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Avisek ! hats off , man !!! aami sref aamar tupi khullaam tor jonne !
ReplyDeleteaaj tui aamar bhai holi . ki likhechhis re !
offf!!!!!
Bakigulo pore pore somoy moto mot debo kintu duti udhriti:
ReplyDeleteamra mane bohubochone bhenge giechhi ami bohumone aar dupure to rashta ghat fNakai thake
Metro-r sei khNa khNa suronger kotha to amra bhulei giyechhilam!
porer kotha pore bolchhi!
anupam da amaro mane hoy eto taratari jokhon post hochchhe kobita kom thakuk. 10ta enough. sudhu valo legechhe sudhu valo lageni typer comments noy, ager poste anupamdar kobita nie astonirjon jamon motamot diechhe tamon bistarito motamot aro besi pele valo lagbe. kobitar songe gulie jaoa amader aviggata gulo jodi bolte pari...
ReplyDeleteuporer painting ta kar go? nam ullekh korona keno prochchhod silpider? kobi o sampadokder nam to bes lekha thake..?
ekhane paoa comments anno j kono boro potrikar chheye anek besi guruttopurno hote pare, karon boroboro kagojer moto ekhane comments sensor korar sujog nei sompadoker...
r karo jodi nam ullekh kore somalochona korar asubidha thake(1000 ta karon thakte pare seta aparadh noy) anonymous hisabe comment kore nam ta na ullekh korlei hoy... bipokkhe comment holeo lav akher kobi o pathokeri hobe...
dorkar hole keukeu 1ta kobita nie comment korun bistarito vabe...
souvik bandopadhyay er kobita amar valo lageni.....
ReplyDeleteanupam mukhopadhyay je osadharon kobi seta aro ekbar mone holo kobita ti porhe,,
sourangshur kobita valo lageni..
avishek osadharon ekti kobita likheche..
mrigankor kobita valo lageni..
manik saha r kobita osadharon..
jayshila guha bagchi darun
arindam roy, avrapratim nag, somnath ghoshal darun..
avijit berar kobita valo lageni..
ripon fio to osadharon lekhei...
vaskarjyoti valo somalochona korar porei erokom ekta post korata bodh hoy onuchit holo:)
sorry
:)
ReplyDeleteamar kobita amar valo legeche, Avishek-er kobita khub valo, Manik awsadharon.
Prochhod-ti kaar? awsadharon prochhod.International look and feel..
thanx ritam.chesta korbo porer post e aro vaalo kichhu dite jate vaalo lagano jay.amar to blog ti byapok lagchhe.cover is added attraction.
ReplyDeleteore baba !!
ReplyDeleteaare goto prochhodgulo enkeechhilo ROCHISNU SANYAL . lekha to thaakto chhobite ... RAW CHA . shilpir saakkhorer chaaite besi ki likhbo !! ekhaane to taar sujog aalada kore nei bhai .
ebaarer prochhod aamake paathiechhe Rameet De . kaar aanaka aami jaani na . net theke collect korechhe sombhoboto .
kintu Bhaskar , tomaar kobita koi !!! paathao !!!!!
bah khub bhalo laagchhe. 90 doshok nie amonta hole ki bhaloi na hoto
ReplyDeleteKHUB BHALO LAGLO; MRIGANKA K BOLI R O MON DIYE LEKHO....PORO...R O PORO.PROCHAR THEKE DURE THAKO..;R PLZ AKTU MON DIYE PORO...KOM LEKHO;
ReplyDeleteTACHARA SOBAR LEKHA AAMR KHUB BHALO LEGECHE...AAMR BONDHUDER LEKHA,AAMR PRIYO KOBI RIPONER LEKHA...RITAMER LEKHA...SOUVIKDAR LEKHA,ANUPAMDAR LEKHA,ABHISEC-R LEKHA,ARINDAMDAR LEKHA,SOMNATHDAR LEKHA,MANIKDAR LEKHA,avrapratim nag-R LEKHA,jayshila guha-R LEKHA KHUB BHALO LAGLO.
RANGEET
souviker kabita kabita hayeu ekta galpo hayto kabita ta bristi upataka khujte chale aseche.
