4th post ei soptaahei kore dilaam . bes kichhu kobita haate ese gechhe . jomie raakhte chaaichhi na . 3rd post nie anek tikto experience holo . kobider bolbo : please nijer kobita nije support korte jaaben na . setaa vaalo dekhaae naa . kobi nijer kobitake ki vaaben , nijeke ki vaaben setaa aadou kono byapaar noe . tnaar paathok-e tnaar aaenaa .
anek sammanito byakti ei blog dekhen niomito . barin ghosal ... malay roychoudhury ... aryanil mukhopadhyay ... kajal sen ... sukumar choudhury . atanu bandyopadhyay ei blog theke kobita nirbaachon kore nijer potrika-e prokaash koraar siddhanto niechhen . taai ... kono dristikotu aachoron kaamyo noe .
eta ekta serious blog . haasithaatta choltei paare . tiktotaa jeno jonmo naa nae .
anupam mukhopadhyay
Piano-- Avishek-- sabeki katakuti ba pilsuj palet ityadi sabdogulo besh sundor bhabe use kora hoyeche kintu over all dekhle kobitar moddhe kono akorshon khuje paini ami-- jeta ami avishek er prothom post e bolechilam kothao mone hocche jor kore hath dhore tene sabdo ke basano hoyeche mone holo
ReplyDeleteEkdin tillotama- rittwika --bhalo-- choto kobitay choto sabde besh bhaloi laglo
NO smoking - sankhya subhro-- prothamo lekhata baro kore dekhle kichu boja jacche na hayto bold font e lekha hoyeche bole - anupam ke bolbo oita aktu thik kore dite-- ar amar to abar chasma-- chalse choke--hehehe-- tabe jetuku para gelo tate sesh line duto mone holo bhaloi lagbe-- anupam thik kore dile abar pore tarpar comment korbo
JULAI wala-- indranil-- jatariti bhalo--"ami tune baralam durrotter" ar" mairi tumi othale na bole bristi sudu porei gelo"-- wah-- besh sundor
Amol o phulwali-- Manik--- khub sundor-- bises kore" koyak aseche jarathruster mato-- bedbhorti bhatiyali phul-- khub i sundor---- tabe morubumi jaygata ki morubhumi hobe? - jori morubumi hay tahole seta ki arthe janar icche roilo
Malgarir dairi-- Rajat-- rajat er malgarrir dairy agei para--bisay ta khub i sundor-- bhalo legeche amar-- kichu kichu jaygay aktu sammano khei haraleo besh bhalo
bhanga hater khela--amitav proharaj-- lekhata besh cholchilo kintu seshe ase kothao mon bhorlo na--- tabe kichu angsho besh sundor
Bisorjon nile na jakhon- debayud-- lekhata porte bhalo laglo-"sasti pete bose achi- sparsho sukhe suddho hobo antoto akbar"-- bah chamatkar-- khub sundor sesh- bhalo legeche
casanova--- Souvik bandhopadhya--Motamuti laglo--
Ramit dey----
sujoneshu,
ReplyDelete4th blog ti ekkothay durdanto hoyeche.
besirbhag kobir lekhai besh porichito.
alada kore na bole bola jay ebarer lekhaguli ekti besh choloman rouddrer moto. kotahy badha peleo ta thik theme na giye borong ar ekti chaya sristi kore, ja ek joner kache ekrokom.
Indranil,amitava, debaudh,sonkho,abhishek... protteker lekha sukh pattho. kono jorota nei sobdo choyone ebong sunirbachito.
bhalo chara ar ki bgolar ache. protiti blog jodi ebhabe egiye jay tobe nihsondehe ekti sirious path paben pathok o kobi ra.
khub beshi bisleshon korar dorkar mone hocche na. 2000er chap protiti lekhay besh sundarbhabei fute utheche.
indra, baby - bhai erpor kintu notun lekha dite hobe. amar rqst. ja porechi tar baireo notun kichur opekkhay thaklam. anupam tomar o lekhar opekkyay achi kintu.....
sobai bhalo thaun. kobitay thakun. durdanto bhabe thakun, upobhog korun, aabiskar korun kabitake notun notun bhabe....
N.B. : ota morubumir bodole MORUBHUMI hobe. trutir jonno dukkhito.
ReplyDeleteDebayudh aar Indranil er lekha bhalo laglo.
ReplyDeleteAnupam, katogulo problem hochchhe pageTite. ei blogTaar design ki tomaar haate thaake? taahole ekTu dekho. 1. I.E-e khulle, tomaar kathaa o comment-er starting point-er modhye khub gap aashchhe. 2. er cheyeo beshi problem hochchhe Chrome-e khulle. lekhaa chobi sab mile mishe ek naaRaaghNaaTaa byaapaar toiree korchhe.
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ReplyDeletebondhuraa ki ei shilpi somporke jaano ? ektu khnoj nite paaro . Avisek-er songe tnaar spirit khub jaae .
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ebaar ektu dekha jaak aamader agrojo kobiraa aamader ei jogot nie ki vaabchhen . aami prothomei Barin Ghosal-k amontron jaanaachhi tnaar motaamot-er jonne . ei motaamot aamader kaaje laagbe . somaantoraal kobita bole kichhu hoe aami mone kori na . kintu ei kobi tnaar somogro jibon diechhen Bangla kobita-k aaro ektu natun kore tolaar jonne . ki vaabchhen tini aamader ei khudro proyaasti somporke ?
ReplyDeleteBarinda , please aasun ...
