa, sekhane pouchoteo to lomba shwaser darkar, tai na? anupam, ekhano bhalo lagche ei kinchit purono kobita. Joy shunyo dashak.
ReplyDeleteARKAr LEKHATI ARO KHUB BHALO HOTE PARTO. ZEBHABE SURU O SESH HOLO EBONG MAJHKHAN THEKE JE BISHOYTI AMRA PELAM TATE LEKHATI JE MAGIC TOIRI KORTE PARTO TA HOLO NA. EBONG RYTHMER KHUB OBHAB THEKECHE KANE O THOnTE. TOBE ARKAr KOBITA KHUB BHALO DIKE JETE PARE BOLE MONE HOY.
ReplyDeleteER AGE BHASKAR AMAKE KICHU KOTHA BOLECHILO. AMIO BOLECHILAM. SEGULO BHULE GIYE BOLI BHASKARr LEKHA THIK AGER MOTO MONE HOLO. DUKKHITO BARINDA, APNAR BHALO LAGA AR AM,AR BHALO LAGA JE MILLONA EBONG BOLA JAY AMI THIK ULTO KOTHA BOLLAM.
MAINSTREAM BA PARALLAL BOLE KICHU BOLCHI NA. KINTU APATO DRISTITE LEKHATI ETOTAI BALoKHILLO JE ER POR KI HOBE TA SOHOJEI ANUMAN KORA JAY. AMI KOBITAY MAGIC, MYSTRY O MUSICALITY KE PRADHANNO DEI BESHI. ELKHANEI BHASKAR ER KOBITAGULI HOCHOT GHEYE JAY. BHASKAR ARO BHALO LIKHBE JANI. OR ARO BHALOLEKHAR JONNO OPEKKHA KORE ACHI.
ASTONIRJON KHUB BHALO LAGLO. ETOTA KOM JAYGAY ETO BESHI SPACE DEOYAR KHOMOTA JAR ACHE SE NISCHIT BHALO LIKHCHE ARO BHALO LIKHBE.
DEBANJANr LEKHA BOLTE GELE BOLTE HOY MELOPOIYA R KOTHA, JEKHANE SOBDER ORTHO TAR ASOL MANE THEKE URDHE CHOLEJAY, EBONG SOBDOGULI EKTI SPECIAL MUSICALITY TOIRI KORE JEKHANE KONO HOCHOT NEI, KONO EXTRA BURDEN NEI. KOBITA NIJER MOTO KORE CHELTE THAKE. BHALO LAGE.
ANUPAMr KORATOL DARPANRUPE BYABOHAR KORO- EKHANEI KOBITATIR EXTREM SUCCESS. ER POR AR KONO KOTHA HOBE NA. EI 1TI LINE DIYEI BOJHA JAY KOBITATIR KOBITA HOYE OTHA.
RAMIT DEYr LEKHA BHALO LAGLO. OR KOBITA "UPOMAI KOBITA" HOYE UTHECHE.
manik ,
ReplyDeleteaami tomaar songe ekmot holaam naa . Bhaskar taar ei kobitae khub vaalo ebong bisaal kichhu kaaj korechhe etaa jodi mone naa-o kori , eto nirmom somaalochona or hoeto praapyo noe .
Bhaskar kokhonoi nirmaanprodhaan noe . o nijer anubhuti-k vaasa deoaa chharaa khub besi kichhu korte chae naa hoeto . o sudhu ekta prokaash chae . aar chesta kore jotota sombhob soraasori seta raakhte .
ekhaaneo taai korechhe . kintu lekhaata khub sorol noe . sohoj katha sohoj kore bolaa onek somoy kothin . bhaskar khub saabolilvaabe seta korechhe .
ekjoner lekhaa buk-e nie paathorer muk hoe thaaka ... hoeto concept-o kobita hoe uthte paare .
tobe kobitatar naam nie aamar ektu aswosti aachhe . khub tell tale mone hoechhe aamar .
aamar mone hoe bhaskar taar ei dhoroner kobita-r kono naam naa raakhlei justice korbe nijer kobitar proti .
aar aalochonaa theme gelo keno !!! katha choluk !
ReplyDeleteSayantan-er lekhaa kemon laaglo sokoler ? aamar 7 bochhor aage lekha kobitagulo ki ekhono poraa jaachhe ?
Rangeet ekta odbhut presentation rekhechhe . setaa nie katha hok !
Prashanta-r kobita nie katha hok !
Souvik-er kobita ei post-e raakhte paarlaam naa . o thik paathie diechhilo . kintu aamar computer gorbor korte suru korlo . aami draft-ta taarahuro kore post kore dilaam .
ReplyDeleteEi je kabitar kotha bala hachhe, bola hachhe rupak asrita kabitar kotha, kabitar parabastabata swapnodarshner kotha, esaber urdhe uthe dainik rojnamacha ki nite pare na kabitar sarir?
ReplyDeleteAnek Bhalo laaglo ei uddog!
ReplyDeleteANUPAM,
ReplyDeleteTUMI AMAR KOTHATA THIK DHORTE PARONI BODH HOY. BHASKAR BHASKAR KORTE KORTE AMAR BHASKAR CHAKRABORTYr KOTHA MONE PORE GELO. UNIO TO KICHU KICHU KHUB SOHOJ LIKHECHEN, JEMON AMADER BHASKAR. KINTU TAR MODHYE JE PHYLOSOPHY TAO AMRA JANI. AMADER BHASKARJYOTIR KHETREO TO ANEKTA TAI. AMI KONO DOSHAROP NA KOREI BOLCHI BHASKARr LEKHAY AMI AMARMOTO KORE PAI NI. TAR MANE KOKHONOY EI NOY O KHARAP LEKHE.
SOROL LEKHA MANE JODI BHEBE NAO JE LEKHATI KHARAP TAHOLE KHUB BORO BHUL KORA HOBE. O SOROL LEKHE. KINTU OBOSSOI TAR DORSON TI MOHOT O BRIHOTTORO. AMI SUDHU SEI DORSONTIKE EKTI MAGIC ER MODHYE PAOYAR OBHABER KOTHA BOLECHI.
ASHA KORI EBAR BISHOYTI PORISKAR KORTE PARLAM.
kabita gulo ati sundor...
ReplyDeleteHrisikesh ,
ReplyDeletekobir rojnaamchha asmaannyo uchchotae gie kobita hoechhe ses porber Binay Majumdarer kolom-e .
aami nije ekti kabyogronthe ei chesta korechhilaam : JAAR NAM APORAJITE SEO KINTU NAAMKORONE HERE JAE . otaa chhilo ekti dirghyo kobita . prae 32 paata . 2007 saale beriechhilo Kabita Campus theke . eki potrika-e krorepatro-o hoechhilo .
aami biswaas kori eivaabe kobita ek nijoswo sotota paae , taa onnyo konovabe paaoa jae na .
jemon aapni ekjon daaktaar . aapni paaren nijer rojkaar experience-k poetic version dite . ektaa onnyo bnaak aasbe hoeto evabe .
nijer dhaak petaalam na kintu ! nijer dhaaronaatuku bollam Hrisikesh .
aapnar kobita porer post-e thaakchhe . sokoler kobita kemon laaglo ?
CHEEEERS !!!
ReplyDeleteblog-e 50 jon sodosyo hoe gelo .
Darun bolechho Anupam. Tumi jeno amar mukher kothata kere niye sabdabandha ses korle. Thik amaro biswas, Tarapada Roy ba Binoybabu ba Joydar kichu kichu kobita sei sahajia dhange uthe jeno kabyaprasidhhi peyechhe.
ReplyDeleteAmar kabyagyan to tomader moto noi, anek laghu.Tabu bali, Arkar kabita pore amar keno jani sei kabir mukh mane aschhe jini anek din kichhu likhte parchhen na. Sristihinatar bedana take biddha korchhe, tini hatas hoe porchhen.
Ar Anupam tomar Darpan kobitatar rupomoiota nandanik. buddhapurnima ar dhabal haser rupak sahaje prativato. Darpane mukh dekhar madhhe bhabiswatdarshaner je rupak lukie achhe setao khub sundar. Eto alpabayeser lekha holeo (ja tumi alochanai bolechho) atyanta porinoto.
