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khub sundor post abarer ta-- prothomei anupam ke illustration gulor jonno bahoba diy- khub bhalo hoyeche- ar kobita sotty bolte ki sab katai tader nijo nijo bhabe atotai sundor je alada bhabe bhalo bolar appekkha rakhe na tabe rangeet er lekhata akta sundor chobir mato hote parto kintu kothao aktu khapchara legeche-- puro post tai sundor
Bakider modhye Anupam-er lekhata bhalo lage ni amar mane may be expectationta high chhilo gotobarer post=er por! Tobe punchlineta besh!
RItam besh laglo! Shubhendu Dolui bhaloi! Manick Sahar lekhati besh Striking. Bhaskarjyotir finishing sundor! Himaloy Jana Rajdip Ray motamuti legechhe!
rangiter utsorge "bondhunira" sobdota kane lagchhe. "vangaro nijeswo kichhu niyam thake"... "ma" k amra keu "babani" boli ki? soundorjer dik thekeo rinattok.. tobe rangit kobitar deho nie vabe..or kachhe juktita jante chaibo… apekkhikotar totto meneo bolchhi…
anupam da , ritam r himaloy dar lekha sobche valo laglo. ritam anupras byabohar korechhe..purono tool..kintu kobita ta porte giye sesob kheyal e thakena... "akas vangie nilo bohudur khuchro meghera" notun noy? kheyal na thakatai to safollo chinhito kore dilo...
manik dar lekhatao barbar tane, kintu apni koyekta post thekei dekhchhi nijer lekha highlight koren... keno? bemanan lage. ei poste apnar nijoswo highlighting poster alonkoron k apoman korechhe(jodio alonkoronta darun)...apni one of the editors, apnar r o sonjoto hoya uchit chhilo. anupamda bolle amra prottek kobi swolonkrita lekha joma dite pari… manikda apnakeo sourangsu k bola kothagulo bollam..ami kintu ninduk noy… somnath ghosaler lekhatao bes valo.kintu nam ta communicate korte parlam na....eta amar joggoter ovab..hoteo pare nao pare…tai motamot tar aporibortonio noy… anupam da alonkoron chhara r post hobena . tomar kobita sapekkhe chitra nirbachone chomok achhe. kintu prochchhoder chhobi anujayi text color bodlano dorkar chhilo. 2toi red. editorder nam ba contacts bojha jachchhe na...
chaer chaya nie to kau mathai ghamay na! take hoito talani bhebe nay....
ei liner janya ami ero koyekjug na ghumie thakte pari... rubaru te ami porechilam..ei kabita...ajo porlam....
ei avi amake bol bhai sonalo mane ki...adbhut...darun re..tor ager kabitatao amar oije rangin kagogkuchi prajapaty hoye mise jachhe batase...aha..toke bhalobasi felchhi yar...tor sei tar thekeo besi...(amader ramit kothay re beta..?)
himalay janar kabita ta boro bhalo...
er amar to er ek jon praner lok achhe vaskorjoty...or kabitao sundar..er or commant ..oho...
bhalo theko sobay...e sab i kabitar opor die just chok bulie jaoya comment...
ami kobe sayangsampunya hobo...anupam da...tomar oi kabita sotty amake boro pagol korechhe...e tuku moner kathya....
Na bolle ki bolbe paliye gelo? tahole ekta kotha boli! koyekta blog agey bolechhilam- Kobita Kobi likhechhen besh korechhen bakita day Pathoker! similarly ek jholoke kauke bhalo lagata ki bhalo laga noy! naki tar aga pashtola bishleshon korbo? Anupomollekhito protiti kaaj koreo ektu somoy kore likhe feli kobita! Tahole ki full timer aar part timer-er golpo hobe? Punch line holo kobitar sheshta jeta mone rakhte sahajyo kore kobitatake! sobgulo noy bishesh kichhu kobitar khetre to obosyoi! tobe ota hoyto otinatokiyo bhasha hoye gelo! ki kori seta niyeo chorcha korte hoy je!
Nindukera tai bolbe hoyto nijer dhak petachchhi! seta to dosher noy! naki? atleast professional PR rekhe korchhi naa hoyto! aar kobitar bhalo laga kharap laga?
ekta gari jokhon gorgoriye cholte shuru kore seta gontobye thik moto pouchhole jatri-r bhalo lage naa pouchhole noy! ami hoyto Teli para jabo gari jabe gorpar! tai gorparer jatrir bhalo lagbe amar noy! alada alada manush!
Gurutwo kintu khub shoktishali kotha! amar comment kintu erokom noy je haoay chhere dilam lage tuk naa lage taak!
asole sei addikaler dorshokder moto mathe khela dekhte bosechhi Sehwager chhokka-o bhalo lage aar Dravid-er nischhidro defence! Keno? dutoi karjokori bole! alada kore jodi kono kobita daag katlo tahole seta bhalo laglo na hole to sei "Jol pore pata nore" tobe seta lekhao to sohoj noy!
Tobe Anupamer lekha amar bhalo lage bolei bar bar bolbo tomar kotha!
Abhishek jamon ekta Jim Courier marka innings khele jachchhe! outstanding noy kintu besh uchu maan dhore rekhechhe! Jey rokeya pore thake take pakhyoaj naam diyo! aha kaan aar jibher aram holo je! ki boli?
"agami rater kono smriti nei" kenona kabi aj rate mara jaben ba mara gachen.
"mongol groho theke... bhater thalay" alota mongol theke elo bole kichu palte galo bole mone holo na. ekti oparthibo bataboron toiri hote parto kintu kichui holo na, er theke sukanto bhattacharjer purnima chand jeno jhalsano ruti onek beshi sabolil o onek beshi adhunik. sutorang kobi purono somoyke kichumatro erate paren ni, periye to jetei paren ni .
"mone hoy..rastara..chander.....sukiye jaoya nodi."- ekti balkhillo metafore hoye dariyeche matro. tar baire er extra kono abedan nei.
repeatation of first line. kobi obak holen. bissito holen. keno holen? kobi ki tar mrittu sommonhe besh tanaporene achen? keno? taNr to thakar kotha noy. kenona tini to ekti sombhabbotar kotha bolchen. jodi linetike assertive sentence e palte nei tahole er ortho daray tini agami rater kotha mone korte parchen. parle khub bhalo,kenona kobi to bhobhissodrasta... tini ultimatly na-asatakeo dekhte paren. eti ekti chirachorito sotto.er modhhye ki notun kichu ache?
