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banhla kabita je sabalok hoyeche tar sakkhi kintu ei songkhar kobitaguli.
Arupratan swavabiikbhabei samayke chapiye gache. attonto sabolil bhabe sobdo sristi kore kore binarman koreche ... jemon namtai hindite lekha. sobdoke kotota bhalo bhabe janle ete kora jay ta ei kobita guli dekhe bojha jay.
bhaskarjyoti rei je ANANTA RULTANA KHATA eta amader kintu bhabiye tole - ananter ek natun songar dike amra chute jete badhyo hoi. apurbo..
dhighi kono purno bakyo lekhe ni. kintu ei asampurnotai tar kobitar jionkathi. ki abolilay pongti bhnte bhante egiye chola . amrao obak hoy chamoch kibhabe paharadar niye ase. kibhabe dube jete deynijhum jhunjhuni rat. apurbo jhunjhuni bishesonti.
Astonirjon namtai ekti kabita hoye jay,tai na! jodi udvinnop boli tobe or kobitake bodhhoy sothik bola hoy...
er ager issuete drissokobitar kotha bola chilo. kotha rakha hoyeche. e bishoye ami khub agrohi. ami chai ei bishoyti nioye alochonar apni o apnara asun.
Rittikar kabita besh adbhut ekti dorshon amader upohar dey. jar mule ache biponon kinba galaxy kinba ekti chobir chotur uposthiti.KOBITAY EI JE DORSON E BISOYE MOTAMOT KI APNADER?
eivabe ektorofaa kichhu hoe na . kabita paathano-r chaaite aalochonatai ekhaane mul target . seta na hole ei blog taar kaaron haarabe . bondo kore deoaar katha vaabte hobe .
Barinda , aamar chhobita kintu bhul dekhechhen aapni ! slipergulo aadou bohirmukhi noe , dutoi ontormukhi . ghore ki sobaai uthe aase ! neme aasena keu ? ha ha ha ... ebaar kintu direct suggestionta bolte hobe aapnake . taarpor weak bolun . if u find a suggestion there . I did not find any . rather I call it CROSSING THE BAR . I tried to present life . juto ekhaane kono symbol noe . sunlight-o noe . a slice of time , and nothing beyond . and time became the space , I dare say .
Avisek , aamar kaachhe drishyo-kobita orthe ei noe je poetic ekta visual presentation jaa jeno bujheo bojhaa jachhe na . taate ekta khondo-muhurto chirayoto hoe othaar byapaar aachhe . space ebong time sekhaane eksur hoe katha bolbe . Barinda je bolechhen Aruper kobitai visual kobita , seta mene neoa muskil . aami otisorolikrito byakkhya setaake bolchhi na . kintu likhito kobitae drishyogun aarop naa koraatai ekta challenge . Arup setate khub sohoje utre gie dekhaae . or kobita chokh die lekha hoe , kintu chokher baaire gie taake aamader porte hoe . never a visual poem , I humbly consider . Barinda bolechhen SHOBDE SAAJANO VISUAL KOBITA . orokom kichhu jodi hoe taahole Jibanananda Dash-er onek kobitakei otikrom koraar aar thaake na . tumi Jabananander BHOR kobitata porechho nischoi ?
visual kobita-r kichhu shorto aachhe . sonkhepe kichu tule dichhi WIKIPEDIA theke :-
Visual poetry is poetry or art in which the visual arrangement of text, images and symbols is important in conveying the intended effect of the work. It is sometimes referred to as concrete poetry, a term that predates visual poetry, and at one time was synonymous with it.
Visual poetry was heavily influenced by Fluxus, which is usually described as being Intermedia. Intermedia work tends to blur the distinctions between different media, and visual poetry blurs the distinction between art and text. Whereas concrete poetry is still recognizable as poetry, being composed of purely typographic elements, visual poetry is generally much less text-dependent. Visual poems incorporate text, but the text may have primarily a visual function. Visual poems often incorporate significant amounts of non-text imagery in addition to text.
aami nije kokhono visual poetry likhi na . aami je chesta kori seta holo PHOTOGRAPHIC POTRY . eta more photography than poetry . orthaat kobir chokh die tola photograph , photographerer chokh die tola kobita kokhonoi noe . aamar onek ei dhoroner PHOTOGRAPHIC POEMS paabe http://kathakabita.blogspot.com ebong http://anupammukhopadhyay.blog.co.in ei thikaanaguloe .