Thank you, Anupam. Enters the villain : --
ReplyDeleteLok-e balle 'Kaakpokkhi'. Tate Kaak ar anyo pokkhider bojhay. Aj temni Muldhara kobita ar Natun kobita(includes anyo,apar,samantaral, postmodern,all). sabai pakhi dekhte bhalobase, keu keu pakhi hote chay. Tara to ar Kaak hote chay na.Temni aj)dashake keu purono muldhara kobita likhte chaile bhul kore chaibe. Amar bhalo laglo Abhisek natun kobita likheche sab bhabei. Pilsuj palet thekei soundtracke-er gunjan bhesechilo. Safed jhut-er mato safed negative piyanote bajche telepathic lanthan - ooh! bhaba jay na! Anupam, amar kintu Pollock-er kathaa noy, borong Daali'r kathaa mone porechilo. But Abhisek-ke salute kortei habe. Aro chai Abhisek.
Ritwika abcha matra-britte lekhatake muldharay chaliyeche. No comment.
Shankho simily ar metaphor use koray abar muldharay boye geche. Seta kono dosher keno habe -- tabe ami 0 dashake aro natuntoro kichu expect korbo. Barin Ghosal.
Indronil-er Julywala popular Natun kobita. Ekta abdaler galpo bhasche jeno, keu lori shonachhe, ba ador korte korte premlila'r prologue cholche mridu -- nothing clear -- ei rahasyota o besh bhalo jane futiye tulte, misguide korte.
ReplyDeleteManik-ke sahas kore boli -'Jorathruster mato' na bole 'Jorathrusto seje' bolle anekta direct hoto ar muldharar simily mone hoto na. Shese 'jeno' shabdata baad dile kemon hoy ? Otherwise khub bhalo likhecho ei kobitata.
Amitavar kobitay bishal fank thakche ja asole fanki mone hoy. O eto definit kathaa boleche je tar trap theke kobita berochhe na. Kobi jane surjanto kandhe haat rakhbe. Se jane pukurer bhetore ar hanser bhetore badmaashra thake. Athacho sheser prashnota kake korlo? Ke sei kyabla! Pathak-ke songe niye gelona se.
ReplyDeleteDebayudh ekta dilemar modhye ache. Se karo sathe communicate korte chay, cofession korte chay tar paaper. Se age sparshosukh niye shanto hoye firuk. Debayudh thik koruk se muldhara kobita likhbe naki anyo kichu. Muldhara kobitao bhalo hoy. Jehetu ami tate bishwas korina amar tar bhalo mando niye kichu bolar kono right nei mone kori.
barinda , aami je bolechhilaam aami somantoraal kobita bole kichhute bishwas kori na ... taar ortho ei muhurte je kobita sobchaaite sawot kobider kaachh theke aaschhe ... baazar niropekkhovaabe aaschhe ... taake aamar muldhaara bolte ichhe kore .
ReplyDeleteaamar mone hoe aami jodi Swadesh Sen-k somaantoraal vabi , aar kono bazaarer kobike muldhaara ... aami misguided .
aapnader somoy theke dekhle thik aachhe . kintu ei 2009 saale Barin Ghosal-er kobita ki muldhaara noe ?
keu jodi ekhon bish shotoker prothom 6t doshok model kore kobita lekhe ... sei kintu somaantoraal . jodi shobdotaa raakhtei hoe .
se onek pichhie aachhe . se proyojonio noe . taar kobita naa porleo mahabharat ashuddho hobe na .
aar kobir ekmaatro kaaj kintu je kono prabhab theke berie jaaoa . je influenced ... se kobi noe .
ReplyDeletekobi jokhon kobitaae aachhen ... tnaar kono guru nei ... gurujon nei ...
kobitar itihas-k tini nirlojyovaabe byabohaar kore nitei paaren . setaa tnaar keraamoti .
Avisek-k aamar byaktigoto avinondon . or chhotpotaani aamader taakie dekhaa uchit . sampurno nijer moto hoe uthte chaaichhe chheletaa ... sei jonne nijer kobitake bipodgrosto korchhe ...
ReplyDeletesei kobi-e aamar praaner kobi , jini nijer kobitake thele dite thaaken bipoder dike ... ohoroho ...
maake khub bhaqbnay fele dilen barinda. taito ekto bodh hoy magic kora jeto. sombhabona chilo, jayga chilo... kintu use korlam na.
ReplyDeleteasole ami moto sobdotake ektu sahosh niyei bosiye diyechilam, kintu simile holo-r amar lekhati mar kheye gelo. ufff. bhaba jay. ekti shobdo kibhabe ekti kabita ke layjegobore kore dey ta chakkhus korun. dhonnobad Barinda.
amader sinior kobira asun. durdantobhabe asun, amader chinnovinno kore din. amra(ami antoto) aro shikkhito hoi.
comment er jonno dhonnobad. aro comment korun.
maake !!! asole amake hobe. prothomei bhul. karon bhabna annodike chitche.
ReplyDeleteabhishek theke souvik ek duronto safar, klanti elo na , elo na kled, shudhu dube jaoya roye gelo bhabnar alokmalay
ReplyDeleteei muhurte somaantoraal bole kichhu hoe na . 2t dhaara ei muhurte established .
ReplyDelete1. baanijjik dhaara
2. sawt kobitar dhaara
prothom dhaara DESH-e thaakuk . aamra kintu bangla kobita chhere bidesh jaabo na .
arr ei holo Barin magic . ei kathagulo berie elo aamar mukh theke . bolei fellam .
maniker kobitae okkhorbritter ekta aadol aachhe . manik kichhu bolbe etaa nie ?
ReplyDeleteaneker lekhaai bhaalo. saadhaaraN maan bhaalo. tabe ekaTaa sentimentality aachhe. Jeman baa`mlaa kabitaay thaake. amitava-r kabitaa chhaarhaa. taar uchchaaraN balashaalee o baa`nkaa. eba`m kichhuTaa ghanaghaTaar.
