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Arko kobitatite eto end punctuation poore diyeche je otikathaner scope na chaileo bere geche. Bhalo noy. Romit-er kobita romantic, out of time, and ends with expression of early 20th century bangla filmy kaida. Samne eso bhai. Shouvik, tumi eti definitely jodi project korte thako, tahole tumi kobita noy, film script porcho mone habe, comming scenegulo describe korcho mone howa thekabe ki kore?
Aritro, brisrir tanhaai, durbin-e holud rong theke shuru kore nibhche sakaalbela --- wonderfull composition of moments pelam tor kobitay. Arya jai boluk, tui erakam kobita roj likhe ja. Rongeet, kobitai nostalgiya jege uthle asol value-ta minus hoye jai. Tor ar Jibonanader smriti jagaron bibhinno holeo aj mulyohin. Tor kobitatar modhye ekta chora irony kaj korche, tao porte bhalo lage. ShreeBhaskar, kobitar story element eto beshi rakho keno? tate asol kobitata chapa pore thake. Je lekha pore sobar chokhe jwal beroy tate medhabi kobita ason payna amar mone hoy. Sayontan, ei to, smritimuktir ei chestata kobitar gaye lege na thaklei bhalo hoto.Otherwise eta akta asadharon kobitar bij bahon korche balaa jeto.
Debanjan,ei post-er best kobitati likhechis tui.Ami kobtay bishad noy,anando bhalobasi. jara swapno dekhechilo tader mukher bhasa asuk kobitay, bibomishar kaal noy ei 0-dashak, amar mone hoy. Tui ki bhabis Anupam? collage composition na ki kannakati--- konta chai? Abhishek, khub bhalo likhechis kobitata.Ei kobita medhabi,atikathan ar smritibharmukto.'Lirikbad theke .... dirgho thikanapoth'--- ei partta khub durbol leglo. Atanu, tor ei kobita asambhab bolei ekta kalpochitro pachhi jeta dekhte khub bhalo lagche. Tui ei prathom eli mone hochhe. Aro sabaike daak.Anupamer ei post bhore oke tight de. Ki Anupam,mone hochhe ei post-ta e jabot sabcheye full-ish, mane sampurno, tai na?
:) Thanks Barin-da. Thank you apnar response-er jonnye. Apni ja bollen, ta matha petey nilam. Ja bollen, ta ami kichhu kichhu jaani. Kintu tobuo, bolbo, jokhon amra bechhe niyechi je amra shobdei 'kobita' likhbo, tokhon, amake je shobdomala chNute parbe, tai kobita. Kintu shudhui shobdo ki 'chnute' paare? Asol tow vabna. Shobdo tow maddhhom. Shei madhhom ke onekei icchhakritovabe kothin, durbodhhyo ebong awdbhuut korey tuulte paren. Taate vabnata ki pnouchhoy pathoker kachhe? Naki, na pnouchholeo khoti nei ? Kobita bojhar chesta koratai vuul? Tahole kobita niye ki kora hobey? abar bola jete paare 'notun shobdo'-r proyoge je 'kobita' srishti holo, taa kaur kaur kachhe pnouchholo, tahole hoyto setai labh. amar kache kobita maane ekhono anuuvutir bohirprokash. Ei prokash korar rasta-ta amar songe oneker-i milbena, ar tai kobitalekha byapartay democracy ache. Setai kammyo. Khub sadharon 2 line-er kobita amake naRiye ditey paare, abar 10 hajar line-er kobita amake nao chnute paare, jodi 10 hajar line-er kobita lekha sohoj noye. Asole, amar mone hoyna kono definition ba konokichu ache...Nei bolei kobita bneche ache. Awbossoi, ei somoye dnaRiye amra keu Victorian vashay kobita likhbona. Tobe alpotka vashar byaboharey amar reservation ache. sadharon vashay mochhor ditey paara lekha amar kache kobita. Ekhono porjonto. Tobe 'sadharon' vashata kon vasha, se sombondhe abar bitorko cholte paare.
Ei eky bishoy niye amar khub recently Dhurjoti Prasad Chattyopadhyay-er shonge alochona hochhilo (Dhurjoti-mama boli jehetu amar soshurbaRir dike uni close family friend). Kono mimangshay asha jayni. Mimangsha ki hoye? Kejane.
Ekdin apnar shonge ei niye mukhomukhi alochona hobe hoyto.
aasole Souvik , ekta katha hoeto etoi sohoj je aamra seta mone raakhi naa : kobita golpo noe , chhondo noe , probondho noe , gaan noe , anuvuti noe , concepts noe , medhachorcha noe ... konokichhui aalada kore noe , kaaron kobita sudhui kobita ebong kobita sobkichhui hote paare . kobita cinema ... painting ... gaan ... music video ... sobkhichhur sobkichhuke nijer upaadan korte chaaiche ekhon .
aaj ei porisor jekhaane amra somoy aar sthaan-k aalada kore chinte paarchhi na , tokhon ekjon dikkhito paathoker chokhe jol aana kintu shromodashyo ebong taa nirmaaner vinnota daabi kore . kobita shobdosrboswo noe , aabar konovaabei shobdoniropekkho noe . ekta shobder paashe aarekta shobdo jokhon ese boslo , se jeno kobita-r itihaase prothombaar bose .
byaktigoto anuvuti bole aalada kore kichhu hoe na , kaaron byaktiniropekkho kono anuvuti hote paare na . jemon anuvutishunyo kono kobi hote paare na . kobi-r medha apraasongik . tobe oproyojonio aadou noe .
tumi nijeo kintu kichhuta medhanirbhor .
tomaar kobita porlei chena jae eta souvik-er kobita . etaa ekta boro byapaar . sokole paare naa . onekei paare naa . kintu tomaar kaachh theke aaro boro khela aamra asha kori . jeno aamra tomaake nie sudhu aanondo noe , gorbo korte paari .
aamader porisortaake vaasa daao souvik . sei vasa-e mise jaak tomar byaktigoto sobkichhu , tomaar nijer vaasa . mahajagat dekhte chai tomar kobita-e .
AMRA KABITA NIYE KHUB BOLCHI. LIKHCHI. EI BLOG E HEADER TIO KINTU MONOJOG O NOTUN KORE ALO CHONA KORAR EKTI SCOP RAKHE. ETAO EKTI KOBITA. ER NAMKORON KORLE AMI KORBO ASOHAY ISHHOR.
KOBITA KOKHON KIBHABE ASE JANE NEI. TOBE ASE.ABAR KEU KOBITA KE TENE NIYE ASE. EBONG EMON HOY JENO KOBITA SEI NARI JE PROTIDIN TAR SWAMIR KACHE KOTUKOTHA SUNTE SUNTE EBONG ATTACHARITO HOTE HOTE SETAI TAR OBSSEION HOYE JAY. SE TOKHON LALITTO, PREM, SNEHO ITTADI BUJHTE CHAY NA. ANO KICHU CHAY. TAR CHAOYATA KINTU ASONGOTO NOY.