EKJON KOBIR PROTINIOTO ONUBHUTO CHALCHITRO TAR KOBITA. EBAR JODI BOLA JAY ETAKE KABITA BANANO JAY KI NA, TOBE BOLBO BOHUDIN AGE THEKE EI CHALCHITROI KOBITA HOYE ESECHE. SUTORANG KEU SURU KORBE BOLA BHUL HOBE, BOLA JETE PARE NOTUN KORE SURU KORA JAY KI NA. SURU HOYECHE BOLLAM EI KARONE : Artur Rembo আর্তুর র্যাবো AJ THEKE ONEK DIN AGEI TAR JIBON JONTRONAR PRATTOHIK NAMCHA REKHE GACHE TAnR "A SEASON IN HELL" BOITITE.
ReplyDeleteBOITIR KOTHA ULLEKH KORLMA KENONA ETIR NAM I PROTHOM MONE PORLO.
TOBE KEU KOBITA NIYE EBHABE BHACHE ETA JENE KHUB BHALO LAGLO. ARO ASUN KOTH BOLABOLI HOK. POPRER SONKHYAY HRISHIKESHBABUr LEKHA PORAR JONNO OPEKKHAY THAKLAM.
eto kichu alochana hocche, bhaskar-er sahaj saral upasthapana theke rangeet er ekdam alada rakam presentation.
ReplyDeletekintu amar mate ei post er sobcheye sundar kobitati likheche debanjan da.ki mane hoy??eto sundar vabe shabder babahar, kothao proyojan er besio jamon bola hoyni,abar kothao kono khamti o nei....
prothomei boli anupam hajar chesta kore add hote parini--- akhono sei aki katha bolche -- aita aktu dekhis tui
ReplyDeleteabar lekhar moddhe asi
ReplyDeleteprothomei bolbo- dujoner nam jader lekha chuye dekhlam-- abong anubhab korlam-- astronirjon abong anupam-- astro ar ageo amake suniyechilo lekhata- sedin o bolechilam sabasss- ajjo bolchi- ar anupam er darpan lekhata durdanto--
torjoni lekhatate 4 no line e deben na debe hobe aktu dekhis -- lekhatao chamotkar--
somnath sen-- lekha kharap ki bhalo ato baro pondit ami noi ar ami nije biswas kori protiti lekhar modhei je lekhe tar kichu anubhuti abong seta antorik haoatai swabhabik lukiye thake-- tabe amar mone hoyeche lekhta experiment er dik theke besh sundor hote hote kothao aktu chere geche - hay aktu beshi agiye niye jaoa hoyeche kimba kothao lekhata sei rhythm rakhte pareni- ata akantoi bayktigato anubhuti theke bollam..
bhaskar er lekha bhalo legeche abar lageni-- dutoi bola jete pare- ata a jonno nay je bhaskar er kach theke aro kichu beshi demand etc. karon kono kobir kach thekei sabsomay aki jinis demand kara jay na-- lekhar bisay ta besh sundor tobe amar mone anupam jeta boleche sahoj katha sahoj bhabe bola sakto seta 100 percent thik kintu ta satteo manik er katha tene bolte hay hayto lekhatar modhe kichu sabder karikuri dile akta bishal byapti pete parto karon bisay ta atoi baro abong sundor akta jinis ke tule dhara je sekhane kolomer khelar sujog tao mone hay aro beshi chilo--
debanjan er lekha besh sundor-pathok ke dhore rakhar rasod ache --
arka ar manik er lekhao bhalo-- asole sabai kombeshi ato tai bhalo likhche je sotty barin dar surei bolte hay chok sarano jayna
tabe rangeet prosonge boli presentation ta besh sundor abong rangeet er aitate akta nijjossata ache kintu lekhar moddhe amar temon badhon mone hay ni---
aro akta prosongo bhaskar er kobitar nam diye anupam boleche "tobe kobitatar naam nie aamar ektu aswosti aachhe . khub tell tale mone hoechhe aamar ."- atocho jatodur amar mone hay prothom diker kono post ei ai kobitar namkoron o kobita bisay ta niye besh alochona hoyechilo jekhane kobitar namkaron ke sudu matro akta acchadon hisbei alochona kora hoyechilo abong eo bola hoyechilo[jodio akhono se post atota mone nei]- je namkaron er sathe kobitar serakom kono prosongikata nai thakte pare-- tahole bhaskarer kobitar nam karon tai ba ki dosh korlo? taltayle kon arthe?--
ReplyDeleteekdam thik bolecho Ramit da,hoyto experiment korte giye choriye phelechi kothao!!
ReplyDeleteasole hatat iche hoyechilo j emon ekta kobita lekhar, jeta duto prithak prithak kobita hisebe pora jay, abar eksathe ekta kobita hisebeo pora jay....
tai hoyto presentation ta k besi gurutto diye phelechi ei khetre....
r Rangeet er presentation chirakal e anyorakam, sobar theke alada.ekhanei o hoyto nijeke sampurna anyo vabe chiniye dey....
Manikbabu, apni ekjan mogno pathak. Apnar bislesan o juktigrjyta irshanio. Ami boyese hoito ei bloger kabider theke samanya boro, kintu amar lekhani anek aparinato. Ami sadya suru korechi. sahajia amar kachhe sabalilbhabe ase, ami sudhu take prokas kori matra. Saktir kabitar mistic ba rahasyamoita amar kabitai thik thake na. tai dhanda hoi kabita holo to?
ReplyDeleteRangiter kabitati jeman, ananya. Mahasunya niye sadharan upama diye magic sristi hoechhe.
eto anukabita, tabu jadu jadu.Bigwan ar sahitya kabitatite mise ekakar hoe gechhe. Ami je keno eman likhte pari na!
Ramit da, tumi j post er katha bolle seta ami porini, tao bolchi...namkaraner sathe kobitar prosongikata kono na kono vabe thakei, aprasongik namkaran er bapar ta amar bodhgamyo holo na.
ReplyDeleteeta niye mane hoy ektu alochana howya proyojan....
somnath-- post-2 e ai bisaye akta alochona hoyechilko sankhipto-- manik er lekha se samay ANUSWAR---- ta niye ami nijei comment korechilam je kobitar sathe kobitar namkaron ta thik bujhe uthte parini bole- abong sotti bujhe uthte parini---
ReplyDeletese samay i anupam bolechilo:- "jemon manik er nam manik, amar nam anupam- keno amra kobitke sudu seibhabe takate parina?"- jodio sathe namkaroner pshychological impact er prosno tao anechilo.-- ata kono tarker jonno nay- amar aktai jiggasso tahole bhaskar er lekhatar namkaron takeo to sudu sei bhabe dekhle hay --
bhai ramit ,
ReplyDeletetomaar naam jodi Ramit naa hoe Rampada ba madan chandra santra hoto , baa ramcharan ... ektu somosya hoto . ontoto aamar hoto . seta somoyghotito . mone hoto naa tumi aamar somoboyosi ebong somomonsko .
Bhaskar or kobita-r je naam rekhechhe , naam raakhte hole ekhaane setaai raakhte hoto . kintu naam-t somokaalin mone hochhe naa . othocho kobi-r kono option nei jodi se naam raakhtei chae . taai bolechhi ... er chaite erokom khetre naamhin kobita hote parto .
kobita-r naam raakha holo kina setaa adou aamar kaachhe matter kore naa . aami school-e poraai . chhatrosankhya prae 1000 . aami borojor 20 jon-k naam-e chini . baakider sokolkei chini . kintu taader naam aamar mone thaake na . borong roll number mone thaake .
aami bolchhi naa eta kono vaalo byapaar . hoeto taara jaanle kosto paabe .
ekhaane Shankhya Ghosh-er ekta kaahini aachhe . seta bolchhi naa .
aami nije je kabyogronthoguli prokaash korechhi ... mot 5t ... tar moddhe 3t kabyogronther kono kobita-e naamkoron nei . taai aamar pokkhe etaa bolaa swaabhaabik . taai naa ? haa haa haaa ...
kobita lekhaar somoy paathokmukhi hoaar dorkaar nei . kintu kobita chhaparsomoy paathoker psychology maatha-e raakhtei hobe kobi-k . presentation ekta boro byapaar .
