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KABITA KON POTHE JACCHE SETA KINTU EI BLOGTIR MUL UDDESSHO, SUTORANG PATHOK EBONG KOBIDER ARO BESHI SELECTIVE HOYA UCHIT. AGER BLOGTIR SESH COMMENT TI AMI KORECHILAM.(ANUPAMKE BAD DILE).
EI MUHURTE KABIDER TAI ARO BESHI PORA UCHIT. KENO PORBO? AMADER TO TURN TAKE JANTE HOBE DADA.
ANUPAM PROTHOM KOBITATI LIKHECHE.NAMHIN KABITATI ,NAM HOYTO singho, KHUB ALPO KOTHA KIBHABE ANEK KICHU BOLE DEY, KIBHABE NIRMAN BHANGTE HOY, SOBDOKE KIBHABE BOSH KORTE HOY NIJER HATE TAR CLASS NIYE NICCHE ANUPAM. AMADER UCHIT NIJER HATE SEGULOKE ARO BESHI CHAKCHAKE KOIRE NEOYA.
SUBHRANGSHU, ANIRBAN, PARTHAJIT, SOURANGSHU - SCHOOL BOYOSER PROTHOM ABEGTARITO UCCHARON JENO. SHOBDOKE ARO BESHI NIYONTRON KORA DARKAR, ADRISSHO JE CHITRO CHUnYE THAKE TAKE ARO BESHI ROHOSSOMOY, ARO BESHI MOHOMOY KORA UCHIT NOY KI????
RANGEET ER LEKHA BHALO CHOLCHE. KINTU EI LEKHATI SEROKOM NOY. ARO FLASH DARKAR. BORO JHAPSHA HOYE GACHE LEKHATI....
ABHISEK BHALO LIKHCHE. BHALO LIKHTE THAKO. TOBE BARIN GHOSHAL ER GONDHO PAOYA JAY KENO TOMAR LEKHAY, TOMAR SOBDE. AMRA AMADER MOTO LIKHBO. BARIN,PRONOB, SWADESH, SWAPAN.... KI KORECHE , KI KORCHE TA DEKHBO KINTU LIKHBO TO NIJER MOTO KORE TAI NA.....
prothomei puro blog ta parar par akta katha bolbo- amar nijer mane as pathok ramit dey mone hoyeche sudu akta comment deoa jay astronirjoner jonno--- sabar lekhai besh bhalo -antoto amar mato sadharon pathoker khetre to khub i bhalo lekha sabar- tobu kothao jeno astronirjoner 4 line bar bar phiriye niye alo oi jaygay-- kobir jonno akta yaaaa baro bhalolaga roilo
accha abar asi onno lekhar moddhe - prothomei anupam er boma kobitata-- oitate to body te kono lekha dekhte pelam na ?- oita ki lekha charai? naki kono technical problem hocche bujhte parchi na-- ar lekha chara hole anubutita aktu anupamer kache jante chaibo--
anupamer 2nd kobitata besh sundor - ar sabcheye bhalo legeche drisso kobitata-- bah...
avishek er ludor chatal ta age para mone hocche -thahor korte parchi na tobe jodi na hoy tobuo mone haoaar karon aitai je kothao lekhtate akta static chap roye jacche mone hocche ager kichu lekhar sange- ata theke berole bhalo lagbe aro-- 2nd kobitata besh bhalo legeche- ami bolte parbo na barin da ba dheeman dar mato kina tobe kobita hisebe besh bhalo---
Manik sahar lekha bhalo kintu sei prothom 1-2 blog er manik saha ke jeno pacchina-- hayto aro bhalo kichur chahida theke --
Nilanjan karmakarer lekhata besh bhalo legeche
Shubrangshu er lekha motamuti legeche- ba bolai jai thikthak cholchilo kintu seshe english e please ta deoa ki khub i darkar chilo ? mane banglay dile khoti ki chilo?-- bhasa ba harof er poribarton abbossoi darkar ta natunatto niye ase ta bole kichu jaygay hayto setai kobitar sur take kete dey bole mone hay]]
saswati parthojit ar sourrangshur lekhao porlam-- bhalo-- Arindam, abhro ar animesh ar kobita age pora - abar porlam bhalo laglo- phokir ilias er kobtata amar besh bhalo legeche-- hayto gatanugotik sabdo proyog tobu jeno pathoker mon chuye jay--
Bhaskar er kobita to bhaloi hay - natunatto thake- bhaloi laglo kintu bhai aktu baro kore de na amar mato buro manushder choke chasma-- aktu baro kore dile amra aktu sukhe porte pari-[:P]--
baki roilo- rangeet ar indranil-- rangeet er lekhay ager touch er aktu phank royeche mone holo tabe indranil amar khub priyo akjon kobi-- tai or anek kobitai porte besh bhalo lage-- abarertao besh laglo tobe sesher stanza tate aktu khei hariye phellam mone holo-- tabe thik ache ai tuku hay aktu adhtu sabar khetrei---
saabai khub i bhalo likhche---- anupam er kache amar akta anurodh blog e aro kom lekha dao - ak sathe ato gulo na diye khepe khepe dile porte subidhe hay ar mathar moddhe guliye jay na- amni ami aktu matha mota[:P]--
ar agrojoder kobitay bhaskor chakroborti--uffff-- darun darun- ai lekhta mone hay gato ak bachore - thak-- mone porche na thik kato bar porechi-- hehehehe
ami apatoto abar vaskor chakrabarty te atke gachhi...ahy re....amar kabita gulo ekjhalak...pora hoyechhe..anupam da ami tomake ph korchilam...baysto chile....ami abar kabitar kathay asbo...er tinbar pore.....suhu oi je vaskar chakrabarty....amar isswar...ami tar janya aj nirobota palon korlam...saradin...
