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abar ekta asadharan blog sankhya jar jekono kabitay chok bandhya kore bhalo lege jai...darun darun...ami porchi er vaschhi....sampraty hate esechhe anupamdar highway...sutarang...pather nesay je bhabe path jhore jai path e....ami boitar pase upur hoye bhuje nite chaichhi kichhu.... polas dey...soytan...amar asombhob bhalo legechhe....subhendu dalui ...anu o anurup na lagam konta kabitar nam...nam lagam anu o anurup sirig er kono kabita?...bhalo kabita....or lekhar praty amar ekta mugdhoyota achhe bahudin...ritam sen er suruta dudhrsya....kintu ses ta badda prachalito kichhu hote cheyechhe...kintu sab milie kabitat ekta bes duluni day...himel mondal er lekhat bes sapt.....bes kichhu rang paoya galo...rangeet mitra ebong ramit dey er lekhaduty amake gach chinie dichhe kramasyo...khanikta ure gachhe mathar opor die khanikta dhukechhe...ami baba tatey khusi...jayasila guha bagchir puro kabitata mathar bahu opordie hussss hoye gachhe...ami khub chesta korechhi ki...na apatota amar pathoner choukathe mora mach gulo charie achhe? chabita bhalo laglo...ami to chabi samndhey astorambhya...tao...
bes kichhu natun kabita porar swad elo...tar thekeo boro kathya bes kichhu natun line..prottyeker kabitay peye amar khub bhalo legechhe ...abar ekta durdantya sankhar janya...anupam da...o sobai ke dhaynobad...avishek er kabita koi...?... porer sankhay dekhte nischoi paoya jabe...achhya karu lekha na dekhle ebar kosto hochhe keno...vaskorjaty tomar o lekha dui sankhay pachhi na ..ero kao karo...amra ki blog paribar hoye jachhi...kosto bole dichhi...jadio amar moto ekjon akabi...ei blog e ese basa banachhe tao...pase theko sobai...ami likhte pari na pari...yea bhalobaste pari...kabi o kabita dujonkey....
eto bhalo sab kabita...na..aj sala ami ekta kabita likhboi...astanirjan
abar akta sundor post-- aste aste agiye choleche amader chotto nodita agun khelar deshe--- khub sundor kichu lekha porlam aibarer post e-- prothomei boli rangeet-- khub bhalo hoyeche ritam er lekhata sampurno sattontro chap rakhe- tabe sanju er sathe ami kichuta akmat puro lekhata khub i sundor holeo kayekta jaygay aktu hariye geche-- tabe besh bhalo lekha
himel mondol er lekha sabolil saccho sundor- aitukui bolte pari amar bhalo legeche
astronirjon er lekhata ami anupam er scrap e agei porechilam-- takoni bhalo legeche -- abar natun kore laglo-- ar astronirjon nijjjosso style ta akhaneo bajay rekheche dekhe bhalo laglo--
palash de ar subhendu dolui - chotor opor misti lekha----
abar asi jayshila-- abarer post er onnotamo paona--bhalo legeche-- aro lekha parar jonno roilam- kintu ami chai jayshila tar ai nijjosso pattern er baire kichu likhuk-- karon se pare --
baki roilo anupam--ami anupam er ai lekhata age poreni ai prothom bar porlam-- kintu amar mon choyni- aktu klise mone hoyeche-- asole ami anupamer anek bhalo lekha porechi phole mon sabsomayi ta choke niye porte bose- sei dik diye amar mone hoyeche kothao kothao sabolilata hariye geche-- aktu jor royeche jeno kobitar moddhe
avishek er chobi niye no comments--- age comments oke diyechilam--- seta o jane--hehehee
tabe ai bhabei blog agiye choluk anupam er kache amar akta dabi ache -- ai blogtakei akdin akta patrikar akar deoa jay na ki?- ai blog poribarer sadossoder niye?--
ebaarer post ekhon obodhi best . asaadhaaron lekha sobguloi .
Ramit bolechhe Palash ebong Suvendu-r lekha or MISTI legechhe . bolaar kichhu nei . kaar-o jodi chicken-biriani misti laage ... je jaar nijoswo swadkorok nie aachhe . keu to boltei paare : dekh ki chomotkar suryo uthchhe dokkhin dik theke ! taar vul ki kore dhorie debo bolun !
aami tomaake chalenge korlaam bhai Ramit : keno tumi Palash ebong Shuvendu-r lekhaake MISTI ebong aamar lekhaake CLICHE` bolechho , byakkhya kore bojhaao . aami jaani tumi paarbe na . sudhu katha bolaar jonne katha bola ekta tradition hoe jaachhe onek somokaalin chheler . seta aswasthokor .
Avisek-er chhobita-o nischoi tomaar valo laageni ! kintu tumi blog-er header hisebe je chhobigulo choyon korechhile , se to ... mone aachhe to tomaar !
tumi kobita eto vaalo lekho , kobita nie katha eto vaasavaasa bolo keno ?
Sufi gaan gaibar jonyo Nusrat-er bhaipor dak pore! abar jazz based romantic ganer jonyo Atif Aslamke poisa diye uriye ana hoy! kintu onek producer-er poisa naa thakay sob gaan-i Sonu Nigamke diye gaoay! karon se allrounder! ghotonata seirokom-i! experiment korte parleo koro Sachin hao! nahole Afridi-o mondo noy!
aare e rokom to aage porini ! ta hoeto ... ki bolbo ... kobita-e bismoy-er porisor rochona kora kobir daayitbter moddhe pore na , kobi seta sotopronoditovaabei koren . korte chaile kora jae na . korleo paathok-niropekkho hote paare na . valo laaga byapaartao universal noe .
aamar golaap ful valo laage na . ki kora jaabe ? Ramendrakumar Acharya Choudhuri ek meyer katha likhechhilen je patrol-er gondho valobasto . sei meyer ki biye hoechhilo ?
aamar kobita-e ichhe korei kichhu shobdo raakaha aachhe jaara ei muhurte bangla kobita to oboshyoi bangla vaasa thekei berie gechhe . aar HAASBIVAASBIKAASHJOCHHONA shobdota raabindranath theke neoa , ektu bodle nie . OLOKH aarekta shobdo . JE JON ... OKAARON ... ONYOMON ... AANDHAR ... NIKETON ... ei shobdogulo byabohaarbohirvuto . byabohar-e nei bolei aamar kaachhe natun , ebong aamar protyashae paathoker kaachheo apratyashito . prothom paath-e kobitatike praachinponthi mone hote paare . jemon ekjon porichalok ronginer bodole saadaakaalo bechhe nen ... aami sadakaalo-r bodole eastman colour bechhe niechhilam .
prochchhod darun, darun hochchhe...1ta identity hoye uthchhe bloger...jodio ei poster ta tulonay kom valo laglo ... anyway darun kaj hochchhe rochisnu babu ebong anupam da...
