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bapan- shuvro--khub bhalo legeche anekdin pore kono kobita--sudu 4 no parar je 4 te line seta puro kobitate kothao aktu khey harano mone holo--ata chere dile bhison bhalo
kathamanobi- nishigandhha--- choto abong sundor--- sabcheye bhalo laglo" aj katha diye kine nao prithibir jabotiyo sukh"-- besh sundor lekha
asotthir saregamay bikeler thikanabadol-- kobitata bhalo laglo kintu abar kichu katha bolar icche holo-- abossoi baro byaktigato tobu- ager postei manik dar sathe ai bypare besh akta baro saro gappo hoyechilo[:P]-- namkaron ta kothao jeno theklo tabe atao thik namkaron hayto sei surutuki kobitar ja sudu dohat khule dey anubhutir oronne----R puro kobitata sesh korle keno jeno mone holo hathat sesh hoye gelo--- tachara bhalo
hijibiji-- soumitro-- kobitata ki puro post hoyeche??-- na ki jhinuke ki bolei sesh ata anupam er kache jiggasso--
satobhasan bhason-- Rangeet er mato kobita hayni --- kothao kichu sabdo mone hoyeche ane jhure deoa hoyeche-- amar byaktigato obhimat experimental kobita manei je sudu sabochok melabar mato sabdo chayon kore bosiye deoa ta bodhhay nay-- ata sampurno kintu byaktigato obhimat-- amra akhane kobita niye alochona korte asechi tai hayto atota sabolil bhabe bole gelam-- sejo mamam ta mone hay mama hobe--r uth bos ta ki oth bos hobe?--
utsargo- avisekh-- besh bhalo legeche-- ager lekhar theke anek bhalo legeche aita-- aro porbo airakom-- sudu akta jayga--" ami FM paroya kori na tobu rastaghate pore ache holud golaper deoal"-- ami kobir anubhuti ta ai line e bujhte chai---
Asthiratar tukitaki-- OIshik ----- durdanto--- bhison bhalo legeche--- khub sundor--- ami porechi dubar -- na na aito aro akbar--[:P]-- aro akbar porar icche roilo
khabor-amitav nag-- puro jinista besh gochano -porteo besh bhalo lage-- kintu puro lekhatate je punctuation nei seta ki kobir nijjosso style na rakha hayni?----R "ebong purush o narir khadder obhab hayna abhabe majhe majhe truck theke matir talar samrajjo gore uthle alimuddine se khabor jayna"--- ai jaygata kemon khapchara laglo --mane je tane porchilam seta oi tuku jaygay kothao alga mone holo
protnomanoshik-- indranil-- ore baba re baro choto sotty- ar amar abar chalse-heheee-- lekar proti boli-- kara jeno phisphis kare, jodi bristi pore abong aral chaya anoboddo-bhison sundor hoyeche puro lekhata--- experimental+gobhir oronno theke tule ana ak chilte anubhuti---- hayto sotty aibari "nischup ghumiye pori hajar bachorer ghum"----
ANUPAM ke---- aj dekhlam blog e oporer dike natun chobi aseche title er maje--bangla poet after 2000 er okhane-- amar mone hoy okhane aro experimental chobi protassito
rangeet er lekha niye avishekh er matamot prosonge------sunnosatoker sampurno sapokkhe ami-- avi jeta boleche "kobita asole bojar nay anubhaver jinis" tar sathe sampurno akmat- kintu muskhil holo ai anubhav er jaygata baro relative-- ata mkobir kache jemon tar baro akanto byaktigato temni ak akjon pathoker kacheo ak ak rakom anubhutir jayga--jakhoni amra kono kobita prokash korlam amadre nijjosso khancha chere takhoni kintu amader inner self e ai jinista amader protekker moddhei play korbe je pathok seta poruk- pachonodo ba apachondo parer katha kintu seta poruk abong mullayan koruk. amar mone hay experimental jeta avishek boleche seta bhalo kintu sotty ki atirikto experiment e kobitar baire sudu matro nijjosso ami tuku pore thake na kobi nije?- tahole to kobita likhe kono kobir-i anubhav sotty ki amon haoa uchit je anubhaver moddhe diye kobi sudu nijei benche thakbe tar pathok tar aswad nite byartho hobe? tahole to bolte hay amader ai satoker kono kobi kono lekhok i tar nijer lekhar sothik mullayon sunte paben na karon pathok jodi anubhav na kortei pare tahole mullayan ta hypocricy hoye jay. anubhav jodi akantoi nijo osttite aboddho hoye jay tahole kobitar prokasher mullayan ki?--indranil er lekhao asombhov experimental kintu lekhar dhanche ba sabdo monjori te je anubhuti paoa jay sotty ki rangeet er ai lekhatite sei tan paoa jay?- ata sampurno byaktigato mullayon amar --agei bolechi anubhuti baro beshi relative ar amar mone hay experimental bhalo kintu ai lekhatate mone hoyeche kichu sabdo sudu jure deoar khela-- punoscho:- Avishek boleche amader lekhagulor moddhe diye onno satoker chapgulo kromosho dure thele dite hobe abong rangeet ai byapare agiye-- prothomato amar mone hay ai agiye ba pichiye ta bhison appekkhik atar definition hay na hote pare na ar ditiyoto ami nije ai sunno satoker hoye bolchi amra keu i chaileo kono sotokeri lekhar chap muche dite pari na -- protiiti satoker lekhar satrontto ostitto ache-- seta sambhov nay kono ak satok asei muche di--amader aitai kara uchit ager satoker proti o sampurno shradda rekhei ai satake natun kichu kore dekhabar.
akkhuni logout hobo tai tarahuro te kiichu bhulbhal likhte pari tai dukkhito--;hehehe-- kal ase abar dekhbo ke ke komore bendhe agiye aseche-- suvoratri-- ramit
aar manik je bolechhe 0-er bhaabdhara . se bishoe boli ... poets after 2000 does mean poetry after 2000 . ekhaane kintu kobider nie katha hachhe , kobitata tnaader bechhe nite deoaa hachhe nijeder naamer niche . taai na ?
bes guru toro alochona...tobe e alochona-bitorko purono...amar ei coment er oporei ..karo lekha nie coment jekota porechi seggulo nie korechi..abar jokhun porbo korbo.
ekta proshono...kobota ki?....er ki kono nirdisto songa ache?...janina.
amar mone hoye sobar age je lekhe take bhabte hobe se kobita likhte parbe kina....tar kobita ase kina....kobita paye kina...khhide paoa-ghum pawoar motoi.
bektigoto bhabe ami kobitar " adhunik" ba "uttor-adhunik" namkorone biswas nei...amar kache borojor hote pare " adhunik-kaler kobita"
oneki bhebe thaken chondo hin sobdyobinnyaser madhyome mononer bhasar prokas bujhi adhunik kobita. kintu ami kichu latin kobita ja kina rochito 18th sotoke.....sorbangin "adhunik "kobita dekhie dite pari.