abar asibo fire ei blog tire --- Anupam, astei habe, tai na ? Corso'r BOMA-ta chupse gelo keno? And why Corso! aro contemporary keu noy keno? Tahole ajker tarunra jante parto tara comparatively ki likhche. Keu ki tomar anami kobitate, jatakhhan na booke hat dile, Swadesh Sen mone korte pereche? Eta ki aporichitir rahosyo? Visual poemti darun hoyeche. Nilanjan,Rongeet,Abhisek,Astanirjan,Arindam - eder kobita bhalo legeche. Tomar blogti dhire dhire popular hochhe. Kintu kobira chara ar keu visit koreche kina tar sign nei. Ekmatro ami byatikrom. Ekjan Mohila shudhu korechilo, jake tumi promo korche bole bhagiye dile.That reminds me -- tomar blog-e tarunira nei keno? Ekhane ki 50% reservation mante habe --keu bolchena?
barin dar ei jigesata sati amaro jante iche karche !
anupamer kabitate ekta galpo natakiyta parda kholar halka dhaka jore laga
vaskrjotir beriye partai nirudes kabitar jatra......... tbe barindar atichetanar bodhta aro prabal haua darkar. suvrangsu barnanadharmita charo...... nilanjaner janalabimukh anidra bataser pase soyar vabnata asadharan. anirbaner charanantik mil o kabitati valo abinsener paye paye jalvangar sbdta bes. manik sahar ses duti line darun vabe manke chuye jai.aviseker prtham kabitata asadharan compositione pathchalar 2ndta jadumakha mantra mugdha hayechi. rangiter kabitar ses line dutite ami naki o ami khali na dile kabitata aro besi valo lagto tabe eta sampurna amar avimat.baki matamat pre janabo.
AMADER PROTITI KOBITA DHORE DHORE COMMENT KORTE HOBE, EMON KINTU KONO MANE NEI. AMI SAB LEKHA PORBO, COMMENTO PORBO. EKPOR JA LIKHBO BOLE MONE HOLO TAI LIKHBO. KI, TAI TO.
EI JEMON AMI TO KICHU BLOGE KICHUI COMMENT KORI NI,HAY KLANTI CHILO. KINTU KEU TO KOREHE. TORKO HOYECHE.TORKO, BHABNA CHOLUK. ARO KICHU DIN CHUPCHAP KETE JABE SONDHYAR DIKE TAKIYE TAKIYE - EI BHEBE AMIO MUK THAKLAM.
JARA LIKHCHE TARA TO EKTA SPACE PACCHE. EKHANE KHUB EKTA SELETIVE HOYNI NI SOMPADOK. KENONA AMADER EKTA DARABAR MATI DORKAR. ONEKEI KHUB HALO BHABE PEYE GACHE HOYTO. KINTU ANNODER KEO TO DITE HOBE. AMI TAI CHAPAR BYA[PARE KOBIR UPORE PUROPUTI NIRBHORSHIL. SUTORANG KOBIKEI ARO BESHI NAKUCHU ARO BESHI SELECTIVE HOTE HOBE. ETA 2000ER JAYGA. JAYGA ACHE. EBA TAR UCHIT BYABOHAR TA KINTU KOBIKEI KORTE HOBE.
AAMR PRIYO KOBI ABHISEC;OR KOBITA AMI PORI;AAMI PROBHABITO O HOI;AAMR MONE HOW NA OR KOBITATE KARUR PROBHAB AACHEE...KOBI K AE BAHBE PROBHABITO BOLBEN NA..PLZZ....OR LEKHA MON DIYE PORUN...OE KHUB SOPHOL BHABE AAMADER SOMOY K PROKASH KROCHE..AE SOMOYER ONNOTOMO PROYOJONIO KOBI[AAMR MONE HOW]...AAMR PRIYO O..
ABHISEK LIKHE JA..LIKEH JA..PLZ..R O LIKHE JA
RANGEET
NilanjanDA,MANIKDA,SUBRHANGSU,ABHINBABU,BHASKAR,ARINDAMDA, INDRONIL,ANUPAMDA,Abhisek,Astanirjan,ArindamDA.................SOBAR E LEKHA E DARUN......DARUN HOYE JACHE BLOG..AE BOLG AAMI SUDU KOBITA PORI..AAMI KOBITAR SOMONDHE KONO MONTOBYA NA KORE E PORIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.. RANGEET MITRA
kabitar janya dada amadwer raghunath roilo, ami berie porlam...ei line porar por...sabtuku kabita porar por jadi ami andhya hoye jetam....amar karu r kachhe kachhe kono day bodhyota thakto na....keno go?....aj theke ami 5 bachar pechie jai kamon?....kalyanir boimelay...ami kine felllam...vaskar chakrabartyr sresthyo kabita...?...er sara hostel jure bandhura haslo....sei hira..sei avi...sei saykat...biswa...o amar sab praner bandhyu chilo...haslo...thalthale payjamar katha sune...sitghumer kathya sune ...tabe darie ful baharer kathya sune tara haslo khub...er ami sala..rater trityo prhare kede fellam...tara aj sukhie hoyechhe kau mase 40 hajar takar nichhe kamay na....ami pore roilam bandhura....ami jani tara amay ajo khog kore ami boli...ami je vaskjorer dole bhai...morbo...se mora na hoi cigarette holo...se mora na hoi anahar holo...ami tader bhalobasi...ami je vaskar chakrabarty amar nodhhey ene felechhi avi,saikat...hitra...suman...tora bhalo thak...ami toder ajo chumu khai...ratir bela...amake chere de...kicchhu cheler e jogote kichhu hoi na...taka na...poisa na...nam na....kintu kothay raghunath roye jai re...e jibon ami nije niechhi ...ha ha...kono dukhyo nei...ei je mase 10 hajar takao aqmar jote na...amar meyer mukh dekhar janya amake 3-4 mas bose thakte hoi...ore ami je kabita porechhi...ami je jene gachhi....ki?...ami bolbo na go...sudhhyu kabitar janya amader raghunath roilo....ami o ki thaklam na vaskar babu?...apni je haspatale chilen...ami tar pas die hete asar somoi sandipan chakrabarty ke bolehilam...oi sada bed ta ami sparsya kor te parbo sandipan da?....parbo?...