Anupam er avishek dujoner alochona ba samalochana jai hok na- ek ek byaktir kache ak ak rakam- tar I prekkhapote ai post— - 1- anupam boleche ami kichu bole chole gechi aita uporchalaki- ai puro sabdotai bhul kimba anupamer mone haoa- karon hayto kono karone somay na paoar jonno ba kom asar jonno uttor deoa jay ni – tar jonno kono jiniske specify kara uchit bole ami mone korina - 2- abar onno prosonge- anupamer nijer I bhinno post e bhinno mat paoa gelo ja khub I bismayer—akdike anupam bolche “valo laga byapaarto universal noe—amar golap ful valo laage na. ki kora jabe?” abar ak dike cliché bolar jonno tomar ato jukti tarko korte hocche--- dhore nao na aita amar mato pathoker kache bhalo lageni—tomar matei to bhalo lagata universal nay—tai na.. pathok ke tumi jhor korte paro na pathok ki chok diye dekhbe ki sure porbe—tumi likhte paro r tomar katha anujayi sat kobi hisebe tomar lekhar essence take establish karar chesta korte paro- akjon kobi hisebe se tumi ami[adou kina jani na] kimba keu I ar bershi kicui korte parina- pathoker nijer chok nijer icche nijer anubhuti tar chok diye kobitake nijer mato kore established kore-- tumi likhecho keno ami palash er shuvendu er lekha misti ar tomar lekha cliché bolechi- amar mone hay ager bayktoboi er uttor- as pathok oder lekha amar mon amar mato kore chuyeche tai misti ar tomar ta amar mone hoyeche amar anubhuti nite pareni seibhabe – tomar suvendu ba palash karu sathei to byaktigato birodh nei – na kobi hisebe kono rakom obhiman- sutorang aita puropuri patok ramit er akanto byaktigato mot…tai tumi je bolecho ami proman korte parbo na je oder lekha ta keno amar choke bhalo ar tomar ta cliché sotty katha er aktai uttor—pathok ramit er mon choyni tai pathok ramit boleche—se hajar tarko holeo pathok ramit aki jaygay thakbe – ata kono katha bolar jonno nay—ar samakalin cheleder tradition niye je kathata bolecho oitake ato sarbojonin kore bola amar mone hayna amader karuri uchit—abossoi ata amar individual matamot- karon amra keu I samakal ke purota chinina chinteo parbo bole mone hay na ---SETA AMAR AKKHOMATA
- 3 –nasto hasonto , du char katha bristi- khaypate piano etc niye tumi je bolecho 1960 peroyni at ate amar kono kichu bolar nei karon – sotty katha hayto tumi anek lekha pore thakbe kintu ami ajo jani na ai 1960 r 2000 er bibhag ta ke kore gelo? Kothao lekha ache 2000 er kobita likhte gele 1960 er pechone pore thakle hobe na?- tomar nijer katha anujayi tomar sabdotai to rabindranath theke aktu bodle neoa – tahole ki bolbo? Tumi puronoke borjito korte perecho? Na ki purono theke inspired?- asole amar mone hay kono kichu harayna amra nijeder ke established korar jonno purono jug purono kobita purono sabdo amon sab purno shyaola makha katha bartha chapiye di—ata amader byarthota swikar korte na parar. R tumi je bolecho 1960 perote pareni tar mane tomar ki mone hay 1960 er ager gulo kobita chilo na ? pathok chilona? Chilo chilo anupam chilo sedino chilo ajkeo ache—thakbeo—sudu kichu sabdo kichu juge tar chap rekhe jay- ajo amra 1960-1970 pori ajo tumi rabindranath ke aswikar korte paro na..jodi balo paro tahole bolbo nijer sathe seta mitthey..R sotty katha kobita samporke amar gyan gommi bison kom—ami sotty kichu jani kina nijeo jani na – mon theke neshar chute kobita likhi—amar mon konodino bole ni 1960-1970-1990-2000—aita bhebe kobita likhte hobe---mone hoyche likhte hobe- likhechi- amar nijjosso anubhuti diye—pathoker bhalo na I lagte pare- - - Tumi nije tomar lekhar kichu sabdo ja tomar mote aprocholito—olokh, jejhon, akaron, niketon etc tumi support korecho ai bole je tader byabohar nei bole segulo naki tomar kache natun tahole to tumi amar je sabdo guloke niye alochona korecho segulokeo ai bhabe dhorte parte – 1960 perote pareni jakhon takhon se to abyborhito—ta holei pathoker kache natun—tahole ki dhorbo? Kobi nijer anubhutir belay ak katha ar samalochonar belay bhinno mat? Atao ki bhasabhasa holo na? - Abar roilo avishek er chobi anka samporke—ami likhechilam orkute or sathe ai baypare alochona hoyechilo tai thak- asole ato baro alochona hoyechilo kono rate j ear setake ghante bhalolage ni- karon as artist avishek tar nijer view point e stick thakbe—jeta ami respect kori – shilpir nijo jaygayke nijer mato kore defend karata amar mone hay darker- thik temon I as dorshok amio amar jaygay stick thakbo tai ar bolini—asole avi anka ta ankar par amake dekhte bolechilo – ami dekhe bolechilam amar mato kore – akdom akta nyara mathar buddhi niye abong jigges korechilam ki artho korar chesta korechis—avi bolechilo khonjo – “atai shilpir kaj kichu sristi kore chere deoa darshok khunjuk”[purota mone nei jetuku bhasa bhasa mone ache oi tukui bolchi]- ami bolechilam tahole ki tui chas na darshok bujhuk- takon avishek thik or matoi bolechilo shilpi daybadho nay—hundred percent right—amio mone kori shilpi daybadho nay tar anubhuti bojannor jonno- takon ami jigges kori tahole darshoker samne shilpi ki nijer sristir mullayan chay na?—chai amra chai – akhane ami anupam tumi jayshila avishek palash astronirjon keu jodi ai kathata buk bajiye bolte pare kobita diyechi anka diyechi r keu amar lekha pore bhalo boluk chaina seta sarboibo mitthey- kom beshi hote pare ai degree ta kintu aita human psychology--- jar jonno aj tomar kobita cliché bolar jonno tumi ato jukti protuktir majhe dubecho…..jai hok je kathay aschilam—avishek er chobir ami kichu bujhni sedin ar ajkeo—ami realism e akhono jene uthte parlam na ar surrealism na ki sab alochona se to anek mathar opor diye go ---sotty bujhini avishek—ata amar choker akkhomata bolte paris - --kintu mitthye bole stabokata karar chesta ami sedin o korini ajkeo korbo na—
- Abar asi avishek er comment er prosonge—avishek nije akta prosner uttor nije diye geche—bhalo laga na laga ta appekkhik—khub bhalo – mone hay amader sabar I ai kathata mathay rakha uchit mullayaner somay—abar asi verdict prosonge—accha avishek ke akta katha jigges kori atodin blog e je je lekha aseche jakhon keu bhalo bolechi keno bhalo seta ki bolechi? Mane with proper byakha? Amar mone hay na barin da chara sotty se arthe amra keu I bhalo ke bhalo bolar somay sei mato alada kichu byakha diyechi –kichu sabdo bhalo kimba kichu anubhuti bhalo ai jatio angike bendhe rekhechi- amon ki avi nijeo dekhte pare bhalo ke bhalo bolar somay o nay bhaskor chakrobortir udaharon teneche na hay kichu sabdo er example diyeche—sutorang verdict er sathik byakha amra kajan diyechi je amra sabai sabar dike angul tule bolte pari? - 2--- avi boleche jakhon kono lekha ba anka anubhav korte parina takon seta amra kobir akkhomata hisebe dhara hay keno?—are avishek keu dhoreni babu—anupam er lekha cliché mane anupamer akkhomata dhara hay ni – seta pathok hisebe amar monke touch koreni amar bhalo lageni—atai akopat swikarakti – ami to mitthey bolte parina na bhalolagatake sudu bhalo bolar ajuhate—tui to thik I bolechis ata amar ba amader mane jara jara ai mate biswasi aparagata – sotty rasogrohon sambhov hayni se khetre—ami to tai anupam ke aitai bolar icche prokash korlam ager comments ei je anupam tomar lekha cliché bolechi ate ato juktir kichu nei—pathok hisebe nite parini- bhison simple- - - 3- r amar mathay asche na anupam dar leha cliché ai kathata niye avishek alada kore comment karar ki mane?- avishek to nijei bolche bhalolagata relative—anupam er anek lekha amar bhalo legeche ami prothom comments ei likhechilam ar mane ai na je sab lekha baddhotamulok bhalo lagte hobe----r baro joke bohudin shunini ai kathatao amar kache aswabhabik lagche- ai bohudin ta katodin? Ata to tor nijjosso anubhuti – hotei pare – seta to blog e alochonar bisaybostu nay—anupamer kobita cliché kina jeta alochonar bisaybasto nay bisaybasto anupamer ai kobita ta keno ramit cliché boleche- Akhane ai blog e amar mone hay na amra keu karu sampurno lekhar style niye alochonar jonno asechi- kichu bhalo kobita kichu bhalo kobi pete asechi.—“anupamdar mato keu likheche kina”- ai bayktobo sampurno tor byaktigato – a byapare amar comments karar kichu nei- sudu akta katha bolbo bhasa sabdo form ai je natun bolechis seta natun nay- seta ai 2000 blogspot bhalo kore lokkho korle dekhbi anekei byabohar kore- ha baybohar karar nipunata alada alada- hayto anupam er kichu lekhay seta beshi—bhabis na ami karu byaktininda ba prosongsha korchi- tor ai comments e hathat mone holo tui kobitar biare kobike niye alochona korechis beshi—jeta amar mone hay kobitar ato sundor blog e sotty nisproyojonio. Ar akta katha ki jukti ache jigges korechis- tahole akta kathai bolbo - AvISHIK- SOTTY KICHU JUKTI NEI—MON NITE PARENI ANUBHUTI NEYNI-TAI AMI APAROG HOYECHI ROSASWADANE--- MAY BE ATA AMAR BYARTHOTA—TOBE AKTA KATHA BOLI- KOBITA KI SOTTY ATO JUKTIR? SOTTY ATO BITORKER? TAHOLE ABEG KOI? TAHOLE ANUBHUTI KOI?- - - JAI HOK PROCHUR BHAT BOKLAM—bhul bhal boklam—mane aktu hathe somay chilo ar kaj chilo na tai—tabe blog cholche bolg cholbe- jor kadome—ar anupamer kache ami akta jinis jante cheyechilam blog er lekha niye patrika setar byapareo utsuk roilam - Suvoratri sabaike
ha ha ei dekhyo choke jol chole aschhe...yea hay asli jidegi...kothay je bathya thake er molom....amra sab eiiiiiiiii....bhalo theko bandhura...eso maramari kori...paraspor ke jarie kede feli du ek abissoronio muhurte....