ReplyDeleteachchha ei swot kobi byaparta thik ki!sotota shobdo ta besh golmele shobdo......swot kobi, swot kobita...swot kobitwo...hok na alochona!
ReplyDeleteAnupam,
ReplyDeleteTumi kintu shasak hoye uthcho.Tiktota cholbe na- ei caution rekhe nijei niyom bhenge strong comment korcho Desh/banijyik/bidesh- ei sab-er birudhhe kathaa bole.Kobitar jagate amader kono maramari nei.Kobider right ache nijer choice-er tader bodhbudhhi anujayi.Je ja khushi likhuk.Pathok choice kore nik ki porbe, konta bhalo bolbe.Ei sab alochana je khushi reject koruk ba grahan karuk korte dao.Tumi tomar kaj kore jao as facillitator.
Samantaral/parallel bole kichu ami bishwas kori na,kalke bolechilam. Natun kobita ekta natun space toiry koreche jekhan theke muldhara dekha jay na. Muldhara bolte ami oi tomar banijyik dhara bujhi,jodio shabdota thik na. Sekhane kono samantaral nei.Scientifically impossible. Journy90s/2-te tomar gadyotar pechone asambhab boigganik anusondhitsa kaj korchilo. Seta kothay gelo?
Anupam,
ReplyDeleteTumi duto dhara kore felle - swot ar aswot. Eto-ta asahisnu hoyona. Ei swatotar bichar ke korbe? Rain proshnota tuleche. Uttar dao he bicharak,tomar spardhaa diye.Amake tumi protistha dite chao ami chirokal jar biridhita korechi.
Amake baad dao. 0-dashaker kobita niye kathaa hoke. Manik-ke dhanyobad or humbleness-er janyo. Tomar kobitata kenche jayni. Truti janiyechi.Aneke eke truti bolbe na mone rekho.
Aro tanatn karaar janyo bolechi. Sambhabona futiye tolar byabostha rakhte bhulo na.
Aryo, Amitavo'r uchharan banka hote to parei kintu baloshali! Balaa jak medhabi katukutu. Tahole meghe meghe ato hasir bela hochhe ! Oh ! Wonderfull coining. Thanks.
sudhi,
ReplyDeleteAnupam akkhorbritto-r prosongo tene amake ektu bipode fele dilo. tobe upoker o korlo. er age ei likhti niye ebhabe bhabini. dekhlam ,kichuta akkhormritter adol paoya jay.tobe ekti purnango akkhorbritto noy. besh kichu line akkhorbritter hisebe jugmo akkhorbishisto. kintu kichu kshetre 13 ba bejor pongti o paoya jay. etake tai se orthe MUKTOK bolbo kina sondeho ache.
Bangla muktok o prashchatter free verse kichuta ek holeo alada bolei amar moe hoy. free verse e verse tike somosto rokom bondhon theke free kora hoy. tai free verse. kintu muktak e ekti akkhorbritter jugmo akkhor riti bohal thake.
ami dekhlam , sekhetre amar lekhatite akkhorbritter adol ache kintu er cholomanotay kono bondhon ami rakhte chaini.
haler lekha matrei ta mukto, onioshchit perfectness er dike tar journey.
sebhabe bolte gele jehetu goddyo o poddyer modhye je dhonigoto parthokko ta akkhorbritto aswikar kore. tai ei somoyer lekha kichuta akkhorbritter adole lekha hobe tate sondheho nei.
tobe se bishoye sochetonotar khub beshi proyojon nei. kenona kobi tar bhabnake goriye jete deben - kokhonoi take badha deben na. badha dile to sottikarer sei onubhutiti dhakka khabe,jake niye kobitar songsar. eta onekta sei Bodleuer er moto kotha holo. tar mote amra jake niyontron kori, muloto manoshik choloman gulike, ta kokhonoy perfect noy- seti artificial; amra amader hridoybottake tar moto kore -ja prakitik, swabhabjato- cholte dite parle seti ek perfectness e giye pouchobe. ar amader to kobitay artificialitir dorkar nei. amara artificiality ke otikrom kore oisshorik sottotar dike agiye jete chai amader kobitay. ar se lekhai tokhon hoye othe ekti SOT KOBITA.
tai na. apnio bolun...
barinda, amader dujoner post pray eksathe pore galo tai apnar last postti dekhar agei ami likhe fellam.
ReplyDeletekichu mone korben na. ami kintu spordha dekhate chai ni.kokhonoi chai na. amar comment ti sot - asoter dike angul tuche na. ami sudhu amader lekha thik ki korte chay tai bolte cheyechi . ar jehetu ami amar kache 100% sot na holeo 90% sot to abossoi. tai amar kotha ami bole dilam.
truti marjona korben.
apni, aryonil ebong aro jara amader agrojo achen tader prochur comment o suchintito siddhanto janabar jonno aste janacchi.
asun, amara posttike durdharso ekti space e porinoto kori...
swat kobi . barinda , ekhaane aamar jetuku bolar chhilo taa ... ki bolbo ... ami Sherlock Holmes ba oi jaatio kono magic to korte chaaini . kobitar jogote to forensik bibhaager kono proyojoniotaa ne . aami vebechhilam ekta sorbojonoswikrito katha bolchhi . bitorko hobe vaabini .
ReplyDeletekathata bolaar eta jaega chhilo na . setaa menei nichhi . aamar obosthaan theke sore giechhilaam . aamar nijer katha hoeto ekhaane naa bole onyotro bolaa jete paarto . kintu bole jokhon felechhi ...
sawt kobi tini jini nijer hoe kobita likhchhen . kono bises potrika baa bises kono motobaad-k protistha dite baa taar proti bitoshroddho hoe ba bises srenir paathok-k khushi korte tripti dite likhchhen na . aabar manuser proti tini sosroddho . lok-k tini pok vaaben na .
ekhaane kono maapkaathi to nei . aami jaake sawt kobi bolbo RAIN taake bolbe na . amar kaachhe Barin Ghosal , Pabitra Mukhopadhyay-er kachhe hoeto onyo keu .
godaa banglae bolchhi ...