ReplyDeletebaba-maa jemon sontaan-k sundor kore saajie beraate nie jaan ... fitfaat kore school paathan ...
Tarmaney Anupam, lekhar somoy je kobita chhilo, chhapar somoy shei kobitai ki awnekta bodley jete paare ? naki, pathokmukhinota byaparta asole subconscious-e lekhar somoyteo thake?..:)
ReplyDeleteei post khub valo laglo. Bhaskorjyoti-r kobita abaro valo laglo. ore kobita amar besh valo lagey, eivabei bola jaye boley mone hochhe ekhon. Debanjan-er kobita valo laglo..ekta hariye jawa shomudro-snan, ar jhauboney shurjer bohemia gaan pelam..kichu tukto tukto harano mukh pelam..valo laglo..
Anupam-er kobita ajo contemporary ebong valo. Sayantan besh valo..besh...
Aritrar chhobita too good. ei series er aro chhobi ashuk. Post-er header-e eky chhobi kyano? Ota palatano hok..
EI POSTe KHUB BHALO ALOCHONA HOCCHE. SUTORANG AMI AMAR KOTHA BOLTE CHOLE ELAM.
ReplyDeletePROTHOME ASI KOBITAr KOTHAy TARPOR NAMKORONe.
EKJON JOKHPON KOBITA LEKHEN TOKHON TA ONEKBHABE LIKHTE PAREN. AMJODI ER EKTI ROUGH BIVAJON KORI TAHOLE EKTIr NAM DEBO MOGNO KOBITA. EKHANE KOBI NIJER MOTO KORE LEKHEN. KARO KOTHA BHABEN NA. MUGDHO LEKHOK TINI. TINI CHAPAR KOTHA, PATHOKr KOTHA BHABEN NA. SUTORANG SE KOBITATI EKANTO TAnR NIJER.
EBAR DHORA JAK KOBITATI CHAPA HOLO. TOKHON TO SETI AR TAnR NIJER NOY.EBONG SWABHABIK BHABEI KOBITAtir ONURORON PATHOK NIROPEKKHO NOY,SUTORANG TAR ORTHO O ABESH APEKKHUK HOYE PORE. KOBITAti LEKHAR SOMOY JA CHAPAR SOMOY AR TA THAKLO NA.KICHU PORIBORTON GHOTE GELO.
Valo bolecho, Manik.
ReplyDeleteKintu, eta tow hobei..tobe ekjon mugdho lekhok jokhon nijer jonnye likhlen, thik kon muhurtey kobitati tnar mon-e chhapa awkkhor hoye gyalo, ta bola mushkil...maane mogno kobita ar biponon-mukhi kobita-r moddhye je thin line of difference thake, sheta bodhoy awnek somoyei blurred hoye jaye..sekhanei challenge..nijer shongey..ei byapartake intelligently tackle kora jaye ki?
ReplyDeleteeta kemon kotha likhle: biponon kobita. kobita to bikrir jinis noy. sutorang otake biponon kobita na bole pathok nirbhor kobita bolle bhalo hoy.
ReplyDeleteEBAR ASI NAMKORONER KOTHAY; RAMIT DEY KOBITARr NAMKORON NIYE BHISON BICOLITO HOYE PORECHEN. ETA THIK JE EI BLOG EI EK SOOY BOLA HOYECHILO KOBITAr NAMKORON KHUB EKTI MARATTOK BISOY NOY. KINTU ETAO THIK JE JOKHON KONO NAM DEOYA HOLO TAKE KICHUTA SPACE TO DITEI HOBE. JEMON AMAR :ANUSWAR" NAMTI. ANMTIr SADHARON ORTHO BER KORLEI KINTU AR BISESH CHINTA KORTE HOY NA. ETIKE DHORA JAK KHUB CHOTTO KONO AAOYAJ.
NAMKORON PATHOKER MODHYE EKTI SUSPENCE TOIRI KORBE ETAI SWABHABIK. EBONG KOBITAy TA PATHOK KE MUGDHA KORBE. EI MUGDHOTAr JONNO KOBITAr JE NAMKORON KHUB SWABHABIK TAR THEKE SORE ESE SAMANNO EKTU BISES HOLE KOBITAti PATHOKer KACHE ANNO MATRA ENE DEY. KHUB SOHOJ SOROL NAMKORON PATHOKER MONE KONO EXRA FEELING ANTE PARE KI, JA PARE EKTU ANNOROKOM KICHU?
thik ache, 'biponon-mukhi; noy, 'pathok-nirvor'-i nahoy bawla gyalo..:)
ReplyDeleteAare ki chamatkar likhchho. Ki chamatkar pattrikatitir nam.hat's off young friends.tomader kalami to amake notun vabna jogay.
ReplyDeletesouvik ,
ReplyDeletepaathokmukhi presentation onek kichhu daabi kore . kichhu bolchhi jegulo ei muhurte mone aaschhe :
1.baananer sothikota
2.chhondo thaakle taar nirvulotaa
3.oboyober saajojyo
4.space ( breathing purpose )
5.pongkti bivaajoner jukti
6.font
7.naamkoroner taatporjomoyotaa
aaro onek kichhu thaaktei paare . aami koyekti likhlaam .
er songe biponon-er kono jog nei . etaa kobita-r saamajikota-r proshner songe jukto .
kobi kokhono bolbe naa ,'lok naa pok .' tobe taaka kobitake maati kore ditei paare .
Pathokmukhi kobita ar bipononmukhi kobitar modhhye tofatgulo ki ki? ja pathokmukhi taa bipononmukhi kobita na holeo, ja bipononmukhi taa ki pathokmukhi na hoteo paare? kivabe..
ReplyDeleteanuvutir khela khelte giye kothau hochot kheye ektu pata chule geche,ebar daktar osudh kingba sui fotabe,ektu betha hayto hai,tabe parer aramta bes majadar.kabitar alochanate anuvuti kamar khelo na bodher pokata bigre gelo,emano hate pare namer mathatai keu kamre dilo.tabuto kabitar sader kichu chete ba pute khaua halo.ja ki sab baje bakchi.tabe eta sati kabita egoche ,r pri sbkati kabitai bes valo hayeche.
ReplyDeletesouvik
ReplyDeletee aabaar ki prosno bhaai ! eto ek katha-e mite jaae : bipononmukhi kobita maatroi paathokmukhi kobita , kintu paathokmukhi kobita maatroi bipononmukhi noe .
kobi nijei to tnaar kobita-r prothom ebong onibaryo paathok !! nije satisfied hoben , tobe to chhapte deben !
