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Manik Saha baad die baakigulir illustration aamar koraa . aar koraa jae kinaa , aapnara bolun . Arka , Bhaskar ... ektu baaraabaari hoe gelo na To !
ReplyDeleteillustration valo hoyeche. kintu ekta chobir form er sathe anno chobir mil na thakay khapchara lagche. ekta samota anun. karur kobita niyei kono comment korbo na. sabai valo lekhe o lekhen.
ReplyDeleteektaa vote chaalu koraa hoechhe .
ReplyDeletevote din sokole . vote daao sokole .
sabai bhalo likheche
ReplyDelete- tabe besh kayekbar porete bhalo laglo anupam jayshila ar astronirjoner lekhata--
thanks Ramit . I take it for a compliment . a true poem deserves more than at least one reading .
ReplyDeletekobita dichho naa keno ? phone-tone-o aase na aar ! kabhi kabhi yaad kawr liaa koro yeaar !!
Dear Anupam thanks for send me this collection..... It's very nice in graphical sense.....I liked Rajdip's poem.. joler bhetor ghor..in deep deep ocean...
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Novera
anupamda prathme ami sudhyu tomar kabita tar kathay bolbo...oi je chayar kabita....oi je chaya kole nei klantyo meye tike..er sobar ses e chaya ektai hoye jai...hete jay gachher chayar khoje...ki je asadhrayan...tomake ei kabita tar kathya ami ageo bolechilam..
ReplyDeletechaya nie eto jotilota...eto adbhut bislesion...eto tana poren...ami pathok der sudhyu ekbar bolbo...kothay o ki kabita ta ektu o beke gachhe...kothao ki mone hochhe kabita ta amra tar avontorin jatilota sotteo amader dhora dichhe na..?...
ei kabita...soptae buke ese lage...er amader bole jay...chya ektai...er sei chaya ajo er ekta chayar kachhei samarponer dike chole jai...
ami ki amar bou ke abar chumu khyabo aj rate...4 mas take dekhi ni...amar meyekeo...ami oi gachher chayar janyya je ki asthir ogo...
anupam da....ei kabita amar chirokal mone thakbe...jemon mone roye gachhe..sei parikhya holer halka hasir sabdya...ja amar parikhya thamie debar pokhhey jothestyo...aj je bhuji..ki bujrukir modhhey bose achhi...ki adbhut suorer bachhader jogote...
plz kau kichhu mone korben na galagali dilam bole...
jadi mone koren...ami mathya uchhu kore bolbo..bes korechhi diechhi...ami halka hasi die apnader parikhya vandul korar janya esechilam...chine nao ami sei debdut...
je bhujlo na..je fele gelo...amay..aha take dui gale chumu kheye boli..ore tor bank balance hok...
ore aha bechhe thak tara...ei prithibir varkendro er sammoyata bojay rakhar janya,,...sala ektu bis paoyao jai na...aboosio whisky achhe...kheye o felechhi...er nei ...ha ha..
astanirjon...
amar khub dujon priyo kabi ei post e amake hotas korechhen...avishek..er vaskorjoty....
ReplyDeleteoder dujoner i kabita gulo amake se bhabe ei post e sporsyo kore ni...but i love them...ami jani tara ekdin bangla kabitar kothayo nijeder dar korie debe....
ero ero bhalo lekhya chai bhai...avi...vaskor...
somoi neoya thak...sudhyu abr ami tomader kobita pore jeno ami chechie uthi...dekh dekh amar bandhura likhechhe...sala dekh..
er ami jani ami ta bolteo parbo....
ramit tumi ki bhai dub merechhyo naki...?..na kabita nei...sala ...kabita de...pori...
annyader kabit amar bhalo legechhe...khub bhalo na...
joysiladir kabita ei prathyam amake darun darun kichhuyu die galo...oi sada potakar kathya ..didi...amio amio...ektu dulie dilam...
rangiter last line ta amar thik mone dhore ni...kintu o jathariti darun kichhu line likhe amay chomke diechhe...bhalo bhai...chalie jao...
kisor ghosh er himaloy janar kabita dutoy...bhalo...mane bhalo ...
manikdar kabita amake tenechher..er ami bhabchhi...sikar kori manik dar kabitar sathik pathok ami noi...tai tar kabitar kathya ami socharachor boli na...
arka chatyopadhay amake chomke dilen...darun kabita arkababu...selam..
rajdeep er kabita ta bes...souvik babur kabita ta majic...faisol avi er kabitay eto sabdya...amar thik mone dhore ni..kothay jeno mone hochhe eto sobder proyojon chilo na...
nabendyu babur kabita tar kichhu bhujte pari ni....etao darun bapper..pathok hisebe nijer akhhyomota abar ter pelam...
er aritra sanyal er pahari vera hote ami raji achhi...kuasay vije jaoyar love sudhyu...
