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ei post-e aamara ki prokrito-orthei aantorjaatik holaam ? ARANYA-r doulote ? uni bangladesh-er kobi .
Kudos to Anupam. Blog aro egiye jabe. Manik ar Avishek-keo awbhinandan.
'Awgrojoder Kobita' section-ta ekta regular feature hokna, valo lagbe. Ei section -e Kamal Chakraborty ar Bhaskar Chakraborty - ke dekhte chai vishonvabey.
ei samayer kabitate anek engreji sabda ese jai.a niye anek kabike anek prasner mukhe parte hai.tabe eta ki khub doser janale khusi habo.aro kabita pare parer matamat debo.
ei gulo ki scan kore lagano? porte khub asubidhe hoi...ekhon to banglate type kora jai khub sahoje ...kabita gulo khubi bhalo...tabe blogta aro sahojei sundor kora jai ...kichu mone koro na ...eto sundor sundor lekha ... Plz visit amar blog sonartoree.blogspot.com idea pabe ...
aapni mukhopadhyay naa likhe jodi mukherjee likhte paaren , aamara naahoe kichhudin evaabei chaalie dei . kobita byapaartaai to khub sekele ekta shobdo , taai na ? aar egulo scan kore noe , jpeg chhobi hisebe rekhechhi . ki korbo bolun , kaarigori gyan ( aapnar vaasae IDEA ) khub besi to nei ! naa thaakleo chole jaachhe jokhon ...
aascharyo laglo je etogulo vaalo kobita aapni saamne pelen , aar nijer blog promote kore chole gelen !! ekta kobita nieo to aalada kore kichhu critically likhte paarten !!!
aar ... kobita porte asubidha !!! ekta click korlei to seta aar thaake na !!!! seta korte paaren na ekta kobita porte ? aapni kobita vaalobaasen to aadou ?
ei muhurte ekjon tarun jodi nabadwip-er vaasae kobita lekhe , seta praakritik hobe na . ei mishro porisor-e je kobita rochito hobe , taar vaasa-o mishro hote baadhyo .
jaara tomaar somaalochona korchhe , taader bolo Jiabanananda Dash-o English words aakchhaar byabohaar korechhen . bolo je amitraakkhor chhondo-o Milton naa thaakle bangla kobita-e dhukto na .
bishuddho Bangla vaasa kothae aachhe tumi jaano ? aami ontoto jaani na konokaale taa kothao chhilo kina .
aamader puctuation mark-gulo-o to English theke neoaa !! Vidyasagar-k taahole ki bolbe ? tnaar aage to to semikolon , koma , dash , kolon kichhui chhilo na !
vaasa bodle jae . tobei se bnaache . vaasa bodlaano hoeto kobir kaaj noe . tobe sei bodol-k swikar kore neoaa ekjon buddhimaan kobir lokkhon .
- Prothomei anupam er anubad kobita—khub sundor - Anupamer ditiyo kobitatao besh bhalo – akhane akta katha jiggasso ache brahmbhon sabdota ki sei barno brahmon? Tahole banan ta ki thik ache na kobitar khatirei kora hoyeche?— - Agrojoder kobitar section ta natun chalu kore blog ta natun matra pelo- amar byaktigato mot akhane jeno sab dharoner lekha deoa hay—sabdharoner mane kobita abong samantoral kobita both- sunil gangopadhay theke suru kore swadesh sen- tabe mone hay kobitay chutmarg ta amra sabai tule dite parbo- ata amar akantoi byaktigato akta iccche bolte paro anupam - Astonirjoner lekha—sabolil sahoj bodhogammo sundor—hayto sabar jonno – khubi sundor – - Souvik dar aro bhalo lekha porechi – sei hisebe dekhle motamuti legeche—tabe bisay ta besh sundor - Somnath ghosal er lekhata besh adhunik abong nijjosso dhonge agiyechilo- kintu amar nijer mone hay kothao aktu khei hariye phelchilam parar somay- hayto sei ak ak pathoker ak ak dristibhongi—tabe lekhay nijjossata ache— - Subhrangsu er lekha—chamotkar—besh legeche-bises kore