ARITRA SANYAL ebaar comment post korte paareni kono technical golojog-er kaarone . comment aamake mail korechhe . aami copy-paste kore dilaam :
ReplyDeleteami ektu golakhakri dei.
souvik er ekti kothay utsaho pelum, tai ekta flirting mood'e proshno churchhi...
dhora jaak duti bibhag:
likhte para
o
likhte jana
jara duti'r mishel gothachchhen tader safolyoi dhora jaak ei prathomik storiyo alochona theke tader uttirno kore dilo. kotha hochchhe likhte para ba raw talent
ebong likhte jana, ba craftmanship.
classicist ra dwitiyo bibhag niye ajibon kirtoniya hoye theke gechhen. byaparta eliot janten, thomas STERNE eliot tai ei bishoyok godyosoili te tnaar eto gamvirjo, eto ketadurosto chal bojay rekhechhen.
amar proshno holo kobitar spark-kalin nascent abeg ta ki nijer sotichchhod rokkha korte paare sesh porjonto?
pls amra jeno wordsworth'er dike dhalu kono prosonge na pichhle jaai.
asol kotha, konta chai soti na sundori?
ei byapare ekti byaktigoto dharona share kori.
ekti kobita jokhon ase, tokhon taar kono vasha thake na.
within a fraction of second seta kono line ba shobde dhora dey...shobde jokhon dhora dey to mone mone holeo sei shobder shoriri ostitwo kichhuta nijer daabi khatay...
sutorang ase dwitiyo shobdo ba line'er daayboddhota, pokkhantore jaake boli samonjosyo.
samanyo manosik prostuti porrbo seshe jokhon likhte bosi, takhon vashar somyok aain kanun tackle kortei hoy...takhon aar ek abeg ja prothom khonomuhurter theke amader shift kore dey
udgaarer por, kichhukkhon ba kichhudin por, jege othe pather abeg...jege othe editing er chetona...
ei vabe sadamata ekta kobita prokriyay prathomik abegta, theke geleo hoyto kichhuta konthasa hoye pore...
ei sob fleeting emotions er karjokolap dhorle dekha jay likhte jini paren, tini likhte janle, kobitatir swad baare...ekta byaktigoto abeg, jodi taar nyunotomo onusongo katate na paare, tobe kobitay appeal ti poripokko hoy na...asole boltei to chai...ja bolte chai ta nijer moto kore onyer kachhe pouchhe deoyar daayvaar nite hole nijer prokashbhongikei korayotto korte hoy...setai amra sobai kore cholechhi...ekhane keu jodi manosik rog niye kobitay manosik roger poribesh teebrotor vabe futiye tulte paaren, tahole ta ki kholamela kobita hobe swabhabik vabe? howa uchit? subod sarkar er "POPE JOHN PAUL2 APNAKE" je chittkrito dhwoni achhe ta amar mone hoy kobitar bishoy-maafik bolei achhe...seta pathokmukhi hoye gechhe ei khetre...
kintu shakti'r "PATHAR GORHIYE PORE GAACHH PORHE BODHE" tumul lyrical lilt niyeo, srikanto-indronath noisho ovijan reference niyeo mayabi, ontormukhi, o duruhotoro...pathokmukhi noy...
asole mushkil ta ki janen..
byaparta onekta 'praptoboyosko der jonyo' cinema'r moton hasyokor...asole toh praptomonosko hoya uchit...
gota bangali generation ke generation "BENIMADHOB"e mete gelo, kintu kothay sei pourush je daabi korte paare "PLUTOSWOR"e sarthok vaabe provabito howar? pathokmukhi o bipononmukhi kobitar modhye ektai hyphen jaate proshnatito vabe jhulchhe pathoker maturity'r prosongo....
souvik, anupam da, onek ta bollam, feedback deben
feedback :
ReplyDeleteei blog korte ese aami tomaake pelaam . aar ki chaai bolo to Aritra ?
ANUPAMDA KOBITA AAMA K AKHN PROBHABITO KORCHE;ONAR LEKHAR AAMI AKJN NIYOMITO PATHOK;ONEKDIN DHORE ONAR LEKHA PORCHI;ONAR LEKHA PORAR POR R AAMR NIJER LEKHA PORTE BHALO LAGE NA.....
ReplyDeleteAAMI SOB SOMOY BHABI..ISH KI DARUN LEKHA..AAMI KOBE EROKOM LIKHTE PARBO ;
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AAPNA K JANTE DEWOYA HOBE NA ."
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ReplyDeleteekaTaa prashna raakhalaam. eTaa ki kaaro mane haya naa Je baa`mlaa kabitaay, bisheshhata taruNader madhye [ 40 anurdha ] du-ekajan baad dile kono academic kaaj nei kaaro? ateeter kabi o kabitaa niye, agrajader lekhaalikhi niye, ateeter apexatara bhinnadhaaraar haariye Jaaoaa kabider niye kaaro kono kaaj nei. kaaj karaar mata maanasikataa nei, ichchhe nei, rashad nei - eman ki mane haya naa kaaro?
ReplyDeletepashchimer praay samasta deshe, emanaki apexaatara daridra pUrba-iuroper desh guloteo taruN kabiraa aneke, balaa Jaay beshirabhaag, agraja kabi o kabitaa niye gabeshhaNaadharmee kaaj karachhen.
baa`mlaa kabitaay ei scholastic void kena ?
taachhaarhaa ei raashi raashi kabitaa lekhaa, eba`m atyanta kam kabitaa parhaa - egulo ki ekasamay sbaarthapar ek pracheshhTaa bale mane hay naa? kebal nijeder lekhaaTaai ki important? aamaaderi mata ateeter anek kabi haariye gechhen. taader baipatra-o paaoaa Jaay naa. nijeraa ekaTaa bai kam likhe ki taader kaaro kaaro bai punarmudran karaa Jaay naa?
kholaa prashna...
thanks aryanilda , ei jonnei boli ei blog-e aapnar aasa uchit . aapni upodes deben emon kono dhaaronaa baa asha aamar anumatro nei . kintu aapni aalochona-e ele khub foloprosu hoe uthbe ekekti post .
ReplyDeletejaa bolechhen , jotaartho bolechhen .
aami jokhon seriously kobita lekha-r siddhaanto niechhilaam , seta 2003 , thik korechhilaam perspective bisorjon die konodin kono kaaj korbo na .
prothom thekei goddyo likhe gechhi . sei goddyo onyoke sikkhito korte noe , borong nijer maanosikota , nijer dikkhaa nijer kaachhe spostotoro kore tulte . prae emon kono mohot agraja kobi nei , jnaar somporke aami ekta holeo anuchhed rochona korini . setaa ramnidhi gupta theke suru kore aryanil obodhi .
kobita-r itihaas naa jene ei muhurte onek tarun kobi kobita likhchhe . taader aami er aage kichhu post-e soraasori aakromon korechhi . taar jobab-e aamakeo aakraanto hote hoechhe .
kichhudin aage ekjon kobi taar kobita-k taatwikvaabe aakraanto hote dekhe bollo aamkae phone kore ,'etaa aalochonar nam-e blog-e jaa hochhe , setaa aantlaamo .' orthaat taar mawt-e
kobita vaalo laagbe , baa khaarap , ebong er moddhe juktisoho aalochona nisproyojon .
ekjon aamake jaanalo aapnar TSUNAMI_R EKBOCHHOR PORE boita nie aami jaa KABISAMMELAN-e likhechhi seta se somorthon kore naa . kintu aami jaani aapnaar boita o poreini . o KAURAB-e kabita paathiechhilo , hoeto aapni soraasori grohon korenni . sei raag theke kathata bollo .
ekhon aamar somoboyosi kobider dekhi taara jekono prokaar-e nijer jekono kobita ekta potrika-e gnuje dite perei nischinto . sei kobita nie kathabaarta taara chae naa khub . aar onyoder kobita taara poraar proyojon monei kore naa . uporchaalaki kore berie jae .
aamar blog-e jaara lekhe aryanilda , taader moddhe kotojon ebaarer boimela theke aamar natun boita 10 taaka die kinechhe ami jaani naa . borojor 2-1 jon hote paare .
ei to obostha !
vebechhilam aaj natun post korei debo . kintu ekta vaalo aalochonaa suru hoechhe .
ReplyDeleteaami chaai sokole ongso nik .
aryanilda ,
ReplyDeleteaapnaar khola proshner motoi aami ekta khola aamontron jaanachhi . please blog-er member hon . aamader ekjon hisebei katha bolun .
Aryanil-da, Anupam, ami ekmawt. nijeder kobita jahir korte kortei amader diin jachhe. kromagoto kobita na likhe kobita poRa, alochona-y jawa, awnnyoder kobita poRa, ebong nijer awbosthan-ke chinhito korey aro utkorshotar dikey egiye jawa, etay churanto ghat-ti..asoley khub taratari shob kichhu chai..eta shudhu kobitar khetrei tow noye, ba bola jaye, kobitay ei rokomta je hochhe seta bodhoy somajer-i protifolon..globalisation, consumerism, fast-paced life ki aro onek kichhur motoi kobitakeo sesh kore dichhena ? tobu jara er modhhyeo kobitake valobeshe ekta kobitar joutho ghorbari srishti korte chaichhen, tader-ke awbhinandan..
