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manik asto nirjan r sabar kabita o chitrayan bes chokher che man chuye jai. 1ta prasna thaklo kabita ei samaye bisoy vittik na bisoyhin na tukro tukro bisyer chabi ?r bisay dana badhar muhurte htat miliye r 1ta bisyer avas e samayer kabitar katata prayojan ?
besh chomottkar ekta prosongo. amader sob kichhur'i pichhone ekta na ekta uddyeshyo thake...onekei bujhte pari na, keu keu paare...shokto kaaj karon ei-matro somosamoyikota taake dhora hoye othe na...kichhudin por tai nijer kobita nijer aaro ektu beshi korayotto mone hoy...amar toh hoy, takhon hoy naak kunchkoi ba, tene niswas nei... ei tripti ba hotasha, seta tahole kiser jonyo?
likhte likhte ki likhte chaichhi seta onek somoy dhorte na parleo ultimately lekha ta toh kothao sesh hoy ~ chorturtho line ba dos ba chollishe...keno hoy? samanyo ba tana bolar proyojon toh nijer kachhe nirrghatt thaake, ja furoy, samoyik bhabe...tai ekta kobita sesh hoy...
eitai kobitar ba jekono composition'er bishoy, eitai taar kendrikota...khetro bisheshe taar ruup ekek somoy ekek.. ami je jinis ta khara korte chai tar ekta oboyob lekhar por ba aage thekei gorhe othe. ekti gaachh jemon jaane na taar naam gaachh, amader vashar connotation er bojha serokom sob shobdoi bohon kore... aar taader bohon kore cholechhi amra...obiram..karon tar ortho amra nirdisto korechhi...amra jaar sporsher odhin...
aruprataner ei kabitar -abisranta siri uthe geche chader opar -line ta darun.kabitar vasatau sabalil tabe kakhanoi sabder vare nuye para dupure pathvola pathik noy.
ReplyDeleteanupamdar kabitate ekta barta raye geche.asadharan.
ripaner khudra kabita valolegeche.arka bes likheche .
ebarer post purotai khub valo. kobita shobkota valo laglo, illustration-o chokh taaney.
ReplyDeleteAvishek-er kobita valo legeche. notun shobdo nirman or ekta boishishtyo..ei kobita metaphorically besh attractive..shob snaner baranday ekhon madoler shobdo shona jaye..bah ! ekta jhimdhora shondhyay nirjon hoye jawa jyano, ar kaane ektana awtiter chhobi-shobdo..valo laglo..
Vaskorjytoir onukobitagulo just valo. specially 'awrthoneeti' ar 'chokh'...khub strong impact awlpo kothay..chnuye jaye..
manik asto nirjan r sabar kabita o chitrayan bes chokher che man chuye jai.
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prasna thaklo kabita ei samaye bisoy vittik na bisoyhin na tukro tukro bisyer chabi ?r bisay dana badhar muhurte htat miliye r 1ta bisyer avas e samayer kabitar katata prayojan ?
besh chomottkar ekta prosongo.
ReplyDeleteamader sob kichhur'i pichhone ekta na ekta uddyeshyo thake...onekei bujhte pari na, keu keu paare...shokto kaaj karon ei-matro somosamoyikota taake dhora hoye othe na...kichhudin por tai nijer kobita nijer aaro ektu beshi korayotto mone hoy...amar toh hoy, takhon hoy naak kunchkoi ba, tene niswas nei...
ei tripti ba hotasha, seta tahole kiser jonyo?
likhte likhte ki likhte chaichhi seta onek somoy dhorte na parleo ultimately lekha ta toh kothao sesh hoy ~ chorturtho line ba dos ba chollishe...keno hoy?
samanyo ba tana bolar proyojon toh nijer kachhe nirrghatt thaake, ja furoy, samoyik bhabe...tai ekta kobita sesh hoy...
eitai kobitar ba jekono composition'er bishoy, eitai taar kendrikota...khetro bisheshe taar ruup ekek somoy ekek..
ami je jinis ta khara korte chai tar ekta oboyob lekhar por ba aage thekei gorhe othe.
ekti gaachh jemon jaane na taar naam gaachh, amader vashar connotation er bojha serokom sob shobdoi bohon kore...
aar taader bohon kore cholechhi amra...obiram..karon tar ortho amra nirdisto korechhi...amra jaar sporsher odhin...
bishoy dana baadar ekta proposition rekhe ei furutt miliye jaoyar modhye ekta mojha kaaj kore...bishoyer lej tuku gorhe neoyata sompurno pathoker monostottwo nirvor...
ghonay bolte jemon megh (ba aakchhar urdu ghazal suney 'zulfein') chhobi cholei ase, sekha sopate ekta onyo shobder setu jure diley ekta daarun bimurtota toiri hoy...ja hoy, taa ektu megh-megh hoy boi ki...
ami bishoy taa ke ei bhabe dekhi...thik thak bojhate hoyto parlum na
VALO LAGLO EBARER POST...ONGOSOJJA EKEBARE JOTHAJOTHO
ReplyDeleteAVISEK - SOURANGSU -EDER LEKHA MOTAMUTI LAGLO
BISESOTO SOURANGSU ER THEKE BHALO LEKHE BOLE AMAR BISWAS
BHASARJYOTI - EK KOTHAYE ONOBODDYO...ANUPOM SWOKIOTAYE EGIE
nabendyu ei kabita...ei kabita...aha ki je biponnyota ..ogo...amake cheye felechhe ....
ReplyDeletevalo boro valo...
'bardir gharer moddhye aaowaz' amader vabay. kaar aaowaz! bardir? na, annyo kaaro? shitkaar er shabdo na dhamoker? parer pongti pore bujhte pari, bardir gharer moddhye kono jouno aador nei, shason royeche 'vorbela tagarer gachhe haat diyechhilo ke' smosto sandeher tir taar dike , jyano tagarer gaachhe haat deoar kono adhikaar taar nei,
ReplyDeleteer parei kichhu sunnyosthan. aaro ki prosno kora hoyechhilo?
prothom 'ke' o ditio 'ke' er moddhye bistar farak. prothom 'ke'r moddhye shasani aachhe, ditio 'ke'r moddhye udasin sahomormita royechhe.
'shari' aar 'mritpatro' atiter sugandho dhore raakhe. tai ki? mritpatro akhon byabohaar hoy kothay, aar bangali meyera shari kingba oitijjyer astittyo samparke jodi aaro ektu sajag hoto,
bardi ebong samosto meyera chayer daittyo niye chole jaay naki chaayer daittyo diye antormahole pathiye deya hoy.
ebarer srestho kobita (abossyoi amar bodhe) 'ANTORAAL'. arupratan ghosh.