ami prathame bhujte pari ni....gagri korso er kabitata sabdya hin...ami bhablam ota ki blog er kono bhul...?..tar por left click koreo jakhan sabda hin...ami bhoi peye gachhi...otar ki sobdo nei kono...?...u mago...ami chup hoye theme thekechhi oi kabitartar samne...selam....selam.....
anupamda tomar kabitatr ajo ami thik pathok noi....tomar kabita amar mathyar onek opor die chole jay.... kintu e kabita ta badda badda pagol kora go...ami 4 bar porechhi...oi je tumi bolechhyo dhan kheyeter rang e dhan khet bose porechhe,....amar mone pore jachhe baradadur sange gacchi...takhan dhankatar marsum...er amar hate dadur kine deoya chadyal ghuri.....hada da dhan kete dakchhe pagol khabi ai...er ghuiri oraas na...sei brisya skandhya....cahasader sathe amar vat...aluvaja..er mach die amrityo vakhayan...amar sala choke jal ene dilo ....
dui dadu amar kotodin amay chere cohole gachhe...bhalo achho to?..jano ami er tomader moto aj kauke pai na....
anupam da keno bolle...parikhar hale amar halka hasir sabdya..tomar ki parikhya bandhya kore debe?...
oho...ami pagol hoyechhi...anupam da tomay pranam...ei kabita ta amar sarajibon mone thakbe,... nilanjyan karmakareer lekhta ektu bhalo lege er l;aglo na...arayannyo tar kabitay sadhyaran...sada...kintu..?..!!! amar bhalo lage ni er...
manik saha sei tathyakathito issar tene enechhen...ogo er kotodin...?...ekdam bhalo lage ni..
avi er ses line ta...nabik basir sabdya...amake ektu taliechhilo ki?....hya...
ei blog e onekey likhechhen....amar kabita ta he he badda ujbuk er kabita...kintu....sobay er janya boli...bhalo laglo...ami kabir sei bhabna tuku ke sarajibon sradhya kore esechhi....jekhane se pen er nib thekiechhe tar sada khatay ...ami chirokal kokto r sei bani te biswasi... sristir mukhtay asol....badbaki sab faki.. ei blog er ..ei bangla kabitar sei sab sristir mukhgulo ke ami chumu khai...(bas kichhu mahila pore gelen tara kichhyu mone korben na plz)...boli bhalo theko...astanirjan
rangeet tar kabita tar moto likhechhe eta durdantya ekta bappar...er vaskorjoty...ami jani...ekdin o or kabitay samastya kichhu kapabe...ami biswas kori...ei blog e je cheletike ami baddya besi nijer morto pori,,...se vaskarjoty....tui chalie ja.....ramit avi manida...anupamda...er sobai ki jeholo mone hochhey balokbhajon hochhe er garam khichurir janya amra kolapata nie bose porechhi eksari te... ha ha ha
Manik -er "paalaagaan" besh bhaalo shuru hachchhilo kintu sheshh pa`mktite Jen "playing to the crowd" haye gelo. ekaTaa prashna. "blaak" lekho ken ? uchchaaraN anuJaayee to "blyaak".
rangeet er kabitaar nijsbataa dharaa parhachhe. khub bhaalo hachchhe. sentimentality nei. "ei path Jen naa sheshh hay"
abhishheker lekhaao garhe uThachhe naanaabhaabe, nijeke bhaa`Machhe, aabaar garhe uThachhe. abashyai naanaa kaagaje chhaapaar mata taar star, tabe or kabikRiti ekhan garhe uThachhe - ei samayTaa khub sensitive. ekhan taar mataamater beshee prayojan thaakaa uchi`t naa.
anek lekhaa. sab samaanabhaabe parhe oThaa Jaay naa. parerabaar aabaar kichhu likhabo. tabe ei blog Je etaTaa janapriya hayechhe eTaa khub bhaalo kahabar. anupam jindaabaad.
kichhu kobita porte kosto hobe soraasori . ekta click kore nite hobe . e-mag maanei to suchipotro theke click kore kobita-e dhukte hoe . ekhaane sei shrom korte eto aapotti korchhen keno keu keu bujhte paarchhi na .
ReplyDeletegotobarertay thik moto comment korte pari ni!
ReplyDeleteAmar nijer lekhata eyi barer blog-eo dekhe mone porlo ekta line:
"Sokolei kobi noy, keu keu kobi...."
Baki kobitagulo niye kichhu boli?
Shuru korlam Astonirjoner Sharshiphool diye! striking!