"biporit golardhe.......prithibir sesh!" na boleo kobi 'tumi' ke identify kore felechen. tumi to tumi i. er baire amio kichu khuNje pacchina je ese hat barabe ar bolbe amar mrittur jonno tumi opekkhya koro.... kobi tar kache final ebong unique. sutorang kono mystry nei. mystry ta toiri holo na to.
at last (02/04/2008 rat 2:10 kobita asrom august '08 e prokashito) information that the piece has already been published. kobir sob kobitai kothao na kothao chepe berieche. khub bhalo to. kenona tNar sob lekhai chapa hoy. tar por? notun ebong oprokashito lekha kothay? naki kobi janie dicchen tini age kobita chapan, kenona tar lekha na chepe keu thakte pare na, tarpor tini dite hobe tai post koren.amra apluto hoi. bah boli. sotti boli.
seshe boli notun lekha dao, ebong 'notun lekha' dao.
N.B.ami kobita niye bhabi ,pai, search kori, explor kori, bodle jete chai, tobe highlight korte chai na. amar lekha khub ekta chapa hoy na. tai post korte bhalo lage. ar ami lekhar bodole khub beshi search kori kichu unexpected er. apni /apnarao korchen asha kori.
keu eto step by step keha porle to valo lagei kintu anno kobira ki dos korlo? r montobber por jobabata? proman korlo ota pathoker noi , ek kobi protihingsa theke likhlen... anupam da kharap lagchhe amar jonno eto valo blog a faltu byapar holo. sobaito avisek hoyna... apni amar kobitay kichhui khuje pelen na , hotas holen . vobissote amar kono lekha apnar valo lagle ami khusi hobo. Kintu ekjon doctor Jodi ekti meyer sorir chhoy tukro kore hotas hoy , kothao mon angota nei bole thole rugi ki kore bolunto?
Ekhon “srijato” marka namer jug jani. Kintu esob khetre amar traditional hote valo lage. Rabindranath der moto namer age “sri” ebong kobitar niche date& time dite valo lage tate nijer lekhar kromoporiborton ta bojha jai, agrogoti pichhiye pora(nijeri sapekkhe) dhora jai. R ami sompadok. Ekhane lekhe emon aneker lekha valo legechhe kintu chaite giye jenechhi prokasito. Sei ek vul amar khetre jate na ghote tar jonno potrikar nam ullekh kori. Apnader uddhar kore dita noy. Lokkho korben ekhane amar prokasito kobitar 80% lekha duende te prokasito. Ota amar kagoj. Somosto kagoje amar lekha chhapa hoy na . des, kobisommelon,krittibas,kourob a amar lekha dekhte pan? Karon ami die na …besi likhte parina tai…na jene bolar jonne ekta kotha bole dilen seta ki thik holo? R notun lekhar kotha bolchhen? Sunya dosoker kobi. Little mag a prokasito lekha gulo kojoner kachhe pouchhay? Ekhaner prokasito ektao lekha apni age kothao porechhen? Janina… anekei poreni. Erokom kobisomabes pele lekhgulo aro manuser kachhe pouchhe debone? Jara soytti sotti porbe, comment korbe..? editor to purono lekha dite baron korenni?
punoscho: manik da please "notun lekhar" proforma ta likhe deben , ami to jani na oto search nei... proforma pele nischoy likhe debo valo hok mondo hok...
bondhu , aamar lekha-t-te tumi shobder porimiti-r obhaab paechho shune interest jaaglo . maja laaglo . kaaron ekmaatro oi dosh-ta-e hoeto lekha-t-te thaakte paare na . bises kore je line tumi tulechho 'kaap jokhon thNoter dike egoy ' ... setate to proshnoi othe na .
it would be better tumi aamar lekhatake rewrite kore aamake ekbaar ei blog-er comment hisebe post kore daao .
I am eager to ... learn . haa haa haa ...
Bhaskarjyoti , aami jaani ebaarer header-er colour choice thik hoe ni . chhobita vaalo . kintu lekhaagulo porte dichhe naa . tobe aar koyek din porei to bodle jaabe .
tomaake header aanakte bolechhilaam . ki holo ?
Rochisnu Sanyal header anaakar jonne amar kaachhe taaka chaechhen . aamar pokkhe seta sombhob noe .
eminitei ei blog-er jonne somoy dite gie aamar nijer lekhaalekhi kome jaachhe . taarpor aabar taakaa !!
aar self-illustrated kobita ditei paaro . je keu paare . sob post-ei je aami illustration korbo emon noe . porer-ta-tei hoeto kono kobita-e chhobi thaakbe na . maane aamar kora .
anupam da byaktigoto vabe amar mane hoyni j kobita tay sobder byabohar atirikta hoyechhe kintu tomar uttorer poriprekkhite boli: amra prottekei kono na kono ranna kora khabar kheye motamot janai... kharap holei ki amra ranna kore dekhiye die valo ta? j ta ami randhte janina se bisoye ki ami kharap laga valo laga ba nun kom cheeni besi bolte parbona? tahole to kono kobita niei montobbo kora jay na...
mahavaroter asongoti dhora porle mahabharot ta likhte hoy.
bisoy ta apekkhik. pathok jeta bolechhe tar mone hoa, se kokhono bolena otai ses kotha. kobio j ta lekhe ses kotha noy. pathoker kal hoyto puro ultota mone hote pare, kobiro 5 bochhor por pathoker kothatai thik lagte pare!
tachhara ek jon tarun kobike tumi a jor ta korte parona karon se ekta making of process er moddhe die jachchhe , kau kei bodh hoy ei jor ta kora jay na karon prottekei oi processer moddhe die jachchhe...hya kono dirgokal dhore likhchhe emon kobi k abdar korai jai kintu tate se badhya noy, j mon kobio baddhya noy pathoker sob kotha mene nite . budhadev basu-r moto lok hole abosso age kobita ta edit kore die tarpor motamot ta dito...kintu setai ki sommaner hoto kobir pokkhe? ar kobi ki nijei prosno tulto na?
ami rannya tanna bhuji na...ami kabita bhuji...vbhujte chesta kori...vaskar o sourangsu,,...du jon key boli...kabita tar kothayo amar mone hoy ektuo o chandya patan hoi ni....sourangsu bolechhe kap jakhan thoter dike egoy..... eta je ki asdharan ekta egie jaoya ami ki boli...samastya chayara ki tar theke takhan sore jay na?....eta to ekta compress way...ekhane kothay asche sabder bahullyo?...er ekta bapper sobar janya...oi last line ta parun...jader kabita se bhabe touch korchhe na...tader boli bottom to top approach karun...nicher line sobar age pore agie jan...amar mone hoi na kathya gulo bhujte khub ektan asubidhya habe...ami anupam dar kabitar se orthey sathik pathok noi ...kintu ei kabitata amar visan priyo kabita....etukui...
manikdar byaper ta alada. ami onar kobita nie noy ekta approach nie ei bloger proti bolechhilam, j ta hoyto anek agei tomar bola uchit chhilo, kintu uni sei approach tar uttor na die hringso vabe amar kobita k akromon korlen ebong amay sms korlen: "bhaskar kamon achho?"...arthat tomar nischoy barota beje gechhe? amar kichhui bajeni. ebong uttore ami abaro onar approach niei bolechhi, amar kobitar alochona nie noy. foloto ami manikdar byapar ta khaini..niramish amish aschhe kothay?