sisirer moddhe ak dhoroner aboidhota thake – bah - Suvendu dolui er lekha motamuti legeche aro bhalo r ashay thakai jay - Abin sen- saler monjori- portei pareni- ato choto – aamr chasma to [:P]—portei parlam na – click korleo temon baro hocche na aita anupam - Rangeet er kobita ta khasa legeche-choruita niyaom kore clause shikche – bah bah khub sundor - Aronno—abarer blog er akta bises dik bola jetei pare—sabaike niye cholar akta chinho hayto akan thekei suru korlo- asha korbo aronno er lekha niyomito pabo—juddhokhetro theke lekhatar protekta angsho asadharon legeche—bises kore _” aschorjo tumi kakhono chand hoye asona, atocho punnoboti akta much-bastuto garbho baypartate kono pap nei”—darun—khub sundor akta lekha porlam - Jiya – babar poshak- ai barrer blog era mar mone hoyeche sabcheye bhalo lekhagulor onnotamo—bisay niye ato sundor bisayuttor sthare pouche geche – bar bar poreo mone hay aro aktibar pori—khub sundor lekha - Jayshila- barabori or bhalo kobita pori—abarer ta ager style er theke aktu alada mone hoyeche abong aktu beshi bhalo[:P]---- aro bhalo bhalo lekha parar agroho roilo - Bhaskorjyotir lekhata ager gulor tulonay aktu kom legeche – r asha roilo bhaskarer kach theke abar aro natun lekha pabo - Avijit bera ar sourangshu er lekhao besh bhalo—sudu sourrangshur lekhata khub bhalo kintu sesh line ta sabdo gulo same rekhe sabbo sajano take aktu onno rakom korle amar mone hay aro bhalo lagto—tachara lekhata besh bhalo - Seshe avishek er abasikata—jatogulo lekha blog e o diyeche amar mone hay onnotamo akta bhalo lekha--- khub bhalo legeche abarer or lekhta - Blog din ke din sudu agiye jacche bhalor dike – bhalo anubhuti sustho sadhona- arakomi jeno protibar natun kore nijeke khuje pete phire asi--
ANUPAM ANEK DIN KATHA HAY NA.NATUN LEKHA GULO PARLAM.KHUB BHALO LAGLO.BAIER COVERRE POST TA KAMON LAGCHE.BAKI BAI GULOR O PARLE KARE DIO.ROMIT AJ PH KARE CHILO.SUCCESSFULLY AI KAJTA TAR NIJER SRISTI NIYE EGIYE CHALECHE.NATUNDER SAKALKE BALCHI.TOMRA KABISAMMELANE NIRDIHDAY LEKHA PATHAO.SHYAL KANTIDAR SATHE AMAR AJ KATHA HALO.ORA TOMADER LEKHA BHALOBESE CHAPTE CHAY.SAB BHALO HOK.SAKALE ANANDE THAKUK.ANANDE RAKHYK.ATANUDA
anupamda tumi thik balecho vasata gatisil nadir mato baknebar khamata harale ta hariye jabe andhakar guhate.anna sabdo brang vasatake aro samridha kare bachiye rakhbe.
aamr khub bhalo laga niye aache ae blogti;aamar bondhuder lekha,aamr ogrojoder lekha...ki darun darun kobita;aami sob kobita gulo bar bar porchi ,r bhabchi je ki darun hoye utheche aamr ae blog jibon japon;aami jani na aami r o sopno dekhi;aamr samner bnadha aakash,birokti,chena cokh,obichol manush,ae rokom baromash protijogita,,,aamader na khawoya paglami...aamr je bhabe sopno dekha..dirgho misd call...a bhabe 10 ta beje jaye..somoy chole jaye...aami porte e thaki...sob somoy ae blogta k niye aamr jibon..aamr e hoye othe gotokal,ae somoy ta o aamr moto...aami jani na..aami sudhu r o erokom bhalo bhalo lekha porte chai.lekhar cheye,kotah bolar cheye r o beshi lekha prote chaye..bhabte chai..jante chai..aamr truti aache jekhane shekhane bosonto aashuk,odercharpash phul hoye jak...aami likhe jachii.aami likhe jachii..pore jachi..plz blog hoye jao sob....;ae blog e aamr so sobde othoba nisobde cholacholer poth..chinton...jibon japon..ethadi.......ae blog k tai selam...