hehehehe-- sanju ta abar kedeo pheleche--- uff r tomay acto korte hobe na bap amar-- amni lej tene paliyecho--- abar akon ase kanna kati--aro 4 te gantta---:]
tumi to dekhchhi chote gele ! bhai , cliche aar vaalo laaga ei shobdogulo gulie felchho keno !! cliche holeo valo lagte paare karo karo ... karon valo laga universal noe ... ha h a haaa ... tomaar lekha to aamar khub vaalo legechhe . shobdoproyog cliche holei ki kobitavalo laagte nei . aabar hoeto dhoro Avisek-er valo lage ni tomaar ei lekhata .
Valo post, valo kobita, valo alochona...:) Rangeet, Palash ar Anupam er kobita valo laglo vishon. 'Misti' kobita, sottiy anupam, sunlei monta teto, ba motka gawrom hoye jaye..:) Shobdota ektu awpomanjonok botei. thutnitey hath diye jethima 18 bochhorer meyetike bollen 'O ma, ki misti hoyeche amader Sonai', ar Sonai solojjyo heshe chokh namiye nilo !' ei post er kobitagulo motei eirokom kichu noy, Palash-er kobita-ta tow noy-i. jai hok..
'cliche' shobdota vague, useless. 'cliche' mane ki idea ta old, bohu-byabohrito, na shobdoproyog ? jodi idea sonkranto comment hoy, tahole bolte hoy 'moulik' bole kichhu hoy bole mone hoyna. tai presentation, shokiyota eguloi important. cliche byaparta kichuta holeo hoyto shobdoproyoger khetre bola jete paare. tobe 'cliche', 'gotanugotik', ittyadi na vebe, konta kobita hoye uthlo, setai ekmatro consider korar bishoy. eta ekta undefined byapar. konta pore valo lagbe ar konta pore noy, pathok age theke janena, kobio janena. kobir ekta 6th sense thake jeta take boley je eta 'kobita' hoyeche, lekhar porey se eta feel korey. tar ei feeling er songe oneke ekmot hoy, oneke hoyna. jara ekmot hoy, tara kobita-tir o kobir prosongsha korey, onnyora korena. byass, hoye gyalo.kobir kache nijer feeling-tai all important. eitukui. kobita niye ayto porjalochonar jaygai nei hoyto, kobita niye porashonar jayga prochur, kintu porjalochonar jayga onek kom. etai mawja. :)
Rangeeter Lekha aamr bHalo lageni ;ae je akjn kobi bar Bar NIjer ghorana change korchN;ae je procharpona dekhachn,paglamo koRcHen a SOB E oSOtH ; aMar BahLO LaGE NA; AKSOMOy unI SOBdo BOshaTEN;aNTlamo Kore BIdesHi kobiTa,SOkol BanGLA BazaR K Jini bondhu Bole diBBI KISOb daRun Darun shiKhyabid o MoJAR boshtu o Nijer oshIKhta,NONGrAMI EtC DEKHIYECHN.AAMR kACHE RANGEET akjn BorJI kobi O THOK O obHIneta.
ONek ObHijog JOME AACHEE....;rAnGEET AMI jani Tumi KOBIta k BHalo ae Je koNo kObir hoTah SRK HOYAR PROBOBOnOTA,BEKTI gOTO DOlADoli,rajNiti...tacha eroKoM "gach"Type kObita aami ONek porechi.rangTEER pROLM BOnDHO HOK.oR LEkha Amr BHalo Lage na.Rangeet cHando Poro,lekha Poro,koBiTa mUKosto kOro,expeRimntal bole oe Ja Iche Tai koro na;Ami JANI tomr Inetelct AaChe,Tumi chaIle LIkhTe Paro BHalo Lekha,bazARI LEHA ASOB DEKHO;jOgA JOg diYE LEkha howna;
taar bodole eta to chhelemaanusi hoe gelo . ei rokom aachoron kore ki laav bolo to ! er fole keu kintu tomaake seriously nebe na . tomaar kobita-k-o sondeho korbe .
bujhte paarle to ebaar , keno tomaake editorial team theke baad dite holo aamader ! tomaake songe nie cholaar poristhiti tumi nijei raakho na .
suprovat sabaike-- aktu amader blog ghure gelam-- sakal sakal-- 1- prothomei anupam ke boli--je anupam chotachotir kono prosnoi nei--hahahaa-- are baba amra akhane alochona kori shiki bhabi - er moddhe abeg ache rag nay-- ata mukto moncho-- akhane aste bhalolage bolei ato likhi- ar baki roilo tarko bitarko seta abar next post e hobe--heheheheee--- - 2-souvik dar comments niye akta kathai bolbo sei as a pathok ak ak joner ak ak mot- tobe puro blog ta dekhle anek natun projonmer bhalo kobita je parom prapti se bisaye kono sandeho nei-- -3- kintu je bisaye sakal sakal bolte alam-- ai anonymous diye abar lekha bandho hok. ami jani na anonymous ke jante iccuk o noi kintu amar mone hay ata kobitar blog kobir nay-- jeta ageo bolechi--- akkhane kobita niye alochonar jonno asi jatotuku jani ar jatotuku jani na sab tuku anubhav karar jonno--sekhane byaktigato kadachorachori -na na- akdomi bhalo laglo na-- amar mone hay ai jatio byaktigato matamat na thaklei bhalo-- kobir kobita niye alochona hok kintu sot na asot seta na hay onno kothao sere nilei bhalo naki?-- r ami rangeet keo boli rangeet post kore muchis na del koris na - ja janabar ache akopate take samne niye ay-- nahole ki hay janis bhulbojabujhi sristi hay-- akhane ai blog e amra likhte asechi- konta bhalo konta kharap se saber urdhe kintu karu byaktigato charitro uddhar korte noy- tai na babu? ami jani na anonymous ke -- sotty katha amar mone hay na jara lekhen blog e tarao keu jante agrohi-- kintu ami mone kori proteker uchit nijer lekha likhe nijer mot diye seta prokassshe ana; na ki del kore deoa- tate aproyojonio confusion bare boi kome na --akjon kobi hisebe ai sacchota amader sabar kammo--
jak blog aro agiye jak-- sabsomay achi ami amra-- ar sabar theke bhalo pabo jani aro aro--amra likhi sudu likhi -- setai akjon kobi korte pare r kichu nay....
tobe ektaa katha . ei muhurte ei je porisor , taake sobchaaite saarthokvaabe prokaash korchhe Rangeet Mitra . kintu o aachoronta akritrim kore na keno jaani na .
dupur o majh rater janalaje ek nai suru tatei chamke otha,anek bhabna siri vagte thake....... purnimake niye ekprasta alapchritai chat amader choker niche ba opre satti ekta adharer janalai ke ba kara jeno uki dite thake...ebar chalte thaka bindas.(anupam dar kabita pare)
abar ekta asadharan blog sankhya jar jekono kabitay chok bandhya kore bhalo lege jai...darun darun...ami porchi er vaschhi....sampraty hate esechhe anupamdar highway...sutarang...pather nesay je bhabe path jhore jai path e....ami boitar pase upur hoye bhuje nite chaichhi kichhu....