JE LOK KOBITA CHHAPAANO BAA TAAKAPOESAA BA SAAMAJIK PROTISTHAR LOBH THEKE NIJER KONTHOSWOR-E ONYER UCHCHAARON AANEN , MRITYU DEN NIJER VOICE-K , TINI SAWT KOBI NON . AAMAR KAACHHE ETUKUI . JE KOBI AANONDO O BISSOY-ER BODOLE jonopriyotaar CHORCHAA KOREN TINI ASAWT . AAMAR KAACHHE khub sohojvaabe ETUKUI . khaarap lekha / vaalo lekhaa , natun lekha / purono lekha ekhaane count kore naa . aami tnaar somaalochonaa korte chai na . tnaar proti osohisnutaa gopon koraar moto songjom aamar nei . hoeto aaro boyos hole setaa asbe .
aami vaabte paari na ekta kaagoj , jaa konokaale kobitar noe , taai hoe uthechhe oneker kaachhe kobita prokaasher sorbochcho lokkho . sekhaane lekhaa chhapaate paarle pongutomo kobio jaate uthe jaachhe . kobita je kono jaaegaatei chhapa jete paare . kaagojtite aamar kobitao chhaapa hoechhe . setaa noe . kintu amar proshno chhilo kobir nijer projonmo ebong nijer konthosworer proti . setaa to sototar-e proshono taai na ? keno ekjon kobi taar lekhaake sei rup debe jaa ekti bise kaagoj pochhondo kore ?
aar bichar kintu hoe gechhe barinda . ekjon tarun kobi ekhon je chokhe aapnar dike taakae , sei chokh dekhun . bichar sekhaane aachhe . taar nijer bichaar , taar nijer proti koraa bichaar . aapnar saapekkhe . aapni to aapnar sompotti non ... aapni aamader sompotti . .. aapnaar bichaar korbo aamra ... aapnar bhaabikaal . proyojone aapnake protisthaa debo . aapnar kichhu koraar nei sekhaane .
eklavya-r tirondji shikkhaa aatkaate perechhilen Dronacharya ? aapnar murti jodi kono tarun baaanae ... ki vaabe aatkaben apni ?
Anupam, valo bolecho. ami ekmot je nijer voice-ta maintain kora, nijer moto bola, onnyokichur toakka na korey - eta khub joruri. etai ekmatro joruri jinish bolleo vuul hoyna. shokiyota na thakle tow shob desh-i America hoye jabe, ar shob vashai Ingreji !
ReplyDeletepost ta vaalo egiyeche..:)
kabitaar aalochanaar jaigaa kholaa haoaa darakaar. paaThak ke paachaner nijasbataa deoaa prayojan. maajhe maajhei aalochanaa didactic haye uThachhe. arthaa`t, ekaTaa bisheshh paaTha domineering haye uThachhe. saahitya aalochanaar kono code hay naa. academia sei code aaropan kare. academics jaanabonaa, naa jenei academic jagatake urhiye debo, aabaar nijeraai academic dRishhTibhangee abalamban kare didactic baa upadeshaneeya haye uThabo - eTaa Thik nay.
ReplyDeleteaaro ekaTaa kathaa. agrajaraa bujhiye deben tabe kabitaa garhe uThabe, e atyanta durbal kathaa. natun kabi raa nijeder mata likhaben. kono agraja ke khushee karate likhaben naa. agrajader paaThake toyaakkaa naa karei likhaben. tabei se natun kabi. hyaa`n, agrajaraa abashyai balate paaren Je natun kichhu hachchhenaa. takhan seriously nite habe. natuba nay.
Atyanilda , good point . sei natun-k chinhito kortei daaka hoechhe barinda-k . tini chine niechhen avisek-k . aamar nijer shrom ekhaanei saarthok mone hochhe .
ReplyDeleteebaar ei nie katha hote paare . dekhaa jak .
avisek je kobita likhlo , taaki natun kobita ? prothom ponktitei anupraas rekhechhe ... biseshoner byabohaar ... clichemukto ... kintu prochur ...
Naa, aami kintu kaaro kabitaake chhoTo baa barha karachhi naa. Barinda baa anya kaaro bisheshh ekaTi kabitaake bhaalo laagaa baa baaasaake samaalochanaa karachhi naa. Avishhek er kabitaake baatila-o karachhi naa. temani Amitava-r kabitaakeo akaaraN tollaai dichhi naa. aamaar ekaTaai baktabya - kabitaa aalochanaar kono darajaa nei. phale keu Jaake darajaa bhebe bandha karate Jaaben taar haate aloukik byaathaa laagabe.
ReplyDeleteManik,
ReplyDeleteTomar spordhar kathaa to bolini, bhalo kore dekho, ota Anupamke Rain-er jabab dite uskano. ami barong tomar humbleness-er kathaa bolechi. Seta to bhaloi. Ami kintu axarbritter kathaao tulini.Bangla shobde, axare, uchharone ekta roundness ronito hoy ja shato chesta koreo erano jayna. Shudhu lekhar samoy sachetan bhabe britto eriye jete hoy. Nuance-er rythm erabe ki kore? Tomar kobitati amar serakam mone hoyeche, tai kono dosher kathaa tulini. Tumi to ar swabhab kobi nao je ja mone elo setai bose gelo kagoje.Ejanyoi sachetan thaka darkar, noyto perfection-e pouchobe ki kore? Jodio illussive perfection is unatainable. Se janyo tomar arty touch darkar to habei.
