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kabitaguli porte jodi somosya hoe , ekti left click korun . kobi aapnar samne boro hoe uthben .

aaro natun natun kobir lekhaa chaai . sokole lekha paathan .

aalochona korun . aalochona-e ei blog koraar ekmaatro uddeshyo
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34 comments:

  1. JhaNp dilo aro ekti post.tortoriye cholche 2000banglapoets.

    7th poster first kobita porte gele kintu khub kosto hoy. bicchinno jotilotay ekti okabitar gronthirochana. eto weight hoye gache je cholte parche na bole mone hoy.

    Sankhya r lekha thik er ulto. khub sohoj sorol. sadharon word use kora hoyeche. kintu seshporjonto thik kotota kobita (abossoi 2000 er bangla kabita)hoye utheche seta pathok nirnoy korben. eto sabolil lekha r ekhon ki chole? amar mone hoy chole na. apni ki mone koren?

    Nabendubikash paul er lekha se ortheanektai utre gache. aro tantan hote parto. (hole bhalo lagata ar ektu beshi hoto.)

    Ramit khub bhalo likhche. bhalo lage tar lekha porte. kintu ei lekhati porte giye amar bar bar ramitke chariye chole jete hoyeche 60er dasake ba 70 er dasake. kemon jeno klishe theklo. ami kintu Ramiter kach theke aro bhalo kichu asha kori.

    Indranil er lekhay notun korar ekta icche prokash pacche. thik ache. eta jodio mone dag felte parlo na, kintu keep on. asole ebhabei to notun kichu toiri hoy.

    BIday kobitati ekti sabolil kabita hoyeche, kono rokom artificiality charai durdanto ekti kabita. kichu kichui sobdo otironjito ba jor kore ana mone hote pare- hoyto e bishoye emuhurte pora sona er jonno dayi. jemon adeus(?), capichuno shobdoguli...

    Sunyota r kichui noy
    pranpone kheyal rakhar obbhash
    ekii saralrekhay..
    etukutey sompurno kobitati joriye royeche. khub bhalo chobi toiri korte pare Nupam. e kabitatio tar byatikrom noy.

    Astonirjon ebong bhaskarjyotir lekha khub bhalo laglo. kono kotha bola mane ei kobitadutike aghat kora. khub bhalo legeche. Aro bhalo hok.

    Sobaike subheccha.
    MANIK SAHA

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  2. Sobdo prokaser jonne kobita likhi ? naki kobita prokaser jonne sobder dorkar? Kobir kaj ki bose bose sobdo tairi kora? Kobi ki byakaron sing? Kobi ki primarily intellectual? Naki sensitive? Spelling mistake hole maf korben kobir bananer badhyabadhokotao nei. Na hole jonmo take ichchhe moto jonom likhe neoa jetona …
    Sudhu sobdo ki kobita? Sudhu dorson ki kobita? Sudhu bakya ki kobita? Sudhu chhobi ki kobita? Naki esob-e kobitar tools arthat chakor matro? Kobi ki sobdo bigyani ?
    Ja ichchha tai kolpona korlei ki kobita hoye jabe? Jamon mosar hatike gile neoa ekta kobitar chitrakolpo hoy Jodi?
    Kobitay ros thakbe naki feludar rohosyo? Detective podya r kobita ki 1?
    Manush aral kore kokhon? Manush lukote chai kokhon? Alonkar diye j rup briddhi korte chai tar ki nijer soundorjo nie sondeho nei?
    Ja bujhte parchhina tai bujhi darun? R bujhte parlei sadharon? 100 bochorer purono? A,B,C,D KOTO BOCHORER PURONO?
    Banano sundor kotha holey kobita? Kobi nije janena kon sobde se asot?
    Kobita , a-kobita chhara r kono bivajoner khub dorkar ache? Kobitai totto tairi korbe naki totto miliye miliye kobita likhte hobe aj?

    1matro anuvuti chhara kobir r kichhu na thakleo chale. Kobi hoyar mathar dibbi keu deyni. Kobita bole alada kichhu nei. Jibon k prokaser kajei 1din tar abirvab. Jibon theke etota dure kobita hoyna. Prithibir kono vasay eto avab ekhono aseni j 12hohrs kore khete mathar gham paye fele sobdo tairi korte hobe. R sobdo Jodi tairi kortei hoy kobira aage notun akhsor tairi korun j jar khusi moton. Anek besi sobdo tairir somvabona sristi hobe! kintu sobi hobe hoccchhe sudhu communicate hochchhe na! lokkher theke upolokkho BIG!
    Rice er patro matir hari theke pressure cooker hobe etukui noyunotto, kintu 100 bochorer purono holeo rice fotale vat e hobe ,kochupora hobena! Surrealism naki drisya kabya keno vabbo ? tarjonno phd. Korar adhyapok roilo, amra borong dekhi seta pran tanchhe kina , mathai apne ap gethe jachchhe kina ? baktigoto bipode jano vogoban noi kobitatake dakte pari…
    Jar joto anuvutir avab se toto sobde chamke diye aral korte chai, se toto buddhir r totter dohai diye boro hote chai. ‘ a somoye a sob cholbena` jatio kothar kono mane nei. Somoy paltai na amra bodle jai. Kobitar kono gupto vagaban likhito Koran karo kachhe nei.
    ‘Ki likhchhi nijei janina` kothata churanto jochchuri.