ReplyDeletebaa`mlaa kabitaar anek bhaalo guN aachhe. eba`m 21:0-r kabiraa antata 90-er tulanaay besh barha ekaTaa paridhi, shoili, sbaatantra o mainstream sambandhe udaaseenataa aanate perechhe Jaa aage chhilo naa.
ReplyDeletekintu aami netibaachak dikaTaar kathaai bali. kenanaa seTaa aamaader rectify karate saahaaJya karabe. hayato. Kamal Chakrabarty kaarakhanaay chaakri karate karate ekabaar baa`mlaa-y MA karen. sandhyaabelaa class kare. kena karalen? ki laabh halo? kono technical course karale hayato chaakri te subidhe hata. er uttare Kamalda balechhilen Je ei Je MA karate giye ekaTaa formal training halo. anek bai anichchhaa sattbeo jor kare parhate halo - Jeman Mangalkaabya - ete prabhUta laabh halo.
byaktigata bhaabe aami mangalkaabya/ boishhNab saahitya kichhui jaaninaa bhaalo kare. Bhaktider lekhaalikhi jaaninaa. athacha aamaar paribaar boishhNab eba`m gata 600 bachhar Jaaba`t ei paribaarer bahu bahu lok, generation after generation boishhNab saahityer naanaa kaaj kare esechhen. aamaar pra-pitaamahe ese sab theme gechhe.
sedin Beat prajanmer kabi Diane Di Prima aamaake Bhakti kabitaa niye anek prashna karalen. aami beshi kichhu balate paaralaam naa. dekhalaam ek 75 bachharer American mahliaa kabi Jaa Jaanen aami taar kaanaakarhio jaaninaa. eba`m uni kono bhaarateeya bhaashhaa jaanen naa. sabaTaai Allen er niye aasaa naanaa gabeshhaNaagrantha/anubaad grantha parhe jaanaa.
esab academic garta aachhe aamaader. aamaader Academic jaga`t khanja. bhaalo academic kaaj little mag-er lokeraai karen. kintu segulor paaThak kam. taruN kabir ei training Taa must. eba`m eTaa taake nijei khu`nje nite habe. kono daada bale dite paaraben naa. daadaader beshirbhaageri dhbajabhanga abasthaa. kenanaa taaraao bisheshh kichhu jaanen naa. daaduraa jaanaleo jaanate paaren.
aamaader kabitaajeeban Derrida-r Of Grammatology diye shuru hachchhe. eTaa bipajjanak. aajo ek adRishya East India Company aachhe. aamaraa taader golaam haye aachhi.
aar ekaTaa kathaa. taruN kabiraa nijer bai chhaapiye bandhuder free deben naa kakhano. ei bhul dashak dashak dhare haye aasachhe. America-y ekaTaa sundar jinishh dekhi. ekhaane magazine culture Taa joraalo nay. Press culture Taa joraalo. kintu keu nijer poisaay bai chhaape naa. ki hay, aneke bandhuder bai chhaapen. bandhuraa taar bai chhapen. kichhu close bandhu baad dile baakiraa bandhuder bai kine ney. phale basic economics Taa ek. kintu approach Taa sbaarthapar nay. aamaader ulTo. aamaraa nijer poisaa diye bai chhepe bandhuder free copy di. kintu Jadi bandhuder sab bai kinataam aar bandhuder keu ekajan aamaar baiTaa chhepe dito seTaai ki bhaalo hata naa?
aami to nijer bai free te di naa kakhano. saamaanya kayekajan kaachher maanushh chhaarhaa. eTaa aapanaar kare dekhun. culture badale Jaabe. aamaraa Kaurab-e cheshhTaa karachhi bachhare antata ekaTaa-duTo bai nijeder kharache karate.
Oh....ei sange eTaao balaa darakaar Je ei blog-e Je anusheelan Taa hachchhe seTaa kintu khub prayojan. ei dharaNer exercise kintu shudhu baa`mlaa kabitaatei dekhi. paashchaatye kothaao kakhano dekhini Je ekadal taruN kabi nijeder sadya paarhaa kabitaa cross-examine karachhen. Muktamancha erakam shuru kare pratham. Kaurab er camp-e aamaraa karataam 2000-2006. ekhan ekhaane hachchhe. ei prayaasagulo chaalaate anek energy laage. anupamraa seTaa dichchhe eTaa daaruN byaapaar.
ReplyDeletekintu aami balabo er paashaapaashi aapanaaraa ke ki parhachhen bhaabachhen esab niyeo likhun. kabitaacharchaa maane kebal kabitaa lekhaa noy.
Aryanil da ke pronam....ami ekjon khub samanya pathok...er ei prasna ta amake sanghatik nara dilo....dilo...dullam ektu....
ReplyDeleteami pranabendu dasgupta khujechilam 2 bachar...se boi ami amtolar ek boi melay peyechilam adbhut ek stall e...ek kone...tar kabita samgra er 1 khandya...er lafie nechhe chilam sedin....onek ratre gargidike messege korechhilam...aj ami raja..pranabendu porchi...eso amake chumu kheye jao...
ami ananya ray khujechilam pai ni...ami manik chakrabarty khujechilam....kichhu peyechhi mon vore ni...tar boi pai ni....ami jugantor chakarbarty....na na..na
ami sahitter lok noi...sudhyu kabitar janya jibon baji rekhechhi...rekhechhi ki?...hya...
keno pai ni tabe...?...hatat ekdin narayan mukhopadhay...dhay jeno...hatat ekdin biswadeb mukhopadhay....pa rekhechhen param...hatat....swades sen er rakha hoyechhe kamlalebu...er ami sarnya khanir modhhey bose thaki....ami dekhi...aruna jay theke aruna ase....ami dekhi...nolok porio...uha ruper lagiya nahe ...mane rkahio ..porio...ami dekhi ek kak vanga harir kinaray darie tar andhakar dekhhe nay...
mone hoi cholo aj rate ami bichana jure ei sab pangtimala boiye die swa-maithune dube jabo...
ami porte chay...
visan
visan..
sudhyu khete na paoyar ekta voi theke badda gham hoy majhe majhe...
amar onek vul hoye gachhe...onek vul hoye jay...ami ki korbyo...eksiter rate sei sab bhul nie ul bunte pari sudhyu...sei soyetar tumi nebe aryanilda?...anupam da?
astanirjan...
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ReplyDeletesanju, good. khub bhaalo kabider bai khu`njachho tumi. ekaTaa kathaa bale raakhi. Rakha Hayechhe Kamlaalebur sab kabitaai "Swadesh Sen-er Swadesh-e" aachhe. baiTaa Kaurab-e aachhe. ei bai ekhano firiye Jaayani eTaai baa`mlaa kabitaar lajjaa.
ReplyDeleteAnanya Ray-er bai aamio khu`nje paaini. Amish Rupakathaa je khu`nje paaoaa Jaay naa eTaai halo classic third-world syndrome. Je ei muhUrte be`nche aachhe sei kebal be`nche aachhe. Jei se chhaai, Je se kabarer marmarer niche, taar baiyer paataagulo gaachh kerhe ney.
aami haa-hutaashane bishbaas kari naa. ke kabe ki karabe taate bishbaas raakhinaa. keu naa karale aamii karabo - ei bhaabi. kintu aami anek dUre thaaki. naagaale paainaa esab.