Ke beshi priyo - gaaner Rabindranath, na kobitar Rabindranath ?
kichhudin age Sunil-babu 'Rabindranath-er Srestho 100-ti kobita' ba ei jatiyo naame ekti collection edit korechhilen, taate 25-ti kobita, ar 75-ti asole gaan. Er theke ki proman hoye Rabindranath-er 100ta valo 'kobita' khnuje pawa dushkor ?!
Anupam, 3rd post niye ami khub chintito ... keno? tumi bhebe bolo to....
lekhate jodi 0-er bhabdhara thake, tahole khub bhalo . kintu ebarer lekhagulo mone holo dhora ar adhorar majhkhaner kono jaygay ghora fera korche. ksshoma korben ami kaukei aghat dite chai na. ami ja bolte chacchi ta holo kichu notun korte hobe. kintu ebarer kichu kabita pore mone holo segulo kromossho 50 - 60 r dasaker dike chhutche. Tai na....
Mallerme ekbar bolechilen -- I'm obscure, of course, if one mistakes by thinking that he is opening a newspaper. ( ektu bhul hole thik kore dite paren.)
ami AMITAV nag er kabita bar bar porlam. porlam etike kobita bhebei. kintu etike ekta istehar er moto mone holo je! thik thak kobita holo ki???? ki jani!!!!!!!
Tanmay er lekha boro beshi ekroikhik hoye gache, sudhu namkorontake bad diye.'chamra' chokh, sobdo mone holo jor kore arop kora.
Ramit er lekha ekti bhalo proyas. dhora jak, megh o bristi kono manb-manobi, sutorang kobitati tahole to kichuta holeo komjori hoye jay. megh er 1st kothata khub simple. etota simple ki kobita hote pare. orthat sobder maya, keno jani na, ekhane kaj korche na. ebong kobitar onnanno jaygateo. TOBE KICHU KICHU PONGTI SOTTI BHALO.
SOUMITRr lekha ti nijer chale besh cholte suru korechilo. kintu sesh holo na- accha gelo kothay? ei lekhati ekti report er moto kore lekha, kintu ekti kobita hote suru korechilo....
Suvror lekhar dike ektu nojor dite hobe. chondo bhalo. kintu tumi ki thik ja bolte chao ta bolte parle. chonder ei ekti boro badha- chondo bhabnake, onuvutike, nirman ke thik thik er ultimate e pouchote dey na...atke dey...
Bhai RANGEET, tomar experimentguli ar ektu niyomtantrik hole tomar lekha durdanto hobe. sotti bolchi... sudhu experiment noy, borong nijeke chariye , sob kichuke chariye ek journey r dike pa barate hobe amader.
shobdo niye halka khela koreche Abhishek. bhalo. tatsomo o procholito deshi-bideshi sobdo eksathe hat dhara dhori kore cholche. bhaloi laglo. aro bhalo lekha asha kori pabo...
Oishik er lekha khub bhalo laglo. kobitar protiti lain, protiti shobdo, protiti muhurto jeno amake tule niye jacche kono ek ashimer dike. drrisso o addrrissor bairer ek chobi ja thik ki bola jay na, byakssha kora jay na... sudhu onubhob kora jay, sporsho koro jay nijer ajante, dube jaiii kono ashimer dike ashim chariye kono aloukik drrissher dike.
khub bhalo thakun. subheccha October 7, 2009 11:01 AM
Manik er sathey ek mot.. sob jinis kobita hoye othey na ek ekjoner kachhey.. aamar kachheo amaar lekhata kobita na...kintu majhey sajhey ektu dekhey newa nijer dharona... onyer atosh knachey ki bhabey protifolito hoy...bibhinno tokmay na giye eta besh bhalo ei blog e oneke onekrokom likchhy..ekekjon o abar bhino bhinno likchhey tar theke keu keu kono konota y anondo pachhey konotay pachhey na hoyto.tobu proyashta jari thakley seta bhalo lagbey...
aamr monehow ipon,shankhya,dipobrata,ritam,sreemoye,tinni,debohuti,sayantan,aranya,dighi,sagota,pavel,ritam,dipangshu,himaloy jana,aritra,animikh,atanu,arindam,arjunda,souptik,anamitra,somnath,arpan,samraghnee,bhaskarjoti,dipanitwa,debarshi,subirda,souvikda,dipshika,arnab,debayudh,anamika,priyashmita,anuradha r o oneke aachen jara bhalo lekhen...eder leha porun..
"0" doshok likhun ekhane....ae projonmer lekhorra likhun ekhane r o...bhalo hok sobar...tobe onner motamot k srodha korun jukti,aabeg diye bhabhun..logic deben na.....
@RANGEET kobitay experiment kora mane ki jekono shobdo{orthohin apatodrishtite}sekhane byabohar kora?notun projonmer kobita manei ki orthohin kichhu prolap?sejomamam=ei shobdoti kobi byabohar korechhen..jodi dhore ni tini pathok ke kichhu onuvob korate chaichhen...tar sathe chachur sajano ei ghotonati ki khub samonjosyo thakchhe?peter vitor khupri ghum ei line ti besh valo chhilo.kintu ami bolte badhyo hochhi je sudhumatro koekti sundor shobdo ba koekti sundor line diye ekti kobita rochona hoyna.....Rangeet er ei kobitatio jothariti khub osompurno....jar theke onupranito hoa dure thakuk...mone kobita pather sukh o ase na.
je kono kichhu lekha manei kintu ta kobita hoy na.....tahole amra roj ja kotha boli..tai kobita hoye jeto...dhore ni amader paRay ekjon pagol thake.je kina roj kichhu notun shobdo bole.tar mane ki se kobi?sudhu chomok r experiment diye kobita hoy na.....r keu byaktigoto somporker resh tene jor golay support korlei kobita hoy na..tahole amra nijerder manosik prolapgulo ekta khatay likhe fellei kobita hoye jeto........Rangeet,apni pathokder oneker kobita poRte bolechhen...apnake onurodh apni nije kobitar byapare kichhu poRasuna korun..tahole o shotoker pathok kichhu valo kobita hoyto apnar kachh theke pabe...tobe bole rakhi eti kono byaktigoto akromon noy.....
bes guru toro alochona...tobe e alochona-bitorko purono...amar ei coment er oporei ..karo lekha nie coment jekota porechi seggulo nie korechi..abar jokhun porbo korbo.