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  3. Mora sundor santaner jonmo debar theke janto pongu santaner jonmo deoa dher valo. Kobitar kaj communicate kora , jotil kore distance dekhano noy. J mastarer pora sobai bujhte pare sei to valo master… kobira soroswatir bondhu premik; tar binar tar saranor mechanique noi---gheme neye sobdo tairi muloto tai…kobito premikar panjorer har gunbena se valobasbe…
    Jor kore notun ase na ele dhumketur moto prithibir gaye kalo gorto kore diye jai. Notunotto bibortoner fosol. Konokichuri dege deoa niyam nei, sotota o anuvuti jkono silper prothom o sesh sorto. Baki notunotto apni asbe. Rice kanta chamoche r chowmin table spoon a khay keu?
    Ami totto sobdo kichui bujhi na . tai blog a comment kori na . mon diye pori protita comment. Totto bujhte chai bole ju te comparative literature niye vorti hoyechhi. Anupom da anek kore bollen bole comment er boodle amar kobita vabna shorte likhlam. Karo mene nebar dai nei . amar lekha bujhte dorkaro nei. Amar kichhu bolar achhe tai sot vabe boli . chai muchi mathor adhyapok amlan dutta sokole amar kobita communicate korte paruk. R jani j din kichhu bolar thakbena kobita lekha chhere debo. Kobi hoyar dai amar nei. Kichu vul aprasongik ba 100bochorer bosta pocha likhe thakle amay khma korben sokole. Nao korte paren amar kichhu jai asena. Anupam dar protio ami kritoggo noi amake bloge Dakar jonno , na dakleo amar kichhui jeto asto na…
    Robindranath ero Jodi valo na lage ami ja sotti mone hobena likhte parbona…ami nijer kotha bolte esechhi, ami prottek ke vishon sroddha kori kintu karo proti amar kono daiboddhota nei… so called kobitar protio noi… kobita bole kichhu nei, ishwarer motoi manusher proyojone tar sristi manusher hate…
    Kobita niye amar kono mohogrosthota nei. Ja anirbochonio tai ingite bujhie ditei somosto silpo sristi korechhe manush. er besi samanyo mohogrosthota amar nei…

    (astonironjon tomar lekha DUENDE te chhapte chai. Pathao. 4+ t. 4t chhapbo. Email: bhaskarjyotimanas@gmail.com mob:9432161943)

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  4. bahudin age ekta prabandhya pore thamke gachilam onekkhon....rimbadu o ramkrisna....arunesh ghoser...amake pagol korechilo...mone achhe sab o sonnasi boitar janya ami ki ki korechilam....pore manindra babur chader opithe pore er ekbar thamke chilam...

    vaskorjyoti apnar ei comment amake thamke dichhe aj rat 1.30 e....

    ami ki aj abar vaskar chakrabarty khulbo...ami ki aj abar mele dhorbo pranabendu dasgupta...

    e sala...choke jol ese jai...oi kabita oi kabita dao...ami bahudin chok mukh hat lingya pete bose achhi...sab dik theke ekta bisforon dao...

    kabitay chalaki chole na...

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  5. bhaskar aamake dhnyobaad keno debe , aami taake dhanyobaad dichhi eto sundor ekti comment koraar jonne .

    baastobik . aami baar baar aamar godyo-gulote likhechhi je kobi kokhono intellectual non . aabar tini thik saadharon maanus-o non . tnini ekjon bneke jaaoa maanus . tnaar aalada ekta vaasa aachhe , sei vaasa aabohomaan vasa thekei uthe aase , kintu sei vaasa-k isot bnaakie dae . vaasa-e bnaak dhoraano kobir kaaj noe , tnaar swabhaab .

    shobdo sochetonota sudhumaatro kobita hote paare na . tobe kobike sobdo-socheton hotei hoe . ekti sobdo natun na holeo chole , kintu ekti bakyo ba ekti uchcharon natun hoaa chaai .

    kobita ekti uchchaaron ja prothombaar hoechhe , hoe uthechhe . tokhon-e taa shaswato jokhon taa hoe aachhe .

    kobita ekta unreal concept . taar post-mortem kaamyo noe . somaalochona taar proyojon nei . chaai sudhu rosaswadon .

    kobita-r somaalochok hoe na . ninduk hote paare .

    kobita khnoje taar rosik . taar naagor . aamar pore astanirjan aarekjon nagar pelo . taar naam bhaskar .