AE BLOG AAMR KHUB PRIYO.AE BLOG AAMR KHUB BHALO LAGEE.DARUN LAGE..............
ei ja matha tolmol korchhe...ogo e amar boro paoya....ami thik jani na...ami jante chai na...ami keno kabita likhhi...ami bhoi pai kabider ami kabitake mar vetor theke ghrina kore keno je bhalobesefelechhi anupam da....amar je sab kichhu nasta hoye jai...wiliams karlos wiliams er ei kabita ta ami age porechhi...oi safed murgichana gulo ami porechhi er dhore rakht chetyechi amar sada choto khatay ..keno pari ni..?...keno..?...ei ram tui kichhu bol...ei sanju...satanirjan nam nie bahut bhul bhal likhchhis bol re sala...ami tor du gal chuye chumu khabo...?...sono ku amake rakha hoyechhe kamlalebu ...boi ta debe go/...ami tomar bari jhat die debo ek bachar...debe...?...ami kobe bolbo ajker aloy dekhe jker lekha ...bolo bolo....anupam da....amar kujo amar jolke eto kore rekhhechhe....etukui bolar je...etukui....badda eto kore rekhhechhe....suvranshu tomay boli er katadur tumi jano na...waiting for godot poroni bhai...?...ei ramit...amake dhankoya de...khub je likhechhis re...de amake de...ami dhan koya chai...ami morte chai sahaj alpath e,,....jiya hak tomake ekta chumu khabo bhai.....ami je baba noi babar moton...amar choke jol ese gachhe jano tumi...amar baba darun khol bajan...draun dhak bajan....sonsar bajate paren ni konodin...konodin 1 hajar tajao mase rojgar korte paren ni....sudhu nijer siter jama onnya kauke diye amake bolechhen...or to kichhu nei...amio babar moto roga....sudhu chok bandhya kore ekdin bolte cheyechhi baba amake tomar posak palte nite debe...ami sala ei omajer mukhe ek lathi mere jhule porbo batgachher dale...debe baba...?...ogo ami je babar moto noi...amar hate je sur khele na..ogo amar mukhe je 50 poisar biri saradin jole na...anindya sukhe...kau amake bole dao ami ki bhabe bacbo...sabda nie amar bhalo lage na amar bichanay upur hoye pore thakte...vaskorjaty...rimbadu porechho na...?...oui je soytaner dike khata jama dichhyo......kon sala issar er janya ajo dharmabok hoye achhe ami prasna korchhi...ami ajo soytaner dike ...ajo...chirokal thakbo...avishek je khuradhar jonir kathya bolechho....ei narider boli...amar dorkar nei bhul jaygay uttap choranor...mi chai na oder...chai na....ami ghrina kori meyeder,...sei tathakothioto meyeder....avishek...ami sala pagol hoye jabo...er eituku ichhya nie jibon katie debo amar jeno kokhono kabitar boi na beroy......
LEKHAGULO PALTE JABE SWABHABIKBHABEI ANUPAMDAKE REQUEST KORCHI KHUB BESHI KOBITA HOLE COMMENT KORAR MOTO SOMOY PAOYA JAY NA TAI AMAR NIROBOTAKE MARJONA KORO.
AMI JODI BOLI AMAR KUB KOM KABITAI KHUB BHALO LEGECHE TOBE KHUB THIK BOLA HOBE NA. KENONA BHALO LAGATA EK JINISH AR BIBECHONA KORATA AR EK JINISH.
AVISHEKDAR LEKHA BHALO LAGCHE. KINTU JODI BOLA JAY NOTUN KI PAOYA GYALO TAHOLE BOLBO : dharmoboker proshne noditirer bhongurota AR BAKITA BALMIKIR LINE THEKE SORE ASHA BODLEUR ER MOTO.
ARONNO KE BOLI juddhokhetro theke dekha...ki bhison bikrito eEMON MONE HOYAR KARON KHUnJE PACCHI NA. LOKGULOR KI DOSH BOLUN TO. BORONG BORO BORO CHAIR E BOSA DURDANTO MUKHGULOKEI TO BIKRITO MONE HOYA UCHIT, ARONNO HOY TO ANNO BHABE BHEBECHE. JAnRA JUDDHO KORCHEN TAnRA TO HATER PUTUL, TAKEO TO GHORE FIRTE HOBE....
AMADER ANUPAMER LEKHA TI KHUB BHALO BHABE PORA UCHIT. EI LEKHATI EKTI BORO MILESTONE HOTE PARE. PROTTEKKE BOLBO ARO EKBAR LEKHATI PORE DEKHUN TO KICHU PELEN KI NA. PELE JANABEN. AMI JA PEYECHI TA TO EI SPACE E LEKHA JABE NA TAI POROBORTITE KOTHAO JANAO ....
kobitar barshon theke je jar moto fasal folabe. je jar moto......... aal debe, dhal debe, gaal debe kintu akdin chaal debe. kobitar fawlar theke je jar moto fawl tule nik. je jar moto......