ekta proshono...kobota ki?....er ki kono nirdisto songa ache?...janina.
amar mone hoye sobar age je lekhe take bhabte hobe se kobita likhte parbe kina....tar kobita ase kina....kobita paye kina...khhide paoa-ghum pawoar motoi.
bektigoto bhabe ami kobitar " adhunik" ba "uttor-adhunik" namkorone biswas nei...amar kache borojor hote pare " adhunik-kaler kobita"
oneki bhebe thaken chondo hin sobdyobinnyaser madhyome mononer bhasar prokas bujhi adhunik kobita. kintu ami kichu latin kobita ja kina rochito 18th sotoke.....sorbangin "adhunik "kobita dekhie dite pari.
o bolechhe Jodi loker valo lage, taholei bujhbi, kobita 'hochhe'. ar kishe kobita 'holo'. setaa khub joruri ektaa katha . kintu souvik , sei LOK ki bortomaaner naa bhobissoter maanob ? naaki atitchaari ? ektu katha bolo ei nie . bhobissoter kobita bole kichhu hoe mone koro ki ?
ufffffffffffff--- abar kobita niye anek chulochuli holo abar kobita lekha jak abar--:P tabe akta katha amar mathay sotty dhuklo na seshmesh sei indranil er mato "Kobita ki"--
souvik dar akta post e dekhalam rangeet ke lekha--"Jodi loker valo lage, taholei bujhbi, kobita 'hochhe'.
avishek er rangeet er kobita niye alochonay bola hocche--"kobi kintu jokhon lekhen tokhon taar nijoswo anubhutigulokei lekhae futiye tolen,shudhu pathoker kotha mathae rekhe jodi tini lekhen tobe lekhata diye besh bajar bajar gondho baar hoy,seta amar mote anobhipreto,amar kachhe kobita kobi nijer moto korei likhben,kobitake pathoker kachhe jabar dorkar nei,------
tahole konta thik? dutoi to ake oporer biporit--- r rangeet boleche ak jaygay--"jukti,aabeg diye bhabhun..logic deben na..... tahole ai 46 khana comment e amra sabai ki korchilam logic chara? akhane amon ke ache including myself je nijer jukti aabeg etc ke logic diye bojabar chesta korlo na atokkhon?-- hay korechi korechen kimba niscriyo thekechen--ai je ato logical defend amader sabar nijeder juktir proti tarmane ki kobi chan na tar kobitar mullayan hok? sudui kobi tar nijer bhabe nijer rage likhe jan-- atocho mullayan chan na?-- hayto serakom kobi ba manush achen nischay achen kintu amar byaktigato bhabe mon hay na tar kache ai bajjhik mullayaner juti protijukti sotty kono mane rakhe-- ar rangeet er akta jaygay dekhalm "kobita akta upashona.aami ishor...----- ata sampurno bhabe mathar opor diye beriye gelo --- upashana porjonto bujhlam ishor ta bujhte parlam na-- ami abong amra to keu i na ai bisal katokathar duniyay-- ak phota dhulikona hote parle anek- sekhane purono ke bhenge agiye jaoar chinta khub bhalo kintu ultimate bole sotty kichu hay kina ami jani na---
ro kichu lekhar chlo -- kintu sotty 47 khana comment er pore amar nijer mone hay amra ai 3rd blog tate beshi kore kore amader nijeder jukti tarko ke uske deoar chesta korechi sudhu-- kobita jatota likhechi jatota alochona korechi tar cheyeo beshi kobir--tabe a theke akta jinis samne chole ase amra sabai mone hay pathoker mullayan ajo chai-- tai samalochona hole amra jotoi boli na ami agiye cholechi nijer mone tobu keno pechone phire takate icche hay bare bare?--
ramit---- ei blog e ar akdom keu jhograjhati korbe na--hehehehee-- er parer blog e abar kobita niye kutukuti hobe na hay-----
ai ato lekha karu uddhesshe na-- karon ate ami nijeo involve bole mone kori karon amio jakhon likhi takhon siki bhag day amakeo nite hobe atai niyom---ai lekhatar aktai uddhessho aktai katha bola-- amra keu i ishor nay sudu akta manush-- khuddro abong aro khuddro ar kichu na-- er theke opore jaoar patha r jai hok kobita kina seta barabari bitorkosappekkho---- -- saabai aro likhe choli aro bhalo dekhi uttoraner path perote pari kina--
issss...bejaye choto!!!!
ReplyDeleteha ha ha ... aami tomaake bolechhilam Indranil . ebaar dekhaa jaak tomaar kobitaa poraar jonne paathok koshto koren kina !
ReplyDeletebapan- shuvro--khub bhalo legeche anekdin pore kono kobita--sudu 4 no parar je 4 te line seta puro kobitate kothao aktu khey harano mone holo--ata chere dile bhison bhalo
ReplyDeletekathamanobi- nishigandhha--- choto abong sundor--- sabcheye bhalo laglo" aj katha diye kine nao prithibir jabotiyo sukh"-- besh sundor lekha
asotthir saregamay bikeler thikanabadol-- kobitata bhalo laglo kintu abar kichu katha bolar icche holo-- abossoi baro byaktigato tobu- ager postei manik dar sathe ai bypare besh akta baro saro gappo hoyechilo[:P]-- namkaron ta kothao jeno theklo tabe atao thik namkaron hayto sei surutuki kobitar ja sudu dohat khule dey anubhutir oronne----R puro kobitata sesh korle keno jeno mone holo hathat sesh hoye gelo--- tachara bhalo
hijibiji-- soumitro-- kobitata ki puro post hoyeche??-- na ki jhinuke ki bolei sesh ata anupam er kache jiggasso--
satobhasan bhason-- Rangeet er mato kobita hayni --- kothao kichu sabdo mone hoyeche ane jhure deoa hoyeche-- amar byaktigato obhimat experimental kobita manei je sudu sabochok melabar mato sabdo chayon kore bosiye deoa ta bodhhay nay-- ata sampurno kintu byaktigato obhimat-- amra akhane kobita niye alochona korte asechi tai hayto atota sabolil bhabe bole gelam-- sejo mamam ta mone hay mama hobe--r uth bos ta ki oth bos hobe?--
utsargo- avisekh-- besh bhalo legeche-- ager lekhar theke anek bhalo legeche aita-- aro porbo airakom-- sudu akta jayga--" ami FM paroya kori na tobu rastaghate pore ache holud golaper deoal"-- ami kobir anubhuti ta ai line e bujhte chai---
Asthiratar tukitaki-- OIshik ----- durdanto--- bhison bhalo legeche--- khub sundor--- ami porechi dubar -- na na aito aro akbar--[:P]-- aro akbar porar icche roilo
khabor-amitav nag-- puro jinista besh gochano -porteo besh bhalo lage-- kintu puro lekhatate je punctuation nei seta ki kobir nijjosso style na rakha hayni?----R "ebong purush o narir khadder obhab hayna abhabe majhe majhe truck theke matir talar samrajjo gore uthle alimuddine se khabor jayna"--- ai jaygata kemon khapchara laglo --mane je tane porchilam seta oi tuku jaygay kothao alga mone holo
protnomanoshik-- indranil-- ore baba re baro choto sotty- ar amar abar chalse-heheee--
lekar proti boli-- kara jeno phisphis kare, jodi bristi pore abong aral chaya anoboddo-bhison sundor hoyeche puro lekhata--- experimental+gobhir oronno theke tule ana ak chilte anubhuti---- hayto sotty aibari "nischup ghumiye pori hajar bachorer ghum"----
ANUPAM ke---- aj dekhlam blog e oporer dike natun chobi aseche title er maje--bangla poet after 2000 er okhane-- amar mone hoy okhane aro experimental chobi protassito
RAMIT ..................