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  6. SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYWednesday, October 28, 2009

    Anupam valo laglo - Shunnyota ar kichhui na, shob kichu pranponey kheyal rakhar awbbhesh'- awsadharon awnubhuti.

    Bhaskarjyoti-r 'Adhkhana Mukh' chNuye gyalo..

    ekhane ekta kawtha utheche..amar mone hoy shobdo prokasher jonnye, sudhumatro, ba beshirbhagtai shobdo prokasher jonnye kobita lekha..ei byaparta awshot..maane kobitar proti awbichar kora..age ekta post e amra alochona korechhilam konta kivabe kokhon 'kobita' hoye jaye, keu bolte parena..apato sadharon shobdo-mala kobita srishti korte paare, abar vebe prokash kora shobdo-gucchho kobita sristi korte byartho hotey paare.

    kobitake kobitar moto kore bere uthte dewai valo. shobdoprokasher jonnye aro onek rokom jayga ache..prempotro ittyadi..keu hoyto bolben prempotro-o tow kobita..se khetre onnyo kawtha bola jabe..:)

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  7. 1matro anuvuti chhara kobir r kichhu na thakleo chale.

    bhaskarjyoti-r ei kathatae aami mridu aapotti jaanachhi . anubhuti-k prakash korte naa paarle kobi ki kore likhbe ? aabohomaan kobita somporke taar ekta dharona na thakle se ki kore saamprotik hoe uthbe ? nijeke aalada kore neoaa to proyojon !

    je kobi kobita somporke katha bolte paare na , tumi ki ekjon kobi+sampadok hisebe take khub astha-r chokhe grohon korbe ?

    kobitar ekta nirob itihaas aachhe . ek-e songe setaa abaar ni:songotar mukhor itihaas . taai na ?

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  8. sudhu boli...bhaskarjyoti..tomay dhonnyobad...amon kichu kotha tumi bolecho ja ami bole uthte parini...amar posteo ami er age bolechilam...."adhunik" "uttor-adhunik" kobita bole kichu hoy ..eta ami bisswas korina....borojor "adhunik kaler kobita hote pare"...ar ..ei " notun kora" ba notun kobita ki seta ekhuno bojha holona....ta nie afsoso nei....ke bichar korbe konta kobita ar konta kobita noy?......keiba boledebe kobitar songa?..keuna...

    "Mora sundor santaner jonmo debar theke janto pongu santaner jonmo deoa dher valo"-- jothartho bolecho.....kobita jetuki sotosfurtobhabe ase...setai sotto ebong sot...kobita NIRAMANE ...amar konodino biswas chilona...tai anupomer kothai thik ..kobitar sothik roisk chai..chai nagor.....umpire noy.

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  9. ....ebar asi e porjayer kobita prosonge

    SOROLIKORON - RWITTIKA -....BHALOI LAGLO TOBE ETA KI KOTHAO PORECHI AGE?...THIK MONE PORCHE NA...

    DUR DIPOBASINI - S S NAG - MOTAMUTI LAGLO...AGER LEKHAGULOR JONNEI ARO BESI PRTTYASA TOIRI HOECHE...ETA APNARI DAYE

    DHATUGUN -9 -NOBEDUKISOR - BES EKTA JHOKMOKE DHAKKA DUM KORE PORE FELA GELEO ...ABAR PORTE HOBEI..."KHULIR VITOR SAMOGRIK BONG"..ETA THIK BUJHEUTHTE PARLAM NA KI BHABE NEBO...SLESH..NA..SODORTHOK...

    BIDAY(2)-AVISHEK - BHALO LAGLO...ARO EKTA SUNDOR CHOTPHOTE LEKHA DEKHE.....TOBE EBAR EKTU ONNOROKOM KORE DEKHLE KYAMON HOY!!!

    NIRBASON -ROMIT- OFF!! PROTHOM LINEI ROKTAKTTO... BESH BHALO LAGLO....EI SMART UPOSTHAPONAR VONGI.....

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  10. achha ...
    aami ekta aalochona ekhaane suru korte chaaichhi . jog dile vaalo laagbe .

    kobita-e jotichinho kotota proyojon mone korchhen aamar somodoshoker kobira ? ektu jaanale vaalo hoe . purnochhed ki dite chan aar ?

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  11. SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYWednesday, October 28, 2009

    Kobitay jotichinho...nah totota proyojon noye...space proyojon..amar mone hoye..

