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priyo paathok
kobitaguli ki khub chhoto mone hachhe ? ekti left click korun kobitatir upor ebong dekhun ei kobi koto
Avisekh er ----nakkhater kantho porlam-- kharap lageni kintu kothao mone hoyeche line gulo akta onnotake hath dhore tene niye jacche na sesh porjonto barong ak akta line satontro --jar phole overall kobitar bhba abong bhasa manjari khubi sundor holeo kobitata kothao aktu alga hoye jacche
sauptik- kohol--lekhata besh bhalo -- bises kore "TANER BEBAK JURE AMON SOHAG" ba " hu hu buke paragchinho sthir" angso gulo chuye jay
satyam--porikalpona--- sadharan bhasay sundor presentation anubhutir-- bhalo legeche ak kathay-
Manik da- anuswar---lekhata jatariti bhalo abong tan dhore rakhe tabe bayktigato bhabe kobitar namer sathe sampurno kobitar bhab ta ami nije thik bujhe uthte parini- jodio amar byaktigato abhimat kobi kakhonoi daybaddho nay tar anubhutir byabocched er---ak kathay KOBITA TA PORTE BHALO LAGE
sokoler kobitai valo laglo.jamon dhora jak prothome romit ar kobitati- amar mone hoyechhe je otate akta visual effect achhe.tobe kobitati amar mone hoy aktu bornanar dike jhuke gachhe. souptik ar kobitar sobdo babohar valo.
ekhane je lekhaguli chapa hocche ta khub porishilito eboNg shobder lagam dhore ek duronto chola. sutorang sonhoto.
je commentgulo eseche segulo khub bhalo O dorkari. kenona jodi ami ekdom thikthak ekti lekha likhe feli tobe to amar ar sondhan thakbe na. sutorang kobita sekhanei sesh hoye jabe. amra kobita likhi ba bola jay kobitake hoye uthte dei notun notun bhabe , bhongimay, soundorje. ebong sei hoye othar dike joto bhanga gora tar experiment, result egole notun bhabe proyog - etai amader/amar kabita.
amar kabitar namkoroNta keu bujhte na parle , ami bhison bhabe dukkhito. kSHoma korbe. tobe Anurodh:
pls nam bad diye pore dekhun to kemon laglo.......
AASHOLE AAMI JE SHADHONA THEKE BA CHORCHA THEKE KOBITA LIKHI..AAMR MONE HOW ONUBHOB R BODH NIYE AAMDER SOMOY KOBITA LIKHE CHOLECHE...;ABHISEC,MANIKDA......AKHNE JARA JARA LIKHECHN SOBAI AAMR PRIYO KOBI.
AMDER SOMOYE K BOJHAR JONEY AE KOBITA GULO PROA DORKAR..EKHANE SUNNO DOSHOK PHUTE THUK...AAMR AAMR JEMN KOBITA E BNECHE THAKA.....AMR SOB KICHU..
namkoron jodi kono kobitake niyontron kore fele tobe to bhison bipod. ekghyeye hoye jete pare kabitati.
jai hok, kobitar nam asole probeshok chara ar kichu na. eti ekti cahlika -ekti tool hisebeo dekha jete pare.
jehetu amar kobitar namkoron niye alochona shuru hoyechilo tai (jodio eta amar dayitto noy) ami jebhabe namtike bhebechilam ta ektu bolchi--- 'ANUSWAR' asole amar kache adhidoibik ekti uccharon. eti sudhu sobdo noy, borong shobdoke otikrom kore ek aloukik jatrar proyas, jekhane ami chetona o obochetoner baireo ek utbhase pouche jai atohhpor likhte pari "he anuswar..." etike invocation o bolte paro. kinba anno kichu.
eta darun.amra ai blog ke EKHON BANGLA KABITAR KAGAJER jure dilam.akhon theke ekhane akdam apnara apnader natun lekha gulo pathan.ja amra amader bhalo laga theke EKHON er print version a chapte chai.carry on anupam ar sakale.eta amader natun bhubaner akta sundar angso haye uthuk.kabita aro tar natun path ke hkuje pak.sakle bhalo thakben.bhalo rakhben. atanu bandyopadhyay.editor.ekhon bangla kabitar kagaj.jalpaiguri.amder mail id - atanubandyopadhyay_ekhon@rediffmail.com.mane karle ekhano o lekha pathate paren.m)9434746600/9609734155
Manik osamanyo laglo..Souptik o bhalo.. Avishek er onyo podyo agey poRa chhilo tai jani o onek bhalo lekhe er cheye..Anupam bolechhey songhotir sadhona korar proyojon nei...amio mani..kintu eta ekta rekha matro...songhoto howar dorkar na thakleo pathoker kachhey ekta ortho asa proyojon...seta nirorthok ortho holeo..eibar ek ek pathoker kachhey oi rekhata ek ekjaygay tana.. amar nijer money hoyechhey Avisheker ei podyotay seitir khamti royechhey...kichhuta osonghoto..kintu sei osonghoto obostha ta kobi chan ni..orthat..seta kortey cheyechhen bolei kichhu chNeRa chitro dhoriyechhen eta money hoyni..tai amar poRey money holo kobi kothao ekta utterno hotey parlen na bodhhoy ei podye...