2ndly kobir one to class hoy na jani kintu 11th poste aryanil dar kora montobya ja avisek k nie ta erokom : "abhishheker lekhaao garhe uThachhe naanaabhaabe, nijeke bhaa`Machhe, aabaar garhe uThachhe. abashyai naanaa kaagaje chhaapaar mata taar star, tabe or kabikRiti ekhan garhe uThachhe - ei samayTaa khub sensitive. ekhan taar mataamater beshee prayojan thaakaa uchi`t naa."...er uttore tumi amay bola one two-r toto dao ni keno? aviseker namer pase brakete to gore uthchhe lekha chhilo na . aryanil bhaskarer theke besi protishthito bolei ki? chheni kum dekhechhi ,darun. paa dekhini , dekhbo..
eta thik j sourangsu kobi na hole sudhu pathok hole eto techniqal kotha bolto na kintu, dujone randhuni holeo, hotei pare tumi j bises pod ti randhte paro ami parina . ebong swado byaktigoto. keu nun besi khay keu kom. eki khabare karo nun besi karo kom karo thik lagte pare. kintu ta bole rendhe dekhie dite hobe ami mante parchhina . amr swad alada bolei rendhe dileo tomar songe melar somvabona kom. ami sudhu bolte cheyechhi torun kobi anek poth jabe motamot bodlabe tar , aryanil dar kotha moto vangbe gorbe. sunil gongopaddhaya der motamot kintu ar khub besi bodlabe na . buddhadeb sera editor hote pare kintu potrikar, anyer lekhar noy. jodi tai hoy uni benche thakate sunil sonkho eder kobita lekhai uchit hoyni, uchit chhilo nijeder vabgulo onar kachhe bola ar vab anujayi onar kobita likhe deoa oder hoye. editing er hetu pata nosto totha gachher pran bachto onek gulo. astonirjon ei poste amar prothom commenter ekebare prothomei ami janie chhilam anupamdar lekhabisoye amar valo lagar kotha, ebong alochcho avijogtao amar kora noy. alochonata ar anupaamdar kobitatai atke nei, general hoye gechhe...ar amra to kobi , randhuni;khadok noy, sudhu valo lagata janie theme thakbo keno?
ek ekta kobita k ek ekta pod bolini, bolechhi dhoron ta k. jamon modhusudoner amrittakkhor ar arun mitrer goddo kobita. janina era eke apor k lekha sikhie dite parten kina.
rannar programe follow korte hoy na amar emnitei prochur khide, abosso petuker noy khadyo rosiker. kau k petuk bollam na kintu (mon theke bolchhi notomostoke) sudhu nije j petuk noy seta bollam r bollam oi tofat ta jani.
amio setai bolchhi sokolei vanga gorai achhe keu churanto noy. tobe tumi ranna ta sikhie dite bolechhile sourangsu k bujhte parini karon tumi khub confirm hobe nischit hoye differ korechhile kothatar r ek ta :"!" chhilo, jar artho sourangshu vul korchhe. hoyto vul e korechhe athoba kore ni ami seta bolini ami sudhu bolte cheyechhi karo kobita nie motamot dite ki age nijer khatay nijer moto kore kobita ta likhhe rakhte hobe? prosno ta tomake noy , abohoman kobita k. uttor ta ami janina , tobe ebar aro vabbo..prosongota amar anek upokar korlo. ami jotota sunechhi buddhadev basu KOBITA bondho korechhilen porobortider lekha ki likhchhe bujhte parchhilen na bole. joto jai bolo aj dur theke kintu aj uni ei kotha bolle amra notunotter torofe bidroho kortam.e khetre buddhodeb basur vanga gora theme giyechhilo mone hoy. eo jani sankho ghosher ekti kobitai na bole editing koray sonkho babu r kokhono lekhenni KOBITA-y. tomar songe amar fone hoya kotha anujaye "ebaar nischoi porer post kore felaa jae" kothata mone holo amake bolle. jodi tay hoy tobe montobbo kore post pichhie debar jonno ami khoma parthi. porerbar aro vebe chhinte comment korbo....BHASKAR
aar eto sohoj-e rege jaao keno !!! 'jodi tay hoy tobe montobbo kore post pichhie debar jonno ami khoma parthi. porerbar aro vebe chhinte comment korbo .' esob bolaar maane ki ? tumi ei blog-er editor . eta tomaar blog .
tumi to sorbodaai vebe chinte comment koro aami mone kori . naaki tomaar songe torko korle sob somoy tomaar katha mene nie torko ses korte hoe ?
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ei post-e kichhu illustration try koraa holo . sobguloi aamar koraa , manik-erta baad dile .
ReplyDeletekhub khaarap jodi laage ... kaan dhorchhi . aar hobe na .
khub sundor post abarer ta-- prothomei anupam ke illustration gulor jonno bahoba diy- khub bhalo hoyeche- ar kobita sotty bolte ki sab katai tader nijo nijo bhabe atotai sundor je alada bhabe bhalo bolar appekkha rakhe na
ReplyDeletetabe rangeet er lekhata akta sundor chobir mato hote parto kintu kothao aktu khapchara legeche-- puro post tai sundor
anupamdar rubaru agei para kabitata abasai valo suvendur kabitata valo tabe 3rd lintar use na hale kabitata aro sundar hato.
ReplyDeleteANUPADA ILLUSTRATION GULO MANDA NOY .
Illusration gulo darun........kobitaguloe alada matra jog korechhe....khuub bhalo laglo...
ReplyDeleteIllustration eshe blog aro shomriddhho hoye uthlo, eta choluk. Awgrojoder Kobita kothay? Otao thakuk na regular feature hoye
ReplyDeleteRumela Express, Bikalbelar kobita aar Nokh Durdanto!!
ReplyDeleteBakider modhye Anupam-er lekhata bhalo lage ni amar mane may be expectationta high chhilo gotobarer post=er por! Tobe punchlineta besh!
RItam besh laglo! Shubhendu Dolui bhaloi! Manick Sahar lekhati besh Striking. Bhaskarjyotir finishing sundor! Himaloy Jana Rajdip Ray motamuti legechhe!