Nabyendu aamar mone hoe bangla kobita-e ekta natun genre toiri korte cholechhe .
ReplyDeletesaadharonto aamaader asaadhaaron kobira kobita theke music-er dike jaan . Nabyendu music theke kobita-r dike ei prothom elo somokaalin bangla kobita-e . abashyo ekhaane Rabindranath ebong Gitabitan baad die bolchhi aami . Ramnidhi Gupta-k baad dichhi .
aami sunechhi o metal rock-er khub vokto . kintu sei vokti-r chhap eto chomotkaarvaabe kobita-e aanaa ... hats off Nabyendu !!
nabendyu babur ei thtya ta amar tar kabita ke bhujte sdahajyo korbe khub...metal roker...er music er theke uthe asa sabder...ei dristyvangite ami onar kabita porte chesta korchhi...jadio ami metal rok er gan suni ni kokhono...net search kora jak...
ReplyDeleteek jon kabike tar pachandeye gran theke onektay khuge paoya jai....anupamda dhanyabad..bisoyta gochore anar janya
Astanirjan , tomaar kobita theke aami tomaar pochhonder gaan anumaan korte paari na . sudhu tibboti gumphaa-r ghonta-r awaaj sunte paai . shobdota milie jaae . taar res lege thaake bohukkhon porbot-e porbot-e .
ReplyDeletesotty katha bolte ki anupam-- ai post jakhon first pori kalke aktai jinis karar icche hoyechilo jeta kalke korini - sanju keo bolechilam pore moner se icchetar katha-- aj kore gelam---
ReplyDeleteMuaahhhhhh-- ata anupamer kobitatake---tui abar toke bhabis na jeno sarbonash hobe tahole[:P]-- heheheheee----
ai kobia akbar keno bar bar para jay--
r ph ta jodi keu na tole seta kar dosh?[:X]- ph er na ph bahoker?[:X]- tobe jodi sei samay ai kobita likher jonno ph na dhoris tahole bolbo dhoris na --hahahahaha- na hole ai lekha porte partum na----[:P]--
korbo re korbo-- aktu byastho chilam ar ph tao bigrechilo avi jane--
haa haa haa ... this is very much like Ramit . thik aachhe aaj theke TUI suru hok . aami otaa chot kore paari na . Avi-k try korechhilaam . jibh dilo naa .
ReplyDeleteAvisek-k nie boli .
ReplyDeleteei kobita-e 3t jorshobdo aachhe . 1.sielmedurota 2. moutaatbaalish 3. nishaanpoth . prothom-t daarun hoechhe taar dhwnigun-e . baakigulo aachhe taader orthogun-e . prothom-t portuguise+bangla jorshobdo . ei kaando aamader kobita-e prothom ghotaachhe Aviek . ebong ekhon aar kaaro probhaab or upor aachhe bole aamar mone hoe na . ses 2t jorshobdo aakorsonio noe . kintu kobita-r songe maanie niechhe .
kichhu boiporityo aami tomaar lekha-e pelaam Avisek : chhayaa/ aalo , baalish/runway , medurotaa/thomok ... tumi ki socheton chhile ei khelatae ? jaanio ekhaane .
aar prothom 2t stanza ... i think come closer to physics than poetics ... haa haa haa ... AAoloR RuH ... NaVIE bluE DOLOnaE pRiyo ROnger GaarHO ... vaaba jae na .
ses 2t line . dorkaar chhilo naa hoeto . thekeo khoti hoeni kichhumaatro . okhane Avisek nei . kintu puro kobitata jurei to uposthiti aar anuposthiti-r khelaa ! ses 2t line-e kobi taar style vanish kore sei khelaatake onyo maatra dilo .
astanirjan , tumi aarekbar lekhaata poro . aamar request roilo .
anupam da, nijeke ebar prasongik mone hochchhe...avishek chhara oboshyo konotai eto siggir hoto na! o nijei ei lekha niye type kore tarpor upload korechhe... ei process ta bujhi kom, tai sore sore thakchhilum sobhoye...ekhon nijer obshyo darun lagchhe....darun...