ReplyDeletepolas dey...soytan...amar asombhob bhalo legechhe....subhendu dalui ...anu o anurup na lagam konta kabitar nam...nam lagam anu o anurup sirig er kono kabita?...bhalo kabita....or lekhar praty amar ekta mugdhoyota achhe bahudin...ritam sen er suruta dudhrsya....kintu ses ta badda prachalito kichhu hote cheyechhe...kintu sab milie kabitat ekta bes duluni day...himel mondal er lekhat bes sapt.....bes kichhu rang paoya galo...rangeet mitra ebong ramit dey er lekhaduty amake gach chinie dichhe kramasyo...khanikta ure gachhe mathar opor die khanikta dhukechhe...ami baba tatey khusi...jayasila guha bagchir puro kabitata mathar bahu opordie hussss hoye gachhe...ami khub chesta korechhi ki...na apatota amar pathoner choukathe mora mach gulo charie achhe?
chabita bhalo laglo...ami to chabi samndhey astorambhya...tao...
bes kichhu natun kabita porar swad elo...tar thekeo boro kathya bes kichhu natun line..prottyeker kabitay peye amar khub bhalo legechhe ...abar ekta durdantya sankhar janya...anupam da...o sobai ke dhaynobad...avishek er kabita koi...?...
porer sankhay dekhte nischoi paoya jabe...achhya karu lekha na dekhle ebar kosto hochhe keno...vaskorjaty tomar o lekha dui sankhay pachhi na ..ero kao karo...amra ki blog paribar hoye jachhi...kosto bole dichhi...jadio amar moto ekjon akabi...ei blog e ese basa banachhe tao...pase theko sobai...ami likhte pari na pari...yea bhalobaste pari...kabi o kabita dujonkey....
eto bhalo sab kabita...na..aj sala ami ekta kabita likhboi...astanirjan
ebar-er post-er lekhagulo........ufff...onobodyo,mugdho kore tole....prothomei Rangit,emon lekhar somporke kichhu bola jae ki asamanyo shobdota chhara,darun laglo...Ramitdar ei lekhata blog-e or lekha sob kobitar modye sobcheye bhalo laglo,khuub bhalo,barbar pore cholechhi....Ritam amar onyotomo priyo kobi,jothariti ei lekhatao darun or nijoswota bohon korchhe,aaro lekha porte chai Ritam...Shubhendu Dolui-er khub sundor ekta porlam,Pranabendu Dashgupto ke mone pore galo,jodio bhasha ebong bhongi sompurno nijoswo,khub khub bhalo.......Palash Dey amar khub priyo ekjon kobi,swabhabikbhabei asadharon laglo kobitata......Jayashiladir lekha mugdho kore tulechhe,eto bhalo ekta lekha porar sujog kore dewar jonyo asonkhyo dhonyobad onake...Himel Mondol-er lekha bhalo laglo,ami onar aaro lekha porechhi,onar theke kintu amar expectation aaro beshi....Astanirjon-er lekha darun prakritikbhabei,eto bhalo lekho ki kore!!!!!amar mugdhota kromosho bere jachhe...Anupamda asamanyo ebong sompurnobhabe nijer moto,ei muhurte bangla sahitye Anupamdar moto kore keu lekhena,konodino keu lekheo ni,emon nijoswota...amra sobai ei nijoswotarii to sondhan kore berai....
ReplyDeleteAstanirjon,amar kobita kintu achhe ei posteo...ei chhobitai kintu amar khub priyo ekta kobita...Bhaskar,Manikda tomader lekha na thakle kintu blogtae ekta shunyota toiri hoy....amra sottii ekta poribar hoye uthchhi...ekta anurodh tumi aaj jei kobitata likhbe seta kintu amay obosyoi scrap ba mail koro...porar opekkhae thakbo...
ReplyDeleteabar akta sundor post-- aste aste agiye choleche amader chotto nodita agun khelar deshe--- khub sundor kichu lekha porlam aibarer post e--
ReplyDeleteprothomei boli rangeet-- khub bhalo hoyeche
ritam er lekhata sampurno sattontro chap rakhe- tabe sanju er sathe ami kichuta akmat puro lekhata khub i sundor holeo kayekta jaygay aktu hariye geche-- tabe besh bhalo lekha
himel mondol er lekha sabolil saccho sundor- aitukui bolte pari amar bhalo legeche
astronirjon er lekhata ami anupam er scrap e agei porechilam-- takoni bhalo legeche -- abar natun kore laglo-- ar astronirjon nijjjosso style ta akhaneo bajay rekheche dekhe bhalo laglo--
palash de ar subhendu dolui - chotor opor misti lekha----
abar asi jayshila-- abarer post er onnotamo paona--bhalo legeche-- aro lekha parar jonno roilam- kintu ami chai jayshila tar ai nijjosso pattern er baire kichu likhuk-- karon se pare --
baki roilo anupam--ami anupam er ai lekhata age poreni ai prothom bar porlam-- kintu amar mon choyni- aktu klise mone hoyeche-- asole ami anupamer anek bhalo lekha porechi phole mon sabsomayi ta choke niye porte bose- sei dik diye amar mone hoyeche kothao kothao sabolilata hariye geche-- aktu jor royeche jeno kobitar moddhe
avishek er chobi niye no comments--- age comments oke diyechilam--- seta o jane--hehehee
tabe ai bhabei blog agiye choluk
anupam er kache amar akta dabi ache -- ai blogtakei akdin akta patrikar akar deoa jay na ki?- ai blog poribarer sadossoder niye?--
aro bhalo porar appekkhay thaklam
Ramit day
ebaarer post ekhon obodhi best . asaadhaaron lekha sobguloi .
ReplyDeleteRamit bolechhe Palash ebong Suvendu-r lekha or MISTI legechhe . bolaar kichhu nei . kaar-o jodi chicken-biriani misti laage ... je jaar nijoswo swadkorok nie aachhe . keu to boltei paare : dekh ki chomotkar suryo uthchhe dokkhin dik theke ! taar vul ki kore dhorie debo bolun !
cliche` shobdota khub golmele shobdo Ramit . ekhono tumi RODJAANALA likhchho ... NOSTO HOSONTO ... 2-4 KATHA BRISTI ...KHAPAATE PIANO ... GHUMPAARANI HAAT ... KHOLA AAKAASH ... POSHAAKCHHARA NIL ... bhai jodi shobdochyon dhori tomaar lekha to 1960 peroeni ekhono ! tumi aamar lekha cliche bolle ... keno seta bolle na ! tumi ORKUT-e scrap korle KABISAMMALAN-e aamar review nie tumi EKMOT NOW . kintu kothae kothae vinnomowt poson koro jaanale na ! eguloke kintu uporchaalaki bole .
aar ... tumi aamar lekha-e saabolilota khnujchho ! otaa to aami sweaachhae shoto haat dure raakhi bhai ! aamar prioy bnaak holo digression .
aami tomaake chalenge korlaam bhai Ramit : keno tumi Palash ebong Shuvendu-r lekhaake MISTI ebong aamar lekhaake CLICHE` bolechho , byakkhya kore bojhaao . aami jaani tumi paarbe na . sudhu katha bolaar jonne katha bola ekta tradition hoe jaachhe onek somokaalin chheler . seta aswasthokor .