Anupam,
ReplyDeleteTomar kathaa anujayi kobira jonmei phantom habe, tader unsocial haowatai honorous, kichu shikhte hoyna, kichu porte hoyna, kauke follow korte hoyna. Amar jana different. Chotobela theke academy'r shixar modhye baro hoye academyke tyag karaa shikhechi, kauke na kauke guru ggane follow kore duniyadari shikhechi, kono kobike follow kore kobita lekha shikhe tarpor probhabmukti'r kathaa bhebechi. Eto sundar prithibita amake probhabito korar janyo mukhiye chilo, take ami ki bhabe eratam ! Tomra 0 dashoke day-1 thekei swadhinota shikhecho, Guruhin tomader shixar joy hoke.
barinda , GURU shobdotaate boddo ukun ebong moelaa jaamakaaporer gondho chaare . aamar kaachhe priyo shobdo PURBOPOTHIK . aami je pothe hnaatbo sei pothe jeno kaaro hnaatar daag osposto hoe aachhe . ami nijei hnaatchhi ... tnar kichhu kichhu aabchha podochinho chokhe porchhe ... boro mayamoy ei hnete cholaa . rabindranather aage jemon biharilal ... hnatata kintu nijer hoaa chaai . aar poth to kaaro nijer noe ! poth je baanae poth takei sobar aage maalikaana dite aswikaar kore .
ReplyDelete"sawt kobi tini jini nijer hoe kobita likhchhen . kono bises potrika baa bises kono motobaad-k protistha dite baa taar proti bitoshroddho hoe ba bises srenir paathok-k khushi korte tripti dite likhchhen na ."
ReplyDeleteghatalshree-r boktobyer ei ongshotukur sathe ami prochondobhabe ekmot.
Rainbow/or Rain,
ReplyDeleteEkathaataa shononi ki -- 'Borong Dwimat Hao'! Ta nahole bitarko jombe ki kore? Sobai Ghatashree-er songe readily ekmat hole kintu amra ei post-er kobitagulo niviye shuye porbo.
Ontoto orthonoitik (?) byaparta bad dileo samajik protistha paoar lobhe jodi keu nijer swotosfurto konthoswor ke mere fele tate onyer konthoswor sthapon koren, tini i osot kobi. Abyapare ami Anupam er somge akmot.
ReplyDeleteTobe, "somokalin" shobdota r lobh erano khub kothin. Jonopriyota r durbolota bodh hoy sokolei poshon kori. Ar sei somokal (bikolpe jonota: may be kono community etc) er chahida onujayi obochetonei amra bodh hoy onek somoy abegborjito shudhu mostiskochalito jantrik kobite porinoto hoi.
Ritwikar EKDIN TILOTTOMA pore after 2000 er kono essence pelam na. Mone holo Kabita Singha-r kom boyeser kono kabita jeno.
ReplyDeleteDhonyobaad apnar motamot er jonyo.
ReplyDeleteEtai hoyo ami aimatro bollam..somokalin na hote parar jontrona..somokal shobdota amader kibhabe tarona kore. "Somokal"..shobdota niye jodi aro bistarito alochona hoy to khub bhalo hoy..
dekho Rittwika , aabeg byapaarta kintu mostisko thekei aase . jaar aabeg aachhe , ekmaatro sei kobita lekhe . nahole se likhbe keno ? kobi kintu konovaabei ekjon tothaakthito samajik ebong sokoler chokhe swaabhabik praani noe . hoaata kaankhito-o noe hoeto . kobir moddhe chhitefnotaa holeo magic thaaka vaalo . etaa aamar mot . tumi naa-o maante paaro bhaai .
ReplyDeleteaabeg thekei prithibir je kono kobita lekha hoe . kintu kobi jokhon nijer ekta vaasa khnuje paan ... ektaa sompurno natun vasa ... tokhon sei vsaa kichhu paathoker kaachhe grohojogyo hoe na . kaaron taara sei vasa-e aabegprokaash hote paare bole vaabtei paare na . taara procholito vaasa-tei obhyosto hoe porechhe tokhon . sekhaanei aaram paachhe . sei aaram chhere natun kore porishrom korte chaaichhe na .
mostiskochaalito kono kobi nei kothao Rittwika . tumi kono 80 bochhor boyosi paathok , jini hoeto Mahabharat ( kashiram ) chaara kono sahityo ba kobita kokhono poren ni ... taar kaachhe tomaar kobita dekhao ... tini kichhu dhorte paarben na . othochho tumi tumulvaabe aabegchaalito ek kobi . tomaar aabeg kojon dhorte paarchhen tumi jaachai korechho ?
Jibananada dash-k ki bolbe bolo ? tnaar somokaale kojon bujhte chaechhe tnaake ?
somokaal-e je kobi tnaar vaasa-k jonopriyo kore tolen , somokaaler por mahakaal tnaake muchhe dae . aar somokaal jodi kono kobir sob uchcharon bujhe fele ... tini bhai paathoker obhyas-k poribeson korchhen . sawt asawt-er proshno ekhaane uthchhe na . jodi tini naa jene etaa koren .
Tomar motamoter jonyo dhonyobaad. [:)]
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ReplyDelete'abegborjito shudhu mostiskochalito jantrik kobita' byaparta ki ami bujhina...mostishko chhara ki kobita lekha jae?...mostishker mrityu hole ki shudhu hridoy diye kobita lekha sombhob?...abar abeghin bhabe ki kobita keu likhechhe kokhono?...kono sristii ki abeghin hote pare?...protiti kobi jokhon kobita likhchhen tokhon tate abeg to thakchhei kintu abeg-er sathe uttejonake guliye fela thik noe...jodio oneker kachhe uttejonatai abeg othoba hridoy...abeger kobita mane jodi hoy obhyas-er kobita tobe ta borjon korai sreyo...ekjon swot kobi kaaj holo shudhu swot pathoker kachhe taar lekha pouchhe deoa,taNra jotoi nogonyo hon...kobitar pathoker kachhe jabar proyojon nei,pathokii kobitar kachhe asben...