10th post hoe gelo !! vaabini etodur cholbe ei proyaas . naaki vebechhilam ! katha bolaar jhnoke bole felchhi !
ReplyDeleteAnupam ... Avisek ... Manik ... ebong ei post theke jog dilo Bhaskarjyoti . 27 jon member !! Bhaskar bolchhe sankhyata ekdin 270 hobe .
sky is the limit . aar ei blog Bangla kobita-r prothom blog . ei blog-e jaara likhchhen na ... tnaara kothae shunyo hoe achhen bhai !
AAMR DARUN LAGCHE AE BLOG...SOTTI E DURDANTO
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Kudos to Anupam. Blog aro egiye jabe. Manik ar Avishek-keo awbhinandan.
ReplyDelete'Awgrojoder Kobita' section-ta ekta regular feature hokna, valo lagbe. Ei section -e Kamal Chakraborty ar Bhaskar Chakraborty - ke dekhte chai vishonvabey.
eai blogti valo hoyeche...avinovo prayas...sahoshi padkkhep..parinirikkar aro abokash ache....
ReplyDeleteswadesdar ager lekha haleu tar swad ekhano rasiye neua jai.
ReplyDeleteanupamdar kabitate kujo jalke eto kare rakhe ba payer patate janlar fak ki asadharan vabna r kabitata sese ek annarakm view niye anana matra peyeche.
astonirjaner kabitate ebar jibnanander ekta metho nagrik sur sunte pelam.
ramit dey alada patarne anna badda likheche.
ei samayer kabitate anek engreji sabda ese jai.a niye anek kabike anek prasner mukhe parte hai.tabe eta ki khub doser janale khusi habo.aro kabita pare parer matamat debo.
ReplyDeletejai siladi ekhan natun vabe likhche .lekha anek palteche.kabitata darun dike egoche aro valokichu asa karchi........aviseker salpo parimitite kabitar sampado akata bes valo lagche.
ReplyDeleteei gulo ki scan kore lagano? porte khub asubidhe hoi...ekhon to banglate type kora jai khub sahoje ...kabita gulo khubi bhalo...tabe blogta aro sahojei sundor kora jai ...kichu mone koro na ...eto sundor sundor lekha ...
ReplyDeletePlz visit amar blog sonartoree.blogspot.com
idea pabe ...
indira
ReplyDeleteaapni mukhopadhyay naa likhe jodi mukherjee likhte paaren , aamara naahoe kichhudin evaabei chaalie dei . kobita byapaartaai to khub sekele ekta shobdo , taai na ? aar egulo scan kore noe , jpeg chhobi hisebe rekhechhi . ki korbo bolun , kaarigori gyan ( aapnar vaasae IDEA ) khub besi to nei ! naa thaakleo chole jaachhe jokhon ...
aascharyo laglo je etogulo vaalo kobita aapni saamne pelen , aar nijer blog promote kore chole gelen !! ekta kobita nieo to aalada kore kichhu critically likhte paarten !!!
aar ... kobita porte asubidha !!! ekta click korlei to seta aar thaake na !!!! seta korte paaren na ekta kobita porte ? aapni kobita vaalobaasen to aadou ?
kichhu mone korben na kintu !
subhankar ,
ReplyDeletetumi goto post-e etaa niei motaamot chaechhile aamader kaachh theke . aamar jeta mone hoe , kono vaasa jodi bneche thaakte chaae , taake nijer baaire bnaacha shikhte hoe . naa hole se muchhe jae .
jemon sanskrit gechhe .
ei muhurte ekjon tarun jodi nabadwip-er vaasae kobita lekhe , seta praakritik hobe na . ei mishro porisor-e je kobita rochito hobe , taar vaasa-o mishro hote baadhyo .
jaara tomaar somaalochona korchhe , taader bolo Jiabanananda Dash-o English words aakchhaar byabohaar korechhen . bolo je amitraakkhor chhondo-o Milton naa thaakle bangla kobita-e dhukto na .
bishuddho Bangla vaasa kothae aachhe tumi jaano ? aami ontoto jaani na konokaale taa kothao chhilo kina .
aamader puctuation mark-gulo-o to English theke neoaa !! Vidyasagar-k taahole ki bolbe ? tnaar aage to to semikolon , koma , dash , kolon kichhui chhilo na !
vaasa bodle jae . tobei se bnaache . vaasa bodlaano hoeto kobir kaaj noe . tobe sei bodol-k swikar kore neoaa ekjon buddhimaan kobir lokkhon .