Manik er bhasa chayan e jemon obhinobotwo achhey...procholito noy kintu samogrik podyer nirikhey, amar kachhey seta etotai sukho pathyo je tor tor korey khuley jaay kichhu janala... ami etai boltey chaichhilam... bhasa oprocholito, chitro osompurno kimba chhondo osongbodhho hok na kshoti nei...kintu pathok hisebe amar dabi oi janla khullo kina... Amitava Nag
parle porer prakash e arupratan ghosh, aritra sanyal, sanghamitra haldar o animikh patrer kobita rakhun.. era shunyer gora theke likhe jachhe, so try to collect within the same frame.
DARUN KAJ KORCHOO..ANUPAMDA..AE SOMOYER MOTO HOYE UTHECHE KOBITA...PORIBORTON CHAI ..SORBORTRO........NOTUN KICHU LEKHA CHAI..TA BHALO LAGUK R CHAI NA THAKUK....NOTUN KICHU CHAI..PURNO DNACH AAMR R BHALO LAGE NA...R LAGE NA..MANUSH NOTUN JINISH CHAYE..KARON SHE SOTH....
Amar ejta kobita dorkar nam ba kobir nam mone nei tobe shesher line bolte pari ”তখন এই কবিতাটির উপর নির্ভর করছে আনেক কিছু” onek porichito r jonoprio ekti kobita. karo kase thakle doya kore nhrayhan@gmail.com ei thikanay pathaben....othoba link pathtaben.
SUBHO BIJOYA
ReplyDeleteRamit: 'bijbopon' bhalokotha- kintu eto jouno gondho, shobdo keno?!! kabitay cubic ba jyamitik je proyas ta khub bhalo laglo. aroo ektu bhalo hote p[arto- jemon
namte
namte....
siRi baniyecho -namcho sirir dhap diye; goriyeo to namte parte seta bodh hoy bhalo hoto tai na?
erpor ghora tao bhalo. brittakar pothe .. ghurte ghurte fer ekii bindute fire gele.
Shobdo choyon darun laglo, dushshahoshik.
Abhishek: ashhiner ghonta chuNye nokshatrrer kontho hoye gache... khub bhalo
onek linei mon chuNye jay
Satyam: ei lekhati khub bhalo !!!khub sahaj saral uccharan.. etai kabitar sabtheke boro paoya
eta DREAM POETRY bolle bhul hobe na asha kori.
Souptik: 'URur pashe bose achi bhaNga Utsab '- Ramit er lekhatir sofol uccharan, kichu na boleo sob kichu bole deoya...
r oi sesh hoye 'JENO' likhle --- durdanto. pathok thik nijer moto kore khule nite parpe bhabnar oligoli
Manik: ????????
motamot chaichi.
MANIK SAHA.
manik taar kobitae natun ebong purono-k melaate paare chmotkaar . ekivaabe melaae totsomo ebong totvobo-k . saap ebong jol protik hote paarto , hoeni bole take dhonyobaad . ei kobita deoaa jaak guruchondali-k . ei porisorer kobita . updated already .
ReplyDeletemanik: dhonnobad
ReplyDeleteare manik babu ekhane!!..bhalo bhalo bes bes....
ReplyDeleteachha ghorita thik nei mone hochhe!!!
ReplyDeleteavisek....bhalo laglo lekha..tobe oi "songlap" ta "dialog" holo ....okhanta golmal thekche....
ReplyDeletetobe ami bektigotobhabe biswas kori kobitar byakhhya deoa kobir kaj noy.......
duronto udyog.....
ReplyDeletechalio jao.
ReplyDeletearo aneker kobita collect koro.
amio linkta anyader frwd kore dichhi.