Amar nijer lekhata- continuity-r obhab achhe! Tobe amar nijer lekhar style-er songe khap khay naa!
Illustration=er proyas besh bhalo! Kobita niye kotojon bhabchhe seta bhabar bishoy! bhebe bhaloi lagche kintu!
AK NISHWASE RANGIT....AVISKE....SOMNATH BHASKOJYOTI....RAJDIP...BHALO LAGLO
ReplyDeleteILLUSTRETION....BES LAGLO...PAGE DEKHTE MONOROM LAGCHE...BESTO THAKUK NA
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ReplyDeleterangiter utsorge "bondhunira" sobdota kane lagchhe. "vangaro nijeswo kichhu niyam thake"... "ma" k amra keu "babani" boli ki? soundorjer dik thekeo rinattok.. tobe rangit kobitar deho nie vabe..or kachhe juktita jante chaibo… apekkhikotar totto meneo bolchhi…
ReplyDeleteanupam da , ritam r himaloy dar lekha sobche valo laglo. ritam anupras byabohar korechhe..purono tool..kintu kobita ta porte giye sesob kheyal e thakena... "akas vangie nilo bohudur khuchro meghera" notun noy? kheyal na thakatai to safollo chinhito kore dilo...
suvendu babur vabnata khub valo. kintu sobdo byabohar durbar motoi aro songjoto hole, sonhoto hole darun hoto mone hoy... "ja kichhu anibarjo noy kobita theke bad porai uchit"..NABANITA DEVSEN
ReplyDeletehimalay dar sobdo byabohar darun.."ayna somoy"! jarking nei, mosrin...
sourangsur lekhao bes laglo.."besuro gan bilombita rage baje.."!kintu prosno, nijer lekha nie etoI Jodi avijog tobe blog a dilen keno? sobche nikhut lekhata ki "DES" a den? chief editor kichhu bolben? Atmosomalochona prokasse hole atmosomalochona thakena…atmoprochar hoye jay. Apnake gal dichchhina apni j eta bojhate cheyechhen j, apni anner lekhar moto nijer lekharo kora somalochok,seta jani… kintu bisoyta annovabeo dekha jay… ninduk hile ekhane apnar samne boltam na, pichhone sokoler kachhe boltam… apni vul bujhleo amar kono avijog thakbena…
manik dar lekhatao barbar tane, kintu apni koyekta post thekei dekhchhi nijer lekha highlight koren... keno? bemanan lage. ei poste apnar nijoswo highlighting poster alonkoron k apoman korechhe(jodio alonkoronta darun)...apni one of the editors, apnar r o sonjoto hoya uchit chhilo. anupamda bolle amra prottek kobi swolonkrita lekha joma dite pari… manikda apnakeo sourangsu k bola kothagulo bollam..ami kintu ninduk noy…
ReplyDeletesomnath ghosaler lekhatao bes valo.kintu nam ta communicate korte parlam na....eta amar joggoter ovab..hoteo pare nao pare…tai motamot tar aporibortonio noy…
anupam da alonkoron chhara r post hobena . tomar kobita sapekkhe chitra nirbachone chomok achhe. kintu prochchhoder chhobi anujayi text color bodlano dorkar chhilo. 2toi red. editorder nam ba contacts bojha jachchhe na...
Anupamda,Indranil Bakshi,Manik Saha,Ritam Sen aar Rajdip.....darun....
ReplyDeletechaer chaya nie to kau mathai ghamay na! take hoito talani bhebe nay....
ReplyDeleteei liner janya ami ero koyekjug na ghumie thakte pari...
rubaru te ami porechilam..ei kabita...ajo porlam....
ei avi amake bol bhai sonalo mane ki...adbhut...darun re..tor ager kabitatao amar oije rangin kagogkuchi prajapaty hoye mise jachhe batase...aha..toke bhalobasi felchhi yar...tor sei tar thekeo besi...(amader ramit kothay re beta..?)
himalay janar kabita ta boro bhalo...
er amar to er ek jon praner lok achhe vaskorjoty...or kabitao sundar..er or commant ..oho...
bhalo theko sobay...e sab i kabitar opor die just chok bulie jaoya comment...
ami kobe sayangsampunya hobo...anupam da...tomar oi kabita sotty amake boro pagol korechhe...e tuku moner kathya....
bhalo theko bandhura amar...astanirjan
anupam da tomar chabi ta emon ragi ragi holo keno ebar profile e?...
ReplyDeleteBhaskarjyotir proshner uttore boli-
ReplyDeletenijer lekhati notun kore dekhe jerokom laglo setai bollam! seta jodi atmo prochar mone hoy khoti nei! Ami setake kharap chokhe dekhi naa! tobe seta ekhane kora hoy ni nischinte thakun!
aasole Sauranshu , kobita kokhonoi vaalo laaga aar khaarap laaga-e aatke thaake ki ? thaaka ki sombhob ? e to aar aalukaabli noe , baa kaar-o chokh-e kono meye-r mukh baa buk-o noe .
ReplyDeletekeno vaalo laagchhe seta bolte paaro naa ? keno khaaraap laagchhe setaa to aar-o besi kore bolte hobe bhai !
naa hole kaar dae porechhe tomaar motaamot-k guritbo dite bolo ? aar kobita nie katha naa bolte paarle 2009 saale kobita lekha-r adhikar thaake na .
keno kobita likhchho tomaake bolte hobe Sauranshu . naa hole kobita naa likhe annyo kichhu koro .
samaj-sanskar ... daatobyo chikitsaa ... anaath ashrom ... onek vaalo vaalo kaaj koraar aachhe .
aar PUNCH LINE , FINISHING ... esob sbobdo kobe theke kobita-e elo bolo to Sauranshu ? erpor ki 'choreography ' baa 'stunt sequence' ... esob shobdo-o aasbee dhire dhire ?
ReplyDeletelet`s wait `n see .
Ki boli?
ReplyDeleteNa bolle ki bolbe paliye gelo? tahole ekta kotha boli! koyekta blog agey bolechhilam- Kobita Kobi likhechhen besh korechhen bakita day Pathoker! similarly ek jholoke kauke bhalo lagata ki bhalo laga noy! naki tar aga pashtola bishleshon korbo? Anupomollekhito protiti kaaj koreo ektu somoy kore likhe feli kobita! Tahole ki full timer aar part timer-er golpo hobe? Punch line holo kobitar sheshta jeta mone rakhte sahajyo kore kobitatake! sobgulo noy bishesh kichhu kobitar khetre to obosyoi! tobe ota hoyto otinatokiyo bhasha hoye gelo! ki kori seta niyeo chorcha korte hoy je!