Ananya Roy-er anek bandhu ekhano be`nche aachhen. taa`nraa ki karen ?
aaj America-y dekhi 30-40 bachharer kabiraa Ginsbergs, cummins ityaadi jherhe fele taader daadur bayasee kabider khu`nje ber kare taader kabitaa niye serious kaaj karachhe. Oppen, Zukofsky, Reznikoff, Blaser o Spicer eder Guru. esab kabir naam America-r baaire keu shoneni saamaanya Zukofsky chhaarhaa.
aaj kajan Sudhin Dutta paren? parhe bujhate paaren? ataTaa baa`mlaai keu jaane naa. kajan Amiya Chakrabarty parhen? bojhen? lokaTaa ki likhechhe? jaanen? lokaTaar parhaashuno bhaabanaachintaa ki chhilo?
aamio bhaalo kare jaaninaa. tabe JataTuku aami jaani taatei aamaar nijer bai purhiye felate ichchhe kare.
netibaachak mane hate paare aamaar kathaa. I am great at shaming people. e kathaa maarkin kabiraao aamaake balen. But shaming burns a man. And a new phoenix rises from those ashes.
aamar dekhaa somoprojonmer sobchaaite boro sahityo-chhatrer naam Astanirjan . kichhudin aage o aamar baari esechhilo . songe avisek mukhopadhyay . astanirjan aamar jonne enechhilo bes koyekti boi . manindra gupta-r MOUCHUSI JAE CHHADNATOLAE , narayan mukhopadhyaya-er DHAE JANO , subrata sarkar-er NIL OPERA , biswadeb mukhopadhyay-er PAA REKHECHHEN POROM ... aaro koyekti . aami oke dilaam swades sen-er KOMOLALEBU , amitava moitra-r TOTEM VOJ , prasanta guha majumdar-er ROMMYOROCHONA .
ReplyDeleteo bolchhe or aar boimela jaoar dorkaar nei . boimela hoe gechhe .
aamio setai bolchhi .
aryanilda
ReplyDeleteaapni academic shikkha bolte ki bolte chaichhen aami bujhte paarchhi . kintu Kamal Chakrabarty-r siddhanto maathae rekhei bolchhi : aaj kono bangla M.A.-r chhatro khub shikkhito kono manus noe . taara borojor kono high school-e dhuke orthopustok pore konorokom-e joraataali deoa kichhu class nite paare . taar besi kichhu noe .
aami sompuro nischitvaabe bolchhi : 99.99% bangla M.A.-r chhatro 40-er doshoker por-e bangla kobita-e ki hoechhe taar porjapto khobor raakhe naa . emonki KRITTIBAS ba SHOTOVISHA portika-r naam-o taara hoeto sone ni . sunte chae na hoeto .
aar Swades Sen ... haa !! otaa onyo groher naam .
aamar sohokormi 2 jon shikkhok aaj-o Amiya Chakrabarty pore ni . Subhas Mukhopadhyay pore ni . Sanjay BHattacharya-r naam jaane naa .
jagadish gupta ... amiyabhusan majumdar ... kamalkumar majumdar ... naam soneni .
kobi-r academy se nije . taar nijer baaire kono academy nei . taai naa ? khub moromiaa katha bolaam ki dada ?
ReplyDeleteAryanil da, Anupam da, sobbai k bolchi...eta satti j amra jara ei dashake ese kobita niye samanyo charcha kori,tader modhey anekei Professionally emon kono kajer sathe jukto, jar sathe sathityer jogajog ekebarei nei....ebang savabik vabei nanan jaygay ghure berate hoy, kono thikana porjonto thake na...r tader bangla kobita porar sujog satti kome jay, eta swikar kortei hoy...r english kobitar boi j katotuku powya jay ta ekhaner book stall gulo na dekhle biswas kortam na!!ami chennai te j tuku peyechi, tate keats, pablo neruda bad dile khubjor allen ginsberg er du ekta boi er besi kichu paowa jay na...khub baro ekta boier dokane sorbosakulye hoyto 10-20 ta kobitar boi thake......
ReplyDeletesavabik vabei iche thakleo sujog hoy na.ja bolchi segulo sob e amar katha, sobai bole iche thakle upay hoy, kintu upay baroi kam...Atleast jara banglay MA korechen, tara hoyto parasunor chape holeo kichuta porar sujog peyechen, amar mato manus der se sujog o chilo na,r jakhon theke kobitar proti tan anuvab kore koboita kei jibar kore nite cheyechi takhon theke poraar sujog o kome gache visan vabe.........
jaihok, jeta bolte chaichi...ta holo, banglay boipara bole ekta website chilo, jekhane anek boi online pora jeto, setao bahudin jabat bandho.amar to mane hoy ebar sobai mile ekta udyog nile kamon hoy?jar kach ejetuku boi ache, segulo k antata scan kore kore kono ekta website e tule dite thaka...bandhura kobitar boi chapanor taka na dik, antata ektuku kora ta hoyto khub kastokar hobe na....bangla kobitar eto web sait hocche, eto online magazine hocche , sob jaygatei sudhu lekhar charachari kintu ager satabdir kobider lekha kothao thake na....erakam cholche tahkele du ekta baro magazine chara, online magazine er vabisat o j khub ekta valo hobe na tar sposto ingit paoya jay.....
Anupam, tumi baa`mlaay MA niye Jaa balale taate Ter paachchhi aamaraa kothaay. baa`mlaa saahityer academic kaaj-karma ekhan kothaay. sei janyei samaantaraal saahityer jagat theke aamaaderi eisab kaaj ekaTu ekaTu kare karate habe. lekhaa, gabeshhaNaa, archive. ekaTaa blog-er aakaare independent space-e karaa Jaay naa? samit roy boipara te bhaalo kaaj karato. free site-e esab karaa risky. taahale ekadin haariye Jaabe. aami Kaurab er server -er bhetar ekaTaa aalaadaa jaigaa khule e-book kare daamee lekhaa jamiye raakhate paari. tomaraa Jadi help koro.
ReplyDeleteSanju Thik balechhe. Or boimelaa Jaabaar prayojan nei. oi baigulo aamaar chaai. kibhaabe paaoaa Jaay? kothaay paaoaa Jaay?
baa`mlaa saahityer ekaTaa barha samasyaa halo aamaader saahityaTaa purano. phale samakaale ese pou`nchhono Jaay naa. academic jaga`t ateet niyei kaaj karuk naa. kintu bhaalo kaaj karuk. 20th century te paa naai baa raakhalo.
20th century o parabartee saahitya niye kaaj karma aamaraai kari. eba`m bhaalo lekhaa archive kare raakhi. aami Sandipdaar Little Mag Library-r kaaje khub hataash. onaar prayaas aachhe, bhaalobaasaa aachhe kintu vision nei. taai aamaader access nei.
Somnath, tomaar kathaa Thik. aamaader peshaa aamaader bottleneck. tabe ekaTaa kathaa bali. kabisammelan patrikaay aami ekaTaa prabandhamaalaa likhi. aaj 5 bachhar halo. seTaa mUlata bidesher aparichita kabider niye. samprati pratham khanDa bai haye beriyechhe. Patralekha theke. naam "kabitaar anyakonakhaane".
anupam da uni subrata sarkar non...subrata chakrabarty...nil opera....ei prasange boli...60 er chakrabarty paribarer praty amar asim durbolata achhe...bises kore oi group ta...
ReplyDeletevaskar chakrabarty....jar kabita pore aj ei blog prajantya hete chole esechhi,
manik chakrabarty
subrata chakrabarty
samser anowar...uff ki dekhte chilen...nijey joljantya kabita
budhhadeb dasgupta
ebong
debaraty mitra..
eder praty amar mugdhotya furabar noi...khub mone achhe ekbar ami er amar ek bandhyu...manju...manujurul islam..se kaj kortyo ek cycle er dokane..er asomvob sab kabita likhtyo...se ajo debaraty di ke ma bole dake...jay hok ...dujone chole gachhe kolaghat theke soja garia...manindra gupter bari...(sedin okhan theke anjan sen er bari o gechhilam..tini amake bidesi cigarette khayechilen..)..amar pocket e soloana...er manju baper pocket fak kore 100 taka..ufff
se je ki paoya peyechilam...debaraty di amader macher jhol vat khaiechilen...er mone achhe monindra babu...amader glass e jol vore dichhen...er bhujte parchhi...amaar sira beye sei jol neme jachhe ajo...sei machher jhol...sei dupurbelar balika bela...se din kabita kamon kore hoi bhujini...sudhyu bhujte perechilam kabita kamon kore hoi na...manindra babur boi o ki amra khub pori...ajo...ami sudhyu onar mahatyoder mora sisu ei kabita ta porar anuradh kori sobay ke...je kabita ta ajo ami puro porte pari na...kichhuta pore bhoi peye uthe jai...
na academic kathya tar songe jata economy jarie achhe...tatotay asukh jarie achhe...amar to mone hoi ...kau engineeering porechhen...er dinrat kabita kabita kore chutchhen...se academic in respect of literature....er anupam dar colig academic in respect of natbaltu ka...dujoney barthya bodh hoi..jadi engineer jaygay amake rakha hoi ...jay hok
asole ekta tan manus ke chutie nie jay...setay tar academic..se khane somajer leg naratio chole na...isrya rai er hasio...
jini bolchhen kajer chape...anyya bisoyer chape kabita pora kome jachhe take sordhya..kore boli ..apni binoy majumdar o sambhu rakhiter jiboni parun...problem habei...apnar kag nastya habe..kabita nastya habe na..
apnar vetore je apni...besi chintya korben na...apnar life take hell kore debe...karan se vul kore...er vul gulo chorate chorate ekdin pasapasi ese..flowar-vas hoye jay..