Avisek
u have done a wonderful job . splendid I think . metaphysical ... seta Barinda tnaar dristi theke bolechhen . aar surrealism ... FREUD ekbaar bolechhilen surreal text-e mognochoitonyo tini totota khnuje paan na jotota paan saadhaaron kono plain text-e .
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kayekdin deri hoye gelo comment dite- asole kichudin asa hay ni---
jai hok kobita niye bolte gele prothomei 2 joner nam korte chai 1-manik saha 2-astronirjon
ader nam karar akatai karon-- khub i bhalo legeche kobita duto-- "chuye dekhi janmandho boseche backseat e" ba "ultano prithibi hoye acho" -bah-- khub bhalo lekha
ar parei asi dighir lekhay-- bhison sundor- kichu asampurno sabdo je kibhabe bar bar phire aste prorochito kore sei alik khojer kache ta dighir lekhay pelam..
bhaskasjyotir lekhao bhalo--lekhar thekeo concept ta bhison saccho -choaya jay
arupratan r deborshir kobitao besh bhalo-- hayto ai ato bhalo lekhar ak sathe swad paotai blog er paona----
ritwikar kobita porlam--barabori bhalo lekhe--atao byatikrom nay -- abarer post ta bodhhay aksathe anek bhalo lekha paoar khide ta kichuta holeo mitiye gelo--
amar akta personal jiggasa ache astronirjon er nam sotty ki oita? naki ostronirjon kobir nam tar kobitar akashe? jodi tai hoye thake tahole bolbo besh- bhari sundor--khanikkhon to akhanei bismaye sunno hoye jete hay
visual kobita prosonge asi-- ai baypare ami sotty akdom NIL-- kicchu jani na- chobi dekhi -- mon bhorai-- nijer mato kore-- amar nijer byaktigato obhimat hayto sabari kache ai mon bhoranor sangya ta sabar mato-- tai sotty visual kobitar kono definite sangya hay kina ami janina---anupam er chobi prosonge barindar comment porlam jekhane uni kichu definite suggestion dicche abong tar poripekkhite anupam er o jabab porlam--amar nijer mone hay asole ai puro visual poetry jinistatei definite bole kono kichu hote pare na- jetuku hote pare kichu loker bhabna ak sathe hoye setar akta definite sangya toiri hote pare-- ar bakita sabtai je dekhche tar chok ar moner synchronisation-- ata amar byaktigato obhimat--
visual kobitar moddhe jeta na bollei nay ROSichnu r kaj-- asadharon legeche-- amar mone hay otar moddhe sakaler kache shilpir sristir pouche jaoar akta tagid ache-- shilpo bhabna ar tar khodaier moddhe darun melbondhon--
anupam er tao besh sundor-- definite suggestion kichu ache kina seta barindar ba anupamer mato amar kacheo hayto onno kichu-- tabe bhalo legeche--
avishek er kaj ami age dekhechi- ai prosonge anek kathao hoyechilo-- o bolechilo shipli naki choriye diye jabe ar je dekhche take khuje nite hobe bakituku-- ami sedin bolechilam tahole shilpikeo ata mone rakhte hobe monomato re-action nao pete pare tar samosto shilpokarme -- jodi tai hay tahole ami ajo khuje cholechi atar mane-----thik jemon sedin khujchilam--- tobe ak palake dekhle ranger akta bhasa chuye jay-- r metaphysical byapatao anekta baro- anektai-- tai shilpi hayto hayto sotty kichu bunte cheyechen.