Arindam Rayer kobitati bhalo tobe 'Shanti Propat' shobdotir byabohar byakitgotobhabe bhalo lage ni!
Animesher Mrito akkhorik orthe Jibonto! khub chhNuye gelo!
Aranya-r kobitar songe onyotro porichoy ghotechhe! bhalo laglo abar!
Bhaskarjyoti- sobkichhu tram shudhu tram mone hoy! ahahaa!!
Prshnopronoyte mone holo Kolsi kNakhe use korle porimiti asto dwitiyo line-e!
abhraprotimer itihas bhalo besh kintu kichhu lines amar kachhe obastob laglo! jamon "ekhon sekhane keboli poshchimi rock songeet hoy" bhalo laglo naa! jehetu setake sur-er antithesis hisabe byabohrito hoyechhe!
Indraneelke joto porchhi toto mugdho hochchi! chhobita eto ujjwol!
Abhishek Abhishek Abhishek, Amar to Chhaya nei tai chhayar songe ghuri! hasbo na kNadbo anonde bujhe pelam na eto sundor ekta pongti!aha bNeche thako!
rangeet Motamuti Rangeeti touch obosyoi achhe!
Manik Saha'r Punchlineta prochondo striking ebong puro kobitati porimitibodhe bhorpur!
Abiner kobita ami bohudin porchhi! bhalo lage bhalo laglo!
Onugolpoer chhobiti darun kintu age dekha bole aar otota mon karlo naa!
Anirban Dutter kobita ekhane porte pere khub bhalo laglo! uni uchchomarger kobi ebong sei dhara bojay rekhechhen! lekhati agei porechhilam obosyo!
Nilanjan Krmakarer kobitar naamti jana gelo naa! kintu dwitiyo stanzata much better!
Shubhrangshu onobodyo aar kichhu shobdo byabohar batulota hobe!
Anupam darun laglo sotyi porikkha cholte thaku sosobde!
ogrojoder kobita theker samne ese ekta salute ramdhonu ronger.....!
purotar guangun bichar korar moto khomota amar hoyto nei tobe sorbangeen sundor ekta blogke aro egiye niye jabar jonyo ebong amader contemporary sonskritir moroke mure thakte ekta rashta debar jonyo dhonyobad janai!
Bhalo Theko Sobai! BTS!
KABITA KON POTHE JACCHE SETA KINTU EI BLOGTIR MUL UDDESSHO, SUTORANG PATHOK EBONG KOBIDER ARO BESHI SELECTIVE HOYA UCHIT. AGER BLOGTIR SESH COMMENT TI AMI KORECHILAM.(ANUPAMKE BAD DILE).
ReplyDeleteEI MUHURTE KABIDER TAI ARO BESHI PORA UCHIT. KENO PORBO? AMADER TO TURN TAKE JANTE HOBE DADA.
ANUPAM PROTHOM KOBITATI LIKHECHE.NAMHIN KABITATI ,NAM HOYTO singho, KHUB ALPO KOTHA KIBHABE ANEK KICHU BOLE DEY, KIBHABE NIRMAN BHANGTE HOY, SOBDOKE KIBHABE BOSH KORTE HOY NIJER HATE TAR CLASS NIYE NICCHE ANUPAM. AMADER UCHIT NIJER HATE SEGULOKE ARO BESHI CHAKCHAKE KOIRE NEOYA.
SUBHRANGSHU, ANIRBAN, PARTHAJIT, SOURANGSHU - SCHOOL BOYOSER PROTHOM ABEGTARITO UCCHARON JENO. SHOBDOKE ARO BESHI NIYONTRON KORA DARKAR, ADRISSHO JE CHITRO CHUnYE THAKE TAKE ARO BESHI ROHOSSOMOY, ARO BESHI MOHOMOY KORA UCHIT NOY KI????
RANGEET ER LEKHA BHALO CHOLCHE. KINTU EI LEKHATI SEROKOM NOY. ARO FLASH DARKAR. BORO JHAPSHA HOYE GACHE LEKHATI....
ABHISEK BHALO LIKHCHE. BHALO LIKHTE THAKO. TOBE BARIN GHOSHAL ER GONDHO PAOYA JAY KENO TOMAR LEKHAY, TOMAR SOBDE. AMRA AMADER MOTO LIKHBO. BARIN,PRONOB, SWADESH, SWAPAN.... KI KORECHE , KI KORCHE TA DEKHBO KINTU LIKHBO TO NIJER MOTO KORE TAI NA.....
aamar obosyo Avisek-er kobita-e Barin-er bodole Dhiman-er podoshobdo besi kaane aase . seta ektu chomokprodo byapaar . aami byaktigotovaabe khub vaalo kore jaani , o Dhiman-er lekha sobemaatro porte suru korechhe . ei kobita taar onek aage lekha .
ReplyDeleteupore dekhte pachhi Azhar Forhad member hoechhen . onaar photograph-t aamar fatafati laglo . keu jodi aamar ekta erokom chhobi tule dito ! aami oboshyo eto vaalo dekhte noi .