- Prothomei anupam er anubad kobita—khub sundor
ReplyDelete- Anupamer ditiyo kobitatao besh bhalo – akhane akta katha jiggasso ache brahmbhon sabdota ki sei barno brahmon? Tahole banan ta ki thik ache na kobitar khatirei kora hoyeche?—
- Agrojoder kobitar section ta natun chalu kore blog ta natun matra pelo- amar byaktigato mot akhane jeno sab dharoner lekha deoa hay—sabdharoner mane kobita abong samantoral kobita both- sunil gangopadhay theke suru kore swadesh sen- tabe mone hay kobitay chutmarg ta amra sabai tule dite parbo- ata amar akantoi byaktigato akta iccche bolte paro anupam
- Astonirjoner lekha—sabolil sahoj bodhogammo sundor—hayto sabar jonno – khubi sundor –
- Souvik dar aro bhalo lekha porechi – sei hisebe dekhle motamuti legeche—tabe bisay ta besh sundor
- Somnath ghosal er lekhata besh adhunik abong nijjosso dhonge agiyechilo- kintu amar nijer mone hay kothao aktu khei hariye phelchilam parar somay- hayto sei ak ak pathoker ak ak dristibhongi—tabe lekhay nijjossata ache—
- Subhrangsu er lekha—chamotkar—besh legeche-bises kore sisirer moddhe ak dhoroner aboidhota thake – bah
- Suvendu dolui er lekha motamuti legeche aro bhalo r ashay thakai jay
- Abin sen- saler monjori- portei pareni- ato choto – aamr chasma to [:P]—portei parlam na – click korleo temon baro hocche na aita anupam
- Rangeet er kobita ta khasa legeche-choruita niyaom kore clause shikche – bah bah khub sundor
- Aronno—abarer blog er akta bises dik bola jetei pare—sabaike niye cholar akta chinho hayto akan thekei suru korlo- asha korbo aronno er lekha niyomito pabo—juddhokhetro theke lekhatar protekta angsho asadharon legeche—bises kore _” aschorjo tumi kakhono chand hoye asona, atocho punnoboti akta much-bastuto garbho baypartate kono pap nei”—darun—khub sundor akta lekha porlam
- Jiya – babar poshak- ai barrer blog era mar mone hoyeche sabcheye bhalo lekhagulor onnotamo—bisay niye ato sundor bisayuttor sthare pouche geche – bar bar poreo mone hay aro aktibar pori—khub sundor lekha
- Jayshila- barabori or bhalo kobita pori—abarer ta ager style er theke aktu alada mone hoyeche abong aktu beshi bhalo[:P]---- aro bhalo bhalo lekha parar agroho roilo
- Bhaskorjyotir lekhata ager gulor tulonay aktu kom legeche – r asha roilo bhaskarer kach theke abar aro natun lekha pabo
- Avijit bera ar sourangshu er lekhao besh bhalo—sudu sourrangshur lekhata khub bhalo kintu sesh line ta sabdo gulo same rekhe sabbo sajano take aktu onno rakom korle amar mone hay aro bhalo lagto—tachara lekhata besh bhalo
- Seshe avishek er abasikata—jatogulo lekha blog e o diyeche amar mone hay onnotamo akta bhalo lekha--- khub bhalo legeche abarer or lekhta
- Blog din ke din sudu agiye jacche bhalor dike – bhalo anubhuti sustho sadhona- arakomi jeno protibar natun kore nijeke khuje pete phire asi--
ANUPAM ANEK DIN KATHA HAY NA.NATUN LEKHA GULO PARLAM.KHUB BHALO LAGLO.BAIER COVERRE POST TA KAMON LAGCHE.BAKI BAI GULOR O PARLE KARE DIO.ROMIT AJ PH KARE CHILO.SUCCESSFULLY AI KAJTA TAR NIJER SRISTI NIYE EGIYE CHALECHE.NATUNDER SAKALKE BALCHI.TOMRA KABISAMMELANE NIRDIHDAY LEKHA PATHAO.SHYAL KANTIDAR SATHE AMAR AJ KATHA HALO.ORA TOMADER LEKHA BHALOBESE CHAPTE CHAY.SAB BHALO HOK.SAKALE ANANDE THAKUK.ANANDE RAKHYK.ATANUDA
ReplyDeleteami paathok-der kaachh theke bises kore jaante chaai Shuvendu-r kobitata somporke . lekhaata kintu khub ... aar jaai hok sorol noe .