ReplyDeleteektu byaktigoto prosongo...amar lekha Barinda,Aryanilda porechhen,motamot diyechhen,onader osonkhyo dhonyobad,onader motamot amay bhobisyot-e bhalo lekhar byapare prerona debe...asole amar manosik obosthyata bhashae prokash kora sombhob noe...eta amar jiboner sobcheye boro prapti...
ReplyDeleteAmi amar kothaata withdraw kore nichhi. Amio abeg bolte uttejonake bojhaini. Porishilito moner akta bishesh uttirno houakei bujhiyechi.
ReplyDeleteSomokalinotar proshno o bodh hoy tokhoni ase jokhon sei mostiskoprosuto lekhake onudhabon korar jonyo upojukto pathok paoa jay. Jnara protisthito kobi, tnader kache ei porikhhay sosommane uttirno hoya byapar ta hoyto apato bhabe kichuta duruho kaj, abar somomonosko pathoker kache sohojei uttirno houa jay.
Asole sahiyte absolute bole kichu nei.
Rittwika / Anupam,
ReplyDeleteCurrent topic-e ami Anupam ar bishes kore Abhisek-ke tar clear understanding-er janyo sadhubad dichhi. Dekhcho to, kichu bhabcho kintu angul anyo kathaa type kore felche, tarpor withdraw ba explanation-er darkar hochhe. Godye ei, kobitay na jani kato gap anubhuti ar prokasher modhye.Jakhan kichu bhabo, balo, lekho, saber-i abeg ache. Seti abeg tarito na hote hole sachetan hoye likhte habe. Abochetan-er kaal chole geche. Swatasfurto lekhai to likhbe. 100 jan ek-i bishoye swatasfurto holeo 100 rakam kobita hoy na ki? Mostisko-e abeger source, Sachetan hoye take beg-e porinato karao mostisker kaaj. Matha ghumole Hridoyer blood pumping chara kon kaj? Tomra hridoy diye kobita lekho naki? Shit! Ei bastaa pachaa clitshe kathaa bhebe samoy nasto korona. Abhisek, darun hochhe. Chaliye jao. Baby join korche na keno? Baby mane Amitavo ar ki.
Shradhheo Barinda abong agrojoprotim kobira (irrespective of age)
ReplyDeleteAmi mostisko-hridoy ai dhoroner bitorkito ba cliche hoye jaoa prosongo niye alochona korteo chaini. Amar boktobyo chilo "somokalinota" shobdota niye jodi bistarito alochona kora jay, seta amar moto opekhhakrito notunra hoyto onudhabon korte pari.
Basic je structure ta toiri hoy, tar upor to amra prochur modify kori lekhatake, mane je nirman ta dorkar hoy, sekhetre ki abstract expressionalism kei amra somokalinota r akhya debo?
ekta byaktigoto information deoaar lobh saamlaate paarlam na . ei prosonge aamar ekti godyo prokaashito hoechhilo goto BRISHTYDIN potrika-e . sekhaane ei kathaguloi aami bolechhilam , jaa ekhaane aabar bollam .
ReplyDeleteabstract expressinism somokaalin keno hobe . ota 50 bochhor aager concept . aami Aviseker kabita-r prosonge otaar katha bolechhilam . aar otaa kono literary history thekeo byabohaar korini . Jackson Pollock kobi chhilen na , painter chhilen .
Rittwika tomaar kobita pore jodi aamr Da Vinci-k mone pore , tumi ki tnaar somoyer hoe jaabe naaki ! aamr to kaar-o kobita pore Charles Chaplin-keo mone porte paare !
abstract kichhu hoe bole aamar mone hoe na . jototuku prakash pelo ... taa murto ... taa abstract hobe ki kore ? bakhya naa kora gelei kichhu abstract hoe jaae naaki !
taahole to vaalobaasa , jonmo , mrityu ... esob-o abstract bhai . abstract ekta shobdo . taake seriously neoaar kichhu nei . keu keu ektu chaalaki korte paaren shobdotaake nie .
abstract expressinism ekjon paagla painter-er nijer unmaadona-k saanajik kore tolaar naam chhilo . Aviseker moddhe sei sristisukher unmaadona aamar chokhe porechhe . that's all .
Rittwika
ReplyDeleteaapanaake chini naa. tabu aapanaar concern sambandhe udaaseen thaakate paaralaam naa. e niye Jaate bhul bojhaabujhi kame taai sa`mxepe ekaTu balachhi. aagaamee bachhar John Ashbery-r kabitaar opor aamaar ekaTaa bai beronor kathaa aachhe. sekhaane bishadabhaabe bojhaano aachhe.
aamaader praay goTaa kabitaatattbaTaai imported. baaire theke aase. aanaa hay. aadhunik/adhunaantik sab taai. saamaanya kichhu baad diye. ABSTRACT EXPRESSIONISM o taai. eTaake niye maataamaati naa karaai bodhhay bhaalo. baa, eTaake niye durbhaabanaa naa karaai bhaalo. jene raakhalei JatheshhTa.