R rangeet er kaj--- BUJHINI--sedin o na aj o na-- seta hayto darshok hisebe amar byarthota--
ramit dey ke bhalobese boli...ami astanirjon...thik i eta amar lekha lekhir (na lekhalekhir)nam....6 th post onek kichhur khorak jugie chhe...ami hada gongaram ....attikoron korar prachanda chestay achhi... are aj chot pujo chilo.. aj ekta vor dekhlam mahananday
Amar sokoler lekhai ato bhalo ar ato boichitromoy laglo je kono comment korte parlam na eibar..sokoler sristir pichoner sei bisphorok bostutike ar akbar selam..[:)]
banhla kabita je sabalok hoyeche tar sakkhi kintu ei songkhar kobitaguli.
ReplyDeleteArupratan swavabiikbhabei samayke chapiye gache. attonto sabolil bhabe sobdo sristi kore kore binarman koreche ... jemon namtai hindite lekha. sobdoke kotota bhalo bhabe janle ete kora jay ta ei kobita guli dekhe bojha jay.
bhaskarjyoti rei je ANANTA RULTANA KHATA eta amader kintu bhabiye tole - ananter ek natun songar dike amra chute jete badhyo hoi. apurbo..
dhighi kono purno bakyo lekhe ni. kintu ei asampurnotai tar kobitar jionkathi. ki abolilay pongti bhnte bhante egiye chola . amrao obak hoy chamoch kibhabe paharadar niye ase. kibhabe dube jete deynijhum jhunjhuni rat. apurbo jhunjhuni bishesonti.
Astonirjon namtai ekti kabita hoye jay,tai na! jodi udvinnop boli tobe or kobitake bodhhoy sothik bola hoy...
er ager issuete drissokobitar kotha bola chilo. kotha rakha hoyeche. e bishoye ami khub agrohi. ami chai ei bishoyti nioye alochonar apni o apnara asun.
Rittikar kabita besh adbhut ekti dorshon amader upohar dey. jar mule ache biponon kinba galaxy kinba ekti chobir chotur uposthiti.KOBITAY EI JE DORSON E BISOYE MOTAMOT KI APNADER?
DEBARSHI KLHUB BHALO LIKHECHE.bhalo. apnara asun.
subheccha sokolke....
aaste aaste comment-er sankhya kome aaschhe . goto post-e sudhu Barin Ghosal ebong aami-e katha bole gechhi . anyoraa sudhu sunechhe .
ReplyDeleteeivabe ektorofaa kichhu hoe na . kabita paathano-r chaaite aalochonatai ekhaane mul target . seta na hole ei blog taar kaaron haarabe . bondo kore deoaar katha vaabte hobe .
bujhte hobe kobita ekhaane kono torko uske dite paarlo na .
tarun kobi ekhaane katha bolte aasun . kobita lekha-r jaaega to prochur aachhe !
ebar-er sob kobitaguloi onobodyo....Dighi Biswas-er lekha khub bhalo laglo,Manikdar sathe sompurnobhabe ekmot kobitatir modye ekta asampurnota achhe jeta lekhatake ekta onyo matrae pouchhe dae...Bhaskarjyotir lekhar modye ekta sabolilota achhe,porte klanti asena,nijoswota achhe,khuub bhalo...Astonirjon Dutta-er lekha ami aage porini,darun laglo pore,mugdho hoye gelam...Rittikadir ei lekhata amar aager post-er lekhatar cheyeo beshi bhalo laglo,shobder byabohar khub bhalo,kobitata baarbaar porchhi,jotobaar porchhi aaro beshi bhalo lagchhe....Debarshi Sarkar er shobdo byabohar asadharon,khub bhalo laglo...Manikdar lekha joto pori aaro aaro bhalo lage,odbhut ekta maya joriye thake kobitar gaye,onobodyo...tobe eibaarer kobitagulor modye sobcheye bhalo laglo Arupratan Ghosh er lekha,Arupratan khub priyo ekjon kobi,shobder asamanyo byabohar,notunotwo sommohito kore tulchhe amay...barbar pore jachhe lekhata...