hNya punctuation na rakhata ichhwakrito...
ReplyDeleteBAPON - KOBITAR SESE AKTA INGIT PELAM....
ReplyDeleteKOTHAMANOBI - NISIGONDHAR AMI KROMOSO FAN HOYE PORCHI....
OSWASTIR SA RE GA MA....KHONIKER KOBITA BOLE MONE HOLO....CHOLUK
Rangeet-er lekhar shobdo sejo mamam aar uth-bos e hobe...
ReplyDeletesob kobita ekhono pora hoyni....Nishigondha Basu Mallik-er lekha besh laglo...Amitabha Nag khub bhalo,khub sadharon bhasha byabohar koreo je amra asamanyo kichhu likhte pari,ei lekhata taar proman....Rangeet-er kkhetre bolte pari o je somosto du:sahosik porikkha-nirikkhagulo lekhae korchhe seta onobodyo,itomodye or kobitae ekta nijoswo bhasha ese gechhe,alada bhabe chena jae eta Rangeet Mitro-er lekha,shobdo niye ei experimentguloi amader kobitake ekta onyo porjaye uttirno korbe,ei lekhatao Rangeet-er nijoswota bohon kore cholechhe,amar byaktigoto mot holo amader lekhagulor modye theke onyo doshoker chhapgulo kromosho dure thele dite hobe,Rangeet sei byapare oneker thekei egiye,or shobdogulo anubhuti ke chhuNye jae,amar kachhe kobita asole bojhar noe anubhaber jinis,Rangeet-er beshirbhag lekhar moto etao amay chhuNye gelo,khub bhalo laglo,amay anupranito korlo...Tanmay Roy-er lekhata asamanyo,barbar porchhi,mugdho kore tulchhe...Ramit Dey,Indranil Bakshi,Shubhroshankar Nag,Soumitro Roy-er lekha ekhono pora hoyni...enader lekha porbo...hoyto aajii...
ReplyDeleteIndranil bakshi-er lekha porlum,onobodyo laglo,emnitei Indranilda amar khub priyo ekjon kobi,onar kobita amay je mugdhota dae,ekkhetreo taar byatikrom holona,lekhata baarbaar porte ichhe korchhe,eta to prothombaar porar protikriya,aaro bohubaar porbo ebong ami nishchit amar bhalo lagata aaro barbe....Ramit Dey-er lekhata bhalo,kintu jehetu Ramitdar besh kichhu lekha ami aagei porechhi ebong onar lekhar maan somporke obogoto,tai onar lekhar proti amar je expectations thake ta ei lekhatite puron holona...
ReplyDeleterangeet er lekha niye avishekh er matamot prosonge------sunnosatoker sampurno sapokkhe ami-- avi jeta boleche "kobita asole bojar nay anubhaver jinis" tar sathe sampurno akmat- kintu muskhil holo ai anubhav er jaygata baro relative-- ata mkobir kache jemon tar baro akanto byaktigato temni ak akjon pathoker kacheo ak ak rakom anubhutir jayga--jakhoni amra kono kobita prokash korlam amadre nijjosso khancha chere takhoni kintu amader inner self e ai jinista amader protekker moddhei play korbe je pathok seta poruk- pachonodo ba apachondo parer katha kintu seta poruk abong mullayan koruk. amar mone hay experimental jeta avishek boleche seta bhalo kintu sotty ki atirikto experiment e kobitar baire sudu matro nijjosso ami tuku pore thake na kobi nije?- tahole to kobita likhe kono kobir-i anubhav sotty ki amon haoa uchit je anubhaver moddhe diye kobi sudu nijei benche thakbe tar pathok tar aswad nite byartho hobe? tahole to bolte hay amader ai satoker kono kobi kono lekhok i tar nijer lekhar sothik mullayon sunte paben na karon pathok jodi anubhav na kortei pare tahole mullayan ta hypocricy hoye jay. anubhav jodi akantoi nijo osttite aboddho hoye jay tahole kobitar prokasher mullayan ki?--indranil er lekhao asombhov experimental kintu lekhar dhanche ba sabdo monjori te je anubhuti paoa jay sotty ki rangeet er ai lekhatite sei tan paoa jay?- ata sampurno byaktigato mullayon amar --agei bolechi anubhuti baro beshi relative
ReplyDeletear amar mone hay experimental bhalo kintu ai lekhatate mone hoyeche kichu sabdo sudu jure deoar khela-- punoscho:- Avishek boleche amader lekhagulor moddhe diye onno satoker chapgulo kromosho dure thele dite hobe abong rangeet ai byapare agiye-- prothomato amar mone hay ai agiye ba pichiye ta bhison appekkhik atar definition hay na hote pare na ar ditiyoto ami nije ai sunno satoker hoye bolchi amra keu i chaileo kono sotokeri lekhar chap muche dite pari na -- protiiti satoker lekhar satrontto ostitto ache-- seta sambhov nay kono ak satok asei muche di--amader aitai kara uchit ager satoker proti o sampurno shradda rekhei ai satake natun kichu kore dekhabar.