Nindukera tai bolbe hoyto nijer dhak petachchhi! seta to dosher noy! naki? atleast professional PR rekhe korchhi naa hoyto! aar kobitar bhalo laga kharap laga?
ekta gari jokhon gorgoriye cholte shuru kore seta gontobye thik moto pouchhole jatri-r bhalo lage naa pouchhole noy! ami hoyto Teli para jabo gari jabe gorpar! tai gorparer jatrir bhalo lagbe amar noy! alada alada manush!
Gurutwo kintu khub shoktishali kotha! amar comment kintu erokom noy je haoay chhere dilam lage tuk naa lage taak!
asole sei addikaler dorshokder moto mathe khela dekhte bosechhi Sehwager chhokka-o bhalo lage aar Dravid-er nischhidro defence! Keno? dutoi karjokori bole! alada kore jodi kono kobita daag katlo tahole seta bhalo laglo na hole to sei "Jol pore pata nore" tobe seta lekhao to sohoj noy!
Jader lekha bhalo kharap bollam tader lekha describe korte kichhu shobdo jamon punchline etc byabohar korlam! tobe Blog sarbik bhabe bhalo! aar amar bodh buddhi niye amar nijer kachhei onek proshno roye gechhe! gNaiti marle kobitar moto kichhu beroy! hoy koyla na hole heere! secondtar opekkhay thaki! tokhon sobai milei dekhbo!
Likhte thakun! porte thaki sobai!
Anupamer kobitata niye ektu alga bhabe bole jai- shobder porimitir obhab laglo tai bolechhi! kaap jokhon thNoter dike egoy ebong ityadi! boddo byapti niye lekha je- bahulyo laglo! ektu chhNat kaat korlei kintu..........! abar notun kichhu sobder amdani!
ReplyDeleteTobe Anupamer lekha amar bhalo lage bolei bar bar bolbo tomar kotha!
Abhishek jamon ekta Jim Courier marka innings khele jachchhe! outstanding noy kintu besh uchu maan dhore rekhechhe! Jey rokeya pore thake take pakhyoaj naam diyo! aha kaan aar jibher aram holo je! ki boli?
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ReplyDelete"agami rater kono smriti nei" kenona kabi aj rate mara jaben ba mara gachen.
"mongol groho theke... bhater thalay" alota mongol theke elo bole kichu palte galo bole mone holo na. ekti oparthibo bataboron toiri hote parto kintu kichui holo na, er theke sukanto bhattacharjer purnima chand jeno jhalsano ruti onek beshi sabolil o onek beshi adhunik. sutorang kobi purono somoyke kichumatro erate paren ni, periye to jetei paren ni .
"mone hoy..rastara..chander.....sukiye jaoya nodi."- ekti balkhillo metafore hoye dariyeche matro. tar baire er extra kono abedan nei.
repeatation of first line. kobi obak holen. bissito holen. keno holen? kobi ki tar mrittu sommonhe besh tanaporene achen? keno? taNr to thakar kotha noy. kenona tini to ekti sombhabbotar kotha bolchen. jodi linetike assertive sentence e palte nei tahole er ortho daray tini agami rater kotha mone korte parchen. parle khub bhalo,kenona kobi to bhobhissodrasta... tini ultimatly na-asatakeo dekhte paren. eti ekti chirachorito sotto.er modhhye ki notun kichu ache?
"biporit golardhe.......prithibir sesh!" na boleo kobi 'tumi' ke identify kore felechen. tumi to tumi i. er baire amio kichu khuNje pacchina je ese hat barabe ar bolbe amar mrittur jonno tumi opekkhya koro.... kobi tar kache final ebong unique. sutorang kono mystry nei. mystry ta toiri holo na to.
at last
(02/04/2008
rat 2:10
kobita asrom august '08 e prokashito)
information that the piece has already been published. kobir sob kobitai kothao na kothao chepe berieche. khub bhalo to. kenona tNar sob lekhai chapa hoy. tar por? notun ebong oprokashito lekha kothay? naki kobi janie dicchen tini age kobita chapan, kenona tar lekha na chepe keu thakte pare na, tarpor tini dite hobe tai post koren.amra apluto hoi. bah boli. sotti boli.
seshe boli notun lekha dao, ebong 'notun lekha' dao.
N.B.ami kobita niye bhabi ,pai, search kori, explor kori, bodle jete chai, tobe highlight korte chai na. amar lekha khub ekta chapa hoy na. tai post korte bhalo lage. ar ami lekhar bodole khub beshi search kori kichu unexpected er. apni /apnarao korchen asha kori.
zen golpo: 2jon bouddho sonyasi nodi par hochchhen. 1jon meye pray dube mara jay r ki..bachao bachao chitkar! sanyasider to nari sporso baron? kintu 1st sanyasi bachalen! pothe 2nd sanyasir anoboroto prosno : apni narideho sporso korlen? apni narideho sporso korlen?! apni ...!!??!!
ReplyDelete2nd sanyasi: ami nodir parei meyetake chhere esechhi, tumi ekhono take mone bohon kore cholechho ...
manik da apnar motamot er uttor ta khuje neben...
apni pathok apnar motamot jamon echchha hote pare ,kintu kharap lagchhe eivebe j erokom vabe eto bristito vabe er age amar ebong karo kobita niei lekhenni, sokolei apnar motamot theke bonchito hoyechhi...
keu eto step by step keha porle to valo lagei kintu anno kobira ki dos korlo? r montobber por jobabata? proman korlo ota pathoker noi , ek kobi protihingsa theke likhlen... anupam da kharap lagchhe amar jonno eto valo blog a faltu byapar holo. sobaito avisek hoyna...
ReplyDeleteapni amar kobitay kichhui khuje pelen na , hotas holen . vobissote amar kono lekha apnar valo lagle ami khusi hobo. Kintu ekjon doctor Jodi ekti meyer sorir chhoy tukro kore hotas hoy , kothao mon angota nei bole thole rugi ki kore bolunto?
Ekhon “srijato” marka namer jug jani. Kintu esob khetre amar traditional hote valo lage. Rabindranath der moto namer age “sri” ebong kobitar niche date& time dite valo lage tate nijer lekhar kromoporiborton ta bojha jai, agrogoti pichhiye pora(nijeri sapekkhe) dhora jai. R ami sompadok. Ekhane lekhe emon aneker lekha valo legechhe kintu chaite giye jenechhi prokasito. Sei ek vul amar khetre jate na ghote tar jonno potrikar nam ullekh kori. Apnader uddhar kore dita noy. Lokkho korben ekhane amar prokasito kobitar 80% lekha duende te prokasito. Ota amar kagoj. Somosto kagoje amar lekha chhapa hoy na . des, kobisommelon,krittibas,kourob a amar lekha dekhte pan? Karon ami die na …besi likhte parina tai…na jene bolar jonne ekta kotha bole dilen seta ki thik holo? R notun lekhar kotha bolchhen? Sunya dosoker kobi. Little mag a prokasito lekha gulo kojoner kachhe pouchhay? Ekhaner prokasito ektao lekha apni age kothao porechhen? Janina… anekei poreni. Erokom kobisomabes pele lekhgulo aro manuser kachhe pouchhe debone? Jara soytti sotti porbe, comment korbe..? editor to purono lekha dite baron korenni?