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ReplyDeleteshit !
ReplyDeletesubrata elei keno j aamar sarkar ese jae !
subrata sarkar naam-e-o ekjon kobi aachhen . tnaar boi FAHRENHEIT FOUR FIFTY ONE DEGREE . aryanilda boita nie aalochona korechhen KABISAMMELAN-er saamprotik ekti sankhya-e . Avisek Mukhopadhyay aamake boita upohaar diechhe . aamar vul hoe gelo . tomaake sedin boita deoaa uchit chhilo . daarun boi . aamader moddhe subrata-binimoy hote paarto . jak ... hobe nischoi porer baar .
ekta somoy sharat kumar mukhopadhyay-er bodol-e sharat chandra mukhopadhyaya bole feltaam . kamalkumar majumdar-er bodole kamal mitra .
NIL OPERA porlaaam . khub prochondo mon die porechhi bolte paari naa . tobe Astanirjan ... subrata sar ... sorry ... chakrabarty ... bhaskar chakrabarty-r nehaat bondhu chhilen naa ... enaader moddhe rokter somporko ter paechhi aami . ekjon onek somoy aarekjoner hoe likhechhen bujhi ! etaa nie kaaj kora jae .
hoeto koyek maaser moddhe aami-e kothao kore bose thaakbo .
bhaskar-er priyo subrata ekhaanei kothao aachhen . boita bhaskar ki kore likhte perechhilen ... NIL OPERA pore kichhuta bujhte paarchhi .
aamar ki kono priyo subrata hobe na go !
TOTEM BHOJ to porchho . aachchhonno hochchho . bhaskar chakrabarty-r songe amitava moitra-r aatmiotaa ter pachho ki astanirjan ?
ReplyDeleteaar English literature-er chhatro hisebe ebong 2 bochhor college-e poraanor experience theke aami aryanilda-r ekta katha contradict korchhi .
ReplyDeleteEnglish litarature bangla sahityer chaaiteo dher purono . charjapawd theke je aamader sahityer suruat chinhito kora hoe , seta vondaami . otaa bangla noe . vidyapati-o bangla non .
aamader desh-ta baad din . kintu jotodur jaani bidesh-e BEOWULF theke AUDEN-e aaste , baa MILTON theke sylvia plath-e naamte baa uthte sekhaan-e problem hoe naa . aamader ekhaan-e hoe . kaaron ekhaan-e academic shikkha maane notes ebong suggestion . taar baaire jaaoar saddho kaar-o nei .
hoeto kono ranchhordas chnachor paarte paare . a true idiot .
totemvoj nie ami pore kathya bolbo....5 bar pore...2 bar porechhi....er amar har er pajore...ekta bhul raktya ese jurchhe...asadharan.....sotty jadi sedin tomar kachhe na jetam?....aha....
ReplyDeleteekdam ekdam...ekta ranchordas chanchor chay...a true idiot...
ReplyDeleteAryanilda, apnar katha sune khub bhalo laglo. apni jeno gyaner mul bhittite aghat karechhen. Jibanander Kabitar ki o keno - boite bolechhen bhalo bhalo kabya sahitya porar kotha ebang nijer maddhye samalochaksulov manovab gare tolar katha. Uni balchhen biswa kabya sahitter mogno pathaker pakhhei kabitar sathik mullyan kora sambhab. T.S.Elliot samparke bolte giye bola hoi tini tar medhar tulonai khubi kam likhechhen. kintu ja likhechhen It came as an event. Elliot nijeo balechhen "work of poetry needs extreme labour." Apni amader banglai sankha Ghosher kathai dharun. uni tar dirghya jibane koti kabya grantha likhechhen? 15 ki 16. kintu onar rabindra sahitter bislesan ba samasamaik kobider rachhana niye kaj dekhun. ta onar kabita rachanar theke anek besi. Arun mitra onar "kabita, ami o amra" boi e bolechhen " ami likhi khub kam, ar jakhan na likhi takhan chinta kori keno likhi." Amader nabya kabider ei atmabisleshan tao khub jaruri. Ar ekta jinis darkar seta holo praisthito kabider proti sradhabodh o tader darshan grahan karar manasikata. Amra sabai jani TS elliot tar The waste land lekhar por jakhan agraja kabike porte den uni tar ardheki uri den. karan uni balen annera agei ja likhe gechhen ta tumi likhbe keno? Elliot ta ekkothai mene nen. ebong the wasteland prokash koren. bakita itihas.
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ReplyDeleteaapnaar-o ki aamar moto ektu vulo mon ! KABITAR KI O KENO nam-e Jibanananda kono boi likhechhen bole to jaani na ! ektaa aachhe KABITAR KATHA . SIGNET PRESS-er boi . o boita jodi sotti thaake , please aamake publication-ta jaanaben .
aar 15-16t kabyogrontho ki khub kom holo bondhu ? taao sobguloi jokhon prothom thekei paathokdhonnyo !
rabindranath kotogulo kabita-r boi ber korechhilen ? sankhyata totkhonaat bolaa jae ki ?
kom lekhaa utkorser promaan noe . tini-e kobi jini proti muhurte kabita-r moddhe thaakte paaren . likhteo paaren . naahole bujhte hobe baanie likhchhen . nijekei nijer kaachhe pes korchhe saajie gujie .
kabita lekhaata part-time job noe . vaaba aar rochona kora eksonge cholte asubidha kothae ? 'keno likhi'--- seta likhte likhtei nijer kaachhe dhoraa debe .
kabita lekhaa to nijeke jaana-r jonnei !
thik bolecho anupam da, kobita kano likhi tar bakhaya hoy na! kobitar proti ekta nisartha valobasa thekei kobita lekha suru hoy hoyto.....r porao....
ReplyDeletese jaihok, kajer chape ba anyo karone kobita pora kome jacche eta noy, ami takhon sujog er katha bolchilam.dure thakle boi pete satti asubidhe hoy, tar opor jodi karo bari o kolkatay na hoy....tahole to r kathai nei.
Aryanil da, tumi j kaurab-er server e jayga debar katha bolle, tar jonyo anek dhnyobad...ami amar samartha mato help korar sampurna chesta korbo.jodi ei udyog ta neoya jay, janio....
anupam, charJaapada sambandhe tomaar kathaa satyi. kintu English poetry to saadhaaraNata Chaucer theke dharaa hay. maane 650 bachhar. 650 bachhar aager baa`mlaa nishchay badlechhe kintu temani badlechhe English-o. Anglo-Saxon to aajaker english nay. aamaar aabaar English kabitaa bhaabale Americar kathaai aage mane hay. taader kaabya saahitya to mere keTe 200 bachharer.