EBHABE KOBITAO TAR RUP, ROS, KE ANNOBHABE PETE CHAY, DITE CHAY. SOBAI KINTU TA NITE PARE NA. TADER KACHE ETA EKTA CRIME. KOBITAKE KHUN KORAR CHOKRANTO BOLE MONE KOREN TAnRA. ASOLE KINTU BISOYTI THIK ULTO. ETA NODIR BAKER MOTO. JEKHANE NODI POTH PALTE NILO THIKI I, KINTU TAR JOL SUKIYE GELO NA.JOLHIN USHOR KONO UPOTTOKAY PORINOTO HOLO NA... KINTU PALTE GELO. TAR PORIBORTON GHOTLO. JETA ANUPAM O MONE KORE ASHA KORI.SUTORANG KOBITAKE KICHU NOTUN DITE HOBE, AGE JA HOY NI ,JA BHABA JAY NI TAKEI TULE ANTE HOBE SOBDO O SOBDER ARALE.
barindar oi katha ta thik...kabita sotty mathar kothao...buker kothao roye jai...sabde ase na seibhabe...sudhyu tar samarthok vabnake ekta sur die day.....astanirjan
Barinda, amar 3jon priyo kobi holen Bhaskar Chakraborty, Tarapada Roy o Kamal Chakraborty. 3-jonkei amar khub valo lage ..onnyo onnyorokomvabey bhalo...
souvik , tumi aamake je proshnota korle seta nie boli .
ekjon manus ei prithibite 100% NATUN hoe aase . se purboprojonmo ba hoeto purbojonmer sobkichhu atmikrito kore aase . se maanus . onyo kono praani noe . kintu jonmomuhurte se ekjon avutopurbo manus .
kobijonmo-ta-o thik taai . je kobi-k onyora nijer dol-e taante paarbe , dhaanche felte paarbe , se chot kore prithibite onek licece pae jaabe . naa hole taake Binay Majumdar kore deoaa hobe . se ar mainstream-e dhukte paabe naa .
ami natun kobita bolte barin ghosal bujhi na . aami natun kobita bolte bujhi original kobita .
tumi Koetcey-r LIFE AND TIMES OF MICHAEL K porechho ki ?
se jaak . kintu tumi 3 jon kobir naam bolle . eder moddhe Bhaskar ebong kamal aamar khub khub khub priyo . bises kore aabar prorthom jon . Bhaskar-er influence aamar lekhae hoeto thaakeo thakte paare . kintu bolo to bhai , bhaskar je kobita likhlen sei lekha bangla-e tnaar aage keu likhechhe ki ? kamal ? onaara uttoraadhikaarshunyo non . kintu kaaro baaper sadhyo chhilo onader lekhae nijer signature daabi koraar ?
Anupam, tomar kotha valo laglo. Na chhilona, onader moto korey lekha karo. amar tow setai boktobbyo..'notun kobita' bolte ami tow bujhi ei kobita ja age eivabe keu boleni..originality...'moulik' byaparta vague hok, taate khoti nei, kintu nijer moto korey bola joruri, amaro tow shei mawt. ei 'nijer moto kore bola' byaparta loker valo lagle aro valo, na lagle ki r kora jabey. 'notun kobita' bolte ami jyamon bujhi je notunvabe bola, notun style-e, angikey, tyamon-i ami mone kori..kichu je ekta notun kore bolar chesta hochhe, setao tow bojha dorkar. notun kobitar-o tow rokomfer thake..maane amar ar tomar je onader dujoner kobita pochhondo, onara tow 'motun kobita' likhechhen, kintu ar ek dhoroner 'notun kobita'-y amar apotti. obosshyo amar apotti-te kaur-i kichu eshe jawar kawtha noy. karon ei 'onnyo dhoroner' notun kobita jnara lekhen, tnarao 'original'..kintu ami je shobdo banalam, shobder porey shobdo boshiye je notun shobdo banalam, taar jodi kono jhaR khnuje na pawa jaye, tahole gota kobitar sorire tow chhoRiye thakbe awdbhuut awdbhhut kichhu shobdo..jeta Barinda bolchhen amar kache 'duroho'..duroho thik noye, poRe, chesta korey amio bujhi..kintu ami ei chesta-ta korbo kyano? ami korbona, hoyto onnyora korben, tai thiky achhe.
aar ekta katha ami tomaar kaachh theke aasbe vaabi ni . tumi bolchho ," poRe, chesta korey amio bujhi..kintu ami ei chesta-ta korbo kyano? ami korbona, hoyto onnyora korben, tai thiky achhe."
bhai classical gaan sunte hole somojhdaar hote hoe , naach bujhte hole ... paintings bujhte hole ... mae Bunuel ba Godard-er film bujhte hole tomaake mehonot korte hobe . James Joyce bujhte hole maathar ghaam pa-e felte hobe .
kobita ki dos korlo ? se ki baaner jole vese esechhe ? kobita porte tumi shrom debe na !! kobita ki bilaas ? chorchaa dabi korte paare na ? somoy daabi korte paare naa ?
tomaar jemon `aarek dhoroner natun kobita ` buhjte asubidha hoe , tomaar kobita bujhteo sei paathoker asubidhaa hobe jini tomaar dhoroner kobita kokhono poren ni , taai na ?
Anupam, Shoubhik,post-er kobita periye amra odh hoy nijera ja ja jani ta ugle dichhi dur-e bose.Besh bhalo lagchilo ei sab. aro bhalo lagto jodi anyo kobirao jog dito. Shabdo niye ekta kathaa bolbo.Shabder sotyi je mane ache ta obhidhan-e nei.Obhidhan-e ache ekta shabder referable protik aro shabdo. Ami boli, shabder mane shabder bhetore ache, jebhabe ekti shabdo gore othe.Sei utso'r kache jete hoy,shabder dhwonir sutro dhore shabdo-gun pawa jay,jar ranon baje, jog hoy, otibahito hoye kobitar chonya jagay mone.Amar kobitar bojhapora erakam.Anupam, ami kakhano bolini parallel er kathaa.Parallel niye even maths-eo mithye balaa ache.Ami boli 'apor'er kathaa,jekhan theke mainstream bole kichu ache ki nei ta hariye jay. Shoubhik, sab kobir-i thake tar pachander priyo kobi,jara take aral theke probhabito korte chay, ar kobir lorai shuru hoy sei probhab theke nijer kobitake banchiye rakhte.Bhaskar-er kobita amar bhalo lage. Kamal last 45 yrs amar closest friend.Amar dharona era keu 'natun kobita'lekheni. Anyo shabdo use karo tomra.Karon 'natun-kobita' 1ta bishes coinage,tar 1ta bishes indicator ache.Jemon je kono kobitai 'adhunik-kobita' noy.Tomra gayer jor, mukher jor, kalamer jor chalaleo definition palte jabe na. Kintu Shoubhik,eto sab kathaar pore jodi amather kobitar jaygata aro pokto na hoy,tahole we r beating around a bush ja khancha shunyo.
barindar kotha dhore bolchi, SOBKICHU TO DEFINITION E SURU O SESH HOY NA. HOTE PARE NA. DEFINITION KOTHAI JODI DORA HOY TOBE TO AMRA KOBITA NIYE HIMSIM KHEYE JABO. JAHOK, DEFINITIONTA ASOLE EKTI SHIELD ER MOTO JA KONO KICHUKE AGLE RAKHE. SUTORANG DEFINITION NIYE AMI KHUB EKTA BHABI NA. JODIO 'NOTUN' BOLE TAR MOROKE NOTUNOTTOHIN KICHU DILE TA TO NOTUNER POKKHEI KHSOTIKOR.TAI NA?
EBAR ASHI SOBDER KOTHAY.SOTTI SOBDER ARTHO NIJOSSOTA BOLE KICHU NEI. EBONG ORTHO BOLTE JA BOJHAY AMAR KACHE TA EKTI ABESH, EKTI ONUBHAB.EBONG SOBDO KOBITAR EKTI MADDHOM CHARA AR KICHU NOY. JODI BOLA JAY SOBDO CHARA KI KOBITA TAOIRI KORA SOMBHOB? AMAR UTTOR HOBE: PROKRITO KOBITA HOLO TA JA SOBDE SIMABODDHO NOY. SOBDER ORTHO JEKHANE SESH HOYE JAY THIK SEKHAN THEKE SURU HOY KOBITA. TAI KOBITA SOBDO-ORTHO ITTADIR BAIRER BISOY, JEKHANE ONUBHUTITAI MUL BYAPAR. EBONG SWABHABIK BHABEI MYSTRY, JAKE BHANTE BHANTE PATHOK ROMANCHITO HON, APLUTO HON.