Avisek-er chhobita-o nischoi tomaar valo laageni ! kintu tumi blog-er header hisebe je chhobigulo choyon korechhile , se to ... mone aachhe to tomaar !
tumi kobita eto vaalo lekho , kobita nie katha eto vaasavaasa bolo keno ?
Dekhun ami nitantoi oboddha! porte bhalo lage bole pori! Rongiter kobitata jamon amar onek din bade bhalo laglo! shuruta ato chomotkar! tobe ideata unique hoyto noy!
ReplyDeleteRomit-er kobitay ekta dirghyoswas porlo borosoro- jeta onekta sei kalo meghe boker ure jaoa dekhe pore!
Reetom bhaloi laglo gochhano lekha!
Sajghor niye amar kichhu bolar chhilo_ ami eyi dhoroner lekha pochhondo kori! ekta obosthan bichar kore karur monobhab bhashay deoa! kintu sheshta jeno thik shesh hoy ni! chapa byathata beroi ni mone holo! aro striking hobar proyojon chhilo!
Palash, Shubhendu Jaya ebong Asta nirjon! sholpo porishore sundor! bisheshoto AstaNirjoner finishing onekta Jibonando mukhi ebong dag kete jaoa!
Abhisheker chhobita-tao surrealistic bhalo legechhe!
Anupam-er shobdochoyon sundor! kintu sotyi bolte ki bishal bhalo legechhe bolte parchhi naa! Karon ekta gotanugotik touch roye gechhe! aro beshi kore porte chai!
opriyo kotha jodi bole feli dukkhito!
kobita ba chhobi bhalo laga ba na lagar byaparta khub apekkhik...karur kono lekha ba chhobi bhalo lagte pare abar nao pare,kintu smosyata hochhe jokhon amra kono lekha ba chhobir byapare kono verdict dichhi jotha lekhati cliche ba bojha jachhena tokhon taar karonta byakhya koratao kintu proyojoniyo...Ramitdar theke uttor-er protikkhyae achhi....dwitiyoto jokhon kono lekha/aaNka amra anubhab korte parina tokhon seta kobir okkhomota bole dhora hoy keno?keno amra mene nite parina seta amader aparogotao to hote pare?hoteo to pari sei lekha/aaNkatir rosgrohon amar pokkhe sombhob hochhena,ei byapare aageo onek aalochona kora hoyechhe ei blog-ei tai aar aalochona nishproyojon mone hoy...tobe Anupamdar lekha somporke gotanugotikotar je proshnota uthchhe tate kintu ami bhishon obak hoye jachhi,Anupamdar lekha karur bhalo nai lagte pare seta onyo byapar kintu Anupamdar lekha cliche!!!!!!!!!er theke boro joke bohudin shunini....ekhono porjonto amar ja khudro porashunor poridhi tate kokhono Anupamdar moto keu likhechhe mone pore na...bhasha,shobdo ,form sobii notun...janina ei montobyogulor pichhone ki jukti achhe,agrohi roilam jara Anupamader lekha cliche bole mone korchhen tara taar byakhyao korben...
ReplyDeleteJayashiladir kobitar byapare Ramitda bolechhe..."kintu ami chai jayshila tar ai nijjosso pattern er baire kichu likhuk-- karon se pare --"....achha ei byapare amar ekta proshno achhe,nijoswo pattern er baire lekha kotota jukti songoto?seta ki kobir nijoswotakei kkhotigroshtho korena?jodi kobir lekhar style er poriborton hoy swabhabikbhabei tobe asubidhe nei...kintu shudhumatro poriborton er jonyo poriborton kotota juktijukto...ei byapare sokoler motamot-er opekkhae thaklam...
ReplyDeleteSufi gaan gaibar jonyo Nusrat-er bhaipor dak pore! abar jazz based romantic ganer jonyo Atif Aslamke poisa diye uriye ana hoy! kintu onek producer-er poisa naa thakay sob gaan-i Sonu Nigamke diye gaoay! karon se allrounder! ghotonata seirokom-i! experiment korte parleo koro Sachin hao! nahole Afridi-o mondo noy!
ReplyDeleteAnupam bhalo lekhen bole bodhoy pathok kuler chahida beshi! formtake uni bibhinno bhabe bhanga gora korechhen! kintu porei mone holo naa are erokom to agey pori ni! seta hoyto sobsomoy mone hobar kotha noy! eta mone hoy ni-durdanto!! pore mone holo shobdo choyon chomokprodo kintu tarpor? Bhaloi.......... durdanto laglo naa! etukui bolar- tobe ami Kobir kobita aar pathoker path niye beshi kata chhNera korte apri naa!
ReplyDeleteaare e rokom to aage porini ! ta hoeto ... ki bolbo ... kobita-e bismoy-er porisor rochona kora kobir daayitbter moddhe pore na , kobi seta sotopronoditovaabei koren . korte chaile kora jae na . korleo paathok-niropekkho hote paare na . valo laaga byapaartao universal noe .
ReplyDeleteaamar golaap ful valo laage na . ki kora jaabe ? Ramendrakumar Acharya Choudhuri ek meyer katha likhechhilen je patrol-er gondho valobasto . sei meyer ki biye hoechhilo ?
aamar kobita-e ichhe korei kichhu shobdo raakaha aachhe jaara ei muhurte bangla kobita to oboshyoi bangla vaasa thekei berie gechhe . aar HAASBIVAASBIKAASHJOCHHONA shobdota raabindranath theke neoa , ektu bodle nie . OLOKH aarekta shobdo . JE JON ... OKAARON ... ONYOMON ... AANDHAR ... NIKETON ... ei shobdogulo byabohaarbohirvuto . byabohar-e nei bolei aamar kaachhe natun , ebong aamar protyashae paathoker kaachheo apratyashito . prothom paath-e kobitatike praachinponthi mone hote paare . jemon ekjon porichalok ronginer bodole saadaakaalo bechhe nen ... aami sadakaalo-r bodole eastman colour bechhe niechhilam .
Ramit bolechhe cliche` . ha ha ha ...
Sauranshu bolechhe gotanugotik . jodi koyek sotaabdir bangla kobita dekha hoe ... boisnob podaboli ... biharilal ... gitanjali ... hnya , gotanugotik korte chaechhi aami . aami tomar montobyo sekhetre compliment hisebe nilaam . aami setaai korte chaechhilam . aar natun kichhu deoaar aami ke bhai ! tumi nijei khnuje nebe ... na hole paabe na . aamar kobita vaalo laagle tomar nijogun-e vaalo lagbe , aamar gun-e noe .
Astanirjan-er lekha-e tumi Jibananada-k paechho ! aami to microscope die khnujleo paabo na . aager post-er lekha-e kichhuta chhilo . etae konaamaatro nei .
aar Avisek-er chhobi surreal ! ki jaani ...
ses-e ekta prosno : bishal valo laaga byapaarta ki Sauranshu ? seta ki sorbojonin ? Sharat kumar Mukhopadhyay Rabindranath-k pochhondo koren na , tnaake baatikgrosto mone koren . ki koraa jaabe ?
aami valo likhi ei khobor kothae pele ? aami nije khoborta jaani na .
kintu nijer sristi nije somorthon korte naa paarle kobita lekha uchit noe . keu aakromon korle uttor dite hoe . na hole kobita lekha chhere deoa uchit . setao na hole tini sawt kobi non . taai eto katha bollam .
astonirjon duendete tomar 4te kobita chai. jodi dao 1bar 9432161943 te amake fon koro...bhaskarjyoti
ReplyDeleteprochchhod darun, darun hochchhe...1ta identity hoye uthchhe bloger...jodio ei poster ta tulonay kom valo laglo ... anyway darun kaj hochchhe rochisnu babu ebong anupam da...