ReplyDeleteApni kintu apnar nijesso alonkoroner kono uttor denni?
ReplyDeleteAnupam da tumio uttor dile na, ebar theke amra protteke ki swalonkrito lekha debo?
Sourangshu tumi aro ekbar amar commentta poro. Tumi atmo prochar korechho eta ami bolini. Seta ami jantam j tumi attoprochar korchhona? Tumi bolo bisoyta ki prosnohin chhilo? Ami jani nijer khatay r anek lekhar majhkhene nijeri lekha porle anek parthokyo ghote jay. Print mediar khetre besi hoy. Tomar lekhata justified . kintu janar por confirm holam aro. Anupam da jane nijer lekha nijei somalochona korar pokkhe ami anupam dar songe koto kotha boli…dekho valo bolar loker to avab nei…erie jabar sobche boro brombrastho holo valo bola…comment korle valovabe kori, erie jete parina…anyway tomar Jodi kharap lage ami khoma parthi, kintu sunyo dosoke nijei somalochona korata alochonar bisoy hote parto…hoye gelo nindukotar bisoy…bloger sbai k sorry…kintu tumi ei j agavage nijer lekha nie comment kore bosle tomar mone hoyna pathoker comment korar jouktikota harie jay…karon ki likhechhe soyong kobir theke valo keu janena.
kau k byakti goto aghat dite chaini kokhono. gota bloger kachhe khoma chaichhi...r manik da apni to boyose amar theke boro parle khoma kore deben r apnar lekha valo lage. jodi mone hoy amar asot uddesso nei arthat apnake apluto korte chaichhina tobe duende te lekha pathaben, ekhane lekha somosto kobir nimotron roilo duende te lekhar(9432161943).
ReplyDeletebondhutter mrittu nei; punorjonmo achh...manikda sourangsu amader bondhutter jano jonmo punorjonmo hoy....
anupam da ami kintu duende k promote korte byabohar korlam na blog, tobu jodi mone hoy tiroskar korben mathapete nebo...amar torofe sokoler dike barie deoa ota bondhutter hat, kobitar hat chhara r kiseri ba eto sottikarer hat achhe barie debar?
punoscho: manik da please "notun lekhar" proforma ta likhe deben , ami to jani na oto search nei... proforma pele nischoy likhe debo valo hok mondo hok...
ReplyDeleteBhaskarjyoti,
ReplyDeletekkhoma toma kottheke ase? ekhane to alochona hochchhe Kobita sombondhe! tai alada kore byaktigoto alochonar gondho pelam naa! nishchinte thako!
aar sotyi bolte ki amar porashuno aro kom! majhe sajhe hatre berano aar ki! cholte thakuk lekha pora ebong ghosha maja!
prothom-e Sauranshu .
ReplyDeletebondhu , aamar lekha-t-te tumi shobder porimiti-r obhaab paechho shune interest jaaglo . maja laaglo . kaaron ekmaatro oi dosh-ta-e hoeto lekha-t-te thaakte paare na . bises kore je line tumi tulechho 'kaap jokhon thNoter dike egoy ' ... setate to proshnoi othe na .
it would be better tumi aamar lekhatake rewrite kore aamake ekbaar ei blog-er comment hisebe post kore daao .
I am eager to ... learn . haa haa haa ...
Bhaskarjyoti , aami jaani ebaarer header-er colour choice thik hoe ni . chhobita vaalo . kintu lekhaagulo porte dichhe naa . tobe aar koyek din porei to bodle jaabe .
tomaake header aanakte bolechhilaam . ki holo ?
Rochisnu Sanyal header anaakar jonne amar kaachhe taaka chaechhen . aamar pokkhe seta sombhob noe .
eminitei ei blog-er jonne somoy dite gie aamar nijer lekhaalekhi kome jaachhe . taarpor aabar taakaa !!
aar self-illustrated kobita ditei paaro . je keu paare . sob post-ei je aami illustration korbo emon noe . porer-ta-tei hoeto kono kobita-e chhobi thaakbe na . maane aamar kora .
Anupam,
ReplyDeleteAmar motamot ami diyechhi seta tomar songe milte nao pare! otoebo we may agree to disagree on this point!
sure . kintu ektaa kobita-e kothae shobder byabohaar otirikto hoechhe seta jodi tumi jaano , taahole sei lekhaatake nije edit kore dekhaate paarbe na !
ReplyDeleteanupam da byaktigoto vabe amar mane hoyni j kobita tay sobder byabohar atirikta hoyechhe kintu tomar uttorer poriprekkhite boli: amra prottekei kono na kono ranna kora khabar kheye motamot janai... kharap holei ki amra ranna kore dekhiye die valo ta? j ta ami randhte janina se bisoye ki ami kharap laga valo laga ba nun kom cheeni besi bolte parbona? tahole to kono kobita niei montobbo kora jay na...
ReplyDeletemahavaroter asongoti dhora porle mahabharot ta likhte hoy.
bisoy ta apekkhik. pathok jeta bolechhe tar mone hoa, se kokhono bolena otai ses kotha. kobio j ta lekhe ses kotha noy. pathoker kal hoyto puro ultota mone hote pare, kobiro 5 bochhor por pathoker kothatai thik lagte pare!
tachhara ek jon tarun kobike tumi a jor ta korte parona karon se ekta making of process er moddhe die jachchhe , kau kei bodh hoy ei jor ta kora jay na karon prottekei oi processer moddhe die jachchhe...hya kono dirgokal dhore likhchhe emon kobi k abdar korai jai kintu tate se badhya noy, j mon kobio baddhya noy pathoker sob kotha mene nite .
budhadev basu-r moto lok hole abosso age kobita ta edit kore die tarpor motamot ta dito...kintu setai ki sommaner hoto kobir pokkhe? ar kobi ki nijei prosno tulto na?
aamr ae bloger sob kobita i darn lahache;er theke beshi kotha na bole aami roj ashe pori..shdu pore jaii...eta i aamr jibon bneche thaka...
ReplyDeleteanupamda darun hochee
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may i come in? dhonnyobaad. sorry, deri hoye gyalo ektu (naki anekta?).