ReplyDeletesubrata chakrabarty-r kathaa kamal sir balaten. naam kaane aasato. bai parhini. astanirjan kothaa theke oi bai pele ? gata bachhar alpa parhalaam. etadin par teman saarhaa dey ni. bhaskar er xetreo taai. khub bhaalo kabi kintu uttar kolkatay seemaabaddha bhaashhaa aar oi chira-bishhaNNataa bodh, aaj aar nite paari naa. tabe bhaskar barha kabi nishchai. manik chakrabarty sambandheo subrata chakrabarty ke niye Jaa balalaam taai balate hay.
but that's not the point. e`nraa aaj nei. eder kaaj karma guchhiye raakhaar daayitba aachhe. seTaa ke karabe? bhakta paaThakader keu karuk.
online archive maintain karaar daayitba aami nite paari. goTaa katak CD baa DVD - byaas taatei 200 bachharer baa`mlaa kabitaake archive kare raakhaa Jaay.
anupam farenheit 451-er kaathaa bale bhaalo karale. thank you. baiTaa asambhab touch karechhilo. samprati film Taa dekhalaam.
Hrishikesh, tumi Elliot sambandhe sheshher dike Jaa likhale taar anekaTaa Thik. kintu sabaTaa nay. tumi bodhhay Pound er kathaa balachho. Pound praay onaar editor hisebe kaaj karechhilen. Yeats-ero. ekasamay. kintu Elliot Jakhan eisab karachhen takhan onaar cheye bayase chhoTo ekaTi American chhele maaraattak kabitaa likhachhe, Jaa reetimata uttaraadhunik. Elliot sei lekhaake paattaa dichchhen naa. chheleTir naam Louis Zukofsky. taar ata parhaashonaa nei kintu lekhaa durdaanta. Pound kintu dujanakei oskaachchhen. March er kabisammelan-e eTaa niye likhachhi. adbhut ghaTanaa. keu ekhano jaanen naa ei byaapaaraTaa.
"work of poetry needs extreme labour" quote Taar janya dhanyabaad. anupam kintu 15-16Taa bai niye Thik balalo. se kam ki. aar sankha ghosh er ki satyii 15-16Taa kabitaar bai? beshi naa ?
uni rabindranath ke kaaj karechhen Thik. kintu kabitaa niye? kabitaa o kaabyapaaTh niye onaar kono prabandha mane daag kaaTe naa. rather mane hay kabitaa kibhaabe parhate hay seTaa uni satyi jaanen. kebal chhanda-i ki kabitaa? dhbanii ki kabitaa? 50 dashaker kona kabi aajaker kabitaa chinate paaren naa. durbal, conventional lekhaake bhaalo balen. sunil-sankha-saratkumar-...praay sakale.
manindrababu bhinna. alok sarkar bhinna. swadesh sen bhinna. aar binoy....elomelo hok, genius.
aar shamser anwar? shudhu dekhate nay...saanghaatik smart, buddhimaan lok. aami ekadin oke dekhechhi. baarhi giyechhilaam. anek kathaa. sab mane parhe Jaachchhe...
Anupam prathamei marjana cheye nei bhuler janya. kachhakachhi namer boigulo elomelo hoe jai. Tabe ami kabitar sankhya theke jor dite cheyechhi kabitar maner o utkarshatar dike. tumi nischoi swikar korbe je bhalo kabita rachana korte hole take ghase meje anek parimarjana korte hoi. ar ta samoisapekhya. sakale to ar shakti chattujje na je jakhan chaichhe takhani kobita likhe dichhen. kabita sange thake, sange chale, sange ghumoi, sahabas kore manchhi, tobu take futie tulte abeger sathe porimarjanao to lage. ar eman ki kokhono samoi jai na jakhan mon bandhya hoe jai. kabitar bhut ghar theke neme jai. prottek kabir jibanei to ei manwantar ase. jiban o kabyasristi eki sathe chale, kintu kakhana kakhana amra likhte chaileo to pari na. Hemingway sunechhi atmahatwa korechhen na likhte parar jwalai. Eta amar nijaswa matamat hote pare, tobe amar biswas jara besi lekhe tara baje lekhe besi. ekhana bangla sahitter anek namjada lekhaker lekha poreo amar kakhana kakhana mone hoi, antwaswarsunya, jeno prakashaker chape pore lekha. Joy Goswamir adhuna prokasito Jaljhari amar ektuo bhalo lage ni. keno jani mane hochhe kabi jeno lekhar rasad harie felchhen.
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ReplyDeleteoder chaucer aar aamader bharat chandra ray . aamader span taaholeo chhoto . pnuchke . haa haa haa ...
bhaskar somporke ei obhijogta othei chirokaal . natun obhijog noe . uni sotti uttor kolktata-r baairer jogot-e nei . kothao nei . nil baatasera bohudur theke onaar kaachhe jodi aase , uttor kolkata-e taader aaste hoe .
simaboddho. kintu SHITKAAL KOBE ASSBE SUPORNAA sombhoboto goto 50 bochhorer sobchaaite important 10t boier ekti . bangla kobita-r vasa-k lokkhe-olokkhe onek bodle diechhe . aar songkraamito koraar asim khomota aachhe boitar . erpor bhaskar aar kichhu naa likhtei paarten .
subrata chakrabarty kaal raat-e onekkkhon porlaam . onaar poetic impulse bhaskar-er chaaite besi chhilo . poetic moments-gulo onaar khetre onek brihittoro . kintu bhaskar jaanten kothae gie excess suru hoe . ekhanei tini berie gechhen bondhu-k perie . proyojonhin ekta line-o lekhenni chot kore .
subrata ses porjonto ekjon boro kobi . bhaskar magician .
tobe BIBIZAAN aamar poraa hoe ni . ekta boi porlaam . thanks to astanirjan .
hrisikes
ReplyDeleteaapnaar ki mone hoe AALEYA HRAWD , PROTNOJIB , SHITER SONNETGUCHHO , UNMADER PAATHOKROM-er por bangla kobita-e joy goswami ar ekta-o kichhu dite perechhen ? SURYOPORAA CHHAI ektu kichhu hoechhilo . kintu or chaaite onek boro kaaj little magaziner duniya-e asankhyo hoechhe .
je nije boro hoe naa , jaake tene lombaa koraa hoe , taar rosod aar kotodin thaakte paare !
tobe 2011 ele uni paschim bonger kabita-montri obosyoi hoben . meghbaalikaara tokhon aamader jonne kichhu bristi raakhbe , etukui asha kora jaak .
Anupam,aha tumi SHITKAL KABE ASBE SUPARNA r kotha balle, sakale uthei manta valo hoe gelo. satti Bhaskarer anabadya rachana. bises kare nam bhumikar kabita to anabadya. aro chitramoita chharie achhe boitite. bises kare amar ei muhurte mane hochhe, TUMI HESE UTHLEI traffic police cigarette dharai- ami jatabar pori ei lineta amar mathai ghurte thake. aro anek achhe etai amar ei muhurte mane porchhe.
ReplyDeleteAr ekta kotha na bole parchhi na, bhai, ami to tomader moto gavirchari pathak noi, bhalomanda gyano tai amar kam. Joy amar khub prio kabi. Jar samalochona kari take bhalobasi bolei kori. tomakeo basi tomar kabita niyeo korbo. kintu tomar katha shune mane holo jeno anekta joydar upar angshik byaktigata stare akraman hoe gelo. Joydar upare eto rag keno bhai? karan ta ki jante pari?
joy-er upor kono byaktigoto rag nei . onaar songe kono byaktigoto somporko konokaalei aamar nei .
ReplyDeleteuni aamar purboborti doshok-t-r baarotaa baajiechhen . chhonder naam-e pelobota , antyomil-er naam-e chotok , ebong osohonio podolaalityo die .
ekta somoy chhilo , uni sthaapon kore diechhilen : joy goswami-k anusoron naa kore bangla kobita lekha jaabe naa . ekdawl chhelemeye sref onake nokol korto , uni sei lekhaa-k protisthan-er deoaal-e snete diten .
ei raag aamar aachhe . hotei paare ekdin joy nijei kichhu korben , aamar raag anuraag hoe uthbe .
kintu jotodin maanus benimadhab aar selaai didimoni-r kirtikaahini-k kobita vabbe , aamar raag jaabe naa .
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ReplyDelete21ST POST KORE DEOAA HOLO . PLEASE VISIT . AALOCHONAA HOK .
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