akkhuni logout hobo tai tarahuro te kiichu bhulbhal likhte pari tai dukkhito--;hehehe--
kal ase abar dekhbo ke ke komore bendhe agiye aseche--
suvoratri-- ramit
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ReplyDeleteRANGEET-ER LEKHA NIYE RAMITDA-ER MOTAMOT PROSONGE------
ReplyDeleteRamitda Rangeet-er lekha somporke bolte giye lekhar kkhetre pathokgrohonjogyotar kotha bolechhen,thikii pathok ebong kobir modye lekhar madhyome songjog sthapon ekta otyonto gurutwopurno byapar,tobe kono kobi ki sob pathoker kachhe grohonjogyo hon?kobi kintu jokhon lekhen tokhon taar nijoswo anubhutigulokei lekhae futiye tolen,shudhu pathoker kotha mathae rekhe jodi tini lekhen tobe lekhata diye besh bajar bajar gondho baar hoy,seta amar mote anobhipreto,amar kachhe kobita kobi nijer moto korei likhben,kobitake pathoker kachhe jabar dorkar nei,pathokii kobitar kachhe asben,Rangeet lekhae je porikkha-nirikkhagulo korchhe seta kintu amader oswosti toiri korchhe,khub jhuNkir kaaj eta,amader obhyas ke aghat korchhe o,jonopriyota pawa hoyto khub kothin,tobu amar asha Rangeet-er kobitake taar pathok thik khuNje nebe,tara jotoi nogonyo hon....Rangeet-er kobitae je porikkha-nirikkhagulo hochhe segulo sottii amay kobitae notun bhasha anar kkhetre anupranito kore...or onek kobita hoyto amar kachheo sebhabe abedon rakhte parena sobsomoy...kintu sekhanei ei lekhagulor sarthokota,amader obhayske chhinnobhinno kore tulchhe o,hoyto ei porikkha-nirikkhaguloi kobitar bhashake ek onyo stor-e niye jabe...jodi nao ba niye jae taatei ba ki? chesta to kora hochhe,hoyto bhobisyot projonmer kobitar sopan hisebe ei kobitaguloi chinhito hobe...
Ramitadar dwitiyo boktobyer prosonge boli je purboborti kobider proti sompurno sroddha amader achhe,tara likhechhilen bolei aaj amra likhte parchhi,kintu tader proti sraddha thaka ba tader kobita bhalo lagar mane to ei noe je tader chhap amader bohon kore berate hobe!...kobitar kkhetre kintu dekha gechhe chirokaal kobita purono chhapgulo muchhe egiye cholechhe,Rabindranth ke amra kokhono aswikar korte pari,kintu onar chhap aajker j lekhoker lekhae pabo,taake amra ekjon sarthok lekhok bole chinhito korte parbona...notun kichhu gorte gele kintu purono ke bhange khub proyojoniyo...
Shubhrashankar Nag aar Oishiker lekha porlam,amay khub ekta chhuNye jete parlona,hoyto seta kobir noe amarii byarthota...Soumitra-er lekha besh laglo...kintu sob lekhagulo porar por amay sobcheye beshi mugdho koreche Rangeet Mitro,Tanmay Roy aar Amitava Nag-er lekha...Rangeet-er lekha niye aagei bolechhi...Amitava Nag-er lekhar modye ek onyodhoroner experiment dekhlam,shudhumatro godyer bhashae shobder kono khela chharai likhechhen,tobu amar kachhe lekhata ekta sarthok kobita,sompurno abeghin ekta lekha ja amader kobitae khub proyojoniyo bolei amar mone hoyechhe..Tanmay Roy-er kobita ekta adhut amej toiri korchhe,ek odbhut anubhutir,shobder khela asamanyo laglo amar...
ReplyDeleteNishigandha-r kobita prothom pori ORKUT-e . kichhu negative comment chhilo or kobita-r niche . kintu aamar byaktigotovaabe valo legechhilo . ekta anyorokom aadol chhilo , jaa pratha-r moddhe thekeo cliche theke mukto . aar ... osombobvaabe ekjon naarir lekhaa , jekhaane puruser kono katha khaatbe na .
ReplyDeleteAvisek praanpone natun hote chaaichhe . or moddhe aami nijer spirit kichhutaa ter paechhi , aakristo hoechhi .
Ramit sobchaaite medhaabi eder moddhe , aamar mote . o nirmaan-k gurutbo dae , kintu aatma-e kono aanchor boste dae na . or kobita-e praan khub valorokom aachhe . ebong o risk nite jaane . katha hoeto ektu komaate pare . shobdobyabohaar aarektu socheton hole vaalo hoe . jemon GHONTAAE 60 MILE BEGE keno ? 50 mile noe keno ? 70 mile ? aarektu mohomukti hoeto dorkaar . aaro nirmomotaa nijer uchchaaroner proti .
shuvra or seraa kobita ekhaane dae ni . hoeto pore debe . tokhon katha bolbo . soumitra erokom khaamkheaali lekhaai lekhe .
Tanmoy-er lekhaata aami bechhe niechhi . KOCHKOCHI shobdota ... ah ... kintu etaai or boishisto !
Aishik ... khub praan theke lekha . vaalo legechhe . kototaa important lekha ... dekhaai jaak pore o kirokom lekhaa aamader poraae .
Amitava nijeke kobi mone kore na . o nijei aamake bolechhe . ei lekhatake o bolechhilo NA-KOBITA . setaa noe . vaalo . aantorik . ektu cliche theke gechhe . dekha jaak porer kobita aamader kirokom laage .
aar ... sob chaaite koutuholi korechhe Rangeet . ki korte chaaichhe o ? jaante hobe aamader .
aar manik je bolechhe 0-er bhaabdhara . se bishoe boli ... poets after 2000 does mean poetry after 2000 . ekhaane kintu kobider nie katha hachhe , kobitata tnaader bechhe nite deoaa hachhe nijeder naamer niche . taai na ?
ReplyDeletechhere katha kaauke bolaa hobe na . etaa nijeke mepe neoaar jaaega hok .
bes guru toro alochona...tobe e alochona-bitorko purono...amar ei coment er oporei ..karo lekha nie coment jekota porechi seggulo nie korechi..abar jokhun porbo korbo.