ReplyDeletekobitagulo porlam....Anupamda,uff, asamanyo,onobodyo,apurbo,ami janina eirokom ekta lekhake kono bisheshon dwara prokash kora jae ki na...Ritam amar onyotomo priyo kobi,or beshirbhaag lekhar motoi etao amay mugdho kore tulechhe...ei post-e amar ekjon khub khub priyo kobir lekha achhe,Ripon,ek asamanyo kobi or aaro lekha poroborti postguloe thakbe asha kori,khub swabhabikbhabei darun laglo ei lekhatao...Manikdar lekha amar darun lagei,etao byatikrom noe...Somnath Ghoshal khub bhalo ekta kobita amader porar sujog kore diyechhen...Jayshiladir lekha khub bhalo laglo...Avrapratim,Avijit aar Arindam-er doulote vishon bhalo kobita porar sujog pelam,darun laglo lekhagulo...Souvikdar ekta nijoswo style achhe,lekhagulo porlei bojha jae eta onar lekha,ei kobitatao sei nijoswota bohon kore,jodio Souvikdar er thekeo onek bhalo lekha porechhi,tai amader chahidata kintu bere gechhe...Sourangshudar lekha bhaloi laglo,tobu sebhabe amay chhNute parlona...Mrigankoshekhor-er lekhati besh durbol mone holo,nijoswotar besh obhab achhe ebong gotanugotik to botei,tobe o boyos-e chhoto ebong aaro porashuno kora proyojon nishchoi porobortikal-e or lekha aaro porinoto hoye uthbe...amar mone hoy ei post ta sombhoboto onyotomo sera post blog-er...Ritam,Vaskar,Hindolda,Avijit sokole comment korechhen dekhe darun laglo,etai to chai ei aalochonar jonyoi to amader blog...
ReplyDeleterangit hotat kore mrigankake prochar theke dure thakte bollo keno jante echchha korchhe. kothata amar aprasongik ebong altapka legechhe.... prosna amar mone hoy mriganka byaktite atke na theke sarbojonin vabe sunya dashaker khetre hote pare... tai hotat 1t bises byakti k eta bolar background jante echchha krchhe... r jodi background na thake mrigankar jonno amar kharap o apamanito lagchhe... bondhu hisabeo jodi bola hoye thake tobe personaly bola uchit chhilo, erok open 1ta jaygay keno..? rangit hoyto anno kono karone bole thakbe...sei anno karon ta jante echchha korchhe....
ReplyDeleteaami-o tomaar songe ekmot bhaskar . rangeet egulo kore thaake . egulo na korle or cholena hoeto . evaabe ektu dristi aakorson korte chaae , setaa-o hotei paare . o etaa bollo bolei tumi katha bolle ... taarpor aami bolchhi ... o hoe gelo centre of attraction . o etai chaaichhilo .
ReplyDeletevaalo hobe ebaar theke aamra rangeet-er aachoroner dike naa taakie sref or kobita dekhi . kobita o khub vaalo lekhe . baakita ...
aami nischit egulo o ichhe korei kore . aasole or maatha aamader oneker chaaite onek poriskaar .
tobe ekhon aami or byapaargulo enjoy korte suru korechhi . kichhuta bujhte paarchhi oke .
aar mriganka , tomaar jodi khaarap laage aami tomaar kaachhe khoma chae nilaam . aamra keu eta vaabi na . you wrote a beautiful poem .
anupamda ki asadharan vabna chabike mritur adle nijer sttar bahubachane chriye deua ......bimurta chabider pujopath...jakkas.
ReplyDeletesourangsu sedin chilo na theke sedin chilor srote vese jete jete ek raktakta diner absaner bipritmukhi srot.....mukta ferari gan sonale.
aviseker kabitate sanghat o jathesta jarnir fire fire chaua....
ripan sanghat o ekta asadharan valolaga kabita likheche.
manik o joysilar kabita amake visan vabe abista kare ebaro tar batikram noy.pre baki matamat janabo.
sujoneshu
ReplyDeleteAMRA KHUB BHALO KICHU LEKKHA PACCHI, PORCHI. COMMENT KORCHI, CHUKLI KATCHI ITTADI ....
KINTU JE BISHOYTI EKDOM HOCCHE NA SETI HOLO KOBITAR ALOCHONA. AMI KARO BISHESH KOBITA R KOTHA BOLCHI NA. AMI BOLCHI SAMOGRIK KOBITAR ALOCHONA- ABOSSOY TA O(o) ER ALOCHONA. TAR SATHE PRACHIN KOBITAO JODI CHOLE ASE ASUK. KINTU KOBITAR TREND, TURN, PHYSIC, PHYLOSOPHY, EBONG ARORSO(BA ADORSOHINOTA) NIYE ALOCHONA KORA UCHIT BOLE MONE HOY.