eto kathya keno... kiser janya.... tabe ki eta ei mechanism... kabi tairy korar blog... ekhaneo ki manus tar nijer lekhar kathya vabbe suchintytio hoye? ei ta kabita hale aj habe na...kal habe na...porsu habe na...jebhabe tumi karkhanay...companyte but jutor fite bedhe no...se bhabe sabdya bedhe nabe?... bedhe nbe nijeke.....ebhabe hoi...labourotory chole...itihas?... kabita?...ha ha natun kabita?.. ami kabita bhuji na ajo...konmodin bhujte chaibo ki?...h ha voi hoi ekhaneo parikhya...? ekhaneo....natun natun natun...kiser?...jara andolone samil ...mai tader selam thuki...tara sahid...ebhabe noi...ekmatro hoito ekhanei nijer jarijuri chole na...ekdin amra ekjoner kabita pore lafie uthe bolbo ba!! ei cheyechhi...er obak hoye dekhbo tini andolone chilen na...tini tar kabita likhechhen ....er amader bindumatro upudes nen ni vagiis!!! nijeke hoi to joler samne darate hoi...jol ei sabder kachhe jol hate....natun hate noi...er eitukui natun...mane natun.... kabita likhub...barin da na....aryonilda na... anupamda na....nijer...jata durbol i hok...nijer i hok....are voi keno...attyohatyar eto sahaj path vebe nie o voi?...naki promotion chai...?
ekhane keu to kauke kobita lekha sekhacche na. sekhano jay na. eta emon ekta jayga jekhane protteke pretteker kotha bolte pare. ei blogti edik theke tai ektu alada. tumi tomar kotha bolo. anno keu tar kotha bolbe. protteker bolar right ache. ebar sei kothagulo theke kichu bhalo ebong byaboharjoggo bishoy to uthe astei pare. tai na?
janina anupam da ...ami je janina...etukui amar khomota...ami na jana ta khub valo kore bhuji...kintu oi janlata amar kachhe surjya hoye jai...visan visan ami tar roudra-alo-ghame chup kore katha muri die bose thaki...er kabita chay...ami je ki durbal...ki pariman vikiri ogo sarnya -vikiri... amar mone achhe swapan dar ekso surjye boi ta porar somoi ekjaygay peyechilam...atatnu babu ekjon sikim mahilar hasi dekhe kichhutey bhulte parchhen na...er takhuni dicission nichhen eseta nie kabita likhben...tini ki mahila tike rape korlen na anupamda?...ja dekhlam...takei kabita kore nite habe takkhuni...tar antor kothay roilo ?..ami je tar hasikutuo chapabo bole tule nilam anupam da...ebhabe ki hoi...ami jani na...ami amon hasi pele ekdin bathroom use korbno...ekdin choker du-palak use korbo...takkhunu kabita use korbo na go... age se amake cheye jak...amake dhansyo karuk...keno ami kabitar asroy nie palabo sei dhansyo theke...?
ami kabitay likhbo ...er kabitar modhhey bhacbo morbo...agami keno kono kaler kathya mone rekhey noi
sudhyu somoi er gaye koyekta sabdya chitie die bolbo...khoma koro...ami etukui pari...
Vashkarjyoti-r kobita amar awsadharon laglo. awsadharon. knadalo.
ReplyDeleteaar 4 jon member kobe hobe bondhura ? half century-r jonne aamader kintu aar tor soichhe na .
ReplyDeletesedin bangla academy-r alochonaasovaa-e bollam . aabar bolchhi internet-e kobita-corchaa-r onyotomo target generation X . sei chhelemeyera , jaara bangla horof-e bangla valo porte paare na , aar likhte ekebaarei paare na hoeto . taai ekhaane bangla noe , BANGLISH alochona-r maadhom .
ReplyDeleteAnupam, shedin dyakha holo, afsosh, kawtha holona, karon prochondo taRay chhilam. siggiry kawtha hobey asha kori
ReplyDeleteobosyoi souvik .
ReplyDeletetomaar somporke aaro jaante chaai aami . kichhui prae jaani na . lekhaatuku chini .
ekta katha bondhura . Arka-r kabitata aami upload korte vule giechhilam . eimaatro korlaam .
Bhaskarjyotir lekhaar madhye kono natun byapaar nei. Jaake chirakaal "confessional poetry" balaa hay taai. kintu or ei kabitaaTaai hayato ei post-er seraa kabitaa. or sojaabhaasaar madhye ekaTaa bhaabaleshaheen, niraabeg satataa aachhe Jaa manake aakraman kare.
ReplyDeletekhaanikaTaa man khaaraap haye gelo lekhaaTaa parhe. ekhan aar anya lekhaa niye kichhu balaa Jaabe naa.
sayantan o debaanjaner kabitaa chama`tkaar. eba`m eke anyer cheye raataaraati aalaadaa. ekaTaa aalagaa man-khaaraaper prabaaha kintu chalechhe. chaakaar mato garhiye. paalTi khaaoaa jhinuk. sheshh Dheuyer bij-bij Tho`nTe.
ReplyDeleteabhishheker lekhaay anyatara habaar ekaTaa prayaas lege thaake. eiTaa khub bhaalo laagachhe. anaayaas nay. kabitaar gaame ghaam aachhe. phale ekaTu gandha-o aachhe. unperfumed. Or lekhaa druta badale Jaabe bale mane hay. kenanaa badaler janyei esab lekhaa.
25 bachhar aageo aamaraa engineering college-e chotaa karataam. aami aabaar emanai gaambaaT chhilaam, ekabaar adhyaapaker paashe hisi-r line-e daa`nrhiye formula dekhe niye kaagajTaa fele di. adhyaapak jigges karen - ote ki lekhaa chhilo? aami adhyaapak ke chinate naa pere, taake part-time-er working student bhebe bali - o aapani bujhaben naa, daadaa. 25 bachhar par aajo chotaa aachhe, mother aachhe. kintu Rangeet er kabitaaTaa natun sa`mjojan. 25 bachhar aage aamaraa eirakam likhataam naa. baa kabitaa likhate base kakhano bhaabataam naa Je ebhaabeo lekhaa Jaay. aajaker kathaa aajaker poster-e.
Ramit er lekhaay maajhe maajhe alpa kichhu cliche ese Jaachchhe kintu...
Aritra-r bahu bhaalo kabitaa parhechhi...or hayato eTaa gear change er samay.
niyamita aasaa hayanaa. ebaar halo.
Anupam Mukhopadhyay aapani X-generation er sakaaler matai abyaartha - AM.
AAMR LEKHATA KEMN LAGLO??
ReplyDeleteGood Morning Anupam, tomar kobita nei mone hochhe. Oi khali space-e gunje dao. Asbo ki abar ?
ReplyDeleteArko kobitatite eto end punctuation poore diyeche je otikathaner scope na chaileo bere geche. Bhalo noy.
ReplyDeleteRomit-er kobita romantic, out of time, and ends with expression of early 20th century bangla filmy kaida. Samne eso bhai.
Shouvik, tumi eti definitely jodi project korte thako, tahole tumi kobita noy, film script porcho mone habe, comming scenegulo describe korcho mone howa thekabe ki kore?
aasben naa maane ? ei blog aapnar poth chae thaake . aapni aasen na . blog-ta-k ebaar sobaai doorkeeper vaabbe .
ReplyDeleteaar Rangeet , aryanilda to tomaaar kobita nei sobchaaite besi bolechhen ! dekho !!
ReplyDeleteAritro, brisrir tanhaai, durbin-e holud rong theke shuru kore nibhche sakaalbela --- wonderfull composition of moments pelam tor kobitay. Arya jai boluk, tui erakam kobita roj likhe ja.
ReplyDeleteRongeet, kobitai nostalgiya jege uthle asol value-ta minus hoye jai. Tor ar Jibonanader smriti jagaron bibhinno holeo aj mulyohin. Tor kobitatar modhye ekta chora irony kaj korche, tao porte bhalo lage.
ShreeBhaskar, kobitar story element eto beshi rakho keno? tate asol kobitata chapa pore thake. Je lekha pore sobar chokhe jwal beroy tate medhabi kobita ason payna amar mone hoy.
Sayontan, ei to, smritimuktir ei chestata kobitar gaye lege na thaklei bhalo hoto.Otherwise eta akta asadharon kobitar bij bahon korche balaa jeto.