ReplyDeleteekta proshono...kobota ki?....er ki kono nirdisto songa ache?...janina.
amar mone hoye sobar age je lekhe take bhabte hobe se kobita likhte parbe kina....tar kobita ase kina....kobita paye kina...khhide paoa-ghum pawoar motoi.
bektigoto bhabe ami kobitar " adhunik" ba "uttor-adhunik" namkorone biswas nei...amar kache borojor hote pare " adhunik-kaler kobita"
oneki bhebe thaken chondo hin sobdyobinnyaser madhyome mononer bhasar prokas bujhi adhunik kobita. kintu ami kichu latin kobita ja kina rochito 18th sotoke.....sorbangin "adhunik "kobita dekhie dite pari.
asole amar mone hoy poribortito bhasa...chintar bibortonee kobitar former poriboton ghotaye.
porikhha prosonge boli - bhison joruri...kintu otirikto porikkha korte gie jyano kobitar kabbyo charie 'form' ti mukhhyo hoe na othe.
ekta somossya ache...amader choto bela thekei schoole sekhano hoyeche..."boloto kobi ekhane ki bolte cheye cheyechen?" ba " bhab somprosaron koro"..eta bes gondogoler....ami mone korina prithibir kono bikhhyato kobi tar nirjon sristir bykhhya dite swasti bodh korben...
eki kobit bibhinniyo joner kache bibhinnyo bhabe uthe ase....its apear different way to differrent persons ...ta nahole KOBITA ar CALENDER eki hoto...
porises boli esobi amar nijer dharona kobita somporke....onnera bhinnomot rakhtei paren :)
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ReplyDeleteamar boktobye Rabindranth ke amra kokhono aswikar korte parina...ei kothati bhul bhabe type hoye "Rabindranth ke amra kokhono aswikar korte pari" hoye gechhe....aaro du'ekta truti hoyechhe type korte giye :P
Khub valo uddyog, Anupam. Chaliye jao.
ReplyDeleteSuvroshankar Nag-er kobita valo legechhe.
Ke beshi priyo - gaaner Rabindranath, na kobitar Rabindranath ?
kichhudin age Sunil-babu 'Rabindranath-er Srestho 100-ti kobita' ba ei jatiyo naame ekti collection edit korechhilen, taate 25-ti kobita, ar 75-ti asole gaan. Er theke ki proman hoye Rabindranath-er 100ta valo 'kobita' khnuje pawa dushkor ?!
Bitorko hok ! :)
ha ha ha ... tobu vaalo Sunil ekhon tnaar ekjoraa paa die laathi maarchhen na Thakurmoshaai-k . Sharatkumar setaa ekhono chaalie jaachhen . ebaarer SHAAROD KABISAMMELAN-e ekta godyo likhechhen . baadhyo hoe taar protibaad kore ekta chithi likhte holo .
ReplyDeleteSunil kobita bojhen na . kobita nie katha bolaar kono khomota tnaar nei . Rabindranath-k nie uponyas thik aachhe , taar besi naa egonoi mongol chilo tnaar .
tobe sunil ekjon boro kobi . taate sondeho nei .
aar Rabindranath-k perie ek paa-o bangla kobita egoe ni . ektaa uchchaaron-o nei . goto bish shotoke nei . ei shotoke setaai ... setatei pouchhote hobe aamader .
Anupam,
ReplyDelete3rd post niye ami khub chintito ... keno? tumi bhebe bolo to....
lekhate jodi 0-er bhabdhara thake, tahole khub bhalo . kintu ebarer lekhagulo mone holo dhora ar adhorar majhkhaner kono jaygay ghora fera korche. ksshoma korben ami kaukei aghat dite chai na. ami ja bolte chacchi ta holo kichu notun korte hobe. kintu ebarer kichu kabita pore mone holo segulo kromossho 50 - 60 r dasaker dike chhutche. Tai na....
Mallerme ekbar bolechilen -- I'm obscure, of course, if one mistakes by thinking that he is opening a newspaper. ( ektu bhul hole thik kore dite paren.)
ami AMITAV nag er kabita bar bar porlam. porlam etike kobita bhebei. kintu etike ekta istehar er moto mone holo je! thik thak kobita holo ki???? ki jani!!!!!!!
Tanmay er lekha boro beshi ekroikhik hoye gache, sudhu namkorontake bad diye.'chamra' chokh, sobdo mone holo jor kore arop kora.
Ramit er lekha ekti bhalo proyas. dhora jak, megh o bristi kono manb-manobi, sutorang kobitati tahole to kichuta holeo komjori hoye jay. megh er 1st kothata khub simple. etota simple ki kobita hote pare. orthat sobder maya, keno jani na, ekhane kaj korche na. ebong kobitar onnanno jaygateo.
TOBE KICHU KICHU PONGTI SOTTI BHALO.
SOUMITRr lekha ti nijer chale besh cholte suru korechilo. kintu sesh holo na- accha gelo kothay? ei lekhati ekti report er moto kore lekha, kintu ekti kobita hote suru korechilo....
Suvror lekhar dike ektu nojor dite hobe. chondo bhalo. kintu tumi ki thik ja bolte chao ta bolte parle. chonder ei ekti boro badha- chondo bhabnake, onuvutike, nirman ke thik thik er ultimate e pouchote dey na...atke dey...
Bhai RANGEET, tomar experimentguli ar ektu niyomtantrik hole tomar lekha durdanto hobe. sotti bolchi... sudhu experiment noy, borong nijeke chariye , sob kichuke chariye ek journey r dike pa barate hobe amader.
shobdo niye halka khela koreche Abhishek. bhalo. tatsomo o procholito deshi-bideshi sobdo eksathe hat dhara dhori kore cholche. bhaloi laglo. aro bhalo lekha asha kori pabo...
Protnomanosik lekhati bhalo. kintu purono gondho asche je! otake charte hobe. sabolil lekha. kintu ami er cheye aroo kichu asha korchi.
Oishik er lekha khub bhalo laglo. kobitar protiti lain, protiti shobdo, protiti muhurto jeno amake tule niye jacche kono ek ashimer dike. drrisso o addrrissor bairer ek chobi ja thik ki bola jay na, byakssha kora jay na... sudhu onubhob kora jay, sporsho koro jay nijer ajante, dube jaiii kono ashimer dike ashim chariye kono aloukik drrissher dike.
khub bhalo thakun. subheccha
October 7, 2009 11:01 AM
oswastir saregama-y bikeler thikana bodol-: uff, ki porlam! bhishon bhalo legechhe,sahosi prochestha.sabash tanmay babu bhai.
ReplyDeletebopon-: "tule rekho kichhu sobuj patar bondhon/akash bondi amar shohore bristi namar gondho"..... kichhu line matal kora hoy...etao temon ...kudos
Manik er sathey ek mot.. sob jinis kobita hoye othey na ek ekjoner kachhey.. aamar kachheo amaar lekhata kobita na...kintu majhey sajhey ektu dekhey newa nijer dharona... onyer atosh knachey ki bhabey protifolito hoy...bibhinno tokmay na giye eta besh bhalo ei blog e oneke onekrokom likchhy..ekekjon o abar bhino bhinno likchhey tar theke keu keu kono konota y anondo pachhey konotay pachhey na hoyto.tobu proyashta jari thakley seta bhalo lagbey...
ReplyDeletejani na...aami tor sms pete aakash hoye geche
ReplyDeleteato bitorke o pagol k u khoma kore na
she sob pakhider aawoyaje o nije dukho pai
bujhi na onekgulo ghum;aama k olik bole mone how
tar por akdin sob nridoy nirmom how : pagoler lash pawoya jayee,aamader rashtaye
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ReplyDeletekobi ki ebng keno??kobitabhabna??tatik aalochona...ebong r o kichu bhalo jinish chondo shikte chayee.. r o shikte chayee..aamder help korun..