EI POST E PRAY I KICHU EMON LEKHA THAKCHE JAR ARO KICHU PORIMARJON DARKAR CHILO.TAI AMI KOBITA NIYE NIJER NIJER BHABNA KE INVITE KORCHI...
Prothomoto..prochhod amar bhalo lageni..karon kobita ke bishesh akti linger protimurti bhabte (nije se linger ontorbhukto holeo) ami naraj..
ReplyDeleteBhalo laga lekha:
Anupam, Avisek (khub sundor swokiyo uposthapona), Sourangshu (darun uposthapona)..enader lekha..
Keno bhalo legeche..bola kothin. Jnara bidogdho somalochok..tnnara hoyto byakhya bhalo korte parben..
Eliot bolechhen ''poetry is not the expression of personality, but an escape from personality.” - ei blog ke mathay rekhe ei boktobbyo niye kichhu alochona hok ekhane..
ReplyDelete:)
Amar lekhata niyei boli! Eta asole manusher prodhan charti ripuke niye kaaj korar cheshta chhilo! krodh, kam, lobh o Mod
ReplyDeleteuttoron hisabe byabohrito hoyechhe dujon manush jader amra jugpurush bole jani! Krishno o khrishto!
aaj Avisek-k nie kichhu boli .
ReplyDeleteei prothom dekhlaam o nijer lekhaa-k nije biponno kore nijei taake traan dilo . er aage sudhu bipodgrosto korto . traan deoaar jonne opekkha korto kono dikkhito paathok chine nebe or lekha .
Avisek , etaa bangla bazar . ekhaane keu chine nae na . ektu naam hole tomaar aanugityo-k kine nite chaae .
Dhiman-k ei lekha-e aamar aar mone poreni sevaabe . sudhu ekta jorshobdo jodi baad dei : rowdkofin . RADIOTOLA shobdo-ta dhiman-gondhi noe sevaabe .
ei prothom ekta complete lekhaa dilo o aamake . aami to porar por laafie uthechhilaam !!
sudhu HORIAALI aar SURUAAT ... ei sobdo 2t eto ghono byabodhaane naa rakhlei paarto . eta sref somaalochona korar jonnei bola . obhyas hoe gechhe to vaari vaari sob review lekha-r !
etaa thekei Avisek-er ekta natun journey suru holo aasha kori . porer kobita-e aaro chomke jete chaai .
Rittwika ,
ReplyDeletemeyetake tumi kobita vaabchho keno ! o sref ekta meye . ekta vaalo chhobi hisebe etaake header kora hoechhe .
tumi ki protik-er raasta-e hnaatle ?
3rd ba 4th post-e header chhilo CREATION OF ADAM . taate nogno adam . taakeo to kobita vaaba-r chhilo naa ! taahole ei meyetake vaabbe keno ?
ekta valo chhobi . byas . nothing else .
aar Souvik ,
ReplyDeleteEliot ki bolechhilen setaa nie ei 2009 saale khub ekta vaabte vaalo laage na . aamra onaar theke onek egie vaabbo taai na ? naa hole onaar 100 bochhor por aamra likhte elaam keno ?
aar kobita sobsomoy nijer personality-r sei ongsho-k chinhito korte kobi-k baadhyo kore je ongsho taar nijer kachhe onaabiskrito chhilo . tobe motei surrealist-der moto kore noe .
nijeke oswikaar kore kobita likhbo keno ! aamar vitorei to ekta cosmos aachhe !! taake explore korte kortei ekta kobijonmo kete jaabe .
aar sei cosmos-k nijer vaasa-e aante hole prokaash-k , uchchaaron-k hote hoe CHAOTIC . nijei nijer katha-r bipod hoe nijer katha-e nijeke traan dite hoe .
kobita-e kbaar-o AAMI shobdo-ta naa likhe-o kobita hote paare AATMO_UDBODHOK. tobe jodi tumi onyo kaar-o hoe kobita naa lekho . maane meki kobita . seta bazar-e 100t-r moddhe 99t paabe .
nijeke jaana sob jaana-r ses . aar ... nijeke konodin jaana hobe na . maane 100% . taahole aar ki !
nijer personality . seta ki kodaacho ekmaatrik naaki ! se ki ekta surface-e belong kore ! aamar moddhe kotogulo Anupam aachhe !! aamar moddhe kotogulo Souvik aachhe !!!
kon personality-ta theke paalabo bhai ? aami bolbo : POETRY IS CELEBRATION OF MYSELVES .