Rameet-er moto jodi haasi ... hehehe ...
ai dekhecho kando-- amar namtao anupam post 2000 e ramit thekee rameet koreche--heheehehe[:P]----tabe atao besh bhalo purono boi e natun malat
ReplyDeleteprothomei puro blog ta parar par akta katha bolbo- amar nijer mane as pathok ramit dey mone hoyeche sudu akta comment deoa jay astronirjoner jonno--- sabar lekhai besh bhalo -antoto amar mato sadharon pathoker khetre to khub i bhalo lekha sabar- tobu kothao jeno astronirjoner 4 line bar bar phiriye niye alo oi jaygay-- kobir jonno akta yaaaa baro bhalolaga roilo
ReplyDeleteaccha abar asi onno lekhar moddhe - prothomei anupam er boma kobitata-- oitate to body te kono lekha dekhte pelam na ?- oita ki lekha charai? naki kono technical problem hocche bujhte parchi na-- ar lekha chara hole anubutita aktu anupamer kache jante chaibo--
ReplyDeleteanupamer 2nd kobitata besh sundor - ar sabcheye bhalo legeche drisso kobitata-- bah...
avishek er ludor chatal ta age para mone hocche -thahor korte parchi na tobe jodi na hoy tobuo mone haoaar karon aitai je kothao lekhtate akta static chap roye jacche mone hocche ager kichu lekhar sange- ata theke berole bhalo lagbe aro-- 2nd kobitata besh bhalo legeche- ami bolte parbo na barin da ba dheeman dar mato kina tobe kobita hisebe besh bhalo---
Manik sahar lekha bhalo kintu sei prothom 1-2 blog er manik saha ke jeno pacchina-- hayto aro bhalo kichur chahida theke --
Nilanjan karmakarer lekhata besh bhalo legeche
Shubrangshu er lekha motamuti legeche- ba bolai jai thikthak cholchilo kintu seshe english e please ta deoa ki khub i darkar chilo ? mane banglay dile khoti ki chilo?-- bhasa ba harof er poribarton abbossoi darkar ta natunatto niye ase ta bole kichu jaygay hayto setai kobitar sur take kete dey bole mone hay]]
saswati parthojit ar sourrangshur lekhao porlam-- bhalo--
Arindam, abhro ar animesh ar kobita age pora - abar porlam bhalo laglo-
phokir ilias er kobtata amar besh bhalo legeche-- hayto gatanugotik sabdo proyog tobu jeno pathoker mon chuye jay--
Bhaskar er kobita to bhaloi hay - natunatto thake- bhaloi laglo kintu bhai aktu baro kore de na amar mato buro manushder choke chasma-- aktu baro kore dile amra aktu sukhe porte pari-[:P]--
baki roilo- rangeet ar indranil-- rangeet er lekhay ager touch er aktu phank royeche mone holo
tabe indranil amar khub priyo akjon kobi-- tai or anek kobitai porte besh bhalo lage-- abarertao besh laglo tobe sesher stanza tate aktu khei hariye phellam mone holo-- tabe thik ache ai tuku hay aktu adhtu sabar khetrei---
saabai khub i bhalo likhche---- anupam er kache amar akta anurodh blog e aro kom lekha dao - ak sathe ato gulo na diye khepe khepe dile porte subidhe hay ar mathar moddhe guliye jay na- amni ami aktu matha mota[:P]--
ar agrojoder kobitay bhaskor chakroborti--uffff-- darun darun- ai lekhta mone hay gato ak bachore - thak-- mone porche na thik kato bar porechi-- hehehehe
suvoratri
ami apatoto abar vaskor chakrabarty te atke gachhi...ahy re....amar kabita gulo ekjhalak...pora hoyechhe..anupam da ami tomake ph korchilam...baysto chile....ami abar kabitar kathay asbo...er tinbar pore.....suhu oi je vaskar chakrabarty....amar isswar...ami tar janya aj nirobota palon korlam...saradin...
ReplyDeleteje kobitati anubaad koraa hoechhe ... gregory corso-r BOMB ... Rameet ... tomaar ki mone hoe kobi taar 'body `-te kono shobdo likhte parten ? ekhaane kintu bhai tomaar nijer-e paathok hisebe ektu TECHNICAL PROBLEM dhoraa pore gelo ... hehehe [:p]-
ReplyDeleteetaa khub famous kobita . shobdohin kobita .
keno shobdohin bolo to ? stunt vaable na to !! please vebo na .
abar asibo fire ei blog tire --- Anupam, astei habe, tai na ? Corso'r BOMA-ta chupse gelo keno? And why Corso! aro contemporary keu noy keno? Tahole ajker tarunra jante parto tara comparatively ki likhche. Keu ki tomar anami kobitate, jatakhhan na booke hat dile, Swadesh Sen mone korte pereche? Eta ki aporichitir rahosyo? Visual poemti darun hoyeche. Nilanjan,Rongeet,Abhisek,Astanirjan,Arindam - eder kobita bhalo legeche. Tomar blogti dhire dhire popular hochhe. Kintu kobira chara ar keu visit koreche kina tar sign nei. Ekmatro ami byatikrom. Ekjan Mohila shudhu korechilo, jake tumi promo korche bole bhagiye dile.That reminds me -- tomar blog-e tarunira nei keno? Ekhane ki 50% reservation mante habe --keu bolchena?
ReplyDeletebarin dar ei jigesata sati amaro jante iche karche !
ReplyDeleteanupamer kabitate ekta galpo natakiyta parda kholar halka dhaka jore laga
vaskrjotir beriye partai nirudes kabitar jatra.........
tbe barindar atichetanar bodhta aro prabal haua darkar.
suvrangsu barnanadharmita charo......
nilanjaner janalabimukh anidra bataser pase soyar vabnata asadharan.
anirbaner charanantik mil o kabitati valo
abinsener paye paye jalvangar sbdta bes.
manik sahar ses duti line darun vabe manke chuye jai.aviseker prtham kabitata asadharan compositione pathchalar 2ndta jadumakha mantra mugdha hayechi. rangiter kabitar ses line dutite ami naki o ami khali na dile kabitata aro besi valo lagto tabe eta sampurna amar avimat.baki matamat pre janabo.