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  12. Bhaskar-er comment porlam...besh kichhu kotha khub juktijukto mone holo abar besh kichhu boktybyer sathe ekmot hote parlamna...prothomoto Bhaskar ek jaegae bolechhen---"1matro anuvuti chhara kobir r kichhu na thakleo chale"..Bhaskar aapnar ki mone hoyna je kobita likhte gele anubhuti to sobcheye joruri kintu anubhuti prokasher bhasha?bhashatai ki protita kobita ke ekta nijswota daena?ekhon jodi aapni ekta swot anubhuti niye Rabindranath-er bhashae kono kobita lekhen seta ki adou kobita podobachyo hobe?anubhutihin kobita ki sombhob?...aapni proshno tulechhen---"Ja bujhte parchhina tai bujhi darun? R bujhte parlei sadharon? 100 bochorer purono? A,B,C,D KOTO BOCHORER PURONO?",ami kothatai bujhlam na ebong khub dukkhito hoye bolchhi kothata khub odbhut bole mone holo...kobita bujhte na parar byaparta ami bujhina,kobita jinista amar kachhe anubhutir byapar bujhte gele byaparta bojha hoye othe,ebong kono kobita bhalo laga ba na lagar byapartao sompurno apekkhik,jeta aapnar bhalo lagchhe seta amar bhalo nao lagte pare abar ultotao hote pare,eto rigid manosikota keno thakbe amader je jeta amra anubhob korte parlamna seta kobita hoyni,achha aapnar ki mone hoyna je amader boktybogulo amader notun bhashae bola uchit,amader lekhae jeno ekta nijoswota thake,dhorun aapni jodi apnar anubhutigulo prokash koren onyo kono kobir bhashae tahole ki segulo adou aapnar kobita,hoyto anubhutigulo aapnar kintu kobitata?...aapni ki kore eta bhabchhen je shobdo niye khela korata asole ekta chalaki,sobdogulo jodi notunbhabe kono kobir lekhae fute othe setai to kobir sarthokota...kobitar kkhetre kono songya jodi dite jan aamar mote seta khubii anuchit..."Jar joto anuvutir avab se toto sobde chamke diye aral korte chai"---amar kintu mone holo ekta bachcha chheler ukti...
    "Mora sundor santaner jonmo debar theke janto pongu santaner jonmo deoa dher valo."---janina ekta pongu sontan-er jonmo deoa bhalo kina,er theke amar kachhe sontanta mrito holei bhalo lagbe,je kobita kono notun chinta,notun bhasha aante parena taar theke emon ekta kobita ja kobita hisebe onek utkrishto maaner na hoyeo bhobishyot projonmer kobitar bhit rochona korte pare ta onek sreyo,amar kachhe jodi keu notun kichhu likhte giye kharapo lekhe ta kintu purono anukorone ekta bhalo lekhar theke onek beshi acceptable..."J mastarer pora sobai bujhte pare sei to valo master"---master ki porchhen setao to dekhben,ami to aain-er master amar pora jodi ekjon tulonamulok sahityer chhatro bujhte na pare tahole ki ami kharap porai?pathoker sathe kobir songjog sthapon jemon joruri,temni taar pathok ke seta bojhao to joruri,aapnar ki mone hoy emon kono kobi achhe jaar lekha sobar kachhe grohonjogyo?mone rakha bhalo je notun bhashae kotha bolle jonopriyota kobi payna karon se amader obhyas ke bhangchhe,tobu ekjon kobii sei sahos dekhate paren,karon taar sei shirdaNrata achhe,se nijer bhashae kotha bolte chae,se compromise chaena,aapnar taar lekha bhalo nai lagte pare kintu se oswot eta bola sombhoboto thik noe...

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  13. ebar kobitar prosonge asi...

    Ritwikadir kobitata besh laglo,kintu aager post-er lekhata protyasha bariye tulechhe...Shankhyar lekhata kintu amar khub bhalo legechhe,odbhut sundor...Nabendubikash khuub bhalo,notun angik,chomtkaar bhasha,darun laglo,...Ramitdar kobitata bhalo laglo,tobu sebhabe amay chhuNte parlona,hoyto seta amarii ogyota...Indranilda amar khub priyo kobi,ei lekhatao khub bhalo...Bhaskarjyotir lekha darun laglo,ager du'to post-er lekhagulo bhalo legechhilo,eta mugdho korlo...Anupamdar lekha ei blog-e ei prothombaar---asamanyo,nijoswo bhasha,khub sohoj shobde je ekta durdanto lekha sombhob seta Anupamda barbar dekhiyechhen,ami sommohito hoye porchhi lekhata porte porte...aar Astonirjon,protita lekhae mugdho kore tulchhe,ami to tomar lekhar bhokto hoye uthchhi,barbar porchhi,afsos hochhe ei lekhoker lekha beshi porar sujog paini bole...