ReplyDeleteblog e font er je bibhinnota, ta ektu boichitro anchhe bote...sobar lekha soman taale porha jachchhe na seta jemon sotyi, temon'i protyek ta lekha porhar jonyo protyek baarer prostuti nichchhi...konota magnify korchhi, konota desktop e saved hochchhe...kobi ontoto ei samanyo dedication karur kachhe daabi kortei paaren....hah hah hah
ja hok, chhobi kobita gulo sommriddho korchhe... niyomito bhabei...
tobe chitrodhormi lekhar onusonge chhobi anar proyojon achhe ki?
raajdeep er nibirh uchcharon er pashe oi machh ti thakay bishes kichhu osubidhe hochchhe na thik'i...kintu dorkar'o ki khub chhilo?
aar sotyi...gorbo hoy raajdeep er contemporary howar jonyo...
souvik er lekha ami lokkhyo korchhi...onek din thekei...goto baarer kobita protimase te or duuti kobita porhechhilum...dwitiyo ongshe chhilo sei naabhi o amogh tsunamir ekta melbondhon...oi lekha ta daarun chhilo.... 'amra onek kichhu bhool jaani' boi ta ekhono porha hoy ni bote...tobe eta jodi se sonkoloner ekta lekha hoy to asha berhe jaay....
lekha tir shironaam ti jodio er bimurtota ke khunno korchhe...souvik aaro ektu space nite parten ...
aritra sanyal
aamr darun legeche;blogTi theke aamra khub bhalo bhalo lekha porte pachi;bangla desher bondhura o likhn..darun
ReplyDeletekhub bhalo laglo;2000-r por jara jara likhchi....tader joney ae blog akta bneche thaka
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ReplyDeleteআমিতো তানসেন ন-ই
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প্রতিদিন ঘুম থেকে মরার গন্ধ পাই।
akta lekha i likhe dilm...........aamr mon bhore geceh anonde
rangeet
plz aama k khoma krobn..aami jodi kono bhul kore thaki
plzz
Avisek anekdin aagei link diyechhilo, amar asha hoyni. dhonyobaad tomader. Kobita niye katha balaar eto bhalo jayga toiri karaar jonya.
ReplyDeleteAvisek-er lekha khub priyo amar. 'Moutaatbaalish', 'aalor ruh' - daarun laglo. Kintu puro kobitaTate sweetness khub beshi.. aar ektu roughness pete ichchha korchhilo poRte poRte.
Aritra'r kobitar belaateo taai bolbo. Bhalo lage tomar kobita. Kintu eTa khub mishTi bishonnotay chhayachchhonno. Aarektu amosrin hobe?
Bhaskar Jyoti, Baalimanush poRe mone poRlo : 'Thahar jaaye to angaar hai/ bah jaye to aansu hai'.
Anupam, Chhayar bichitro shomikaran..erokomi to.. khub bhalo laglo.
Rongeet -- aaro bhalo lekha poRechhi tomar. Aaro lekha daao.
Bhaalo theko shokole. Sheeter janalay.
Bhalo Laglo eyi postta!
ReplyDeleteAnupam-er eyi kobitata ager kobitar ekta CHhaya achhe kintu eta onek beshi compact!
AstaNirjon khub khub bhalo legechhe prothom o sheshti!
BhaskarJyoti-r Somporkota besh bhalo laglo! proshnogulo uttorito hole je proshno heen hoye jaay!
Blog-er illustartion khub valo hoyeche. Anupam-er kobita-ta vabay..chhaya 3te,,chhaya ekta..shobdo niye khyala ache..govir jibonbodh ache..valo laglo.
ReplyDeleteHimalay Jaana-r kobita valo laglo..chnulo..
Aritra Sanyal besh valo laglo..ar uni amar kobita poRen, lokkhyo koren bolechen, tai onake dhonnyobaad janai. Paarle amar boita poRe ekta feedback deben, apnar poRa hoyni boleche tai bollam..
Ar ki? Dhulo, dhnoya, na asha shhitkaleen ador, eishob niye boye choleche shohor. Amader tow shoby tukro collage, fire fire jawa, ar bneche newa jotodin paari, jodi etakei bnacha boley. tar majhe kichu lok evabei kobita likhe jabe..blog-er paatay, boi-e..blog choluk egiye..dyakha jaak kothay pnouchhoi aamra..
prothom-e Aritra-r comment . ekhaane je chhobigulo raakhchhi setaa sref blog-taake jholmole kore tulte . aar tomaar lekhaa aami nijei upload korechhi . Avisek aamake jpeg kore paathiechhilo . aami nijer moto illustrate kore niechhi . naam-t theke ishaara niechhilaam . taarpor upload kore diechhi . ei blog-e prokaashito je kono lekhaa-r vaalo monder jonne ekmaatro aami responsible .