Debanjan,ei post-er best kobitati likhechis tui.Ami kobtay bishad noy,anando bhalobasi. jara swapno dekhechilo tader mukher bhasa asuk kobitay, bibomishar kaal noy ei 0-dashak, amar mone hoy. Tui ki bhabis Anupam? collage composition na ki kannakati--- konta chai?
ReplyDeleteAbhishek, khub bhalo likhechis kobitata.Ei kobita medhabi,atikathan ar smritibharmukto.'Lirikbad theke .... dirgho thikanapoth'--- ei partta khub durbol leglo.
Atanu, tor ei kobita asambhab bolei ekta kalpochitro pachhi jeta dekhte khub bhalo lagche. Tui ei prathom eli mone hochhe. Aro sabaike daak.Anupamer ei post bhore oke tight de.
Ki Anupam,mone hochhe ei post-ta e jabot sabcheye full-ish, mane sampurno, tai na?
bhalo uddyog.
ReplyDeleteKobitay kono 'story element' thakbena. Kobita poRe mone kharap hobena. Kobita pore chokhe 'jol' asha jabena. Kobitay bodhoy khushio hoye otha jabena. Kobitay nostalgia-r kono element thakbena. Barin-da, tahole 'asol' kobita ki? Ek tukro 'medha', na alpotka kichu shobder railgaRi?
ReplyDeleteAwporadh neben-na. Mone holo, tai bollam kothagulo. :)
jome gechhe . ei to chaai !!
ReplyDeleteHyan, eta blog-e onekdiin hochhilona, Anupam..:)
ReplyDeleteTobey, ami tow shikhtei chai...bujhte chai..
Shoubhik, tomar interaction jomiye dilo. Gato Sattor dashake world-wide ekta new rejection phenomenon jege uthechilo poetic elements niye. Seta natun kichu noy, 30s-e 50s-eo prithibir sab bhashate jhwar uthechilo. Egulo bankbadaler chihnno. Kakhano DADAism, Surrealism, Postmodern ... banglay Natun kobita. Kichui thakte aseni. kintu egulo cntribution rekhe geche bangla kobitay. Ami expect korbo tumi beton tule nebe. Tumi abar kenche gondus korte Biharilala theke shuru korbena. Tumi je sab criteriyagulor kathaa bolecho, ta sab-i chale kobitay. Kintu kothao kobita galpo+natok+lecture+ggyan-bitaran theke alada haber samoy periye geche already. Tomar ja bhalo lage tumi tai to likhbe ebong likhecho. Kintu kobitar itihaser sathe pathokero boyes bereche je. Amra ja shobde likhi tar ektao kobita noy. Kobita anubhuto hoye mathay theke jai. Amra ja likhi seta kobitalipi, ja pore sei kobitar samo-anubhutite pathok pouchobe, setai uddeshyo. Jemon surolipi theke gaaner udbhashe pouche jai shrota. Bodh hoy bojhate parlamna tai to? amar-i durbalata. Tomar self-confidence ar proshne ami khushi hoyechi. Amake jodi ekjan pathak mone karo, dharo amar janyoi ekta kobita likhle na hoy. Na ki pathak gollay jak bhabcho? Lage raho Shoubhik Bhai.
ReplyDelete:) Thanks Barin-da. Thank you apnar response-er jonnye. Apni ja bollen, ta matha petey nilam. Ja bollen, ta ami kichhu kichhu jaani. Kintu tobuo, bolbo, jokhon amra bechhe niyechi je amra shobdei 'kobita' likhbo, tokhon, amake je shobdomala chNute parbe, tai kobita. Kintu shudhui shobdo ki 'chnute' paare? Asol tow vabna. Shobdo tow maddhhom. Shei madhhom ke onekei icchhakritovabe kothin, durbodhhyo ebong awdbhuut korey tuulte paren. Taate vabnata ki pnouchhoy pathoker kachhe? Naki, na pnouchholeo khoti nei ? Kobita bojhar chesta koratai vuul? Tahole kobita niye ki kora hobey? abar bola jete paare 'notun shobdo'-r proyoge je 'kobita' srishti holo, taa kaur kaur kachhe pnouchholo, tahole hoyto setai labh. amar kache kobita maane ekhono anuuvutir bohirprokash. Ei prokash korar rasta-ta amar songe oneker-i milbena, ar tai kobitalekha byapartay democracy ache. Setai kammyo. Khub sadharon 2 line-er kobita amake naRiye ditey paare, abar 10 hajar line-er kobita amake nao chnute paare, jodi 10 hajar line-er kobita lekha sohoj noye. Asole, amar mone hoyna kono definition ba konokichu ache...Nei bolei kobita bneche ache. Awbossoi, ei somoye dnaRiye amra keu Victorian vashay kobita likhbona. Tobe alpotka vashar byaboharey amar reservation ache. sadharon vashay mochhor ditey paara lekha amar kache kobita. Ekhono porjonto. Tobe 'sadharon' vashata kon vasha, se sombondhe abar bitorko cholte paare.
ReplyDeleteEi eky bishoy niye amar khub recently Dhurjoti Prasad Chattyopadhyay-er shonge alochona hochhilo (Dhurjoti-mama boli jehetu amar soshurbaRir dike uni close family friend). Kono mimangshay asha jayni. Mimangsha ki hoye? Kejane.
Ekdin apnar shonge ei niye mukhomukhi alochona hobe hoyto.
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aasole Souvik , ekta katha hoeto etoi sohoj je aamra seta mone raakhi naa : kobita golpo noe , chhondo noe , probondho noe , gaan noe , anuvuti noe , concepts noe , medhachorcha noe ... konokichhui aalada kore noe , kaaron kobita sudhui kobita ebong kobita sobkichhui hote paare . kobita cinema ... painting ... gaan ... music video ... sobkhichhur sobkichhuke nijer upaadan korte chaaiche ekhon .
ReplyDeleteaaj ei porisor jekhaane amra somoy aar sthaan-k aalada kore chinte paarchhi na , tokhon ekjon dikkhito paathoker chokhe jol aana kintu shromodashyo ebong taa nirmaaner vinnota daabi kore . kobita shobdosrboswo noe , aabar konovaabei shobdoniropekkho noe . ekta shobder paashe aarekta shobdo jokhon ese boslo , se jeno kobita-r itihaase prothombaar bose .
byaktigoto anuvuti bole aalada kore kichhu hoe na , kaaron byaktiniropekkho kono anuvuti hote paare na . jemon anuvutishunyo kono kobi hote paare na . kobi-r medha apraasongik . tobe oproyojonio aadou noe .
tumi nijeo kintu kichhuta medhanirbhor .
tomaar kobita porlei chena jae eta souvik-er kobita . etaa ekta boro byapaar . sokole paare naa . onekei paare naa . kintu tomaar kaachh theke aaro boro khela aamra asha kori . jeno aamra tomaake nie sudhu aanondo noe , gorbo korte paari .
aamader porisortaake vaasa daao souvik . sei vasa-e mise jaak tomar byaktigoto sobkichhu , tomaar nijer vaasa . mahajagat dekhte chai tomar kobita-e .
Khnuje cholechi, Anupam. Roj roj.
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jemon Atanu-r kabita ei post-e . TRITIO POLOK aar CHURAANTO PRITHIBI aamake chomke dilo . khub norechore boslaam . kintu DURONTO FOCUS aar CHHOLCHHOLE CLASSROOM keno likhlo ! keno NILKONTHO PAAKHI !! FNAAKA PANORAMA aar PORHA CIGERETTE ... keno keno keno ????
ReplyDeleteaabar ei kobitai saamogrik pore bes laagchhe . chomotkaar laagchhe .