ReplyDeleteaamra je "0" doshok..sobi na thakle aamra likhbo ki kore..aamder bhitti aapnara..bneche thaka o tae..sob e
porikha nirikha..
prochar kobita k noshto kore...aamr moen how....
bhalo thakben,
rangeet
one lekha kete geche...
ReplyDeleteone lekha kete geche...
ReplyDeleteaamr monehow ipon,shankhya,dipobrata,ritam,sreemoye,tinni,debohuti,sayantan,aranya,dighi,sagota,pavel,ritam,dipangshu,himaloy jana,aritra,animikh,atanu,arindam,arjunda,souptik,anamitra,somnath,arpan,samraghnee,bhaskarjoti,dipanitwa,debarshi,subirda,souvikda,dipshika,arnab,debayudh,anamika,priyashmita,anuradha r o oneke aachen jara bhalo lekhen...eder leha porun..
ReplyDelete"0" doshok likhun ekhane....ae projonmer lekhorra likhun ekhane r o...bhalo hok sobar...tobe onner motamot k srodha korun
jukti,aabeg diye bhabhun..logic deben na.....
bhalo thakben
rangeet
tobe aamder somoy aamder bondhura
ReplyDeleteripon,
shankhya,dipobrata,ritam,
sreemoye,
tinni,debohuti
,sayantan,aranya,dighi,sagota,
pavel,ritam,dipangshu,himaloy jana,aritra,animikh,
atanu,arindam,arjunda,souptik,anamitra,
somnath,arpan,samraghnee,
bhaskarjoti,dipanitwa,
debarshi,subirda,souvikda,
dipshika,arnab,debayudh,anamika,
priyashmita,anuradha r o oneke aachen jara darun darun lekhen..eder lekha porun...
Rangeet,
ReplyDeletetomar comment poRlam.eto osonkhyobar vul type korar jonyo ebong ek ee kothar barbar punorabrittir jonyo vison birokti laglo....tumi nijeke ekbar ishwor bolechho r ekbar kobita ke ishwor bolechho.........konti tomar sothik dharona janar ichhe roilo.....evabe nijer paglamir prokash vobishyote na korlei blogti sukhopathyo hobe....
@RANGEET
ReplyDeletekobitay experiment kora mane ki jekono shobdo{orthohin apatodrishtite}sekhane byabohar kora?notun projonmer kobita manei ki orthohin kichhu prolap?sejomamam=ei shobdoti kobi byabohar korechhen..jodi dhore ni tini pathok ke kichhu onuvob korate chaichhen...tar sathe chachur sajano ei ghotonati ki khub samonjosyo thakchhe?peter vitor khupri ghum ei line ti besh valo chhilo.kintu ami bolte badhyo hochhi je sudhumatro koekti sundor shobdo ba koekti sundor line diye ekti kobita rochona hoyna.....Rangeet er ei kobitatio jothariti khub osompurno....jar theke onupranito hoa dure thakuk...mone kobita pather sukh o ase na.
je kono kichhu lekha manei kintu ta kobita hoy na.....tahole amra roj ja kotha boli..tai kobita hoye jeto...dhore ni amader paRay ekjon pagol thake.je kina roj kichhu notun shobdo bole.tar mane ki se kobi?sudhu chomok r experiment diye kobita hoy na.....r keu byaktigoto somporker resh tene jor golay support korlei kobita hoy na..tahole amra nijerder manosik prolapgulo ekta khatay likhe fellei kobita hoye jeto........Rangeet,apni pathokder oneker kobita poRte bolechhen...apnake onurodh apni nije kobitar byapare kichhu poRasuna korun..tahole o shotoker pathok kichhu valo kobita hoyto apnar kachh theke pabe...tobe bole rakhi eti kono byaktigoto akromon noy.....
ReplyDeleteamitava nag er experimental lekha valo lage ni....onar non-experimental lekhai onek beshi priyo .....
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ReplyDeletesoumitra er lekha kobita hisebe valo lageni......bakider lekha valoi laglo.......
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ReplyDeleteei dhoroner byapaar keno hochhe bondhu-ra ? etaa kintu jhograjhnaatir jaaega noe ! creative aalochonar jonne etotaa khaatchhi aamra . text-er baaire aalochonaar kono proyojon nei . aar ... please laagataar comment koro naa . khub baaje laage seta .
ReplyDelete(REPOST...jodi keu pore & alochona kore...ei asyae)
ReplyDeletebes guru toro alochona...tobe e alochona-bitorko purono...amar ei coment er oporei ..karo lekha nie coment jekota porechi seggulo nie korechi..abar jokhun porbo korbo.
ekta proshono...kobota ki?....er ki kono nirdisto songa ache?...janina.
amar mone hoye sobar age je lekhe take bhabte hobe se kobita likhte parbe kina....tar kobita ase kina....kobita paye kina...khhide paoa-ghum pawoar motoi.
bektigoto bhabe ami kobitar " adhunik" ba "uttor-adhunik" namkorone biswas nei...amar kache borojor hote pare " adhunik-kaler kobita"
oneki bhebe thaken chondo hin sobdyobinnyaser madhyome mononer bhasar prokas bujhi adhunik kobita. kintu ami kichu latin kobita ja kina rochito 18th sotoke.....sorbangin "adhunik "kobita dekhie dite pari.
asole amar mone hoy poribortito bhasa...chintar bibortonee kobitar former poriboton ghotaye.
porikhha prosonge boli - bhison joruri...kintu otirikto porikkha korte gie jyano kobitar kabbyo charie 'form' ti mukhhyo hoe na othe.
ekta somossya ache...amader choto bela thekei schoole sekhano hoyeche..."boloto kobi ekhane ki bolte cheye cheyechen?" ba " bhab somprosaron koro"..eta bes gondogoler....ami mone korina prithibir kono bikhhyato kobi tar nirjon sristir bykhhya dite swasti bodh korben...
eki kobit bibhinniyo joner kache bibhinnyo bhabe uthe ase....its apear different way to differrent persons ...ta nahole KOBITA ar CALENDER eki hoto...
porises boli esobi amar nijer dharona kobita somporke....onnera bhinnomot rakhtei paren :)
Kobita je ki, keu janena, jaana somvob na. Kobita at most, 'hoye jete' paare. jokhon jar hath diye hoye jaye, tokhon se Kobi. Jodi kaur hath diye onekdin dhore hoye jete thake, se Kobi hishebe porichiti labh korey. Kobita niye ar kono boktobbyo pesh kora bodhoy somvob noye. 2-to apato aw-kabbyik line eksathe ekti sarthok kobita hote paare, abar durdanto chhondey lekha 20 line hotey paare ekti byartho kobita. asole, kothao chnute hobe pathok-ke. adhunik, uttor-adhuniker differentiation korata khub ekta important mone korina. ei somoye loke ei somoyer vashatei likhben, etai kammyo ar natural.