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  14. jotichinher byaparta amar kachhe totota porishkar noe,amar kotha ami bolte chai,jekhane amar mone hochhe jotichinho amar kothata bolte sahajyo korchhe sekhane ditei pari,abar jekhane mone hochhe amar kobitar charidike jotichinhogulo ekta simarekha eNke dichhe sekhane jotichinho byabohar na korai bhalo...

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  15. AGER POSTER POR .............

    SUNNOTA O SELAI KAL -ANUPAM -KHUB BHALO LAGLO...BES ONAYAS JATRA....KONO 'CHALAKI' NEI SOBDER .

    ADHKHANA MUKH - BHASKARJYOTI - THIK MONE DHORLONA BHAI...KI JANI AGER LEKHAGULOR JONNEI HOYTO .

    2 TI KOBITA- ANTONIRJON -( BES NAMKHANA!!!)..2ND KOBITATI BHALO LAGLO...

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  16. bhaskarjyotir kobita porlam bhalo laglo... tobe ei shob shobdo ebong ityadi niye eto bhyantarani bhalo lagche na....jar ja shobdo khusi lagate pare....Nikano Parrar boktobyo anujayi 'lekho jar jemon khusi' ba 'kobitay shobii chole' ei shober sathe ami ekmot..er songe kobir bhab ba anubhuti fute utche kina mane ekta feelings paoa jacche kina sheta dekhbar bishoy...ashole kobita nirbhor kore sub concious er opor...eto bangla chhondo, shobdo, akkhor shobi reflection of the subconcious bole mone hoy...tai kobita kokhono bhalo hoy kokhono ba mondo...sudhui sobder kariguri ar bhitore bhusi jemon bhalo noy temoni sudhui porchi kotoguli experience matro tao bhalo noy....shobdo ar anubhuti dui thaklei kobita bhalo hoy...ei apnara eto shobdo ar anubhuti niye maramari na kore bhalo kore likhun...amra porleo jeno shanti pai...ar hnaa lekha practice korun, kintu maths practice er moto kore noy, karon tahole micro biology'r ek ekta essay er moto mone hobe kobita gulo...dhonyobadante, Abhrapratim Nag

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  17. 1ta missunderstanding hochchhe. ami sobdo feledite bolini.ami sobdo charchata mulloksho hoye other birodhita korechi. sobdo k kivabe fele dobo ami jokhon sobdo fele debar kothatao amake sobdo diei bolte hobe. ami bolchhi likhito kobita chharao kobita hoi. 1ta advut jotsnao kobita tairi korte pare sobdo chharai,kintu anuvuti chhara kobita hobena...
    avisek tumi jamon robindronather vasay lekhar kotha bolchho temon annokobir anuvob o kintu amader moddhe chepe jay ,mone hoy nijeri anuvuti jano--- se kobita amar kachhe anuvutihin e. r rabindra ba charjar vasay sotti ki lekha jai? otato amader use er moddhe nei. eki vabe amra use korbona emon kitrim sobdo jojonao vul.

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  18. postmardanism er name bangla kobitai kom anuvutihin kobita lekha hoyni ektu khoj nilei jante parbe.
    jeta tumi bujhte paroni se sombondhe boli: ager poste barinda amar lekha somporke bollen , amar lekha abohomaner arthat 100 bochhorer purono.tomar ki motamot? ami bachchha? valolagata apekkhik jani.amar lekhataki rigidityr sakkhor? apnara bolben. tobe rijid hole ami likhtamna j kobitar vogoban likhito koran karo kache nei... tobe samogrik-apekkhikotao ekta hoy. karo jodi sisur manso priyo khaddo hoy tumi ki apekkhikotar dohai diye udar hoye thakbe?(tumi berie galo ... khoma korben avisek).kobita bojhar noy kintu arthohin sobdo guchcho bakya tairi korena avisek...ebong bodh chhara anuvob o anuvob chhara ki bodh thakte pare? r mora sonta janto sontaner khetre boli, jar pran achhe j kono somoy se notun posak pore nite pare. mora byaktir gaye ekhono amra sada kapor chapai, notun juger notun posak porai na. se boro kostodayak. jar pran achhe tari to notunotto saje. jibonanoder kobitai pran prothom thekei chhilo notun se pore hoyechhe.tulonay tulonay buddho bosur lekha chilo anek adhunik kintu aj r amra porina kano? jokhon purono robindronath o pori? r jodi bolo ekhon jonmer niyomo bodle gechhe test tube baby-r jug tobe bolbo eta j vit rochona korlo vobisyoter tate sisu achhe prem nei... anuvuti theke otha sobde amar apotti nei avisek , ta anuvobei firie nie jai. buddhi theke otha sobde apotti, karon ta anuvutides theke bohudur... format thik kore niye keu jodi likhte bose tar anuvuti compromise chhara thakbe to 100vag?