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ReplyDeleteei shedin Little mag melar Muktomawnche ekjon kobita poRchhilen..valoi egochhilen, hawthath - ekta line uni bollen - "Boshonto harieche aj lashkaata ghorey.." - byass, kobita-ta sesh hoye gyalo !..baki kono line amar kaaney dhuklona..awbosshhoi, amra shobai ei somoyer vashay likhbo...bohubyabohrito, jirno lekhapotro ar poshayna sotti-i..
jai hok, amar money hoye ami ektu 'mainstream' ghnyasha !...taate awsubidhe nei. mainstream hoyeo valo kobita likhechen oneke / likhchen..joralo, mochor ache emon lekhai chai..
ar awbosshoi Anupam, jeta bolle, ekta 'signature' thaka khub joruri. valo, kharap er urdhe hochhe 'signature' thaka..jeta tomar vishonvabe ache..ar amio chesta kori jaate thake amar lekhay..ei r ki..
blog e Barinda ashay alochona egiye gyalo onekta. Last post-e khub kom comment. ei post-e amra egiye cholechi, etai valo lagche..
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AMRA KABITA NIYE KHUB BOLCHI. LIKHCHI. EI BLOG E HEADER TIO KINTU MONOJOG O NOTUN KORE ALO CHONA KORAR EKTI SCOP RAKHE. ETAO EKTI KOBITA. ER NAMKORON KORLE AMI KORBO ASOHAY ISHHOR.
ReplyDeleteKOBITA KOKHON KIBHABE ASE JANE NEI. TOBE ASE.ABAR KEU KOBITA KE TENE NIYE ASE. EBONG EMON HOY JENO KOBITA SEI NARI JE PROTIDIN TAR SWAMIR KACHE KOTUKOTHA SUNTE SUNTE EBONG ATTACHARITO HOTE HOTE SETAI TAR OBSSEION HOYE JAY. SE TOKHON LALITTO, PREM, SNEHO ITTADI BUJHTE CHAY NA. ANO KICHU CHAY. TAR CHAOYATA KINTU ASONGOTO NOY.
EBHABE KOBITAO TAR RUP, ROS, KE ANNOBHABE PETE CHAY, DITE CHAY. SOBAI KINTU TA NITE PARE NA. TADER KACHE ETA EKTA CRIME. KOBITAKE KHUN KORAR CHOKRANTO BOLE MONE KOREN TAnRA. ASOLE KINTU BISOYTI THIK ULTO. ETA NODIR BAKER MOTO. JEKHANE NODI POTH PALTE NILO THIKI I, KINTU TAR JOL SUKIYE GELO NA.JOLHIN USHOR KONO UPOTTOKAY PORINOTO HOLO NA... KINTU PALTE GELO. TAR PORIBORTON GHOTLO. JETA ANUPAM O MONE KORE ASHA KORI.SUTORANG KOBITAKE KICHU NOTUN DITE HOBE, AGE JA HOY NI ,JA BHABA JAY NI TAKEI TULE ANTE HOBE SOBDO O SOBDER ARALE.
AMADER NOTUN LEKHA NOTUN HOYE UTHBE AROO NOTUN BHABE.
barindar oi katha ta thik...kabita sotty mathar kothao...buker kothao roye jai...sabde ase na seibhabe...sudhyu tar samarthok vabnake ekta sur die day.....astanirjan
ReplyDeletemanik thik bolechho . tobe boli : nodi sorbodaa urbor jomi diei jaae naa ; se onek somoy usor jomi dieo jae . taate taar boye jaoaa byartho hoe naa . bnaakbodol jekono mullye kammyo .
ReplyDeletevaalo kobita likhte hobe na . vaalo kobita maane to paathoker protyashaapuron ! khaarap lekhaa hok . natun hok . paathok-k bismoy dite chaai aamra .
souvik , tumi 'mainstream' shobdota aanle evaabe ! etaa aamar kaachhe khub biroktikor ektaa shobdo bhai . kaaraa ei mainstream ? jaara kalighater burigangar jol-k kobita mone kore , aar hugly nodi-k opobitra mone kore ? konta gangajol ? tomaarta , naa jini likhlen "Boshonto harieche aj lashkaata ghorey.." ??
mainstream means importance , significance , not impotence or stagnancy .
aamra mainstream . ei kathata aami sorboda boli . je natun likhchhe , ekmaatro sei mainstream . natun-e eso souvik . barin ghosal ki bolchhen tomaar naa sunleo hobe . aryanil ki bolchhen jaanar dorkaar nei .
kintu emon ekta kobita lekho je lekhaa kaeu konodin lekhe ni .
tomaar sei lekhar opekkhae tomaar ei bondhu kintu bose aachhe .
'mainstream' kawthata icchhe korei enechhilam. dekhchhilam ki bolo..:)
ReplyDeleteof course, amra shobai mainstream..jaara notun likhche ba lekhar chesta korchhe..'notun' lekha maane thik ki? 'moulik' bole ki kichu hoye? hotey paare? 'notun' maane ki notun shobdomala diye toiri purono ba chironton vabnachinta? eky jinish onnyovabe bolatai ki 'notun'? old wine in new bottle kichhuta..na ki 'notun' maane shottiy 'notun'..awnnyo digonto konovabey..shottiy 'notun' kobita hoyto ekjon boRo kobi jiboney 1-timatroi lekhen, tao lekhen ki? notunvabe uposthapona korar chestatei tow amader ketey jaye Anupam, tao hoye othena...
jakge, ei post e onek kawtha bole fellam..valo laglo alochona..blog egiye choluk aro..
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Really,Anupam,Shoubhik,Manik, ei post-ta sobar participation-e lively hoye utheche.Ami chai aro anyera jog dik.Shoubhik,Dhurjoti amar priyojan,tomake boli,pathak-k generalisation korona.Sab pathak ekta scale-e fit karenaa. Tomar kache jeta durbodhyo seta sobar kache durbodhyo noy. Tai kathaata habe 'duruho', tomar kache duruho.Ta hotei pare.Asole Shobder kono mane nei,shabdo diye rochito kobitar kono mane hoyna, tai bojhar ba byakhhyar kono balai nei kobitar. Samosto abeger phooljhury jhuta hai.0 dashaker shese kobitay chokhe jwal ele fele debo,jwal na, kobitai.Ami erakam bhabi.
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Barinda, amar 3jon priyo kobi holen Bhaskar Chakraborty, Tarapada Roy o Kamal Chakraborty. 3-jonkei amar khub valo lage ..onnyo onnyorokomvabey bhalo...
ReplyDeleteEnder kobita niye apnar kichhu kawtha shunte chaichi..Enader kobitay ami jetake 'durbodhhyo/awdbhuut' ar apni jetake 'duroho' bollen, serokom ami kichu paina..enader urbanity, smartness, sarcasm, wit, mochoR, nisorgochitro ankar khomota, imagery....shob amar kache vishon akorshoniyo..amar kobitar pochhondota onekta eirokom..
enader kobita niye kichu bolun..
souvik , tumi aamake je proshnota korle seta nie boli .
ReplyDeleteekjon manus ei prithibite 100% NATUN hoe aase . se purboprojonmo ba hoeto purbojonmer sobkichhu atmikrito kore aase . se maanus . onyo kono praani noe . kintu jonmomuhurte se ekjon avutopurbo manus .
erpor chokraanto suru hoe . sobaai mile uthe pore laage taar originality theke taake ber kore nie aaste . jodi taara seta korte byartho hoe , taara manustake pagol thaaure haal chhere dae , daaymuktir swaad pae .
kobijonmo-ta-o thik taai . je kobi-k onyora nijer dol-e taante paarbe , dhaanche felte paarbe , se chot kore prithibite onek licece pae jaabe . naa hole taake Binay Majumdar kore deoaa hobe . se ar mainstream-e dhukte paabe naa .
ami natun kobita bolte barin ghosal bujhi na . aami natun kobita bolte bujhi original kobita .
tumi Koetcey-r LIFE AND TIMES OF MICHAEL K porechho ki ?
se jaak . kintu tumi 3 jon kobir naam bolle . eder moddhe Bhaskar ebong kamal aamar khub khub khub priyo . bises kore aabar prorthom jon . Bhaskar-er influence aamar lekhae hoeto thaakeo thakte paare . kintu bolo to bhai , bhaskar je kobita likhlen sei lekha bangla-e tnaar aage keu likhechhe ki ? kamal ? onaara uttoraadhikaarshunyo non . kintu kaaro baaper sadhyo chhilo onader lekhae nijer signature daabi koraar ?
ar barinda-r katha-e aami ektu mridu aapotti jaanachhi . shobder kono maane nei . kintu shobder baaire shobder kono maane naa thaakleo , shobder vitore shobder maane thaake .