ReplyDeletedrissokobitagulor bishoy-e alochona Anupamda shuru korle khub bhalo hoy....amrao eke eke jog debo aalochonae...
Anupamda,eibaar sobai aalochonae jog debe asha kora jae hoyto protyeke ekhono pore uthte parenni,amra prothome kobitagulo niye aalochona kori,aste aste poridhi barte thakbe aalochonar...
ReplyDeleteaamr khub bhalo legeche.darun kobitate bhore uthche aamder blogbari
ReplyDeleterangeet
Abar esechi fire. Visual kobita niye kichu bolte chai. Arupratan-er kobitay dekha ar shona mishiye 'total-kobita'r adol pachhi. Anupam, ei total kobitar kathaa tomar songe alochana korechilam. Ta sonket debe kintu chihnno sajano chara ar kichu korbe na. Aruper kobitati shobde sajano visual kobita, jekhane ami ba tumi dhuke poreni. Ar samosto kobitay ami ba tumir mukti nei. Noirbyaktik hoyni ta.
ReplyDeleteAbhiseker visual kobita metaphysical sense carry korche ajante, I am sure. Shobde lekha kobitay se metaphysics ba surrealism use karenaa kakhano. Anupam-er visual kobita weak karon tar chobi in clear terms definite suggestion dichhe. Dorja slightly ajar, rod chupi dichhe bohirmukhi slipers paye goliye jeno ekkhuni raona debe. E chara ar kono bhabna foyena. Rongeet-er visual kobita darun laglo, karon ta indefinitely in asthetic terms jast happening, living, thriving at every look. Visual kobitar sharto puron kare eti. Keep up, Rongeet.
Barinda ,
ReplyDeleteaamar chhobita kintu bhul dekhechhen aapni ! slipergulo aadou bohirmukhi noe , dutoi ontormukhi . ghore ki sobaai uthe aase ! neme aasena keu ? ha ha ha ... ebaar kintu direct suggestionta bolte hobe aapnake . taarpor weak bolun . if u find a suggestion there . I did not find any . rather I call it CROSSING THE BAR . I tried to present life . juto ekhaane kono symbol noe . sunlight-o noe . a slice of time , and nothing beyond . and time became the space , I dare say .
Avisek ,
aamar kaachhe drishyo-kobita orthe ei noe je poetic ekta visual presentation jaa jeno bujheo bojhaa jachhe na . taate ekta khondo-muhurto chirayoto hoe othaar byapaar aachhe . space ebong time sekhaane eksur hoe katha bolbe . Barinda je bolechhen Aruper kobitai visual kobita , seta mene neoa muskil . aami otisorolikrito byakkhya setaake bolchhi na . kintu likhito kobitae drishyogun aarop naa koraatai ekta challenge . Arup setate khub sohoje utre gie dekhaae . or kobita chokh die lekha hoe , kintu chokher baaire gie taake aamader porte hoe . never a visual poem , I humbly consider . Barinda bolechhen SHOBDE SAAJANO VISUAL KOBITA . orokom kichhu jodi hoe taahole Jibanananda Dash-er onek kobitakei otikrom koraar aar thaake na . tumi Jabananander BHOR kobitata porechho nischoi ?
visual kobita-r kichhu shorto aachhe . sonkhepe kichu tule dichhi WIKIPEDIA theke :-
Visual poetry is poetry or art in which the visual arrangement of text, images and symbols is important in conveying the intended effect of the work. It is sometimes referred to as concrete poetry, a term that predates visual poetry, and at one time was synonymous with it.