ReplyDeletebhaskar , blog-er editorial team join koro . tumi proyojonio hoe uthechho ekhaane .
ReplyDeleteAnupam er avishek dujoner alochona ba samalochana jai hok na- ek ek byaktir kache ak ak rakam- tar I prekkhapote ai post—
ReplyDelete- 1- anupam boleche ami kichu bole chole gechi aita uporchalaki- ai puro sabdotai bhul kimba anupamer mone haoa- karon hayto kono karone somay na paoar jonno ba kom asar jonno uttor deoa jay ni – tar jonno kono jiniske specify kara uchit bole ami mone korina
- 2- abar onno prosonge- anupamer nijer I bhinno post e bhinno mat paoa gelo ja khub I bismayer—akdike anupam bolche “valo laga byapaarto universal noe—amar golap ful valo laage na. ki kora jabe?” abar ak dike cliché bolar jonno tomar ato jukti tarko korte hocche--- dhore nao na aita amar mato pathoker kache bhalo lageni—tomar matei to bhalo lagata universal nay—tai na.. pathok ke tumi jhor korte paro na pathok ki chok diye dekhbe ki sure porbe—tumi likhte paro r tomar katha anujayi sat kobi hisebe tomar lekhar essence take establish karar chesta korte paro- akjon kobi hisebe se tumi ami[adou kina jani na] kimba keu I ar bershi kicui korte parina- pathoker nijer chok nijer icche nijer anubhuti tar chok diye kobitake nijer mato kore established kore-- tumi likhecho keno ami palash er shuvendu er lekha misti ar tomar lekha cliché bolechi- amar mone hay ager bayktoboi er uttor- as pathok oder lekha amar mon amar mato kore chuyeche tai misti ar tomar ta amar mone hoyeche amar anubhuti nite pareni seibhabe – tomar suvendu ba palash karu sathei to byaktigato birodh nei – na kobi hisebe kono rakom obhiman- sutorang aita puropuri patok ramit er akanto byaktigato mot…tai tumi je bolecho ami proman korte parbo na je oder lekha ta keno amar choke bhalo ar tomar ta cliché sotty katha er aktai uttor—pathok ramit er mon choyni tai pathok ramit boleche—se hajar tarko holeo pathok ramit aki jaygay thakbe – ata kono katha bolar jonno nay—ar samakalin cheleder tradition niye je kathata bolecho oitake ato sarbojonin kore bola amar mone hayna amader karuri uchit—abossoi ata amar individual matamot- karon amra keu I samakal ke purota chinina chinteo parbo bole mone hay na ---SETA AMAR AKKHOMATA
- 3 –nasto hasonto , du char katha bristi- khaypate piano etc niye tumi je bolecho 1960 peroyni at ate amar kono kichu bolar nei karon – sotty katha hayto tumi anek lekha pore thakbe kintu ami ajo jani na ai 1960 r 2000 er bibhag ta ke kore gelo? Kothao lekha ache 2000 er kobita likhte gele 1960 er pechone pore thakle hobe na?- tomar nijer katha anujayi tomar sabdotai to rabindranath theke aktu bodle neoa – tahole ki bolbo? Tumi puronoke borjito korte perecho? Na ki purono theke inspired?- asole amar mone hay kono kichu harayna amra nijeder ke established korar jonno purono jug purono kobita purono sabdo amon sab purno shyaola makha katha bartha chapiye di—ata amader byarthota swikar korte na parar. R tumi je bolecho 1960 perote pareni tar mane tomar ki mone hay 1960 er ager gulo kobita chilo na ? pathok chilona? Chilo chilo anupam chilo sedino chilo ajkeo ache—thakbeo—sudu kichu sabdo kichu juge tar chap rekhe jay- ajo amra 1960-1970 pori ajo tumi rabindranath ke aswikar korte paro na..jodi balo paro tahole bolbo nijer sathe seta mitthey..R sotty katha kobita samporke amar gyan gommi bison kom—ami sotty kichu jani kina nijeo jani na – mon theke neshar chute kobita likhi—amar mon konodino bole ni 1960-1970-1990-2000—aita bhebe kobita likhte hobe---mone hoyche likhte hobe- likhechi- amar nijjosso anubhuti diye—pathoker bhalo na I lagte pare-
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- Tumi nije tomar lekhar kichu sabdo ja tomar mote aprocholito—olokh, jejhon, akaron, niketon etc tumi support korecho ai bole je tader byabohar nei bole segulo naki tomar kache natun tahole to tumi amar je sabdo guloke niye alochona korecho segulokeo ai bhabe dhorte parte – 1960 perote pareni jakhon takhon se to abyborhito—ta holei pathoker kache natun—tahole ki dhorbo? Kobi nijer anubhutir belay ak katha ar samalochonar belay bhinno mat? Atao ki bhasabhasa holo na?
- Abar roilo avishek er chobi anka samporke—ami likhechilam orkute or sathe ai baypare alochona hoyechilo tai thak- asole ato baro alochona hoyechilo kono rate j ear setake ghante bhalolage ni- karon as artist avishek tar nijer view point e stick thakbe—jeta ami respect kori – shilpir nijo jaygayke nijer mato kore defend karata amar mone hay darker- thik temon I as dorshok amio amar jaygay stick thakbo tai ar bolini—asole avi anka ta ankar par amake dekhte bolechilo – ami dekhe bolechilam amar mato kore – akdom akta nyara mathar buddhi niye abong jigges korechilam ki artho korar chesta korechis—avi bolechilo khonjo – “atai shilpir kaj kichu sristi kore chere deoa darshok khunjuk”[purota mone nei jetuku bhasa bhasa mone ache oi tukui bolchi]- ami bolechilam tahole ki tui chas na darshok bujhuk- takon avishek thik or matoi bolechilo shilpi daybadho nay—hundred percent right—amio mone kori shilpi daybadho nay tar anubhuti bojannor jonno- takon ami jigges kori tahole darshoker samne shilpi ki nijer sristir mullayan chay na?—chai amra chai – akhane ami anupam tumi jayshila avishek palash astronirjon keu jodi ai kathata buk bajiye bolte pare kobita diyechi anka diyechi r keu amar lekha pore bhalo boluk chaina seta sarboibo mitthey- kom beshi hote pare ai degree ta kintu aita human psychology--- jar jonno aj tomar kobita cliché bolar jonno tumi ato jukti protuktir majhe dubecho…..jai hok je kathay aschilam—avishek er chobir ami kichu bujhni sedin ar ajkeo—ami realism e akhono jene uthte parlam na ar surrealism na ki sab alochona se to anek mathar opor diye go ---sotty bujhini avishek—ata amar choker akkhomata bolte paris - --kintu mitthye bole stabokata karar chesta ami sedin o korini ajkeo korbo na—
- Abar asi avishek er comment er prosonge—avishek nije akta prosner uttor nije diye geche—bhalo laga na laga ta appekkhik—khub bhalo – mone hay amader sabar I ai kathata mathay rakha uchit mullayaner somay—abar asi verdict prosonge—accha avishek ke akta katha jigges kori atodin blog e je je lekha aseche jakhon keu bhalo bolechi keno bhalo seta ki bolechi? Mane with proper byakha? Amar mone hay na barin da chara sotty se arthe amra keu I bhalo ke bhalo bolar somay sei mato alada kichu byakha diyechi –kichu sabdo bhalo kimba kichu anubhuti bhalo ai jatio angike bendhe rekhechi- amon ki avi nijeo dekhte pare bhalo ke bhalo bolar somay o nay bhaskor chakrobortir udaharon teneche na hay kichu sabdo er example diyeche—sutorang verdict er sathik byakha amra kajan diyechi je amra sabai sabar dike angul tule bolte pari?
