ei sankhya-e bes kichhu vaalo kobita raakha gelo mone hoe . Indranil Ghosh ei prothom taar aprakashito ekti lekha diechhe . asamanyo lekha . or lekha onek bodle gechhe mone holo . Astanirjan ekti apekkhakrito boro lekha diechhe . dekha jaak paathokder kemon laage .
AAR PAATHOKER JONNE EKTI KHELA RAAKHA HOLO . NIJEKEI DOSH DEI KOBITATIR KOBIR NAAM AAPNARA DHORAAR CHESTA KORUN .
darun kichhu lekha porlam ei post-e....prothomei Indranildar asamanyo lekha,mugdho kore tole,darun...Astanirjon ebaro onobodyo,amar din din khub priyo kobi hoye uthchhe,aaro porte chai tomar lekha...Ujan-er chhobita sorbotobhabei ekta kobita hoye uthechhe amar kachhe,khub bhalo laglo...Manikda jothariti darun...'Nijekei dosh dii' lekhata bodhhoy Bhaskar-er,Bhaskar-er lekhay ekta nijoswota achhe ja chiniye dae oke,khub sundor laglo...
ReplyDeleteekta dardantya sankhya ...khub bhalo laglo...protteyek er lekha i abar amake tenechhe...nijekei dos di kabita ta asadhran...
ReplyDeleteprothomei indranil-- ore baba re durdanto likhechis --"sari sari choker anubad sudu jol hoye gelo"-- darun-- akdom indranil er mato satontro----
ReplyDeleteabhishek - er kobita ager bar o bolechilam kothao akta jaygay simabaddho hoye jacche maje majei-- sabdo theke sabde uttirno haoa ba sabdouttor sthore pouche jaoa bhalo kintu tar moddhe akta swabhabik tan dhore rakhatao kintu amar mone hay soman bhabe darkar-- tahole akta sustho loy thakbe --tabe-" sandheyjole sandhey jwale"- ai line ta amake khub bhabiyeche-- khub sundor akta sukkho anubhuti particularly oi line ta
Manik er kobita amar manik er onno kobitar mato lageni- bhalo to abossoi kintu aro beshi chahida or kach theke
nijeke dosh di-- bhalo-- besh sabolil sacchondo gotite agiye jawa lekha
ar seshe astronirjon-- prothom katha kobita tar ki nam nei?- sironamhin?- tahole bolbe apurbo---
ar ditiwato atake bole complete poem-- amar mone hoyeche---akta muhurto akta chobi-- sampurno jibondarshon-- khub sundor-- astronirjoner lekhata amar mone hoyeche aibarer post er asol paona-
aar se baadaamee porjyonto bheNge jaay...
ReplyDeletewow astanirjan.. wow
indraniler kabita parte parini lekhar akshargulo eto choto ble.anna der madhe pratteker lekhai valo.maniker pratham lekhata besi valo prertao valo aro besi kichu chai.abhiseker kabita pratham parlam tai ager theke katota ki change hayeche balte parchina.astonirjaner kabitai bes vabar jaigata besi tabe ei jaigat aro besi visual odramatik hok.
ReplyDeleteIndranil-er kobita ek kawthay fantastic. erokom aro kobita ele blog ta aro shomriddho hobe. :)
ReplyDeletePROTTEKTI LEKHAI ONOBODDYO!!!...ALADA KORE BOLTE GELE ...INDRANIL ....AVISEK...EBONG ASTONIRJON.....OSADHARON...!!!
ReplyDeleteami konodin i bhabini amar lekhao kau porbe...aj bhalo lagche jakhan dekhi amar kabita oneke porchhe....ami kabita pore anondo ke likhte pari na...tai karu kabita nie khub besi kathya boli na...kintu andolito hoi....eitukui....vaskorjoty amar ei lekhata jadi apnar bhalo lage...apni duyende te chapate paren....astonirjon
ReplyDeleteshubhankar , tumi indra-r lekhata porte paarle na ! ekbaar click koro lekhaatar upor . eto vaalo ekta lekha poraar jonne etuku koraai jaae . pore dekho . thokbe na .
ReplyDeletenijekey dos di...kabita ta ki anupam dar lekha....kabita tar last line ta eto bhalo...amar mone hoi kono sampurnya kabita thik ei bhabe habe...eto nirmogh ......badda bhalo lekha....ekdam satan...ekdam sathik...ekdam satty....ei rakam kabita likhte boro sadh jage..
ReplyDeleteindrar kabitata parlam mane halo kabitarau katha hoi,kathopokathan challo besh,sandhar amej ta rat parjanta garalo sudhu rate chader pase ekta nisangatar nisan uriye r anekta vabnar jalfelerekhe kabitata ses halo.indra jio ,,,,,,,,,,,,,kabitai.
ReplyDeleteebaar bolei dei kobitata Bhaskarjyoti-r lekha .