ReplyDeleterameet , BRAAMBHON sei bornaashromer braambhon . baanata aamar type koraar durbolotaa dorsaachhe .
ha - oitai mone hoyechilo barno brahmon-- typing mistake - hoyei thake---tabe lekhata besh legeche --
ReplyDeleter suvendur lekha niye -- ami bolechilam motamuti legeche-- khub sotty katha akopate swikar kori- er aktai karon ami sotty anek ta bojar chesta kore bujhte pareni anupam - r kichu nay ata pathok hisebe hayto amar aparagata-- tobe bojar icche abbossooi roilo - mane swayong kobi abong pathoker bibhinno dristikon theke--- tomar katha dhorei boli- lekhata sotty khub sarol nay--
anupamda tumi thik balecho vasata gatisil nadir mato baknebar khamata harale ta hariye jabe andhakar guhate.anna sabdo brang vasatake aro samridha kare bachiye rakhbe.
ReplyDeleteAnupamke dhonyobad aamar mato ekjonke ei kobitar mail pathanor jonyo. Janina kotha theke aamake abishkar koreche - aami nijeo obaak. Besh kichudin dhorei eta paacchi. Chupchaap bhalo lagchilo . Aaj kichu na likhe paarlam na.Hoyto etai onr safalata. Eto bhalo bhalo kobita porar sujog debar jonyo ebong aajker kobitar notun notun pathe cholar saathi hisebe aamake deke nebar jonyo dhonyobad.
ReplyDeleteKobitay notun notun bideshi shobdo keno bideshi bhabna niye aamder ager kobira onekei raasta dekhiyechen - Maikel theke suru kore Jibonanando, Buddhodeb, Bishnu Dey kake baad debo . Enara sobai to ekso-bochor paar korechen , aajke aabar notun kore hothat notunotyoke niye proshno keno. Notun kichu janakei to egono bole , purono maane-to otit.
E-sob kotha sobai jaane tobu bondhutto-ke swagoto janiye duto kotha likhlaam. Aar noi.
Ei prochesta deerghajeebi hok. Aajker Technical sohojogitay sobaar kaache pouchubaar etai-to notun poth.- " Nije ja paarini dite nitya aami thaki taari khoje" . Good luck.
SAILEN SAHA, DELHI.
18.11.2009.
thank u Sailenbabu . khub vaalo comment . ei dhoroner kothaa to praanito kore .
ReplyDeleteAbin Sen said....
ReplyDeletekichu ashadharan lekha porlam...Desh potrikay je sob gotanugotik kobita prokash hoy..amar kache ei kobita gulir dabi beshi mone hoyeche...ghure fire porar moto kobita...dhonnobad apnader ei kobita guli porar sujogh kore debar jonne...
eituku bolte pari bhalo laglo, anekei bhalo lekhen, porlam, 10th post dekhte dekhte hoye gelo, aaro egiye jak bhobishoter dike....safollo kamona kori
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ReplyDeletePriyo Anupam,
ReplyDeleteAnekdin tomar sange dekha ba katha hoi na. Bhalo achho asha kori. Kabita nie tomar ei bistrito karmokandoke sadhubad na janie parchhi na. j-jio byata, j-jio.
Poetry after 2000 poRlam. Technical karone adhikangsho kabitai poRte asubidhe hochhe. Kichhu kabita akebabarei uddhar kara galo na. Amar mone hoy font-size ekto baro kore, bold kore dile subidhe hote pare. Aboshyo tumi ei byapare amar theke anek beshi jano.Amara char dashak ager lok (kabi bole dabi korchhi na), Akhon kabita druto bodle jachhe- bisoye, bhabnay ebong angike. Kabitar aboyobeo anek paribartan ghatchhe, jamon Rasit Das-er kabita. Eta akta andolon, 60-er dashoke jamon HUNGRY-SHRUTI ei jatiyo neeriksha hoyechhilo. Tabe amar mone hoy, je kono shilpei Back to Basics kathata projojyo. Ekaler kabider bhebe dekhte anurodh kori.
Bhalo theko. Kaaj kore jao.