ReplyDelete- 2--- avi boleche jakhon kono lekha ba anka anubhav korte parina takon seta amra kobir akkhomata hisebe dhara hay keno?—are avishek keu dhoreni babu—anupam er lekha cliché mane anupamer akkhomata dhara hay ni – seta pathok hisebe amar monke touch koreni amar bhalo lageni—atai akopat swikarakti – ami to mitthey bolte parina na bhalolagatake sudu bhalo bolar ajuhate—tui to thik I bolechis ata amar ba amader mane jara jara ai mate biswasi aparagata – sotty rasogrohon sambhov hayni se khetre—ami to tai anupam ke aitai bolar icche prokash korlam ager comments ei je anupam tomar lekha cliché bolechi ate ato juktir kichu nei—pathok hisebe nite parini- bhison simple-
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- 3- r amar mathay asche na anupam dar leha cliché ai kathata niye avishek alada kore comment karar ki mane?- avishek to nijei bolche bhalolagata relative—anupam er anek lekha amar bhalo legeche ami prothom comments ei likhechilam ar mane ai na je sab lekha baddhotamulok bhalo lagte hobe----r baro joke bohudin shunini ai kathatao amar kache aswabhabik lagche- ai bohudin ta katodin? Ata to tor nijjosso anubhuti – hotei pare – seta to blog e alochonar bisaybostu nay—anupamer kobita cliché kina jeta alochonar bisaybasto nay bisaybasto anupamer ai kobita ta keno ramit cliché boleche- Akhane ai blog e amar mone hay na amra keu karu sampurno lekhar style niye alochonar jonno asechi- kichu bhalo kobita kichu bhalo kobi pete asechi.—“anupamdar mato keu likheche kina”- ai bayktobo sampurno tor byaktigato – a byapare amar comments karar kichu nei- sudu akta katha bolbo bhasa sabdo form ai je natun bolechis seta natun nay- seta ai 2000 blogspot bhalo kore lokkho korle dekhbi anekei byabohar kore- ha baybohar karar nipunata alada alada- hayto anupam er kichu lekhay seta beshi—bhabis na ami karu byaktininda ba prosongsha korchi- tor ai comments e hathat mone holo tui kobitar biare kobike niye alochona korechis beshi—jeta amar mone hay kobitar ato sundor blog e sotty nisproyojonio. Ar akta katha ki jukti ache jigges korechis- tahole akta kathai bolbo
- AvISHIK- SOTTY KICHU JUKTI NEI—MON NITE PARENI ANUBHUTI NEYNI-TAI AMI APAROG HOYECHI ROSASWADANE--- MAY BE ATA AMAR BYARTHOTA—TOBE AKTA KATHA BOLI- KOBITA KI SOTTY ATO JUKTIR? SOTTY ATO BITORKER? TAHOLE ABEG KOI? TAHOLE ANUBHUTI KOI?-
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- JAI HOK PROCHUR BHAT BOKLAM—bhul bhal boklam—mane aktu hathe somay chilo ar kaj chilo na tai—tabe blog cholche bolg cholbe- jor kadome—ar anupamer kache ami akta jinis jante cheyechilam blog er lekha niye patrika setar byapareo utsuk roilam
- Suvoratri sabaike
ekhane jukti chaluk takkya chuluk....prolap chaluk...eke oprke dumdam chaluk...dekha hole cholo ek cup garam cha hoye jak...eitao chaluk...ami mone prane chaichhi....astanirjan...
ReplyDeleteastanirjan ke mathay duto gantta...- byata abar agun jele paliyeche--;]
ReplyDeleteha ha ei dekhyo choke jol chole aschhe...yea hay asli jidegi...kothay je bathya thake er molom....amra sab eiiiiiiiii....bhalo theko bandhura...eso maramari kori...paraspor ke jarie kede feli du ek abissoronio muhurte....
ReplyDeletehehehehe-- sanju ta abar kedeo pheleche--- uff r tomay acto korte hobe na bap amar-- amni lej tene paliyecho--- abar akon ase kanna kati--aro 4 te gantta---:]
ReplyDeleteJust pass korchilam, chokhe pore gelo ei blog-post no 9. Wondefull. Rongeet-er kobitata asamanyo laglo. Hat's of, Rongeet. Abhisek-er chobi metaphysical(jetake suureal balle aneke). Romit ar Anupam, dujonei bhalo likheche. Kintu other torja jome utheche. technically ba theoretically ballo tomra, akraman na kore. Aneke lakkhyo korche, kichu shikhte chaiche. Joyshila, Astanirjan, Polash, Shubhendu sabai chesta korecho bhalo likhte. Amar to bhaloi lage ei sab. Ei 0-dashaker kobitar blog kore debar janyo Anupam-ke dhanyobad di. Tumi tomar 'khoma'-ta bodle bhalo korecho bhai. Chaliye jao. No jhogra.
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ReplyDeletetumi to dekhchhi chote gele ! bhai , cliche aar vaalo laaga ei shobdogulo gulie felchho keno !! cliche holeo valo lagte paare karo karo ... karon valo laga universal noe ... ha h a haaa ... tomaar lekha to aamar khub vaalo legechhe . shobdoproyog cliche holei ki kobitavalo laagte nei . aabar hoeto dhoro Avisek-er valo lage ni tomaar ei lekhata .
aar tumi Palash ebong Shuvendu-r kabitake MISTI bolate aami khub chotechhi ... swikaar korchhi . karon kaaro kobitake MISTI bolaar chaaite boro opomaan kichhu hoe na hoeto . tumi bolte paarbe Jibanananda Dash bes MISTI KOBITA likhten ? bolte paarbe ki ?
aar 1960-er prosonge bolchhi ... tumi cliche shobdota tulte aami o katha bolechhilam . kobita-r kono upaadan kokhon cliche hoe ? jokhon ekta upaadan aarekta upaadaner paashe boseo kono prithok rasayaner sristi korte byartho hoe .
tomaar byabohrito shobdo tumi koto shotaabdi aage theke tule aanle taate kichhu jaae aase na . dekhte hobe sei shobdo tule aanle taate kichhu jae aase na .
ekta biseson jodi ekta biseshyor aage ese bose , seta jeno bangla kobitae prothombaar bose . HOSONTO-K NOSTO , HAAT-k GHUMPAARANI ,NIL-k POSHAAKCHHAARA bohu bohubaar bola hoe geche bhai . shoto shoto kobi bolechhe . aaj-o bole cholechhe .kintu HAASBIVASBIKAASHJOCHHONA ... BAASONER BUKE BAAJE BAASON PORAAR SHOBDO ... OLOKH JE JON EXPLANATION CHAAE NAA ... tumi jodi aar kaaro lekhae dekhie dite paaro tomar pododhuli maathae nebo aami . jemon nei Rabindranath-er . onaake tukli kore cliche hote apotti nei aamar .
tomaar kobita nie arektu poraashona kora dorkaar bhai . cliche shobdota nie ektu poraashona koro . taarpor byabohaar koro !
Valo post, valo kobita, valo alochona...:) Rangeet, Palash ar Anupam er kobita valo laglo vishon. 'Misti' kobita, sottiy anupam, sunlei monta teto, ba motka gawrom hoye jaye..:) Shobdota ektu awpomanjonok botei. thutnitey hath diye jethima 18 bochhorer meyetike bollen 'O ma, ki misti hoyeche amader Sonai', ar Sonai solojjyo heshe chokh namiye nilo !' ei post er kobitagulo motei eirokom kichu noy, Palash-er kobita-ta tow noy-i. jai hok..