ReplyDeleteRangeet, keu toke vuul bojheni.:) nijer ichhemoto likhe ja, atkabina nijeke. Jodi loker valo lage, taholei bujhbi, kobita 'hochhe'. ar kishe kobita 'holo', ar kishe 'holona' eta beshirvaag lok-i janena, setai kobitar moja ! Aristotle-er 'what is poetry' sonkranto kichu lekhapotro ache, amar mone hoyna unio thikthak kichu bole uthte perechhen. ja bojhai jayna ki, ta niye awkaron kochkochi kore lav nei. kobita 'hoye jaye', hoye jaak, evabei ! cheers :)
kawthaprosongey boli, 'prolaap'-o kintu 'kobita' hoye jete paare kono awloukik montroboley ! Allen Ginsberg er kichu prolaap awtibo sarthok kobita ! :)
ReplyDeletesouvik ektaa natun praan dilo . ei dhoroner aalochonaai pratyashito chhilo .
ReplyDeleteo bolechhe Jodi loker valo lage, taholei bujhbi, kobita 'hochhe'. ar kishe kobita 'holo'. setaa khub joruri ektaa katha . kintu souvik , sei LOK ki bortomaaner naa bhobissoter maanob ? naaki atitchaari ? ektu katha bolo ei nie . bhobissoter kobita bole kichhu hoe mone koro ki ?
aar thik bolechho tumi . prolaap kobita hote paare . aamader deshei aachhen Amitava Moitra .
tnar TOTEM BHOJ ektaa daarun boi . khub besi lok poreni .
souvikda toma k aami srodha kori;tumi ja bolcho aami mene nilam;aamr oporadh khoma koro...
ReplyDeleteaami bhul korle khoma koro...aashole aami obhinow krote pari na...aamr sob lekha i bhalo lage..
aami khub ahoto hoyechilm..rege gechilm...
aami erokom likhte chaini..aamr postgulo aami del kore dite pari....
aamader onek-kichu sekhar aache...tomr plzz pashe theko..
dure chole jeo na.
aabr bolchii
i m srry ....
r aami priyo kobider modhe tumi o aacho,bhasakrajoyti aachee,subirda aachee...
sobar lekah i aamr bhalo lage.. r o sristi koro..pashe thekeo....
bhalo hok
rangeet
Rangeet, ore, tui khoma chas kyan ?! mod kha, Kamal Chakraborty hoye ja, kobita lekh, byass..:)
ReplyDeleteAnupam, Kobitake bodhoy Uttamkumar hote hobe !Kalottirno, evergreen.. timelessness is the only order...
Amitava Moitrar boiti jogaR korte hobe..thanks fr the info..
kobita utaamkumar hobe keno ! soumitra hok . here gieo jite jaak .
ReplyDelete:). tahole Kobitar arek naam dilam 'Baazigar'
ReplyDeleteufffffffffffff--- abar kobita niye anek chulochuli holo abar kobita lekha jak abar--:P
ReplyDeletetabe akta katha amar mathay sotty dhuklo na seshmesh sei indranil er mato "Kobita ki"--
souvik dar akta post e dekhalam rangeet ke lekha--"Jodi loker valo lage, taholei bujhbi, kobita 'hochhe'.
avishek er rangeet er kobita niye alochonay bola hocche--"kobi kintu jokhon lekhen tokhon taar nijoswo anubhutigulokei lekhae futiye tolen,shudhu pathoker kotha mathae rekhe jodi tini lekhen tobe lekhata diye besh bajar bajar gondho baar hoy,seta amar mote anobhipreto,amar kachhe kobita kobi nijer moto korei likhben,kobitake pathoker kachhe jabar dorkar nei,------
tahole konta thik? dutoi to ake oporer biporit---
r rangeet boleche ak jaygay--"jukti,aabeg diye bhabhun..logic deben na.....
tahole ai 46 khana comment e amra sabai ki korchilam logic chara? akhane amon ke ache including myself je nijer jukti aabeg etc ke logic diye bojabar chesta korlo na atokkhon?-- hay korechi korechen kimba niscriyo thekechen--ai je ato logical defend amader sabar nijeder juktir proti tarmane ki kobi chan na tar kobitar mullayan hok? sudui kobi tar nijer bhabe nijer rage likhe jan-- atocho mullayan chan na?-- hayto serakom kobi ba manush achen nischay achen kintu amar byaktigato bhabe mon hay na tar kache ai bajjhik mullayaner juti protijukti sotty kono mane rakhe--
ar rangeet er akta jaygay dekhalm "kobita akta upashona.aami ishor...----- ata sampurno bhabe mathar opor diye beriye gelo --- upashana porjonto bujhlam ishor ta bujhte parlam na-- ami abong amra to keu i na ai bisal katokathar duniyay-- ak phota dhulikona hote parle anek- sekhane purono ke bhenge agiye jaoar chinta khub bhalo kintu ultimate bole sotty kichu hay kina ami jani na---
ro kichu lekhar chlo -- kintu sotty 47 khana comment er pore amar nijer mone hay amra ai 3rd blog tate beshi kore kore amader nijeder jukti tarko ke uske deoar chesta korechi sudhu-- kobita jatota likhechi jatota alochona korechi tar cheyeo beshi kobir--tabe a theke akta jinis samne chole ase amra sabai mone hay pathoker mullayan ajo chai-- tai samalochona hole amra jotoi boli na ami agiye cholechi nijer mone tobu keno pechone phire takate icche hay bare bare?--
ramit---- ei blog e ar akdom keu jhograjhati korbe na--hehehehee-- er parer blog e abar kobita niye kutukuti hobe na hay-----
ai ato lekha karu uddhesshe na-- karon ate ami nijeo involve bole mone kori karon amio jakhon likhi takhon siki bhag day amakeo nite hobe atai niyom---ai lekhatar aktai uddhessho aktai katha bola-- amra keu i ishor nay sudu akta manush-- khuddro abong aro khuddro ar kichu na-- er theke opore jaoar patha r jai hok kobita kina seta barabari bitorkosappekkho----
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saabai aro likhe choli aro bhalo dekhi uttoraner path perote pari kina--
suvoratri-- ramit
aamr ishor holo kobita
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