Apurba-da (Dutta)
aamr khub bhalo laga niye aache ae blogti;aamar bondhuder lekha,aamr ogrojoder lekha...ki darun darun kobita;aami sob kobita gulo bar bar porchi ,r bhabchi je ki darun hoye utheche aamr ae blog jibon japon;aami jani na aami r o sopno dekhi;aamr samner bnadha aakash,birokti,chena cokh,obichol manush,ae rokom baromash protijogita,,,aamader na khawoya paglami...aamr je bhabe sopno dekha..dirgho misd call...a bhabe 10 ta beje jaye..somoy chole jaye...aami porte e thaki...sob somoy ae blogta k niye aamr jibon..aamr e hoye othe gotokal,ae somoy ta o aamr moto...aami jani na..aami sudhu r o erokom bhalo bhalo lekha porte chai.lekhar cheye,kotah bolar cheye r o beshi lekha prote chaye..bhabte chai..jante chai..aamr truti aache jekhane shekhane bosonto aashuk,odercharpash phul hoye jak...aami likhe jachii.aami likhe jachii..pore jachi..plz blog hoye jao sob....;ae blog e aamr so sobde othoba nisobde cholacholer poth..chinton...jibon japon..ethadi.......ae blog k tai selam...
ReplyDeleteAE BLOG AAMR KHUB PRIYO.AE BLOG AAMR KHUB BHALO LAGEE.DARUN LAGE..............
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apurbada ,
ReplyDeletesammanito holaam . aapni thik bolechhen , aami jaani , kichhu lekhaa ekhaane soraasori poraa jaae na . abashyo ekta left click korle lekhata boro hoe jaabe . tokhon somosya nei .
kobita jug-e jug-e bodlaae . aapni ei sotyo-k swikriti dilen . ei udaarota sokoler thaake na dada . onekei nijer poridhir lekha naa hole bole den seta kobita noe , kobita hoe ni . aar aboshyoi shilpi-k taar maadhyom-er itihaas jaante hobe ... Back to Basics ... je kono muhurte sei saadhyo taar thaaka chaai .
aamader somoprojonme onek kobi-r kaachhe bangla kobita-r itihaas suru hochhe Jibananada theke ... sunil theke ... joy theke ... emonki hoeto Barin Ghosal theke-o . etaa thik noe . ete kobi-r biswaasjogyota thaakae na . bujhte hobe sei kobi bangla kobita-r hoe kobita likhchhe na , nijer hoe likhchhe .
nijer kobita to botei , onyer kobita nie serious katha bolaar obhyaas theke aamader somobyosi kichhu kobi dur-e sore thaakchhe . katha bolte baadhyo holeo vaasa vaasa katha bole sore porche . ete aamader kobita swaasthobaan hobe na . kichhu kobi byaktigoto khyati hoeto paabe . setaao besidin tikbe na , tikte paare na .
thank you Apurbada . aapnaake bhobisyote aaro chaai aamader .
porlam! sotyi bolte ki beshi kotha naa bole Abin-er kothatar songe sohomot janai! boichitro ebong ros dutotei blogti koromoso unmargi! ekdom somoy pachchhilam na bole kichhu likhteo pari ni! abar somoy kore sokoler kobita somporke likhbo! tobe gotobarer amar jey deerghoswash chhilo ebare Kobira seta mitiye diyechhen! aar amar lekhatake Kuleen kobitagulor songe dekhe mondo laglo na! Sotyi bolchhi! baki chulchera bishleshon nahoy pore korbo!
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MUKH FIRIYE NEBAR MOTO KONO KOTHA HOYNI TO TOBE MICHIL CHOLECHE KENO KE JANE!
AMI SEI MICHILER DOLE MISHE GIYE ARO ARO BESHI EKA HOYE JAI...