ReplyDeleteSonadada vebechhe lekhaata aamar . KON JOY KOKHON JE LOJJWA HOE FIRE AASE ei lineta aami likhteo paartaam hoeto . etuku mil bodhhoe somoprojonmer . baaki lekhaar sone aami nije kono mil paaini . oi line aamake mone korie diechhe JAAR NAAM APARAJITA SEO KINTU NAAAMKORONE HERE JAE . tobe thik sevaabe noe .
Astanirjan aamar kaachhe ekta sontusti ei blog-er pichhone eto shorom ebong somoy deoaar . ei sankhya-e o je lekhaata diechhe taate Jibanananda ektu chhnue aachhen , ektu ses porber Binay . kintu seisob otikrom kore sompurnovaabe ekjon sunyo doshoker kobir lekha hoechhe eti .
aager sankhyagulo bichaar korle ei sankhya-e Manik Saha tar best lekhati upohaar diechhe . somproti aami ekti godyo likhlaam OIKKA PORTKA-r jonne . bisoe BISHNU DEY . sekhane aami Manik-er ei kobitati uddhrito korechhi .
Avisek has again dane an interesting job . or kobita nie ekhon aamader besi katha naa bolaai vaalo . ektu dekha jaak or khela . 2 bochhor por katha bola jaabe . Ramit , tumi ektu opekkha koro .
Indra , onek onek paaltachhe nijer vaasa . katha ektu besi bolchhe ... seta khub sodorthok mone hochhe aamar . talking poetry noe . kintu aager chae mayamoy ... katha bolte utsuk . protiti bakye nijer moto bnaak dhoriechhe o . aar ... je innocence or kobitar aasol bostu mone hoto aamar , taake bojay rekhei prithibir shokto kholoser dike taakachhe ebaar .
anupamda abar theke prachyad silipir nam ta sapstya ullekh korle bhalo hoi.er uajner ero kichhu chabi....dekhyar opekhay roilam..
ReplyDeleteSanju ... tumi ekhono blog-er member hole na !
ReplyDeleteporer sankhya-e bes kichhu natun mukh thaakchhe . Jayshila Guha Bagchi-r lekha paechhi . Suvendu Dolui-er lekha thaakbe . thaakbe Palash De , Sukriti-r lekha . nijer ekta lekhaa raakhleo rakhte paari .
ReplyDeleteRangeet ,
tumi bhai aamake kosto dile . tomaake lekhaa chaailam , tumi dile na . taate kichhu jae aase na oboshyo . kichhutei kichhu jaae aase na ses porjonto . tobe tomaar upor aami nirvor korte chaechhilaam . ektaa shikkha holo .
Avisek
naa thaakle ei blog sombhob hoto na etodur nie aasa . paase theko . naa hole ekaa ekaa tene nie jaaoar kono maane hoe na . aar ... aamar kono byaktigoto swartho ei blog-er songe jorie nei .
sobaai paase thaakle blog cholbe . naa hole the end .
aami jani na..aami nije e oporadhi hoye cholechi baro mash ;
ReplyDeleteaama k nirbashon dao;
aama k tumi bole dao kon a gotipoth
aamr dur cokh chuye
prithibr sob drishor r onubob...ae rokom
bhanaye aachhii
rangeet
Anupam, ei post-ta age dikhini keno? Darun collection.Indronil asadharon likheche. Incidentally or first reader ami. Sab pora. Bhabo,how lucky I am.Abhisek, Astanirjan,Manik sobaike dhore rakhte habe Aupam.Tabe eisab kobider boyes kochi holeo tara sobai kintu 0 dashaker ba ei samoyer kobita likhche na. Tumi Bishnu Dey ba Jibuda ba Binayam Jumdar-er ullekh kore eder ghabre dite nijer ggan diyona.
ReplyDeleteখুব সুন্দর লাগলো আপনাদের এই কবিতা পাতা ভ্রমণে। শুভেচ্ছা রইলো সকলের জন্য। ভালো থাকবেন। অভিষেক ধন্যবাদ আপনাকে। পারলে অরকুটে "bangla blog বাংলা লেখাতে" আপনাদের ঠিকানাটা দিয়ে দিন। তাহলে আমার মত অনেক না জানা পাঠক এই কবিতা পড়তে পারবেন।
ReplyDeleteAmi ignaa hote chai!!.........
ReplyDeleteashurer shath abaar judhho hobe .....
Debotara shob ferarie ashamie.........
Tobu ami aj krishno habo na.....
Agnike abbar alinggon karbo...
JOLBO aer JALABO tomar mitthe PRASHAD!
Oe Krishna pujarie...
Tumi amar shapno kere niyechoe......
Ami aj tai ignaar pujo debo...
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AVRODOYE
ReplyDelete................Igana Pujarie.
Ami ignaa hote chai!!.........
ashurer shath abaar judhho hobe .....
Debotara shob ferarie ashamie.........
Tobu ami aj krishno habo na.....
Agnike abbar alinggon karbo...
JOLBO aer JALABO tomar mitthe PRASHAD!
Oe Krishna pujarie...
Tumi amar shapno kere niyechoe......
Ami aj tai ignaar pujo debo...
Durgar uttor rupe amar avrodoye!