ReplyDeletebhaskarjyoti
ReplyDeleteprothom katha Sauransu ekhaane 'khaadok' noe , se nijei ekjon 'rnaadhuni' . taar 'raanna' koraa ektaa 'khaabaar' ekhaanei ek-e table-e poribeshito hoechhe . aarekta raanna , jeta ghotonaachokre aamar koraa , taar vaalo laage ni . se bolchhe 'moshlaa' besi hoe gechhe . it is expected se nije ekbaar rnedhe dekhie debe swaadta sotti-e aar-o vaalo hote paarto .
aami Sauransu-r raanaaghorta dekhte chaaichhilaam . haa haa haa ... or songei dhuktaam .
etaa ekta ghotonaa ei blog-e keu khete aase na . sokolei raanna kore dekhaate aase . aamra sei raanna nie katha boli . etaa aalochonar jaega . kintu aalochona korte hole jukti dekhaate hoe . setaa aami prothom-e Sauranshu-r kaachhe chaechhilaam .
ekjon bollo khete khaarap hoechhe . rnaadhuni jaante chaaibe na keno ? taar chaakri thakbe taahole ?
kobi-r kono tarun-tarun hoe na bhaskar . 'ei kobi claas three' , 'ei kobi madhyamik dichhen' , 'ei kobi post-graduate' ... esob ki khaeal raakhte hoe naaki !
aamar kaachhe Sauransu aar Sunil Gangopadhyay-er kono difference nei . kobita-r tolaae ki kobir boyos ullekh korbo ebaar ? kotaa boi likhechhen jene ki tnaar songe torko korte hobe ? tnaake chhaar dite hobe ? tarun kobi-r ashikkhito holeo chole ?
ses katha : aami Sauransu-r songe kobi hisebe katha bolechhi , nichhok paathok hisebe boli ni . ekjon kobi aarekjon kobi-r kaachhe jaante chaaite paare na kivaabe taar kobitata edit kora jete paare !!!!!
kobider moddhe kobita-r aalochonaa ki eto niraamis hote paare bhai ? tumi Manik-er montobye niraamis thaakte paarle ki ?
Zia , it's never late when you are going to enter your own home .
ReplyDeletewelcome , man !
aar bhaskar
ReplyDeleteBuddhadeb Basu jetaa korten aamar mone hoe thik korten . he was , and still he is , the greatest editor ever born in our literature .
rnaadhuni-ra nijeder moddhe khaadok-der vaasae noe , rnaadhuni-der vaasae katha bole . taai naa ? aamader etaa dining place noe , etaa ektaa kitchen . aamara ek-e oporer raanna taste korchhi . shikhchhi .
Amitabh Bachchan-er CHINI KUM dekhechhile ?
PAA dekhechho ? it's fantastic .
ami rannya tanna bhuji na...ami kabita bhuji...vbhujte chesta kori...vaskar o sourangsu,,...du jon key boli...kabita tar kothayo amar mone hoy ektuo o chandya patan hoi ni....sourangsu bolechhe kap jakhan thoter dike egoy.....
ReplyDeleteeta je ki asdharan ekta egie jaoya ami ki boli...samastya chayara ki tar theke takhan sore jay na?....eta to ekta compress way...ekhane kothay asche sabder bahullyo?...er ekta bapper sobar janya...oi last line ta parun...jader kabita se bhabe touch korchhe na...tader boli bottom to top approach karun...nicher line sobar age pore agie jan...amar mone hoi na kathya gulo bhujte khub ektan asubidhya habe...ami anupam dar kabitar se orthey sathik pathok noi ...kintu ei kabitata amar visan priyo kabita....etukui...
manikdar byaper ta alada. ami onar kobita nie noy ekta approach nie ei bloger proti bolechhilam, j ta hoyto anek agei tomar bola uchit chhilo, kintu uni sei approach tar uttor na die hringso vabe amar kobita k akromon korlen ebong amay sms korlen: "bhaskar kamon achho?"...arthat tomar nischoy barota beje gechhe?
ReplyDeleteamar kichhui bajeni. ebong uttore ami abaro onar approach niei bolechhi, amar kobitar alochona nie noy. foloto ami manikdar byapar ta khaini..niramish amish aschhe kothay?
2ndly kobir one to class hoy na jani kintu 11th poste aryanil dar kora montobya ja avisek k nie ta erokom : "abhishheker lekhaao garhe uThachhe naanaabhaabe, nijeke bhaa`Machhe, aabaar garhe uThachhe. abashyai naanaa kaagaje chhaapaar mata taar star, tabe or kabikRiti ekhan garhe uThachhe - ei samayTaa khub sensitive. ekhan taar mataamater beshee prayojan thaakaa uchi`t naa."...er uttore tumi amay bola one two-r toto dao ni keno? aviseker namer pase brakete to gore uthchhe lekha chhilo na . aryanil bhaskarer theke besi protishthito bolei ki?
ReplyDeletechheni kum dekhechhi ,darun. paa dekhini , dekhbo..
eta thik j sourangsu kobi na hole sudhu pathok hole eto techniqal kotha bolto na kintu, dujone randhuni holeo, hotei pare tumi j bises pod ti randhte paro ami parina . ebong swado byaktigoto. keu nun besi khay keu kom. eki khabare karo nun besi karo kom karo thik lagte pare. kintu ta bole rendhe dekhie dite hobe ami mante parchhina . amr swad alada bolei rendhe dileo tomar songe melar somvabona kom.
ReplyDeleteami sudhu bolte cheyechhi torun kobi anek poth jabe motamot bodlabe tar , aryanil dar kotha moto vangbe gorbe. sunil gongopaddhaya der motamot kintu ar khub besi bodlabe na .
buddhadeb sera editor hote pare kintu potrikar, anyer lekhar noy. jodi tai hoy uni benche thakate sunil sonkho eder kobita lekhai uchit hoyni, uchit chhilo nijeder vabgulo onar kachhe bola ar vab anujayi onar kobita likhe deoa oder hoye. editing er hetu pata nosto totha gachher pran bachto onek gulo.
astonirjon ei poste amar prothom commenter ekebare prothomei ami janie chhilam anupamdar lekhabisoye amar valo lagar kotha, ebong alochcho avijogtao amar kora noy. alochonata ar anupaamdar kobitatai atke nei, general hoye gechhe...ar amra to kobi , randhuni;khadok noy, sudhu valo lagata janie theme thakbo keno?