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ReplyDeleteekta bodhhoy confusion hochhe,ei blog-e kintu ebar amar ektai lekhai prokashito hoyechhe,setao naamhin....dwitiyo kobita orthat sukritir kobita ti amar lekha noe
ReplyDeleteANUPAM- jothesto bhalo lagalo ...tobe seser ager pongtiti thik bhalo algeni
ReplyDeleteSUBRHANGSU - STHOBIROTA O MEGH - motamuti bhalo ,kichu oti bybohrito abeg-onusangik bolei mone holo....likhun aro lekha porar opekhhaye roilam .
NILANJAN KARMAKAR - !!!! bes chomke gelam, etaki notun dhara naki!! kobitar nam na deoa?...ekhetre abar kobitar namti mone hochhe NILANJA.... nehat chini tai gulie felini :)
bes soktisali lekha
"ojothasudhu onidrara prachin stove theke....." ei lineti amar bhison bhalo legeche .
ABIN SEN - 'GRIHOTYAG'- abiner lekhar songe jothestoi porichito..tai bolte pari ei lekhtio abiner swakhhor bohon korleo se matrae jaynei bole amar mone holo
ReplyDeleteMANIK SAHA - 'PALAGAN' - ekti somantoral kobita osdharo ses duti line....
RONGEET - 'SOKAL 9 TA....' - rangitsulov kobitar akriti nie sochetonota prokot...
somilie bhalo laglo .
AVISEHK - 'SUKRITIR KOBITA' - ekti sorbnagin kobita, ebong mone holo kobi ebare form nie onoobabe kichukorte cheyechen....
***EKTI JORURI KOTHA- AMIO ROMITER MOTOI MONE KORI KICHU KOM LEKHA THAKLEI BHALO HOY....ALOCHOK NOI ...TAI BODHOY LAGATAR ATTOGULO KOBITAR ALOCHONA KORTE GIE BES KLANTI LAGCHE
AMADER PROTITI KOBITA DHORE DHORE COMMENT KORTE HOBE, EMON KINTU KONO MANE NEI. AMI SAB LEKHA PORBO, COMMENTO PORBO. EKPOR JA LIKHBO BOLE MONE HOLO TAI LIKHBO. KI, TAI TO.
ReplyDeleteEI JEMON AMI TO KICHU BLOGE KICHUI COMMENT KORI NI,HAY KLANTI CHILO. KINTU KEU TO KOREHE. TORKO HOYECHE.TORKO, BHABNA CHOLUK. ARO KICHU DIN CHUPCHAP KETE JABE SONDHYAR DIKE TAKIYE TAKIYE - EI BHEBE AMIO MUK THAKLAM.
JARA LIKHCHE TARA TO EKTA SPACE PACCHE. EKHANE KHUB EKTA SELETIVE HOYNI NI SOMPADOK. KENONA AMADER EKTA DARABAR MATI DORKAR. ONEKEI KHUB HALO BHABE PEYE GACHE HOYTO. KINTU ANNODER KEO TO DITE HOBE. AMI TAI CHAPAR BYA[PARE KOBIR UPORE PUROPUTI NIRBHORSHIL. SUTORANG KOBIKEI ARO BESHI NAKUCHU ARO BESHI SELECTIVE HOTE HOBE. ETA 2000ER JAYGA. JAYGA ACHE. EBA TAR UCHIT BYABOHAR TA KINTU KOBIKEI KORTE HOBE.
AMI EKTA KOTHA BOLECHILAM- AMRA KIBHABE LIKHBO? APNI BOLUN. TUMIO CHOLE ESO KIBHABE LIKHTE CHAO JANAO...
bises ghosona ... ha ha ha ... SUKRITIR KOBITA avisek-er lekhaa noe . otaa SUKRITI-r lekhaa .
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ReplyDeleteAAMR PRIYO KOBI ABHISEC;OR KOBITA AMI PORI;AAMI PROBHABITO O HOI;AAMR MONE HOW NA OR KOBITATE KARUR PROBHAB AACHEE...KOBI K AE BAHBE PROBHABITO BOLBEN NA..PLZZ....OR LEKHA MON DIYE PORUN...OE KHUB SOPHOL BHABE AAMADER SOMOY K PROKASH KROCHE..AE SOMOYER ONNOTOMO PROYOJONIO KOBI[AAMR MONE HOW]...AAMR PRIYO O..
ReplyDeleteABHISEK LIKHE JA..LIKEH JA..PLZ..R O LIKHE JA
RANGEET
NilanjanDA,MANIKDA,SUBRHANGSU,ABHINBABU,BHASKAR,ARINDAMDA,
INDRONIL,ANUPAMDA,Abhisek,Astanirjan,ArindamDA.................SOBAR E LEKHA E DARUN......DARUN HOYE JACHE BLOG..AE BOLG AAMI SUDU KOBITA PORI..AAMI KOBITAR SOMONDHE KONO MONTOBYA NA KORE E PORIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII..