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  19. tomar ekta ukil chhatro ki amar kachhe porte asbe avisek? naki ekjon chemistry bujhte jabe tomar kachhe? kintu kobitato 1ta universal platform. seta dharma jati siksha gender proffession niropeksho. sekhane sobar communicationer proyojon jodi nai thake cholo 1 kaj kori ami amar lekha sudhu comparativer lokder sonai r tumi tomar kobitar boi sudhu ukilder hate tule dao. kintu tomar lekha amar r amar lekha tomar keno valo lage? r kobitar kotha sunlei manush palie jai keno? amra ki amader kotha amaderi bole jabo? tar che diary lekha valo.sobdo bahon sobdo upolokso. jotodur ta kobitake prokash kore totodur se swagoto . sobdo nijeke prokash korte giye kobita k aral korle bipod. ki khachchi tai boro kotha kise khachchi tar cheye. patrer gurutto achhei kintu khaddo thakle tobeto patro. karo kobita pore jodi ekta sobdo ekta line eto valo lageje gota kobitata gouno mone hoy tobe jante hobe ta byartho holo. kono kobi sokoler kachhe grohon jogyo noi karon sristi nijei asompurno. kintu reject korte holeo to bodhe chhute hoy.hoi grohon korbo noy tyag kintu besitai j majhamajhi achhoya theke jai ek adrisya dealer karone? ovyas vante apotti nei. notunotter anuvutitai alada. kintu ta sotosfurto hok. alada hoyar jonno alada hote giye jodi dine ghum r rate jege thake ardhek des? ki hobe? prithibir jkono duto manush sorboda alada. tai abar alada hoyer kichhu nei . bhaskar bhaskar hoye uthuk avisek avisek anupam anupam amra apne ap sotontro hoye jabo. etai muskil. amra boro besi anner moto notun. nijer vasa kikore thakbe avisek? amra sokole 1ta bangla vasatei likhi kobita. tumi bodhhoy vongir kotha bolte cheyechho. ota j jar nijer vitore aiready achhe sudhu abiskar korar dorkar. avisek tomar kothai amar notun vabna jagie diyechhe tomake ajoshro dhonyobad. na vangle gora jai na. ami tar biporite noy. amio notunotter.sudhu chai ta antorik hok. eta jodi bachchhader moto mone hoy tobe prarthona kori ami jano kokkhono boro na hoe. bojha sobde ami asole communicate 'bojhate` cheye chhilam.
    avro parrar kobitar sesta loksho korben. sekhane lekha achhe 'sudhu sada patar cheye utkristo hoye uthte hobe tomader.'
    duendepoetry.blogspot.com a parrar kobitata banglay paoa jabe.

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  20. joti chinher khetre ami aviseker songe 1 mot. anupam da commentse ki jpeg support korbe? amar ekta podyo achhe ei nie dite chai.

    bankim blechhilen: proyojontai asol; nisproyojonei apotti...

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  21. aalochonaa bes jome uthechhe . daarun laagchhe . kintu dupur-e Bhaskarjyoti comment koraar por sandhya obodhi keu kichhu likhlo na dekhe obaak holaam ektu .

    Bhaskar , comment jpeg support korbe na . kintu tumi podyota aamake porer post-er jonne paathie daao . naa hole BANGLISH chharaa upaae nei . ei post-e seta gelei vaalo hoe hoeto .

    Abhrapratim-er(?) baachonbhongir songe aami ekmot hote paarlaam na . bhyantarani shobdotaa khub aapottikor . aar ... aalochona hachhe etaa tomaar khaarap laagchhe keno bhai ! ki asubidha hachhe tomaar ? aar maaramaari kothae dekhle ? ekhaane jaara katha bolchhe sokolei kobita lekhe , ebong taarpor kobita nie katha bole . kobita practice kore na eta tomaar keno mone holo ? rittwik ghotok-er moto katha bolte chaaile ki ?

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  22. Bhaskar-er comment porlum...khub bhalo laglo,du'ekta kotha chhara sompurnobhabe amio ekmot,ekta bhulbojhabujhi hochhilo seta mite gelo,ebong aalochonata theke amader chinta bhabnagulote swochhotao elo,tai Bhaskar ke dhonyobad...