ReplyDeleteorthaat dhwonigun . MAA --- ei shobdota prithibir je kono desh-e kono naa konovaabe aachhe .
bikaarsunyo .
montro .
aar sekhaan thekei suru hoe rahasyo . rahasyo naa thaakle je kono chorchai nisfol .
CHORUI PAAKHIr naam aamra SINGHO raakhte paartam naa . LOHAAr naam aamra CHUL raakhte paartam naa . RABINDRANATHer naam aamra SUCHITRA SEN rakhte paartaam naa . ASUR hote paare naa DEBOTA . KOBITA hote paare naa GOBESONAAGAAR .
ReplyDeleteAnupam, tomar kotha valo laglo. Na chhilona, onader moto korey lekha karo. amar tow setai boktobbyo..'notun kobita' bolte ami tow bujhi ei kobita ja age eivabe keu boleni..originality...'moulik' byaparta vague hok, taate khoti nei, kintu nijer moto korey bola joruri, amaro tow shei mawt. ei 'nijer moto kore bola' byaparta loker valo lagle aro valo, na lagle ki r kora jabey. 'notun kobita' bolte ami jyamon bujhi je notunvabe bola, notun style-e, angikey, tyamon-i ami mone kori..kichu je ekta notun kore bolar chesta hochhe, setao tow bojha dorkar. notun kobitar-o tow rokomfer thake..maane amar ar tomar je onader dujoner kobita pochhondo, onara tow 'motun kobita' likhechhen, kintu ar ek dhoroner 'notun kobita'-y amar apotti. obosshyo amar apotti-te kaur-i kichu eshe jawar kawtha noy. karon ei 'onnyo dhoroner' notun kobita jnara lekhen, tnarao 'original'..kintu ami je shobdo banalam, shobder porey shobdo boshiye je notun shobdo banalam, taar jodi kono jhaR khnuje na pawa jaye, tahole gota kobitar sorire tow chhoRiye thakbe awdbhuut awdbhhut kichhu shobdo..jeta Barinda bolchhen amar kache 'duroho'..duroho thik noye, poRe, chesta korey amio bujhi..kintu ami ei chesta-ta korbo kyano? ami korbona, hoyto onnyora korben, tai thiky achhe.
ReplyDeleteTumi bolo, Bhashkar-er kobitay ekta alpotka 'notun' shobder byabohar kothao peyechho ki? nei. kothao nei. kintu 4 line-er kobita..ki je shoktishaali, naRiye rekhe dyaye. tai uni amar shobcheye pochhonder Kobi..ekdom original..
amar eishob byaktigoto awbhimot ekhane prokash kore cholar uddesshyo hochhe..to connect with others..and understand..'notun kobita' bolte tnara ki bojhen..
jetate 'parallel poetry movement' hishebe awbhihito kora hoye, sheta asoley ki? etar ki kono proyojon chhilo? somoyer shongey shongey kobitay bnakbodol tow ghotbei..kintu notun shobder byabohar maanei originality noye, eta amar mone hoye. dictionary theke tuule ana sorol, sadharon shobdo diye ekti original, notun, chomokprodo, awsadharon kobita lekha jaye, eta mone-e kori. ami notun kobita likhi, tai ami onnyorokomvabe nijer presence felt korate chaibo, ei byapartay amar apotti..
jai hok, tumi jeta bolechile kal, ar amio jeta mone-e kori..kobita 'hoye othe'..tai konta ki, ta niye ar beshi kochkochi korey labh nei bodhoy..
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natun kobita likhte hole natun sobdo toiri korte hobe emon kono byapaar nei . kobi tokhon notun sobdo baanaben jokhon tini dekhben procholito sobdovaandaar die tnaar kaaj ar hochhe naa .
ReplyDeleteRabindranath Gitabitan-e hajar hajar sobdo toiri korechhilen . sobdo baanano kobir dae noe . kintu tnaake korte hoe onek somoy .
aami nije natun sobdo kokhono coin korini sei vaabe . kintu 2-4 baar kortei hoechhe .
aar shobdo jokhon ekokvaabe thaakchhe tokhon hoeto se natun noe . kintu sei sobdo jokhon aarekta sobdo-k refer korchhe se tar rong bodle ekebaare natun hoe jae . naahole kobita hoe naa . keu jodi LAAL GOLAAP bole ... aar keu jodi KRITRIM TUSARPAAT bole ...
tumi nijer lekhaata dekho . tumi natun sobdo byabohaar koroni . kintu sobdogulo-k sobdo hisebe purono laagchhe naa . old wine in new bottle noe , new wine in old bottle . ebaar sudhu botoltaake paalte nilei hoe .
21 sotoker bangla kobita natun mejhete maatal hote chaichhe . keno taake 20 sotoker atibyabohrito mawd debo bolo to ? se to vintage hobe naa ! taar chaite 19 baa 17 sotoker paaniyo aanbo .
kothaae gelen Ramnidhi Gupta ... Vidyapati ... Gobindadas ...
aar ekta katha ami tomaar kaachh theke aasbe vaabi ni . tumi bolchho ," poRe, chesta korey amio bujhi..kintu ami ei chesta-ta korbo kyano? ami korbona, hoyto onnyora korben, tai thiky achhe."
ReplyDeleteetaa ki dikkhito paathoker katha holo bhai ? Rabindranath-er lekha porte hole mehonot korte hoe naa ? Jibanananda-k bujhi tumi bina shrom-e pore felo ? Amiya ? Bihnu ? Yeats ? Eliot ? Shakti ? Ramendrakumar ?
bhai classical gaan sunte hole somojhdaar hote hoe , naach bujhte hole ... paintings bujhte hole ... mae Bunuel ba Godard-er film bujhte hole tomaake mehonot korte hobe . James Joyce bujhte hole maathar ghaam pa-e felte hobe .
kobita ki dos korlo ? se ki baaner jole vese esechhe ? kobita porte tumi shrom debe na !! kobita ki bilaas ? chorchaa dabi korte paare na ? somoy daabi korte paare naa ?
tomaar jemon `aarek dhoroner natun kobita ` buhjte asubidha hoe , tomaar kobita bujhteo sei paathoker asubidhaa hobe jini tomaar dhoroner kobita kokhono poren ni , taai na ?
aar please bhai , kobita-e kono parallel hoe naa . ei sobdogulo kintu barinda byabohaar koren . aami maante paari naa . aami anti-poetry bole kichhu hoe bole mone kori na .
ReplyDeletekobita sudhu kobita hoe . no mainstream . no somaantoraal . hoe kobita hoechhe , nochet hoe ni .
bangla kobita-r ektai dhaara . sekhaane sunil jemon aachhen , barin-o aachhen . aamar kaachhe ei .
kaaro sadhyo nei prokrito kobi-k apar kore raakhe , other kore raakhe .
aarekta jinis aachhe . seta maandhaata aamoler ekta likhito samogri jetake poddyo bolaa hoe . tumi ki setaake mainstream bolbe ? taahole ebaar nortdomaar jol die paapmukti hok aamader .
'chesta-ta korbo kyano' bolte ami je level-er chestar kotha bolechi, sheta thik initial level-er noye. seta kammyo noye. je porei ek nissase tumi kobita bujhe gele. abar ami ekhane 'amar' kotha bolini..
ReplyDeletekobita somoy dabi korbei, setai tow normal..
jai hok..somoyer songe songe kobitar bnakbodol naturally ghottona /ghoteni bole ki mone hoy? tar jonnye ki kono 'movement'er proyojon chhilo? kotota chhilo bole mon-e hoy?