RANGEET MITRA
kabitar janya dada amadwer raghunath roilo, ami berie porlam...ei line porar por...sabtuku kabita porar por jadi ami andhya hoye jetam....amar karu r kachhe kachhe kono day bodhyota thakto na....keno go?....aj theke ami 5 bachar pechie jai kamon?....kalyanir boimelay...ami kine felllam...vaskar chakrabartyr sresthyo kabita...?...er sara hostel jure bandhura haslo....sei hira..sei avi...sei saykat...biswa...o amar sab praner bandhyu chilo...haslo...thalthale payjamar katha sune...sitghumer kathya sune ...tabe darie ful baharer kathya sune tara haslo khub...er ami sala..rater trityo prhare kede fellam...tara aj sukhie hoyechhe kau mase 40 hajar takar nichhe kamay na....ami pore roilam bandhura....ami jani tara amay ajo khog kore ami boli...ami je vaskjorer dole bhai...morbo...se mora na hoi cigarette holo...se mora na hoi anahar holo...ami tader bhalobasi...ami je vaskar chakrabarty amar nodhhey ene felechhi avi,saikat...hitra...suman...tora bhalo thak...ami toder ajo chumu khai...ratir bela...amake chere de...kicchhu cheler e jogote kichhu hoi na...taka na...poisa na...nam na....kintu kothay raghunath roye jai re...e jibon ami nije niechhi ...ha ha...kono dukhyo nei...ei je mase 10 hajar takao aqmar jote na...amar meyer mukh dekhar janya amake 3-4 mas bose thakte hoi...ore ami je kabita porechhi...ami je jene gachhi....ki?...ami bolbo na go...sudhhyu kabitar janya amader raghunath roilo....ami o ki thaklam na vaskar babu?...apni je haspatale chilen...ami tar pas die hete asar somoi sandipan chakrabarty ke bolehilam...oi sada bed ta ami sparsya kor te parbo sandipan da?....parbo?...
ReplyDeleteami prathame bhujte pari ni....gagri korso er kabitata sabdya hin...ami bhablam ota ki blog er kono bhul...?..tar por left click koreo jakhan sabda hin...ami bhoi peye gachhi...otar ki sobdo nei kono...?...u mago...ami chup hoye theme thekechhi oi kabitartar samne...selam....selam.....
anupamda tomar kabitatr ajo ami thik pathok noi....tomar kabita amar mathyar onek opor die chole jay....
kintu e kabita ta badda badda pagol kora go...ami 4 bar porechhi...oi je tumi bolechhyo dhan kheyeter rang e dhan khet bose porechhe,....amar mone pore jachhe baradadur sange gacchi...takhan dhankatar marsum...er amar hate dadur kine deoya chadyal ghuri.....hada da dhan kete dakchhe pagol khabi ai...er ghuiri oraas na...sei brisya skandhya....cahasader sathe amar vat...aluvaja..er mach die amrityo vakhayan...amar sala choke jal ene dilo ....
dui dadu amar kotodin amay chere cohole gachhe...bhalo achho to?..jano ami er tomader moto aj kauke pai na....
anupam da keno bolle...parikhar hale amar halka hasir sabdya..tomar ki parikhya bandhya kore debe?...
oho...ami pagol hoyechhi...anupam da tomay pranam...ei kabita ta amar sarajibon mone thakbe,...
nilanjyan karmakareer lekhta ektu bhalo lege er l;aglo na...arayannyo tar kabitay sadhyaran...sada...kintu..?..!!! amar bhalo lage ni er...
manik saha sei tathyakathito issar tene enechhen...ogo er kotodin...?...ekdam bhalo lage ni..
avi er ses line ta...nabik basir sabdya...amake ektu taliechhilo ki?....hya...
ei blog e onekey likhechhen....amar kabita ta he he badda ujbuk er kabita...kintu....sobay er janya boli...bhalo laglo...ami kabir sei bhabna tuku ke sarajibon sradhya kore esechhi....jekhane se pen er nib thekiechhe tar sada khatay ...ami chirokal kokto r sei bani te biswasi...
sristir mukhtay asol....badbaki sab faki..
ei blog er ..ei bangla kabitar sei sab sristir mukhgulo ke ami chumu khai...(bas kichhu mahila pore gelen tara kichhyu mone korben na plz)...boli bhalo theko...astanirjan
rangeet tar kabita tar moto likhechhe eta durdantya ekta bappar...er vaskorjoty...ami jani...ekdin o or kabitay samastya kichhu kapabe...ami biswas kori...ei blog e je cheletike ami baddya besi nijer morto pori,,...se vaskarjoty....tui chalie ja.....ramit avi manida...anupamda...er sobai ki jeholo mone hochhey balokbhajon hochhe er garam khichurir janya amra kolapata nie bose porechhi eksari te... ha ha ha
ReplyDeleteBarindar prashnaTaa aamaaro prashna - Why Corso ? abashya Corso-r kabitaar baangaanubaad khub kam. 1999-2000 naagaad aami alpa kichhu karechhilaam. Corso-r kabitaa anubaad karaa sahaj-o. Clown naame or ekaTaa apUrba kabitaa aachhe. deergha. seTaa karate paarale bhaalo hata. tabe ei BOMB kabitaaTi oitihaasik. Vietnam Juddha niye Jakhan america-r abhyantar tolapaarh, BOMB ber hay. bahu jaigaay ei kabitaapaaTh police ese panDa karaar cheshhTaa karechhilo.