Exactly Anupam..amra kobitake subconsciously akta nari vebe feli..kintu se asoley Andro-genie..akomebadwitiyom..tar kono oboyob hoyna..se amader rokto-mojja-gham ba tar o oteet kichu..sotta.
ReplyDeleteJai bolo..ata nehat e amar byaktigoto motamot. Amar mot onyer upor ami chapateo chaina. KOno oboyom (Adam/eve ityadi) charai amar dekhte bhalo lagbe.
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ReplyDeleteMRIGANKAR KOBITATE SUDHU E BAJE MIL..ONTOMIL PRAYE NEYE..KORBO DHORBO GOCHER HALCHARA LEKHA....JUST KICHU JENO LIKHE DILAM...AE LEKHA K AAMI BHALO BOLTE PARLMA NA..OPORINOTO LEKHA...OR R O ONEK KOBITA PORA DORKAR..CHARCHAR DORKAR...R O....AAMR MONE HOW...MRIGANKA-R AAMI BHALO CHAI..O AAMR KHUB BHALO BONDU..BEKTIGOTO AALP O AACHE..TAE AAMR MONE HOW OR R O SOMOY DORKAR...R O SOMOY....TARA-HURO BAZAR ASOB NOSHTO KORCHEE....AKHN SUDHU NIRJONOTA R PORA-SHUNO..AAMR JA MONE HOW..TAI LIKHECHI..AAMI ER TEHKE BESHI JANI NA..BUJHI NA.AAAMR JA BHALO MONE HOLO MRIGANKA K TAI BOLLAM..AAMI JANI ETE O KICHU MOEN KORBE NA..O KHUB BHALO CHELE......KHUB BHALO SOHOZ SOROL CHELE.....O R O BHALO LIKHUK KOBITA... R O BHALO..AAMI O K NIYE SOPNO DEKHI..KHUBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB SOPNO DEKHI
SOUVIKDAR LEKHA AABR O BHALO LAGLO;
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ReplyDeleteanupam da tomar kobita ta bes bes valo laglo... kintu 2nd line a "ar" sobdota anibarjo chhilo ki? tumi jothesto vebe chinte oi sobdo ta rekhechho a bisoye amar sondeho nei. tobu amar ektu khotka laglo. a bisoye tumi jodi kichhu alokpat koro agrojo hisabe, valo lagbe khub...
ReplyDeleteei poste 2jon kobi tader kobita kinie lekha byakhya korechhen. kobi to kobitatei bolben, tar jodi footnote dite hoy kobita byartho noy; kobi byartho hoye jay. tachhara kobi j background a likhbe pathok seta tei atke thakte baddho ki? borong pathok simsnata venge dile kobir kichhu upri paona hoy. ekmatro silper kshetre bumerang bipojjonok noy; upokari...
ReplyDeletetobe keu tar kobitar background eto jor die bolte parchhe eta khub valo lage...kobir payer tolar sokto jamita bojha jay...anek bikhyato kobi ki likhlen keno likhlen boltei paren na...anipom da jeta bollen bajare 100tar moddhe 99ta ba taro besi paoa jabe...
eliot ki bollo janina , amar mone hoy nijeke atikrom korai silpo. escape noy. r silpo manei celebration, j khane kosto o anonde chokhe jol ene dey...asole kobita anek rokom.karon benche thaka anekrokom, more jaoa anek rokom, anuvuti anekrokom...tai eto motobad. kono motobad kei sompurno bolajai na, purno thik ba purno vul konotai noy...prottek ta sofol(bazar safollo noy) kobita (jodi sot hoy) sei muhurte notun hote baddho, protita manuser songo jamon unique, tamon protita kobitake sei kobitar nirikhei bichar kora uchit, ager porar aviggota ba totter nirikhe noy(fundamental angsota bad die). arjuner machher chokher moto, mone hoy j kobitata porchhi ba likhchhi seta chhara sei muhurte r kobita nei prithibite... sobtai fundamental sortogulo perie bollam, ota to bohubar alochito hoye gechhe... amar mone hoy… elioter kothata elioter kobitar khetre jotota sotti r karo kobitar khetre totota sotti hoya somvob noy//
ReplyDeleteochena rang er dike /pochhe jachhe lal golapera....
