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  1. ei prothom ekti guchho chhaapa holo . porer post-e hoeto Avisek-er ekti thaakbe .

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  2. akta comment sudhu astronirjoner jonno na korle kobita take choto kora hobe- asadharon-- puro blog e amar byaktigato bhabe mone hoyeche ato sabolil abong sampurno lekha bodhhay aitai-- likhe ja sanju-- durdanto--

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  3. baki lekhar moddhe-- ripan arjo er lekha besh bhalo legeche-- avir lekhao bhalo--r manik er 2nd lekhata besh anekbar porte icche holo

    tabe bhaskar tor abarer lekhata kintu tor lekhar style theke beriye likhechis bole mone holo kintu khub bhalo lageni- asole tor anek bhalo bhalo lekha ar age porechi tai bodhhay aktu beshi chahida ta theke geche

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  4. RIPAN ARYA aamar khub priyo kobi . aamar style-er sobchaaite boro aatmio o-e .

    kabisammelan-er august sankhya-e Dhruba Aesh-er kabyogrontho EI SHOB DINRAATRI ( ei SHOB= DEADBODY) aami review korechhilam . lokkhyo koraar bisoe : kabisammelan-er oct-nov sankhya-e o SOB ebong SHOB-er punning aabar byabohaar korlo Ripan .

    etaa proyojon . evaabei aamader songe opaar bangla-r kobider souhaardyo gore uthbe . seta ei blog-er-o uddyeshyo . ei post-e-o 2 jon opaar bangla-r kobi likhechhe . e byapaare mul bhumika Avisek-er .

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  5. majul hasan er mahadud simantya eder dujoner lekhay amake sparsya korechhe. eder ei vasa ...tar bistar er sabdyachayan e visan amar chena...oi je ami adigantya ekta gramer chele....ei sabdya setur sathe tai amar chena bahudin er...msjul jskhan lekhen garbityo goldfisher jharnar jale dim pere jabar kathya...er palok judhheyr katha...amar bhalo lage...uni jakhan bolen ...bristi hoi tetulbarna eka...aha ...amar mone pore jai...onekdin ager hatat ekta bristir dupur....er ami er kachi(amar paser barir oti hatadaridra paribarer tin no meye)...tetul bichi koruie intupintu khelbo...sei udessey ese chup kore darie achhi bristir jharikata patar nichhe...bristy hoi tetulbarnya eka...sei din prathyam ami kachir ekdam na otha buk muthyo kore dhorechilam...mone achhe..er o bolechhilo ..e sab korle sarir kharap kore...

    ottyopor ki unmadray i bhalo basi bajate pare?...ha...pare....

    mahadud er kabitatao visan sparsya moi...khora rod..vor laga ma o meyer chok...babake pother more egie deoyar vor..er basi ruty gulor fire asay...ki je sram...klanty er varotbarser onekta chera manchitryo dhara achhe....konodin amra dekhboi na...vikhiri...besya...eder nie kabita likhbo....kintu pagol...e janmey jeno vikiri na hote hoi bhagaban...
    mahadud er kabitata porte porte debdas achrjya er manuser murty boi tar kathya badda mone pore jachhilo...apni ki boita porechhen mehedud bhai...asadharan...


    er?
    ei blog ta amar ekta sayaong sampurnya blog mone hoyechhe...sab kata kabitay asadharan...kothao na kothao...biggapon biroty chaibo na...kintu fire asbo er sab kabitar kathya bolar janya...astanirjon

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  6. aaj sob kobitagulo porlam....Anupamdar asamanyo kobitata diye shuru haoae chahidata khub bere gechhilo...jodio poroborti lekhagulo totota chhuNte parlona...Astanirjondar kobita besh laglo..Ripon,Ramitda,Manikda aar Rangeet-er lekhao bhalo laglo,jodio oder theke ja expectations seta kintu puron holona,jodio lekhagulo khub bhalo kintu onader eto bhalo bhalo kichhu lekha porechhi je chahidata boddo bere gechhe,eta kintu onaderii dosh...S.S.Nag besh bhalo...Bhaskar-er ei lekhata kintu amay sebhabe chhuNte pareni,er theke onek onek bhalo lekha Bhaskar likhechhe....