Visual poetry was heavily influenced by Fluxus, which is usually described as being Intermedia. Intermedia work tends to blur the distinctions between different media, and visual poetry blurs the distinction between art and text. Whereas concrete poetry is still recognizable as poetry, being composed of purely typographic elements, visual poetry is generally much less text-dependent. Visual poems incorporate text, but the text may have primarily a visual function. Visual poems often incorporate significant amounts of non-text imagery in addition to text.
aamar mone hoe ei nirikhe Astanirjan-er kobita onek saarthok hoe uthechhe . kaaron sekhaane ekta sthirota aachhe jeta Arup-er kobita-e nei . likhito kobitae sei sthirota kaankhito-o noe . kintu nijer ajaantei Astanirjan emon ekta CONCRETE kobita likhechhe jaake VISUAL POETRY vaaba jete paare .
aami nije kokhono visual poetry likhi na . aami je chesta kori seta holo PHOTOGRAPHIC POTRY . eta more photography than poetry . orthaat kobir chokh die tola photograph , photographerer chokh die tola kobita kokhonoi noe . aamar onek ei dhoroner PHOTOGRAPHIC POEMS paabe http://kathakabita.blogspot.com ebong http://anupammukhopadhyay.blog.co.in ei thikaanaguloe .
Avisek
u have done a wonderful job . splendid I think . metaphysical ... seta Barinda tnaar dristi theke bolechhen . aar surrealism ... FREUD ekbaar bolechhilen surreal text-e mognochoitonyo tini totota khnuje paan na jotota paan saadhaaron kono plain text-e .
khub significant katha .
vebe dekhle surrealism shobdota ekta chaalaki chhaara kichhu noe . Dali-r chaaite Dickens-er moddhe maanuser moner gohonota onek prakritikvaabe fute othe , taai na ?
Avisek ,
tumi kodaacho surreal jaatio kichhu korechhe bole aami mone korchhi na . etaa ekta kheaalkhushi-r chhobi . kichhu biraat koraar chesta nei . aar Rangeet-er tulonaae sei stasis ekhaane aachhe jaa visual kobita-r sobchaaite proyojonio dik .
Rangeet-k aalada kore ekta chokh aankte hoechhe . kaaron o kobir instinct theke jaanto seta proyojon hoe porechhilo .aasole Rangeet-er text onektaai automated . jaa hoechhe taa o korte chaechhe bole mone hoe na . hoe gechhe . bolaa vaalo hoe uthechhe .
tobe best kaaj korechhe Rochishnu . obaak laagchhe Barinda oke nie kichhu bollen na . direct suggestion-e ki setaar kaaron !
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ReplyDeletekabita gulo porlam...ekbar du bar tinbar...deborsir lekhata bes...arup ratan ghoser lekhata amar mathar opor die ure gachhe....kichhu natun sabda darun bhabe pasapasi....tarpor...?ager post er manik sahar kabita bhalo legechilo.....eta ....foske galo....kabita porte ami khub besi matha ghamate naraj,,...(hi hi..oi jinista amar khub ekta nei o..)..onnya lekha gulo gotanu gotik....kichhu ki bole bahudin mone rakhar moto....ki jani...bodh hoi amar bojhar bhul...visual kabita gulo kintu amake tenechhe...ki bhujechhi go..?...ja ni na...kintu ekta tan pachhi ....
ReplyDeleteamar kabita duto kata....(dhus keno je hoi na...)sanjoy
barinda bodh hoi visual kabitar ekta songa dichhen....
ReplyDeletekono kichhur i songa biswas kori na.....jakhan amake kichhu choi ...ami take ekta songa di....gopon ...nijer ghore...ei bhabe amar kachhe eki jiniser onek gulo songa tairy hoye achhe bahudin...ami maje maje pori er hasi....
Visual poetry-er byapare amar dharona khubii kom tai montobyo korata kotota juktijukto hobe ta janina,tobu amar kachhe Anupamdar chhobita ekta sarthok kobita hoye uthechhe,kobitar gondho pachhi chhobita theke,aamar bhana chinta bohudure prosarito korte parchhi,aalo-aaNdhari..amay mugdho kore tulchhe....Rangeet-er chhobita khub priyo amar,or kobitar motoi,...Rochinshuda emnitei amar khub priyo shilpider ekjon,or chhobigulor modye je smartness thake seta eteo uposhthit,tar sathe kichhu ekta achhe ja amader chinta bhanar kkhetrota bistrito kore tole,amader nijoswo hoye othe chhobita...darun...