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van gogh bneche thakte jodi keu tnaake parallel silpi bolto ... hoeto tini khur haate taara korten ...
ReplyDeletekingba hoeto korten naa ... emily dickinson ... hopkins ...
kotojon kobita porlo setaa die kobi-k maapa jae na ...
Shubho Dasgupta ... je kono boi dokaane koyek copy hajir thaake ...
falguni mukhopadhyay naamok ouponyasik ...
movement . setaa hoechhe . segulo nie aajo aamader katha bolte hoe . ekhono aamra hungry-shriti-dhongsokaalin-chhnach venege felo nie katha boli . hungry to itihaas oe gechhe . little mag mela-e dekhlaam HUDINIR TNAABU . oraa hoeto hungry-k revive korte chaichhe .
ReplyDeletekaajei kichhu korte perechhilen Malay- Falguni-ra .
Pabitra Mukhopadhyay-er sob chaite saarthok boi Iblisher Atmodorshon dhongsokaalin movment-er moddhei lekha hoechhilo .
europe-e to onek hoechhe ... surreal .. dada ... structuralism ... asankhyo ...
ekhaneo ... postmodern ... ityadi ...egulo bangla kobita-k bohu milage diechhe . ekhono aamra taar sufol pachhi .
aasole e sob taagider byapaar . tomaar ar aamar jodi mone hoe eksonge bangla kobita-k ektu naara debo ... sei proyojonta sob chaaite vaalo to aamra 2 jon bujhbo . taarpor itihaser haate chhere dite hobe .
arka,aritra,ramit,abhisek r bises kare debanjaner kabita amar bises valo legeche.ARO VALO LAGLO BARINDAR KABITA NIYE DARUN DARUN KATHA BALATA.TARIYE TARIYE UPOVOG KARLAM.ANUPAMDA TOMAR KABITA NAPEYE KICHUTA HATAS.
ReplyDeleteAnupam, Shoubhik,post-er kobita periye amra odh hoy nijera ja ja jani ta ugle dichhi dur-e bose.Besh bhalo lagchilo ei sab. aro bhalo lagto jodi anyo kobirao jog dito. Shabdo niye ekta kathaa bolbo.Shabder sotyi je mane ache ta obhidhan-e nei.Obhidhan-e ache ekta shabder referable protik aro shabdo. Ami boli, shabder mane shabder bhetore ache, jebhabe ekti shabdo gore othe.Sei utso'r kache jete hoy,shabder dhwonir sutro dhore shabdo-gun pawa jay,jar ranon baje, jog hoy, otibahito hoye kobitar chonya jagay mone.Amar kobitar bojhapora erakam.Anupam, ami kakhano bolini parallel er kathaa.Parallel niye even maths-eo mithye balaa ache.Ami boli 'apor'er kathaa,jekhan theke mainstream bole kichu ache ki nei ta hariye jay. Shoubhik, sab kobir-i thake tar pachander priyo kobi,jara take aral theke probhabito korte chay, ar kobir lorai shuru hoy sei probhab theke nijer kobitake banchiye rakhte.Bhaskar-er kobita amar bhalo lage. Kamal last 45 yrs amar closest friend.Amar dharona era keu 'natun kobita'lekheni. Anyo shabdo use karo tomra.Karon 'natun-kobita' 1ta bishes coinage,tar 1ta bishes indicator ache.Jemon je kono kobitai 'adhunik-kobita' noy.Tomra gayer jor, mukher jor, kalamer jor chalaleo definition palte jabe na. Kintu Shoubhik,eto sab kathaar pore jodi amather kobitar jaygata aro pokto na hoy,tahole we r beating around a bush ja khancha shunyo.
ReplyDeleteexactly barinda . kobir hoe katha boluk taar kobita . aar kichhu nei . aar ki thaakte paare !
ReplyDeletebarindar kotha dhore bolchi, SOBKICHU TO DEFINITION E SURU O SESH HOY NA. HOTE PARE NA. DEFINITION KOTHAI JODI DORA HOY TOBE TO AMRA KOBITA NIYE HIMSIM KHEYE JABO. JAHOK, DEFINITIONTA ASOLE EKTI SHIELD ER MOTO JA KONO KICHUKE AGLE RAKHE. SUTORANG DEFINITION NIYE AMI KHUB EKTA BHABI NA. JODIO 'NOTUN' BOLE TAR MOROKE NOTUNOTTOHIN KICHU DILE TA TO NOTUNER POKKHEI KHSOTIKOR.TAI NA?
ReplyDeleteEBAR ASHI SOBDER KOTHAY.SOTTI SOBDER ARTHO NIJOSSOTA BOLE KICHU NEI. EBONG ORTHO BOLTE JA BOJHAY AMAR KACHE TA EKTI ABESH, EKTI ONUBHAB.EBONG SOBDO KOBITAR EKTI MADDHOM CHARA AR KICHU NOY. JODI BOLA JAY SOBDO CHARA KI KOBITA TAOIRI KORA SOMBHOB? AMAR UTTOR HOBE: PROKRITO KOBITA HOLO TA JA SOBDE SIMABODDHO NOY. SOBDER ORTHO JEKHANE SESH HOYE JAY THIK SEKHAN THEKE SURU HOY KOBITA. TAI KOBITA SOBDO-ORTHO ITTADIR BAIRER BISOY, JEKHANE ONUBHUTITAI MUL BYAPAR. EBONG SWABHABIK BHABEI MYSTRY, JAKE BHANTE BHANTE PATHOK ROMANCHITO HON, APLUTO HON.
BARINDA KI BOLCHEN? ANUPAM TUMI? AR APNARA?
eto kathya keno...
ReplyDeletekiser janya....
tabe ki eta ei mechanism...
kabi tairy korar blog...
ekhaneo ki manus tar nijer lekhar kathya vabbe suchintytio hoye?
ei ta kabita hale aj habe na...kal habe na...porsu habe na...jebhabe tumi karkhanay...companyte but jutor fite bedhe no...se bhabe sabdya bedhe nabe?...
bedhe nbe nijeke.....ebhabe hoi...labourotory chole...itihas?...
kabita?...ha ha natun kabita?..
ami kabita bhuji na ajo...konmodin bhujte chaibo ki?...h ha voi hoi
ekhaneo parikhya...?
ekhaneo....natun natun natun...kiser?...jara andolone samil ...mai tader selam thuki...tara sahid...ebhabe noi...ekmatro hoito ekhanei nijer jarijuri chole na...ekdin amra ekjoner kabita pore lafie uthe bolbo ba!! ei cheyechhi...er obak hoye dekhbo tini andolone chilen na...tini tar kabita likhechhen ....er amader bindumatro upudes nen ni vagiis!!! nijeke hoi to joler samne darate hoi...jol ei sabder kachhe jol hate....natun hate noi...er eitukui natun...mane natun....
kabita likhub...barin da na....aryonilda na...
anupamda na....nijer...jata durbol i hok...nijer i hok....are voi keno...attyohatyar eto sahaj path vebe nie o voi?...naki promotion chai...?
manik , aamar kaachhe ekta sobdo sunle ektaa kichhu mone pore . ekta reference . seta ... abes ... i dont know ...
ReplyDeleteonek somoy ekta habit . jemon manik sunle rotno noe , tomaake mone pore .
jokes apart .
ReplyDeletesobdo bole jetaa aamra dekhi seta sudu dekhi . aar sonaatuku kolpona kore nei . taa thekeo sonar fosol folaanoi jae .
sobdo moulik kichhu noe . taate already onek kichhu mise aachhe . kobi aaro kichhu mesaalen hoeto . aapon moner maadhuri .
dhaatugunn-e sobdo-k byabohaar --- ei proyaas aamader praak-itihaas jug-e nie jabe . aamra taahole kobitar bodole montro likhte chaaibo ... stotro likhte chaaibo ... ektaa somoy saada paata chhara kichhu pes korte paarbo na hoeto . kaaron aamara boidik risider kaachhe konokichhui jite nite paarbo naa .
tobe dhatugun-e kobita lekhar ekta chesta hobe bangla kobitae . aami seta predict korte paari .
thik anupam, ortho ekta habit matro. ja amra sune asi, sikhe nei ebong dhore nei.