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  7. Majul Hasan du'to asamanyo kobita porar sujog kore diyechhen amader....khuub bhalo laglo,onar aaro lekha porte chai...Mahmud Simanto-er Sokal kobitati aar ekti asamanyo kobita,mugdho korlo....onader onek dhonyobad amader blog ke somriddho korar jonyo...

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  8. sabda na artha kabitar khetre konta besi jaruri?

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  9. abhishek mondo naa! wripon arya obosyoi bhalo! Manik Sahar kobitao bhlao legechhe!


    Aar shesh paragraphta thak ekjoner jonyo sudhu!!


    Anupam!!

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  10. subhankar

    tumi hoeto jaante chaaichho SHOBDER ORTHOGUN naa SHOBDER DHWONIGUN !

    SHOBDO-K TAAR PROCHOLITO ORTHER BAAIRE BYABOHAAR KORAATA KOBIR PRAAKRIKITIK KAAJ . otaa naa hole kobita hoe na . poddyo hote paare .

    ortho-k oswikaar koraar maane hoe naa . se kono na konovaabe thekei jaae . procholoner baaaire .

    aar dhwonigun ! SHOBDER DHWONIGUN-K KAAJE LAAGATE PAAREN EKMAATRO KONO DIKKHITO KOBI . aar seta dhorte paaren ekmaatro ekjon shikkhito paathok .

    shobder ortho shobder baaire thaake na . vitore thaake . dhwonigun-e taar orthogun-k nirupito kore .

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  11. aaj Ripon Arya-er lekha niye kichhu bolte ichhe korchhe....odbhutbhabe jokhon prothom kobitagulo pora shuru kori tokhon Anupamdar dirgho kobitata porte porte bujhteo parini poroborti kobitata Ripon-er lekha...style-e eto mil!!!,pore jokhon kobir naam dekhi,chomke uthi,karon lekhok-er naamta bhebechhilam Anupam Mukhopadhyay....Ripon er lekhata besh,kintu koekta line besh durbol mone holo jemon 'tumi bhalomanush kintu protishthito byabsayi/somporkoguloteo byabsa chalachhe'...bhalo lageni lineta ekebarei,Ripon-er moto kobir kachh theke amader chahida onek beshi thake...jodio sesh lineta osamanyo,mugdho kore diyechhe amay...aar 'honchot khaoa samle nichhe poroborti hoNchot' darun...kintu borobeshi Anupamgondhi noy ki....jara Anupamdar lekha porechhen tader kintu ei khotkata lagtei pare...

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  12. Astanirjon Dutta-er lekhae ekta Haiku-er soundorjo achhe bole mone hoy....eto alpo kothae eto kichhu bole jaoa....

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  13. ASTANIRJAN DUTTA-r KOBITA

    Tumi thik bolechho Avisek . Astanirjan-er kobita haiku mone korie dae . kintu aakkhorik orthe noe .

    Haiku-r ekta shorto holo KARJO EBONG KAARONER MODDHE PORINOTI ESE PORBE . seta o mene chole na . cholaar katha-o noe .

    Or kobita sohoj sorol riju ebong gohin . taa rikto . taa aishyoryomoy . taa noshwor . taa rohosyomoy . baarti ekta shobdo-o sekhaane nei .

    Songhoto kobita . haiku noe .

    O shobdo-k orthogun-e byabohaar kore . dhwonigun-er dike taakae na . ekhaane ektu viable oke keu chhnute paarbe na bangle kobita-e .

    tobe ei muhurte bangla kobita nie aar katha na bolaai vaalo . shikkhito paathok kaake bole kichhudin por hoeto vule jete hobe aamader . aar dikkhito kobi ...

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  14. sochorachor kobita pathiye aami r mone rakte pari na. aaj kemon kore jeno dekha holo. kew kew aamer kobitar prosongsa korecen, valo laglo, kew hoyto somalochona, valo laglo, mone holo bece aachi. -------Majul Hassan, Dhaka.
    majulhassan@gmail.com

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