    tobu du'ekta kotha,prothomoto---Bhaskar tui bolechhis "postmardanism er name bangla kobitai kom anuvutihin kobita lekha hoyni ektu khoj nilei jante parbe."
    amar kintu ekhono mone hoy jokhon amra kobita likhchhi tokhon amra obosyoi nijeder onubhobgulo likhchhi,anubhutihin lekha adou kobita hote parena,jegulo anubhutihin segulo kintu kobitao noe..."kobita bojhar noy kintu arthohin sobdo guchcho bakya tairi korena "shobdo onyobhabe prokasho kintu orthohin noy Bhaskar,shobdogulo kobita chokhe notun rup-e fute uthchhe,kobita to prolaap o hote pare,bakyo toiri korar dorkaar ki?amader oi shobdogulo jodi chhuNte pare taholei hobe..."buddhi theke otha sobde apotti, karon ta anuvutides theke bohudur"kobitae mostisko byaboharero kintu proyojon achhe mone kori,sompurno anubhutihin bakyo jemon kobita hote parena,temni sompurno buddihin lekhao kobita noe,asole amra jeta bolte chaichhi seta kibhabe bolbo setao amar kachhe gurutwopurno..."kobitato 1ta universal platform" kothatar sathe ami ekmot,kintu sob pathoker mon ki amra pete parbo Bhaskar,na ki seta kamyo,tor kobitao ki sobar kachhe grohonjogyo?asole ami je kothata aageo bolechhilam,ebong jeta mone pran-e biswas kori seta holo kobita ke pathok-er kachhe jete hobena,kobi nijer sristi kore cholben,pathok taar kobita ke nijei khuNje neben,taNra jotoi sonkhyae kom hon apotti nei,ekjon kobi jodi matro ekjon swot pathok o pan jini taar kobita anubhob koren,setai jothesto...

    jodio ei aalochonar kono proyojoniyotai chhilona karon kaal amar ebong Bhaskar-er kotha hoyechhe,ebong bojha gechhe kobitar bishoy-e amader drishtibhongir kono parthokyo nei,e aalochona hoyto sudhu aalochonar jonyoi hoyto onyo pathokder aalochonae amontron janabar ekta prokriya...

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  23. aami dirghokhn dhore porchii.r akbar pore motamot debo

    rangeet

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  24. OGULO KOBITA NOY JANI. KINTU SETA TOR AMAR PERSONAL MOTAMOT. GENARELY MARKETE KOBITA BOLE BIKRI HOY. TAI GENARELY OGULOKE BOJHATE KOBITA SOBDOI USE KORTE HOLO. AMAR PURO COMMENT TAI TO SETA NIE---OGULOKE KOBITA BOLAR APOTTI NIYE.
    TOR KOTHA THIK PROLAPO KOBITA HOTE PARE. KINTU POGOLER AVINOY THEATRE A JMON SUSTHO MANUSH K KORTE HOY PAGOL PARENA TAMON PROLAPO 1JON SOCHETON ARTHAT NIJER LEKHAR BISOYE SOCHETON KOBIR HAT DIEI KOBITA HOBE NOTUBA BONGODESER POSTMORDANISMER MOTO HOYE JABE. PAGOLER PROLAPER BAKYO TAIRIR DORKAR NEI KOBIR PROLAPER ACHHE. KARON CHHANDO NA JANLE JAMON CHHONDO VANGA JAY NA , TAMON BAKYA NA JANLE SE PROLAP TAIRI KORA JAINA JA KOBITA HOYE OTHE. AMADER ANTORNIHITO BAKYER BODH E KINTU PROLAP K CHINTE PARE ABAR JOGYOTA ANUJAE KOBITA NAME DAKTE PARE TAKE... KOBITAI MOSTISKER PROYOJON NEI BOLINI. BOLECHHI BUDDHI KORE BUDDHITAKE LUKOTE HOBE JAMON SORIR LUKIYE RAKHE HRITPINDO K. HITPINDOTA DEKHA GELEI KI VALO HOTO? BUDDHI K EI GOPON KORTE PARA SOHOJ NOY JOTHESTO MOSTISKO NA THAKLE TA HOY NA . SEKHANE KOBIR MATHA SCIENTISTER CHEYE KOM ROSALO NOY. AMI BOLCHHI KOBITA SOBDOCHHOK HOYE UTHLE BYARTHO HOY. CHALAK O BUDDHIMANER TOFAT ACHHE.AMI CHALAK K CHAICHHINA.BUDDHIHIN KANO HOTE BOLBO? KOBITA SOKOLER KACHHE GROHONIO HOBENA. KINU PATHOK TO ADRISYO. K KON PRANTE EKLA GHORER KONE PORCHHE AMAR LEKHHA R KE KOTHAI TONGA BANACHCHHE AMAR BOIER PATAI AMI KI JANI ? TAI SOKOLER DIKEI TO BONDHUTTER HAT BARIE DITE HOBE. JE CHOnBE NA TAR DIKTHEKE MUKHFERABONA J DHORBE HAT TAKEO BONDHU KORE NEBO. R SOB DAI PATHOKER NOY KOBIKEO 1PA EGIE DITE HOY, DIE TO AMRA. KOBITATO DIARYTE LUKIE RAKHINA AVISEK BOIMELAY HOIHOI KORE BIKRI KORI BIKRI HOLE KEU VALO BOLLE KHUSHI HOI. KHUSITO HOBOI E JE ATTAR MILONER KHUSI. AMAR KONO AHONKAR NEI , BORONG HAT BARIE DITE VALO LAGE.AMI EKYU SOHOJ HOI R SEO KHOLOS CHHERE BERIE ASTE THAKE! SONKHYA NIYE PROSNOI NOY. ALOKRONJAN MATRA EKBAR BOLECHHILEN AMI MONE MONE BARBAR BOLI:'JONOPRIYOTA NOY;PRIOJONOTA CHAI' KINTU PRIYO JONOTA JOTO BESI HOBE AMADER TOTO VALOI LAGBE AVISEK!