New York shaharer ekadal chitrakar Juddher (WWII) pare ei dharaNer chhabi aa`nkaten. Non-representational chhabi. arthaa`t chhabi dekhe bojhaa Jaay naa ki bastu. prachalita samasta chhaa`nd sambandhe ekaTaa bitRishhNaa maanushher mane aasate thaake sei samaye. taar thekei ei manobRitti. ei shilpabRitti. American architecture-eo eTaa takhan dharaa parhe. Europe-e Jeman Existentialism baa astitbabaader prakop esechhilo. Anupam Pollock er kathaa likhechhe. taar opore film hayechhe. kintu Pollock ekamaatra shilpee baa oi aandolaner sabacheye barha shilpee nan. De Kooning, Motherwell, Rothko - eraa sakalei Pollock er mata ki taar cheyeo gurutbapUrNa shilpee. eder cheye 10 bachharer chhoTo ekadal kabi [Jaader New York School balaa hay] 1950-60 er samaye kabitaa likhate shuru karen Je kabitaay ei rakam ekaTaa "non-representational" byaapaar aachhe. phale esab 60 bachharer purano jinishh. aamaraa esab niye ekhan 21:0 te maataamaati karale bujhate habe Je aamaraa backdated. Thik Jerakam backdated "postmodern" baa`mlaa kabitaa.
Jamini Roy-er chhabio "non-representational". onaar chhabir mukhagulor madhye kono anubhUti nei. putuler mukher mata. taader praay kono action nei. taader shaareerabhaashhaa praay-mRita. kena eman aa`nakaten? egulo niye aamaader bhaabaa uchi`t aage. Bishhnu Dey-r ekaTaa goTaa bai aachhe Jamini Roy er chhabi niye. aage segulo bojhaar cheshhTaa karaa Jaak naa! kaajei aamaader haater kaachhei hayato anek kichhu "adharaa" aachhe Jaa diye aamaraa aamaader nijeder kaajer byaakhyaa karate paari. bidesh Jaabaar prayojan nei.
Abstract Expressionism abashya bhaalo jinis. John Ashbery, Barbara Guest, Kathleen Fraser, James Schyuler, Frank O'Hara ityaadider pratham diker kabitaay eTaa spashhtabhaabe dekhaa Jaay. ei sab kabitaar kichhu net-e aachhe. kintu khub carefully gabeshhaNaa karaa darakaar. New York School erapar anek badale gechhe. 2nd gen, 3rd gen er par ekhan 4th generation New York School Poetry bale ekaTaa concept shuru hayechhe. majaar kathaa halo 4th generation New York School er anek kabi-i immigrant. samprati ekaTi prabandhe beriyechhe America-y eder niye. sekhaane nijer naam dekhe hesei phelalaam. aamaar baa`mlaa kabitaar sbakRita English anusRijaN baa transcreation kena "New York School" 4th gen seTaa ekhano dho`nyaashaa aamaar kaachhe.
e niye aaro prashna thaakale uttar debaar cheshhTaa karabo.
Aryanilda
ReplyDeleteJamini Roy prosonge ekta tothyo uthe esechhe . onekei jaanen . onekei janen na . onaar songe BASANTA KUMAR JANA-r somporko nie kichhu jaana aachhe aapnar ?
Jamini suru korlen western art-er ghorana-e . sekhaan theke oi osomaantoraal bharotio bhongite tini pouchholen ki kore bolun to !
Basanta Jana naamok ekjon graamyo silpir theke churi kore . oi chokh ... mukh theke berie gie ki jeno bolte chae ... abar mukh thaake vaableshin , putuler moto ... otaa Basanta-r style ... aar Jamini Roy taake banie fellen tnaar signature ! gorib silpir chhobigulo joler dore kine nie . seta copy kore baaire paathie ... laakh laakh taakar byabsa ekta . aar Basanta tnaake vaabte nijer baaba-r moto . kichhu vaabtei paaren ni sorol lokti .
Amritalok ( ed. Samiran Majumdar ) etaa nie exclusive kaaj korechhe . aapnake seta dekhaate lobh hochhe .
aar Pollock cinema-ta thik aachhe , Jackson Pollock-er chhobi aamake prothom dekhaan Amitava Moitra . 2003 saale . pore aami net search kore onaar somporke tothyo songroho kori . aasole aami nijer lekhaar songe onaar chhobir mil paechhilam . 5 bochhor aage . jemon ekhon aamar mone hochhe Avisek-er songe aamar kichhu aatmik saadrishyo roechhe .
etaa tothyer proshno noe dada . eta ...
Basanta Kumar Jana? jaanataam naa ekebaarei. tumi ki prabandhaTaa aamaar janya ek copy rekhe debe. saamaner bachhar deshe gele niye nebo.
ReplyDeleteaamaader aneker lekhaar madhyei Pollock der property aachhe. aakaar ke churamaar karaa - Jaake bikaar bale. tomaar to aachhe baTei. JeTaa darakaar seTaa halo nijasba ekaTi tattba. pUrber tattba. paashchaatyer nay. ei chot karaa polemics aar sajhya haya naa.
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ReplyDeleteamra jara chotora anke kichu jani na tara anek kichu jante parchi
khub bhalo hocche post gulo
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ReplyDeleteAnupam,
ReplyDeleteNet ar Bishwayan duniyata expanssive kore tuleche. Ekhan shudhu pui chachhori noy, majhe majhe pizza ba pasta, burger kheye dekhte hoy boiki.Basanta R. Jana'r kathaa ami protham jante pari Bishnupur heritage museum-e giye, tarpor khod Beliator-e giye. Chih! Churi bolte nei. Ballo Borrowing. Anek civilised shonabe kathaataa. But it is a fact je Aryanil has greater exposure to things now under discussion by virtue of his existing being. Baki sabai to nothingness-e bhugechilo baire theke. Expressionism ar abstraction niye ami eto likhechi je ar o saber modhye dhukbona.