ReplyDeleteritam apnar ei line amake andhya kore diechhe...asmvab sundar.....ki rang ki rang...ei je ekta pak khoya kichhu ...seta o ki amader
avisheker ...sei metror andhakar suranger moto kichhu mone korie day na...ja bhule gachilam...dekhechhi...oi andhakar surangyatake...lalgolaper pochhe jaoya take...kintu bhule gachhi...aj to puro mone porbe na...sudhu him hoye asa nuvuty ta mone porbe.....ekta ulto diker rastya...ba chader oi pith.....
tarpor....agute agute...tumi antohin....fire asar chestay akupaku...
cholo..
10/5 tar mathata friz ei dhukie di...satan samarpan...arindamer
Ami ekta bitorker suchona kori! Healthy discussion! 2000er porer kobira Kobitar formation o grammar niye ki bhabchhen? janar opekkhay!
ReplyDeleteAnupam, of course potery is celebration of ourselves. Eliot 100 bochhor agey ki bolechhen ta niye na vabai jete paare, ar jaara 100 bochhor porey likhte eseche taara Eliot-er moto korey vabbe ba likhbe kyano? naki vabbe, nijer moto korey likhbe? :)
ReplyDeleteEliot ba 100 bochhor ager mohot Kobider daara amar mone hoy amra provabito hotei paari.
..."artists have proclaimed themselves against tradition, meaning the art of the past. But the key difference is between those who have learnt from the past, and need to move beyond it to find new ways of expressing new things and those who, having failed to learn from the past , are doomed either to repeat it or to produce work which, in retrospect, is merely the evidence of a protest movement.." - Trevor Pateman..
:)
bhaskar ,
ReplyDeletethanks brother . eto khnutie tumi porechho . aamar khub vaalo laaglo .
bhai , okhaane aamar mone hoe AAR shobdota chaaichhilo . ota naadile aamake prothom ebong dwitio line-er moddhe ekta space dite hoto . naa hole paathok swaas neoaar fursot peto na . 2t uchchaaron-e bes vaari chhilo . ekta breathing space hisebe AAR diechhilaam . space deoaar chaaite ete probaahomaanota bojae thekechhe bolei aamar mone hoe .
aar tumi jevaabe proshno-t tulle , onyoraa eta theke shikkha nite paare . eivaabei kobi-k proshno korte hoe .
souvik
ReplyDeleteaabohomaan bangla kobita-k perie kothao jaaoar katha aami kothao kokhono boli na . sei kobi-e mohot , jini bigotojuger chinhogulo onge dhaaron korei seguloke perie jaan bhaabikaaler dike . tnaar kobita pore keu chomke jaae na . bismito hoe . aanondito hoe .
aar bhaskar thik bolechhe . ekjon kobi-r katha sudhu tnaar nijer kobita-r khetrei projojyo hote paare .
aar ... aami OURSELVES bolini . bolechhi MYSELVES . grammatical mistake ? haa haa haa ...
Sauranshu
ReplyDelete2000-er por keno , kono kaalei kobi byakoron-er dhaar dhaare na . chhonder maatragonona , ontyomil-er nigor ... kono kichhui kobir baadhyota noe . konokaale noe .
tini-e kobi jini uchcharon-k procholon-er baaire chalie den . bnaakie den .
ekhon porjonto bangla kobita-e ja hoechhe , sob kichhu-k pronaam kore kulungi-te tule rekhe kobita likhbe 2000-er kobi . okkhor , maatra , swar --- kono britte se baandha porbe naa .
biseson likhbo na , kria likhbo na ... esob taar jonne noe . osob nie buro-ra vaabuk .
shudhu uchcharon-er chemistry . uchcharon-er physics . uchcharon-er philosophy ( why not man ? ). uchcharon-er cricket . uchcharon-er mohaadigonto .
je kono kichhu korte paare 2000-er kobi . naa kore kichhu kichhu jinis ... sesob hoe gechhe . chitrkolpo noe ... olongkaar noe ... esob taar jonne noe . osob taar gurujon-der jonne .