ReplyDelete'sanju' tumi jebhabe likhcho setato tomar lekha . tumi emon thakbe na change korbe seta tomar byapar.
ekhane keu to kauke kobita lekha sekhacche na. sekhano jay na. eta emon ekta jayga jekhane protteke pretteker kotha bolte pare. ei blogti edik theke tai ektu alada. tumi tomar kotha bolo. anno keu tar kotha bolbe. protteker bolar right ache. ebar sei kothagulo theke kichu bhalo ebong byaboharjoggo bishoy to uthe astei pare. tai na?
ami jetuku bolte cheyechhi....etuku holo..
ReplyDeletejol ...ei sabdya ta...kamon..
ekdin haspatal theke ferar pathe sandhya namchhe ...ami dekchhi jiler dahre strrtlamp er kichhuta agun jole pore giechhe kokhon...ami bollam ...jol...er hoye gelo choker nive asa alo..
sagore giechilam jakhan sekhane sadhu sonnasai der upasonar somoi chilo na...faka er dhudhu...frejargang eo...ami bollam ..jol...er edik odik jhau..jele nouker gandhya...amar beer er botol...eksathe mise gelo...
ami bolam jol...er amader sabeki pukure hatat satar kete gelo ekta chiti sap...
sudhyu jol na...anusangik misbey er takhan jol ke natun kichhu bolte habe na...se natun hoye jabe...hoito er jol i thakbe na...seisimoi take tumi mone mone alo deke felteo paro...oi je sei jaltuku bandhyur mayer canser joyechilo jene...sei jol amar kachhe ajo choker nive asa alo hoye roye gachhe...
ami sabder verification e thik biswasi noi....ami sabder antarghat e biswasi...amar sab somoi mone hoi surjya bolleo tar modhhey kothay chaya-jol roye gachhe...ki bhabe ...ami vabte thaki...er mone mone hoi hya oi chaya -jol achhe...achhey...ami tar anusandhan chalie jay amar kabitay....
apatotyo......emon bhabei ami amar kabitar kachhe firi...sabda thik rakhte ...er charipaser ghurni take tar modhhey thik rakhte...
asole amar mone hoi natun kabita likhte gye ki ami...anupamda ke je kabita khusi korbe sei kabita likhbo?...barinda ke..?manik dake?...
ReplyDeleteer takhan i amar er valo lage na kichhu....mone hoi bhul hochhe kothay....
amar je kabita pore tara bole uthben yes ..otay....
amar bhalo lagbe takhan je amar safalotya er durbolota nuie tar kachhe sahaj vabe darie gechhi...ami
astanirjan ... astanirjan ... astanirjan ...
ReplyDeletejol venge aachhe joler aadole ... aar aamra kinaara kinaara kore morchhi ...
janala die aaschhe vorer aalo ... aamra suryo-k dhonyobaad dichhi ... jaanala-k vule jaachhi ... jaanaala taar fnaaksomet udaasin ...
kothae daakchhe paakhita ... kothae peke 100% holo fol ... aar taarporei ki jeno taake pelo ... se sthaanantorito hote chaailo ...
paayese chini dite deri hoechhe ektu ... keu sei rokomfer ter paabe ki ...
EKTAA KATHA BOLCHHI SORAASORI
ReplyDeletekeu keu bolchhe ei blog-e aamra kobita nie boddo besi katha bolchhi . tottwo korchhi . aantelponaa dekhaachhi .
eta taarai bolchhe jaader kobita nie katha bolaar khomota nei . jaara kobita lekhe na , kobita lekhar vaan kore .
keu jodi bole ,'kobita nie eto katha naa bole kobita likhlei hoe ' ... taar kaachhe aami jaante chaai : se nije aaj obdi ekta kobita-o ki likhte perechhe ?
ekhaane aamra protidin katha boli . se somoy aamra jodi kobita likhi , din-e 100ta kobita likhbo ki ?
ekhaane jaara katha bole taara kobita nie katha bolaar khomotata orjon korechhe . baaire jaara , taara kobita nie ketha bolte paare naa .
kobita nie katha bolte je paarena , taar kobita-k aamra sondeher chokhe dekhtei paari . vaabtei pari se chaalaki-k kobita hisebe chalate chaae .
nokol kobita lekhaa ekhon aar kothin noe . nokol kobita-r class onek chaalu aachhe chaardik-e .
ekta kobita se keno likhlo , 21 sotoker kobi-k setaa bolte hobe . naahole taar kobitachorchaar adhikaar jonmae na .
ReplyDeletetime machine jinista obosyo bangla kobita-r kaarkhanae aabskar hoei aachhe . se thaakuk 20 sotoker gaaddae .
janina anupam da ...ami je janina...etukui amar khomota...ami na jana ta khub valo kore bhuji...kintu oi janlata amar kachhe surjya hoye jai...visan visan
ReplyDeleteami tar roudra-alo-ghame chup kore katha muri die bose thaki...er kabita chay...ami je ki durbal...ki pariman vikiri ogo sarnya -vikiri...
amar mone achhe swapan dar ekso surjye boi ta porar somoi ekjaygay peyechilam...atatnu babu ekjon sikim mahilar hasi dekhe kichhutey bhulte parchhen na...er takhuni dicission nichhen eseta nie kabita likhben...tini ki mahila tike rape korlen na anupamda?...ja dekhlam...takei kabita kore nite habe takkhuni...tar antor kothay roilo ?..ami je tar hasikutuo chapabo bole tule nilam anupam da...ebhabe ki hoi...ami jani na...ami amon hasi pele ekdin bathroom use korbno...ekdin choker du-palak use korbo...takkhunu kabita use korbo na go...
age se amake cheye jak...amake dhansyo karuk...keno ami kabitar asroy nie palabo sei dhansyo theke...?
ami kabitay likhbo ...er kabitar modhhey bhacbo morbo...agami keno kono kaler kathya mone rekhey noi
sudhyu somoi er gaye koyekta sabdya chitie die bolbo...khoma koro...ami etukui pari...
jakham khul jane se aur moja ate hay
ReplyDeleteor dibane ko aur dibane bana deta hay...
ha ha...chaluk ei prabaho...ami amr nouka te nagar rakhi ni keno je...
kabita...kabita...kotodin je likhhi ni...aj rate to eso.......eso
Sanju, kaal raat-e ki likhle, kobitata shonao to, parbe? Naki amakei pore nite habe? Jodi batas na thake, jodi dhwonito na hoy, jodi shonabar icche na hoy tomar, tahole shudhu shabdo pore uddhar korte parbo to? Setai karaa jak. Ei post-ta mone hoy ekhane close kore natunataro post create karaa jete pare. Ki bolis Anupam ?
ReplyDeleteHyan, ei post-e awnek kawthabarta holo. Ebar notun post hok. awnek kichhu alochona,awnekrokom adan-prodan holo. Valo legechhe.
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Aritra-er kobita ta ek adbhut ghor-er modhye niye galo...ek mayamoyota...Debanjandar kobitata asamanyo,aajkaal or boi porchhi,achchhonno hoye achhi...Atanu,Rangit aar Ramitdar lekhao khub bhalo laaglo...
ReplyDeletebarinda , natun post hobe . aar khub khaarap lagchhe , ei post-e eto katha holo , Avisek Mukhujje taate jog dilo naa !
ReplyDeleteei post-e sob chaaite vaalo katha bolechhe Sanju . aamader Astanirjan .
sokolke bolchhi lekhaa paathie daao . aaj-e . anupamm88@gmail.com
aare ! aami jokhon likhchhi tokhoni o elo !! gr8 !!!
ReplyDeleteBak pore asim valo laglo.Er member kivabe hote hoy?
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