ReplyDelete'cliche' shobdota vague, useless. 'cliche' mane ki idea ta old, bohu-byabohrito, na shobdoproyog ? jodi idea sonkranto comment hoy, tahole bolte hoy 'moulik' bole kichhu hoy bole mone hoyna. tai presentation, shokiyota eguloi important. cliche byaparta kichuta holeo hoyto shobdoproyoger khetre bola jete paare. tobe 'cliche', 'gotanugotik', ittyadi na vebe, konta kobita hoye uthlo, setai ekmatro consider korar bishoy. eta ekta undefined byapar. konta pore valo lagbe ar konta pore noy, pathok age theke janena, kobio janena. kobir ekta 6th sense thake jeta take boley je eta 'kobita' hoyeche, lekhar porey se eta feel korey. tar ei feeling er songe oneke ekmot hoy, oneke hoyna. jara ekmot hoy, tara kobita-tir o kobir prosongsha korey, onnyora korena. byass, hoye gyalo.kobir kache nijer feeling-tai all important. eitukui. kobita niye ayto porjalochonar jaygai nei hoyto, kobita niye porashonar jayga prochur, kintu porjalochonar jayga onek kom. etai mawja. :)
blog egiye choluk evabei.
Ami ekta sada potaka tangiye post korechhilam! gelo koi! jakge! motamot sobar nijoswo! Kobita likhechhi besh korechhi! ebar day pathoker! no problem!
ReplyDeletesetai bolar chesta korchhilam.:)
ReplyDeleteporer post-e sauranshu-r kobita thaakchhe . khub vaalo ekta lekha . aami mugdho hoechhi . blog-e dite tor soichhe na aamar .
ReplyDeleteDURDANTO KOTA LEKHA PORA GYALO EI SUJOGE!!!
ReplyDeletePROTHME "R' TROI, AMNE RONGIT-ROMIT-RWITAM
TINJONEI OSADHARON, ALADAKORE RWITAMKE JANI SADHUBAD OSADHARON AKATA LEKHAR JONNYO, JODIO BISOY KICHUTA BYABOHRITO,TOBUO KICHU JINIS BYABOHAREO PURONO HOYNA .
"GACH' HOTE CHAOA BA HOEJAOAR PROBONOTA BERE CHOLECHE....GACHERA BODHOY EKTA SONDHI KORECHE...KOBIDER SATHE....
Rangeeter Lekha aamr bHalo lageni ;ae je akjn kobi bar Bar NIjer ghorana change korchN;ae je procharpona dekhachn,paglamo koRcHen a SOB E oSOtH ; aMar BahLO LaGE NA; AKSOMOy unI SOBdo BOshaTEN;aNTlamo Kore BIdesHi kobiTa,SOkol BanGLA BazaR K Jini bondhu Bole diBBI KISOb daRun Darun shiKhyabid o MoJAR boshtu o Nijer oshIKhta,NONGrAMI EtC DEKHIYECHN.AAMR kACHE RANGEET akjn BorJI kobi O THOK O obHIneta.
ReplyDeleteONek ObHijog JOME AACHEE....;rAnGEET AMI jani Tumi KOBIta k BHalo
ae Je koNo kObir hoTah SRK HOYAR PROBOBOnOTA,BEKTI gOTO DOlADoli,rajNiti...tacha eroKoM "gach"Type kObita aami ONek porechi.rangTEER pROLM BOnDHO HOK.oR LEkha Amr BHalo Lage na.Rangeet cHando Poro,lekha Poro,koBiTa mUKosto kOro,expeRimntal bole oe Ja Iche Tai koro na;Ami JANI tomr Inetelct AaChe,Tumi chaIle LIkhTe Paro BHalo Lekha,bazARI LEHA ASOB DEKHO;jOgA JOg diYE LEkha howna;
ritam,romit,anupam,ABHIsec,osTOnirjAn,joyshilla,himel,shubhandu,PalaS-R lekha Bhalo lEGECHe.ABhisec ApnAR AAger LekhagUlo kiNTu oPURBo.
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ReplyDeleteRANGEET = SRK
ReplyDeleteRangeet , etaa to bojhaai jachhe uporer comment-ta tomaar koraa . kintu nicher jobaab-ta delete korle keno baba ?
Malay Roychoudhuri ekbaar nijer saakkhatkaar nijei niechhilen . tumi chaile seta korte paarte . ekhaanei seta hote paarto . aamra jaaega ditaam tomaake .
taar bodole eta to chhelemaanusi hoe gelo . ei rokom aachoron kore ki laav bolo to ! er fole keu kintu tomaake seriously nebe na . tomaar kobita-k-o sondeho korbe .
bujhte paarle to ebaar , keno tomaake editorial team theke baad dite holo aamader ! tomaake songe nie cholaar poristhiti tumi nijei raakho na .
vaalo kobita likhlei keu vaalo kobi hoe na brother . aar ... hajar paaglaamo koreo SRK konodin Amitabh hote paareni ... paarbeo na . tumi SRK-mugdho jenei bollam .
suprovat sabaike-- aktu amader blog ghure gelam-- sakal sakal--
ReplyDelete1- prothomei anupam ke boli--je anupam chotachotir kono prosnoi nei--hahahaa-- are baba amra akhane alochona kori shiki bhabi - er moddhe abeg ache rag nay-- ata mukto moncho-- akhane aste bhalolage bolei ato likhi- ar baki roilo tarko bitarko seta abar next post e hobe--heheheheee---
- 2-souvik dar comments niye akta kathai bolbo sei as a pathok ak ak joner ak ak mot- tobe puro blog ta dekhle anek natun projonmer bhalo kobita je parom prapti se bisaye kono sandeho nei--
-3- kintu je bisaye sakal sakal bolte alam-- ai anonymous diye abar lekha bandho hok. ami jani na anonymous ke jante iccuk o noi kintu amar mone hay ata kobitar blog kobir nay-- jeta ageo bolechi--- akkhane kobita niye alochonar jonno asi jatotuku jani ar jatotuku jani na sab tuku anubhav karar jonno--sekhane byaktigato kadachorachori -na na- akdomi bhalo laglo na-- amar mone hay ai jatio byaktigato matamat na thaklei bhalo-- kobir kobita niye alochona hok kintu sot na asot seta na hay onno kothao sere nilei bhalo naki?--
r ami rangeet keo boli rangeet post kore muchis na del koris na - ja janabar ache akopate take samne niye ay-- nahole ki hay janis bhulbojabujhi sristi hay-- akhane ai blog e amra likhte asechi- konta bhalo konta kharap se saber urdhe kintu karu byaktigato charitro uddhar korte noy- tai na babu? ami jani na anonymous ke -- sotty katha amar mone hay na jara lekhen blog e tarao keu jante agrohi-- kintu ami mone kori proteker uchit nijer lekha likhe nijer mot diye seta prokassshe ana; na ki del kore deoa- tate aproyojonio confusion bare boi kome na --akjon kobi hisebe ai sacchota amader sabar kammo--
jak blog aro agiye jak-- sabsomay achi ami amra-- ar sabar theke bhalo pabo jani aro aro--amra likhi sudu likhi -- setai akjon kobi korte pare r kichu nay....
@Rangeet
ReplyDeletekhub biroktikor laglo ei achoron,andaj karai jachhe ekhane Anonymous ke,tor theke eirokom ekta achoron khub dukkho dilo...
tobe ektaa katha . ei muhurte ei je porisor , taake sobchaaite saarthokvaabe prokaash korchhe Rangeet Mitra . kintu o aachoronta akritrim kore na keno jaani na .
ReplyDeleteajke asta nirjaner kabita parlam parimiti vabnar parinita chap.choto belar boutuku khelar mato ek dame jatatachuye jaua jai sei chestata asadharan.anupamdar kache prasna kabitate engreji sabder ese jauata ki khub doser ?ei prasner mukho mukhi amake bahu bar hate hayeche.r kabita lekhar khetre chander janata alankar parata katata jaruri ?
ReplyDeletedupur o majh rater janalaje ek nai suru tatei chamke otha,anek bhabna siri vagte thake.......
ReplyDeletepurnimake niye ekprasta alapchritai chat amader choker niche ba opre satti ekta adharer janalai ke ba kara jeno uki dite thake...ebar chalte thaka bindas.(anupam dar kabita pare)