Bhaskar
ReplyDeleteAryanilda aamar dada-r moto . kintu tini jeta bolechhen setaai churaanto emon kono byapaar amar konokaale nei . tokhon protibaad korini . koraar proyojon hoeni . kaaron uni thik bolechhilen . Avisek ektaa process-er moddhe aachhe . aar ... setaa aamra sokolei kombesi aachhi . tumi nije nei ?
je kono kobi saaraajibon ei process-er moddhe thaaken . Aryanil-o aachhen . aami-o aachhi . Alok Sarkar-o aachhen . mrityu porjonto ekjon prokrito kobi nijekei vaangte vaangte cholen . taai ... aabar bolchhi tarun kobi bole kichhu hoe na . kobi totokhon-e jyanto , jotokhon tini tarun . prabin kobi= mrito kobi . aar ... kobi-r kono dada nei .
aar ... purotai tumi vul bujhechho . ami Sauransu-k 'rNedhe dekhie dite' bolini . aami oke 'rnedhe shikhie dite ' bolechhi . tumi bolchho 'dujone randhuni holeo, hotei pare tumi j bises pod ti randhte paro ami parina .' kintu setaa jodi hoe , taahole ekjon vaalo rnaadhuni noe bujhte hobe . se ekbaar dekhei ekta raanna-r chmisty bujhe nebe .
tumi tv-te raannar prgramme-gulo follow koro ki ? aami kori . ote khide vaalo hoe .
aar aalaada aalaada kobita-k tumi aalaada aalaadaa pod mone koro naaki ! sorbonaash !!!
ekjon kobi taahole ekti kobita likhbe mangser jhol , porer kobitati chaatni , porerti pnaapor ... ekjon jodi pnaapor shnekte paare , kintu maangser jhol rnaadhte naa paare , taaholeo taake kobi bolaa jaabe ? bolaa jaabe taahole ?
aar Buddhadeb somporke tomaar katha-r uttore jaanaai : tumi ki jaano KABITA potrika tokhn-e uni bondho korechhilen jokhon bujhechhilen porer projonmo ( Sunil < Sakti ) ese gechhe , ebong tnaar din furiechhe ? setaa uni swikaar kore gechhen . kaaron uni Buddhadeb Basu .
aar ses-e tumi jaa bolle aami sudhu etukui chaechhilaam Sauransu-r kaach theke : 'ar amra to kobi , randhuni;khadok noy, sudhu valo lagata janie theme thakbo keno?'
etaai to aami bolechhilaam !! tumi eto torko kore setaai to bolle bhai . anyo katha bolaar kichhu nei aasole .
aamar CHHAYA kobita niye aamraa ektu chhaya-r songe kusti kore fellaam .
ebaar nischoi porer post kore felaa jae . Avisek ekhon-o kobita dae ni . porer post-e bes kichhu khub vaalo kobitaa aachhe . aami kichhu illustration korechhi aabaar . ei post theke saahos pae .
ReplyDeletekichhu natun mukh dekhaa jaabe porer post-e .
Ekta chhotto ghotona diye shesh kori:
ReplyDeletebochor 9ek ager kotha Stri-r songe kotha katakati-table chapralam aar sodyo ranna kora doi pona gelo ulte- gnosa korlen khaben naa1 robbarer dupure boi dekhe ranna shikhe doipona rNadhlam! khete boslam 3.30-e totokkhone gNosha janla diye baire beriye gechhe!
Anupam amar theke boyose kom holeo kobi hisabe onek doro! porer post=er opekkhay!
ek ekta kobita k ek ekta pod bolini, bolechhi dhoron ta k. jamon modhusudoner amrittakkhor ar arun mitrer goddo kobita. janina era eke apor k lekha sikhie dite parten kina.
ReplyDeleterannar programe follow korte hoy na amar emnitei prochur khide, abosso petuker noy khadyo rosiker. kau k petuk bollam na kintu (mon theke bolchhi notomostoke) sudhu nije j petuk noy seta bollam r bollam oi tofat ta jani.
amio setai bolchhi sokolei vanga gorai achhe keu churanto noy. tobe tumi ranna ta sikhie dite bolechhile sourangsu k bujhte parini karon tumi khub confirm hobe nischit hoye differ korechhile kothatar r ek ta :"!" chhilo, jar artho sourangshu vul korchhe. hoyto vul e korechhe athoba kore ni ami seta bolini ami sudhu bolte cheyechhi karo kobita nie motamot dite ki age nijer khatay nijer moto kore kobita ta likhhe rakhte hobe? prosno ta tomake noy , abohoman kobita k. uttor ta ami janina , tobe ebar aro vabbo..prosongota amar anek upokar korlo.
ami jotota sunechhi buddhadev basu KOBITA bondho korechhilen porobortider lekha ki likhchhe bujhte parchhilen na bole. joto jai bolo aj dur theke kintu aj uni ei kotha bolle amra notunotter torofe bidroho kortam.e khetre buddhodeb basur vanga gora theme giyechhilo mone hoy. eo jani sankho ghosher ekti kobitai na bole editing koray sonkho babu r kokhono lekhenni KOBITA-y.
tomar songe amar fone hoya kotha anujaye "ebaar nischoi porer post kore felaa jae" kothata mone holo amake bolle. jodi tay hoy tobe montobbo kore post pichhie debar jonno ami khoma parthi. porerbar aro vebe chhinte comment korbo....BHASKAR
bhai bhaskar ,
ReplyDeleteaabaar tumi setaai bolle jetaa aami aagei bolechhilaam . ektaa laav holo . blog-e comment onek bere gelo .
Arun Mitra amitrakkhor likhte jaaben keno ! kintu tini jodi Madhubabu-k bolten ,
' Amitrakkhor evabe lekhaa hoe na . aapnaar kichhu excess theke jachhe .' tokhon Madhu nischoi jaante chaiten , ' taai !! ektu dekhie din na kothae ! aamar ki chhondota thik shekhaa hoe ni bolchen ?'
aami jodi comment kortaam ,' Bhaskar-er lekha-e kichhu shobdo aamar baarti mone hoechhe .' tumi ki jaante chaaite na kothae seta hoechhe ? bolte na ?
tumi eto katha ki nie bolle , ki nie torko korle ... aami bujhte paarlaam na .
and yes . aami nischit chhilaam Sauransu vul korchhe . etuku nischit naa hole Sauransu-r comment-er por aami vaabte bostaam kobitata aami likhte pari kina .
aar erpor-o tumi jodi torko korte chaao ... hoeto chaao ... aami aar chaai na .
aar eto sohoj-e rege jaao keno !!! 'jodi tay hoy tobe montobbo kore post pichhie debar jonno ami khoma parthi. porerbar aro vebe chhinte comment korbo .' esob bolaar maane ki ? tumi ei blog-er editor . eta tomaar blog .
tumi to sorbodaai vebe chinte comment koro aami mone kori . naaki tomaar songe torko korle sob somoy tomaar katha mene nie torko ses korte hoe ?
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