ReplyDeleteEBAAR ARITRA_R KOBITA NIE BOLI
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tomaar kobita aamar durdaanto legechhe . Dolanchampa aarektu omsrin hote bolechhe . setaa or view . vul kimba thik konotaai noe . kobitata aaro nirmoho hote paarto ki ? hoeto paarto . HNAATA hoeto BILAAP-er metaphor ebong PAA FELAA hoeto MORSUM-er metaphor naa holei paarto . hoeo kichhu khoti hoe ni . etuku purbobyabohaar misti hoechhe . ke bollo kobita misti hote nei !
kobitati ses hoechhe space-k dumre die . sthaan okosmaat apekkhik hoe gelo . taake sotyo hoaar vul theke sorie neoaa holo . somoy to taar aagei venge gechhe .
ekhaanei kobitata saarthok .
aar ebaar theke niomito tomaar lekhaa ekhaane rakhte chaai . aalochonaa korte chai . ekguchho lekhaa please please please paathao . Avisek-k dilei hobe .
Dolanchampa , kobitaa pathaan . aapnar comment blog-k ekta anyorokom sampurnotaa dilo . niomito aasun blog-e .
ReplyDeleteSauransu , thanks for the compliment . kintu Bhaskar-er dwitio kobita-t ( MRITYU) tomaar vaalo laaglo na !!!
ReplyDeleteAnupamda,amay tui bollei kintu beshi bhalo lagbe....
ReplyDeleteami konodin etota gurutwo paini tai boltum chai ni...peye bhaloi lagchhe...ami aaro kichhu lekha pathiyechhi anupam da. mene nichchhi chhobi byabohaare blog aaro ujjwol lagchhe...eta obosyoi joruri...amar ei byapar ta mathay chhilo na...
ReplyDeleteeta ekta borho kichhu hote cholechhe drutoi...
ekdin amader esob'o kimbodonti hoye jabe- saikat, amar bondhu, bolechhilo ekdin...aar taar thekeo borho sotyi kotha ei je
ami ekhon ei screen er dike takiye achhi...
Aritra ,
ReplyDeletesokaalta koto vaalo kore dile tumi! sotti ... ekdin aamader esob-o kingbodonti hoe jaabe . daarun line . ekta kaabyogronther title hoe jaabe .
saikat-er lekhaa paathaate paaro , please ?
hmmm...oboshyoi...ami sai er songe jogajog kori!
ReplyDeleteactually natun kobita y ekbaar kobir dorja niye godyo sonkhya hoyechhilo...sekhane ekta godyo likhechhilum..saikat amar ekta bichitro obhigyotar kotha...sei tar sesh dikei achhe or ei ukti...
lekhagulo porlum....Aritra Sanyal-er lekhata amar khub priyo,Aritra-er beshirbhaag lekhar motoi ei lekhatateo ekta ekta mishti bishonnota lukiya achhe,Dolondir sathe ei byapare amio ekmot,tobe amay kintu ei mishti bhishonnotai bhishonbhabe aakrishto kore.......Kishore Ghosh amar khub priyo kobi,ei lekhatao amar khub bhalo laglo...Astanirjon uff...asamanyo,aar kono shobdo nei...Jayshiladio amar khub priyo kobi swabhabikbhabei onar beshirbhaag lekhar moto ei lekhatio mugdho kore tulechhe....Anupamda kichhu bolar nei,baarbaar porchhi,asamanyo...Rangeet aar Manik Shahar lekhao darun laglo...amar aarek priyo kobi Himaloy Janar lekhao achhe ekhane besh bhalo...aar Nabendubikash,anobodyo bhai,tomar lekha joto porchhi sommohito hoye jachhi,aaro lekha pathiyo plz....
ReplyDeleteDolondi aar Aritra blog-er aalochonae shamil haoae khub bhalo laglo....
ReplyDeletecomment nie boli...
ReplyDelete1din amie anurodh korechhilum details a comment korar jonno. aj bolchhi sotti somriddho hochchhi.kotorokom vabe j kobita pora jay, kotorokom vabe j kobita lekha jay...sikhchhi...ami sikhte khub valobasi;sobsomoy sikhi...amar sei khide purno hoye jachchhe...skolke thanks...aro pran khule comment korun aro sikhi...
astonirjon tomar 1st lekhata dristi khule diyechhe.hingsa hochchhe ...kano ami eto apurbo thomke jete parini? kano ami likhte parini kobitata? amar 4dike takanor dristisokti barie diechhe vai
anupam da illustration barabari noy fatafati hoyechhe...piprer use ta just vaba jayna....
rangit k nie ami pray e avijog kori, sahos pai o amar valo bondhu bole...tor ei poster lekhata amar sotti valolegechhe vai,bes valo legechhe...
anupam da tomar chayar khela asadharn legeche.joysila ,manik,astonirjan er kabita valo legeche.
ReplyDeleterangit ei kabitai anekbesi bakti kendrink ,sarbanamer babhar kamiye kabitake chariye dau.
Yes! Finally someone writes about How to detox Your body.
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