ReplyDeletekabider madhyakaar JogaaJog gulo satyii khub adbhut. se niye ekaTu galpa kari. 1999-er sheshhe aami Corso-r khabar paai. Corso praay bhikiri takhan. asustha. chenaa lok dekhalei poisaa chaay. nijer pratham meyer baarhite aashray nen. meye nurse chhilo. Corso-r Thik kaTaa chhele meye o nijeo jaanato naa. anek illegal chhele meye chhilo. Corso-r maa Corso-r janma diye Italy te phire Jaan eman shonaa Jaay. Corso maake kakhano dekheni. taar baabaa taake balechhilo Je maa chale gechhe. baabaao taake chherhe chale Jaay.
sheshh bayase mRityumukhi Corso taar nijer maar sandhaan chaalaay. tatadine internet ese gechhe, maar khabar beriye aase. dekhaa Jaay Corso-r meyer baarhir kaachhei taar maa thaaken bayas 86. Corso-r bayas 71. 71 bachharer chhele 86 bachharer maar baarhi Jaay. esab film-e dharaa aachhe. maa laafiye uThe ese 71 bachharer chheleke buke dhare kaa`ndate shuru karen. kaannaa thaamale bale - tui eman hatachchhaarhaader mata chul raakhis ken ? bale maa chheleke niye hair cutting saloon-e Jaay. daa`nrhiye theke chheler chul kaaTen. baarhi niye giye raannaa karen nije daa`nrhiye. Corso maaraa gechhe 10 bachhar habe aagaamee January te. JatadUr jaani taar maa ekhano be`nche aachhe.
"Self-reflexivity of image" - pratimaar sba-pratiphalan - eiTaa anupam er signature haye uThachhe. aakRitir madhye prakRiti, dhaanaxeter madhye dhaanaxet....the domino effct carries on. aparaajitaar kabitaay ekaTaa ddbitba-Jaataayaat chhilo. A binary restlessness. Highway theke seTaa badale aapan aapanaar bhetar Dub maarate chaay jena. tulaseer maalaa tulaseer kaahini mane kariye dey. aamaar mane hay ei prabRittiTaake aaro naanaa dike aaste aaste niye Jaaoaa Jaay hayato. pUrbajader kabitaay ei dharaNer prabRitti kaar aachhe ? baa chhilo ? keu jaano ?
ReplyDeleteagrajader lekhaa maajhe maajhe prakaash hachchhe eTaa khub bhaalo kaaj. ei ekaTaa byaapaare baa`mlaa kabitaa bheeshhaN pichhiye.
bideshe dekhi, bahu taruN kabir ekaTaa major pracheshhTaa thaake agrajader kabitaa niye medhaamay, parishramee kaaj karaar. baa`mlaay seTaa ekadam dekhinaa. sabaai nijer kabitaar prachaarei byatibyasta. anyer lekhaa parhaar samay baa ichchhe baa parishram baa medhaa nei.
kaajei ei blog-e nijeder kabitaar paashaapaashi agrajader lekhaa raakhaa muktamananer prakaash.
Manik -er "paalaagaan" besh bhaalo shuru hachchhilo kintu sheshh pa`mktite Jen "playing to the crowd" haye gelo. ekaTaa prashna. "blaak" lekho ken ? uchchaaraN anuJaayee to "blyaak".
rangeet er kabitaar nijsbataa dharaa parhachhe. khub bhaalo hachchhe. sentimentality nei. "ei path Jen naa sheshh hay"
abhishheker lekhaao garhe uThachhe naanaabhaabe, nijeke bhaa`Machhe, aabaar garhe uThachhe. abashyai naanaa kaagaje chhaapaar mata taar star, tabe or kabikRiti ekhan garhe uThachhe - ei samayTaa khub sensitive. ekhan taar mataamater beshee prayojan thaakaa uchi`t naa.
Indranil bhinarakam lekhaar ekaTaa teebra pracheshhTaa chaalaachchhe. eTaa bhaalo khabar.
anek lekhaa. sab samaanabhaabe parhe oThaa Jaay naa. parerabaar aabaar kichhu likhabo.
tabe ei blog Je etaTaa janapriya hayechhe eTaa khub bhaalo kahabar. anupam jindaabaad.
ARYANILDAR MOTAMOT PEYE AMII DHONYA....ARYANILDA AAMR PRIYO KOBI O PRIYO MANUSH...ONAR SONGEE AAMI SOB SOMOY SOHO-MOT....ONAR LEKHA O AAMR KHUB PRIYO..
ReplyDeleteAMI ARYNILDAR MOTO BOLI "anupam jindaabaad"...LONG LIVE ANUPAMDA.DARUN HOCHE SOMOY LEKHA....SOMOY BHASATE...
Sobar kobita bhalo sudhu koyekta byapar ektu bolte chai......
ReplyDeleteRangeet er lekhay mone hoyeche onek immitations ache jodio lekha duti khub kharap noy
Astanirjan er lekha temon bhalo laglo na
Aranya'r kobita bhalo lagchilo kintu oi "tumi bolbe payra, ami bolbo......" kemon jeno effect ta bheste gelo
Manik Saha'r 'Palagan' besh bhalo laglo
Abin Sen er lekhatao besh bhalo
Parthajit er lekhata bhalo kintu "tomar kukur chhara" line tike ektu onno bhabeo prokash kora jete parto....
Ar kobitagulo niye pore comment korbo.....sob to pora hoye uthlo na kintu sobar lekhai bhalo mone rakhben IT'S ALL A MATTER OF PERCEPTION.......drishti bhongir kintu tofat thakei ebong sheta sob manusheri alada alada....etai 'bodhay' kobitar indrajal ja manusher chetana ke brihottoro khomotar sathe ekatto hote shahajjo kore..
Sobai bhalo thakben shustho thakben....nomoskar
Abhrapratim Nag