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  25. TOR SONGE KOTHA BOLE BES VALO LAGCHHE. EKTA BES SOMPORKO TAIRI HOCHCHH. ANUPOM DA GHOTKALI KORE DILO. GHOTOK BIDAY DITE CHAINA KARON SAMORTHO NEI!!! AMARO ANNO VABE BOLTA PARLE VALO LAGE.EKTUO KI PERECHHI AVIS+1 ?

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  26. bhaai Bhaskar , shobde shibde biyaa dae je se holo kobi . kobite kobite ghotkaali kore je taake ki bolbe bolo to ?

    khub vaalo experience ebaarer post . nijeke samriddho laagchhe .

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  27. anupam da take sompadok bole !!! amio ektu adhtu ei ghotkalir chesta kori kina... tobe tumi khub paka ghatok ...

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  29. astonirjon duendete kobita debena? tomar kobita chapte parle valo lagbe

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  30. anupam -avishek- rangeet-bhaskar sabaike prothomei aktu sorry bole ni-- abare aktu aste deri holo- adik odik kajer jonno

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  31. abare aktu boddhader mato--hehehee - asole akdom bujhinato kichu tai aktu agei gala phuliye naoa ar ki-- khema tema kore dio bapu--- kobitagulo pore amar ja legeche boli--

    ritikar kobita kharap lageni tobe ager lekhar poripekkhite ata kothao kothao jeno aktu tene niye jaoa hoyeche bole mone hoyeche-- tobe ritika ar cheye aro bhalo likhte pare jodio sotty kabitar bhalo kharap ta kon parameters e bichar hobe seta ajo jana nei

    shuvroshankar er lekha ami ai prothom porlam bhalo laglo--

    dhatugun-9- nabendubikash lekhata darun- khub bhalo legeche

    indranil amar onnotamo priyo kobi seta ageo bolechi-- ai lekhata ami agei porechi jatodur mone porche kut sahitto ba onno kothao - sedio o bhalo legeche ajo laglo-- sabcheye baro bhyapar kobitay alada akta binnays besh tane


    avishek er lekhay anek natun sabdo ache abong natun ke tule dharar proyas royeche tobu amar kothao bhalo lageni -lageni ai karone gato kayek post e lekhar moddhe akta monotoneousness chole asche bole amar mone hocche-- aro aktu onno kichu chesta korle aro beshi bhalo lagto karon or sei potential ache ---tabe natun sabdo proyoger khetre jatariti darun--

    anupam, bhaskarjyoti ar astronirjon- abarer post er amar sabcheye priyo 3 te lekha porlam tomader kach theke-- anupam er lekhata akta jinis bujiye jay jeta sunno satoker jekono lekhok ba kobir abar bhaba uchit soty ki sudu kichu sabdo binnays diylei kobita?- anupam dekhiyeche ai lekhay sarol abong doinandin sabdoke niyeo sunno satok dhore rakha jay--

    bhaskarjyoti r lekha bhison sundor-sahoj sabolil saccho --

    ar astronirjon ke ager post eo bolechi akta katha je or lekhar moddhe kayekline akta puro galpo akta puro chobi lukiye thake-- atao tar byatikrom nay

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  32. ore baba anupam a ki koreche ara?-- bhaskar ar avi mile to bistor alochona ar hatahati koreche--hehhehe-- aktu deri kore ase to dekhchi byapok bhul hoyeche-- akhon rat 1.30 r ki lekha jabe?- tobe avishek er kichu kathar opor kichur bolar icche roye gelo-- ar bhaskarer prothom post tar opor-- kal jodi aktu somay pai bole jabo kimba next post e bokbokom kara jabe ---
    aj anek rat- sabai ke suvoratri--

    r blog darun cholche- darun cholbe-- anupam

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  33. Aamar kobita sambandhe , anupam-tomar matamat porlam. ei bhavnata aamar sachetanbhabe nei.tobe 90s ebong 0'doshok er majhamajhi bolei hoyto ei pravab rayeche.Ei sankhyay tomar "siter snan" aamake pravabito korlo.Ei dhoroner lekha aaro dekhte chai "Baak" e .

    -Avijit Dasgupta

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