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ei ja matha tolmol korchhe...ogo e amar boro paoya....ami thik jani na...ami jante chai na...ami keno kabita likhhi...ami bhoi pai kabider ami kabitake mar vetor theke ghrina kore keno je bhalobesefelechhi anupam da....amar je sab kichhu nasta hoye jai...wiliams karlos wiliams er ei kabita ta ami age porechhi...oi safed murgichana gulo ami porechhi er dhore rakht chetyechi amar sada choto khatay ..keno pari ni..?...keno..?...ei ram tui kichhu bol...ei sanju...satanirjan nam nie bahut bhul bhal likhchhis bol re sala...ami tor du gal chuye chumu khabo...?...sono ku amake rakha hoyechhe kamlalebu ...boi ta debe go/...ami tomar bari jhat die debo ek bachar...debe...?...ami kobe bolbo ajker aloy dekhe jker lekha ...bolo bolo....anupam da....amar kujo amar jolke eto kore rekhhechhe....etukui bolar je...etukui....badda eto kore rekhhechhe....suvranshu tomay boli er katadur tumi jano na...waiting for godot poroni bhai...?...ei ramit...amake dhankoya de...khub je likhechhis re...de amake de...ami dhan koya chai...ami morte chai sahaj alpath e,,....jiya hak tomake ekta chumu khabo bhai.....ami je baba noi babar moton...amar choke jol ese gachhe jano tumi...amar baba darun khol bajan...draun dhak bajan....sonsar bajate paren ni konodin...konodin 1 hajar tajao mase rojgar korte paren ni....sudhu nijer siter jama onnya kauke diye amake bolechhen...or to kichhu nei...amio babar moto roga....sudhu chok bandhya kore ekdin bolte cheyechhi baba amake tomar posak palte nite debe...ami sala ei omajer mukhe ek lathi mere jhule porbo batgachher dale...debe baba...?...ogo ami je babar moto noi...amar hate je sur khele na..ogo amar mukhe je 50 poisar biri saradin jole na...anindya sukhe...kau amake bole dao ami ki bhabe bacbo...sabda nie amar bhalo lage na amar bichanay upur hoye pore thakte...vaskorjaty...rimbadu porechho na...?...oui je soytaner dike khata jama dichhyo......kon sala issar er janya ajo dharmabok hoye achhe ami prasna korchhi...ami ajo soytaner dike ...ajo...chirokal thakbo...avishek je khuradhar jonir kathya bolechho....ei narider boli...amar dorkar nei bhul jaygay uttap choranor...mi chai na oder...chai na....ami ghrina kori meyeder,...sei tathakothioto meyeder....avishek...ami sala pagol hoye jabo...er eituku ichhya nie jibon katie debo amar jeno kokhono kabitar boi na beroy......
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ami sala ajke kadchhi....dhur chai...ami er kabita likhbo na...
ReplyDeleteastanirjan , ekhon porjonto aamar anyotomo paaoa tomaar ei comment .
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ANUPAMDAKE REQUEST KORCHI KHUB BESHI KOBITA HOLE COMMENT KORAR MOTO SOMOY PAOYA JAY NA TAI AMAR NIROBOTAKE MARJONA KORO.
AMI JODI BOLI AMAR KUB KOM KABITAI KHUB BHALO LEGECHE TOBE KHUB THIK BOLA HOBE NA. KENONA BHALO LAGATA EK JINISH AR BIBECHONA KORATA AR EK JINISH.
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AR BAKITA BALMIKIR LINE THEKE SORE ASHA BODLEUR ER MOTO.
JOYSHILA GUHA BAGCHIR KOBITATI EKTI RUSSIAN UPONNASER KOTHA MONE PORIYE DILO: ALEXANDER BELAEVE ER EKTI NOVEL. NOTUN LEKHA BOLE MONE HOY....
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juddhokhetro theke dekha...ki bhison bikrito
eEMON MONE HOYAR KARON KHUnJE PACCHI NA. LOKGULOR KI DOSH BOLUN TO. BORONG BORO BORO CHAIR E BOSA DURDANTO MUKHGULOKEI TO BIKRITO MONE HOYA UCHIT, ARONNO HOY TO ANNO BHABE BHEBECHE. JAnRA JUDDHO KORCHEN TAnRA TO HATER PUTUL, TAKEO TO GHORE FIRTE HOBE....
AMADER ANUPAMER LEKHA TI KHUB BHALO BHABE PORA UCHIT. EI LEKHATI EKTI BORO MILESTONE HOTE PARE. PROTTEKKE BOLBO ARO EKBAR LEKHATI PORE DEKHUN TO KICHU PELEN KI NA. PELE JANABEN. AMI JA PEYECHI TA TO EI SPACE E LEKHA JABE NA TAI POROBORTITE KOTHAO JANAO ....
thanks Manik . aamke khub nischinto korlo tomaar comment . hotaash laagchhilo kobitata ekhaane deoaar por . keno laagchhilo tumi bujhte paarchho nischoi ! perechho aami jaani .
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ReplyDeleteDin-Protidin ekhono Mrityu-bhoy!
Mithun Shorire sobol prothon seshe....
Aro ekbar Valobasha mane Khoy!
Arekta din eka eka boshe thaka,
Ekhono du-chokh sudhui tomake khonje...
Jhor hoe otha tomar Valobsha,
Hoyto ekhono amar sopno bojhe!!!???
bhalo
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