Rittwika-ke janai : SMAKALINOTA holo samosamoyer songe bayasko(aged) hoye otha, jakhan tomar boyeser songe songe tomar samoykeo bayosi hoye uthte dekhte pabe. Tumi chelebelay theme thakbena ba samoyke theme thakar ilussion-e bhul dekhbena. Samosamoye kobitar sadharan bhasa, janopriyata ba khyatir dour, sangbadmulak kobitar charchaa -- ei sab holo samokalinota. Kintu tumi jodi sei kobitata likhte chao jetar bishoy natun holeo composition technic 100 bachar ba 50 bachar purono tahole tumi ar samokalin-o thkchona. Kobi chaibe samokal theke egiye thakte. Naturally se anek egiye bhabbe abiskar korbe prokash korbe sei bhasay ba bhabe ja hoyto samokal accept korbena. Kintu kobi pagla, se will run the risk of oblivion for the time being readily. Ami tomake aro confuse kore dilam na to?
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ReplyDeletejetaa ekmaatro bolaar ... ei muhurte pascimbonge konta bhaarotio upaadan kontaa paschatyo upaadan , seta ekjon probondhokaarer kaachhe gurutbopurno , kintu ekjon kobi-r setaa na vableo chole jaabe . kobi to intellectual non ! jaa ichhe korte paaren . bolte paaren . kaaro kichhu bolaar nei tnaake .
ReplyDeletekhub bhalo alochona cholche...
ReplyDeleteami bhabchi anno kotha- ebhabe dekhte dekhte, bujhte bujhte... tarpor kobita likhte bosle adou ki kobita berobe! ami ekti pongti likhe bhabte boslam... eki eta to kemon jeno abstract hoye gelo. kete dilam. abar likhlam annyo bhabe... kemon jeno express kora hoye gelo naki... ittadi. erpor o to aro onek kichu ache....
sutorang ami bhebe nilam amar dwara ar (natun) kabita lekha hobe na.
kabita lekhata kobir kaj. ar ta theke notun kichu -ism ba oi rokom kichu ba kichiur chap ber kora annoder kaj.
aro ekti kotha ghurpaNk khacchilo -- abeg na buddhi, konti kobita lekhar jonno dorkar, ba ke kobitake ekti porinotir dike niye jay. ami kintu mone kori bodh ba abeg noy, borong amra kono ek undefined force er dwara kromagoto dhakka khete thaki ja amader likhte badhdo kore. ek por ase buddhi... kintu buddhi kabitake invite korte pare na. sutorang mostisko ba hridoyer kutkochali amader (kobider) khub beshi aloconar bostu na hoyai banchonio. alochona jodi kortei hoy tobe kobi hoye noy, korte hobe alochok ba probondhik hoye.
sutorang alochoker kaj alochok koruk, amra segulo pore ideake porisilito korte pari, kintu lekhar somoy ogulo mathay na rekhe sei oparthibo force amader ja korte baddho kore tar bosh hoye jai ebong jodi edit korte hoy tokhon na hoy buddhike ektukhani pashe bosano jabe...
ki bolen apnara
ekhane akta bes mojar byaper lokhho kora jachhe...kobi=kobita nie alochona jara korchen tara prottekei nijera lekhen....nirvejal pathoker dristikon koi?....asole etai hochhe...amrai thik kore felchi....konta "swot" konta "oswot"....konta "bikri hoe gyache" ...."ke nijer jonnei lekhe..ar ke .onner jonne"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletebes mojato!!
amar chinta onujai..osob sot -osot bujhina....jeta lekhar likhbo.....lokke dekahbo...bhalo lagle bhalo...na lagleo khhotinei....ar oi "BAZARI" lekha bole jader amra sreni chinnhito korte chai etao bes golmele..eta hochheo onekdin dhorei....kyano baba?...keu jodi kobte likhe dupoisa kamaye kamak na.....khhoti ki!!....kamie dyakhaona bapu!!!ar DESH potrikaye onek lekhai beroye ja keu porena...moneo rakhena....tai kobita likhe "PROTHISTA" paoa otto sosta noy...tai ke kothaye likhbe....osobbhebe luv nei..obhabe chinnhito korar ami birodhi
****amar lekha kobita jodi keu kalobazare line die kine pore...amar bejay anondo hobe....:)
bhai indra , tomaar comment kintu bujhie dilo tumi ekjon sawt kobi . nijer aanonde lekho . sei lekhaa kotota natun setaa vinno proshno . aar etaai bolte chaaoa hoechhilo . tumi birodhita korte gie support kore bosle . kobita bikri hole sokoler vaalo laagbe . kintu sudhu bolte chaaoa hochhilo kobitake sei jonne procholito aadole toiri kore naa neoaar katha . paathok jaa chaaibe setaai naa deoaar katha .
ReplyDeleteekta natun jinis bikri koruk na kobi ! keno loker uchhisto-k natun packet-e bhore bajare chharbe bhai !
ekjon nijer aanonde likhbe . furie gelo . kintu sekhaane jodi baajarer annondotuki toiri hoe ? taar chaite mudidokaan khulte asubidha kothae ? setaa to aar-o laavjonok ! aar-o niraapod !
tomaar kobita kaalobazar-e bikochhe ei khobor pele tomaar bejay aanondo hobe . kintu nije ekta kalobazar toiri korte chaaibe ki ? kobita-r kalobazari kore dekhate chaibe aamader ?
manik khub sundor bolechhe . kobi aar praabondhik ... ei 2t identity warer-tight kokkhe baas kore . taader songlaap cholte paare . tobe sekhaane kono bilaap baanchhonio noe . kobi-r intellectual hote nei . borong prolaap cholte paare .
kobi-k khub seriously neoaar to kichhu nei ! se jaadukor . se maayabi . se osohay . se taar mrityu haate nie ghure beraae .
Anupam, last line jeta bolle..amar onek purono akti lekhay ami etai tule dhorte cheyechilam.."Galaxy r jonyo onubhob" [Ektu dhak petano hoye gelo, kintu bolteo ichhe holo).
ReplyDeleteThanks, onek kichu jante parchi..