Anupam,
ReplyDeleteTumi je Myselves bolecho Ourselves boloni seta ami bujheo ebong myselves likhbo vebeo vuul kore ourselves likhe felechi..:)
Anupam,
ReplyDeletetumi je myselves bolte cheyecho ourselves noy, ta ami bujheo ebong myselves likhbo vebeo kabyik angina theke muhurter jonnye vuule English Grammer-er class-e dhuke poRate, vuul kore ourselves likhe felechi. myselves-i likhte cheyechilam :)
bondhura
ReplyDeleteekbaar 11th post dekho . 12th post hoe jaaoaar por kichhu comments hoechhe . bise kore aryanilda khub important kichhu katha bolechhen .
jaara ogulo poroni , please ekbaar ghure eso .
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ReplyDeletethik bolechho Subhankar . kintu etaa ki bolaar dorkaar aachhe ! je kono kobita-e saarthok hoe taar songhoti-te . tobe songhoti kaake bolbo seta ekta proshno .
ReplyDeletelekha-e songhoti-r ortho ei noe je taate digression thaakbe na . ei muhurte ekti rekhaa-e chaalito kobita orthohin hoe porechhe . kobita bivinno dike chhute jete chaaichhe . ebong setaai kaammyo . kobita jodi ei porisor-k dhorte chae , taake baddhyo hoei bohuraikhik hote hobe .
asankhyo porospor-birodhi uchchaaron thaakte baadhhyo ei porisor-er kobita-e . kintu taa prolaapdhormi hobe na . jevaabe Amitava Maitra likhechhen ... Jahar Sen Majumdar likhechhen ... sevaabe noe .
ekti shobdo-o opraasongik noe . ekti uchchaaron-o nichhok paathoker subidha kore deoaar jonne ba tnaar obbhyas-k choritaartho koraar jonne noe .
kobi-k bolte hobe keno tini ekta shobdo kobita-e raakhlen .
500 pongktir ekta kobita-o songhoto hote paare . tobe jetaake CONCRETE POETRY bolaa hoe , seta kintu Subhankar 4-5 line-e borojor lekha hote paare . Astanirjan Dutta ei dhoronr kichhu kobita likhechhe goto koyekti post-e . CONCRETE POETRY , tobe ektu somprosaarito orthe , likhechhe o . porer post-e 2t lekhaa hoeto thaakbe .
SONGHOTO KOBITA aar kobita-r songhoti ek bostu noe .
bole raakhi Jalpaiguri-r ERoKA naame ekti potrika SONGHOTO KOBITA naam-e ekta movement korechhilo . tumi jaano nischoi ?
SOUVIK(RAINPARK) - MOTAMUTI BHALO LAGLO...KHUB BESI DAG KATENI .
ReplyDeleteANUPAM ( EKDIN AMARO MORE JAOA CHILO) NAM THEKE SURU KORE LEKHATI ONOBODYYO LAGLO...KI JANI AGERGULOR THEKE ETI BESI BHALO LEGECHE
SOURANGSHU ( UTTORON) - AMAR EI GODYYO-DHORMI LEKHA BHALOI LAGE JODI JOTHAJOTHO UPOSTHAPONA THAKE...ETI SEROKOMI EKTI LEKHA .
AVISEK (POROBAS -5) NOTUN SOBDER BYABOHARE AKORSOK....SHARP EDGE...SMART UPOSTHAPONA.
anupamda satti balcho alochanata darun legeche tabe amar mane hai annadero ei vabna niye alochana pare matamat janano uchit tahale ei blog er uddesa safal habe,sudhu kabita noy kabitar alochanatau jaruri.sabche valo legeche ei jene liner parimape noy sabder upajukta prasngikatate sang hata kabita dariye thake.r sanghata o concreat poet er parthakkata aro valo lagche.
ReplyDeleteparer poste aro kabita niye alochana hok aro kabita hok anerau prasna karun blog aro samridha hok.
Anupam er lekhata khub bhalo legeche-- amar ager sab lekhagulor moddhe mone hoyeche amar kache ata beshi chuyeche--
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ReplyDeleteei blogta amar er ekta janmo....ami pratteyk din dekhi...pori...ami kabita nie jehetu khub abegpraban ,,tai sahaje kono mantaybyo kori na...kintu bhalo lage bhalo lage bandhura...eisab kathya...mone pore kabisommelon patrika hate peyei ami pratham porte suru kortam ...ke ki likhechhen chiti ptaro patate...ei khane eto je comment...alochona...bhalo lage porte....ei blog chaluk...ektu ram khachhi..to ami glass uchie bolchhi..cheears....bandhura
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