ReplyDeletekayekdin deri hoye gelo comment dite- asole kichudin asa hay ni---
ReplyDeletejai hok kobita niye bolte gele prothomei 2 joner nam korte chai
1-manik saha
2-astronirjon
ader nam karar akatai karon-- khub i bhalo legeche kobita duto-- "chuye dekhi janmandho boseche backseat e" ba "ultano prithibi hoye acho" -bah-- khub bhalo lekha
ar parei asi dighir lekhay-- bhison sundor- kichu asampurno sabdo je kibhabe bar bar phire aste prorochito kore sei alik khojer kache ta dighir lekhay pelam..
bhaskasjyotir lekhao bhalo--lekhar thekeo concept ta bhison saccho -choaya jay
arupratan r deborshir kobitao besh bhalo-- hayto ai ato bhalo lekhar ak sathe swad paotai blog er paona----
ritwikar kobita porlam--barabori bhalo lekhe--atao byatikrom nay
-- abarer post ta bodhhay aksathe anek bhalo lekha paoar khide ta kichuta holeo mitiye gelo--
amar akta personal jiggasa ache
ReplyDeleteastronirjon er nam sotty ki oita? naki ostronirjon kobir nam tar kobitar akashe?
jodi tai hoye thake tahole bolbo besh- bhari sundor--khanikkhon to akhanei bismaye sunno hoye jete hay
visual kobita prosonge asi-- ai baypare ami sotty akdom NIL-- kicchu jani na- chobi dekhi -- mon bhorai-- nijer mato kore-- amar nijer byaktigato obhimat hayto sabari kache ai mon bhoranor sangya ta sabar mato-- tai sotty visual kobitar kono definite sangya hay kina ami janina---anupam er chobi prosonge barindar comment porlam jekhane uni kichu definite suggestion dicche abong tar poripekkhite anupam er o jabab porlam--amar nijer mone hay asole ai puro visual poetry jinistatei definite bole kono kichu hote pare na- jetuku hote pare kichu loker bhabna ak sathe hoye setar akta definite sangya toiri hote pare-- ar bakita sabtai je dekhche tar chok ar moner synchronisation-- ata amar byaktigato obhimat--
ReplyDeletekabitar evabe vabata jeman darunj temni e samaye dariye kabita kivabe palte jachhe tar choya kabitar kono kono line dhara pare ,tabe sab kabitai teman visual kabita haye utheni.sabder badhane chabir mela jekane pasra sajai sekanei visual vabnar badhan khule jai.aro valo kabita parar apekhate thaklam.
ReplyDeletevisual kobitar moddhe jeta na bollei nay
ReplyDeleteROSichnu r kaj-- asadharon legeche-- amar mone hay otar moddhe sakaler kache shilpir sristir pouche jaoar akta tagid ache-- shilpo bhabna ar tar khodaier moddhe darun melbondhon--
anupam er tao besh sundor-- definite suggestion kichu ache kina seta barindar ba anupamer mato amar kacheo hayto onno kichu-- tabe bhalo legeche--
avishek er kaj ami age dekhechi- ai prosonge anek kathao hoyechilo-- o bolechilo shipli naki choriye diye jabe ar je dekhche take khuje nite hobe bakituku-- ami sedin bolechilam tahole shilpikeo ata mone rakhte hobe monomato re-action nao pete pare tar samosto shilpokarme -- jodi tai hay tahole ami ajo khuje cholechi atar mane-----thik jemon sedin khujchilam--- tobe ak palake dekhle ranger akta bhasa chuye jay-- r metaphysical byapatao anekta baro- anektai-- tai shilpi hayto hayto sotty kichu bunte cheyechen.
R rangeet er kaj--- BUJHINI--sedin o na aj o na-- seta hayto darshok hisebe amar byarthota--
Roschinur aro chobi/visual poetry- jemontai artho hok na keno---- dekhar appekkhay roilam--
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