RAMIT DEY--- SUBHO BIJAYA SABAIKE
ReplyDeleteAvisekh er ----nakkhater kantho porlam-- kharap lageni kintu kothao mone hoyeche line gulo akta onnotake hath dhore tene niye jacche na sesh porjonto barong ak akta line satontro --jar phole overall kobitar bhba abong bhasa manjari khubi sundor holeo kobitata kothao aktu alga hoye jacche
sauptik- kohol--lekhata besh bhalo -- bises kore "TANER BEBAK JURE AMON SOHAG" ba " hu hu buke paragchinho sthir" angso gulo chuye jay
satyam--porikalpona--- sadharan bhasay sundor presentation anubhutir-- bhalo legeche ak kathay-
Manik da- anuswar---lekhata jatariti bhalo abong tan dhore rakhe tabe bayktigato bhabe kobitar namer sathe sampurno kobitar bhab ta ami nije thik bujhe uthte parini- jodio amar byaktigato abhimat kobi kakhonoi daybaddho nay tar anubhutir byabocched er---ak kathay KOBITA TA PORTE BHALO LAGE
ro parar appekkhay roilam..........
sokoler kobitai valo laglo.jamon dhora jak prothome romit ar kobitati- amar mone hoyechhe je otate akta visual effect achhe.tobe kobitati amar mone hoy aktu bornanar dike jhuke gachhe. souptik ar kobitar sobdo babohar valo.
ReplyDeletesujoneshu,
ReplyDeleteekhane je lekhaguli chapa hocche ta khub porishilito eboNg shobder lagam dhore ek duronto chola. sutorang sonhoto.
je commentgulo eseche segulo khub bhalo O dorkari. kenona jodi ami ekdom thikthak ekti lekha likhe feli tobe to amar ar sondhan thakbe na. sutorang kobita sekhanei sesh hoye jabe. amra kobita likhi ba bola jay kobitake hoye uthte dei notun notun bhabe , bhongimay, soundorje. ebong sei hoye othar dike joto bhanga gora tar experiment, result egole notun bhabe proyog - etai amader/amar kabita.
amar kabitar namkoroNta keu bujhte na parle , ami bhison bhabe dukkhito. kSHoma korbe. tobe
Anurodh:
pls nam bad diye pore dekhun to kemon laglo.......
bhalo thako/thakun. subheccha.
manik je kathata bolechhe , seta nie aalochonaar obokaash aachhe . kobita-r naamkoron kotota dorkaar ? kobita-r naam ki kobita-k kichhutaa holeo roikhik korte chaae ? naam naa raakhle kobitatake chihito koraa sombhob hoeto noe .
ReplyDeletejemon maniker naam manik , aamar naam anupam ... seivaabei ki ekti kobita-r dike aamra taakate pari na ?
tobe naamkoroner ekta psychological impact to aachhei paathoker upore .
amar ekta kobitar boier naam aami rekhechhilam : JAAR NAAM OPORAAJITA,SEO KINTU NAAMKORON-E HEREY JAAE . sekhaane aamar herey jaaoa-r kono baatik kintu kaaj koreni . aami sref aamar boitaake naamkoron theke baaire raakhte chaaichhilam irony obolombon kore.
Bijbopon aagei porechhilam,sristi te abar porlam,tokhono bhalo legechhilo ebaro laglo...Souptik-er lekhar shobdo byabohar chomke day,khuub bhalo kobita...tobe amar sob theke bhalo laglo Satyam aar Manikdar lekha baarbaar ei duto lekha porei cholechhi...
ReplyDeleteAASHOLE AAMI JE SHADHONA THEKE BA CHORCHA THEKE KOBITA LIKHI..AAMR MONE HOW ONUBHOB R BODH NIYE AAMDER SOMOY KOBITA LIKHE CHOLECHE...;ABHISEC,MANIKDA......AKHNE JARA JARA LIKHECHN SOBAI AAMR PRIYO KOBI.
ReplyDeleteAMDER SOMOYE K BOJHAR JONEY AE KOBITA GULO PROA DORKAR..EKHANE SUNNO DOSHOK PHUTE THUK...AAMR AAMR JEMN KOBITA E BNECHE THAKA.....AMR SOB KICHU..
AAMR KHUB PRIYO UTHECEH
PAKHI URE JAYE AAGUNER UDDESHE
AE BHABE SHIT TAP PABE
SORIRE SORIRE
Rangeet Mitra
kobita-r namkoron bishoyti kintu khub sporshokator. oneke namkorontike bishesh pradhanno diye thaken,(prossno ashe: omuk kobitar namkoroner sathokata alochona koro.)abar anno keu namtake sajotne ekti swabhabik porjay bole mone koren. ami kintu 2y dole.
ReplyDeletenamkoron jodi kono kobitake niyontron kore fele tobe to bhison bipod. ekghyeye hoye jete pare kabitati.
jai hok, kobitar nam asole probeshok chara ar kichu na. eti ekti cahlika -ekti tool hisebeo dekha jete pare.
jehetu amar kobitar namkoron niye alochona shuru hoyechilo tai (jodio eta amar dayitto noy) ami jebhabe namtike bhebechilam ta ektu bolchi---
'ANUSWAR' asole amar kache adhidoibik ekti uccharon. eti sudhu sobdo noy, borong shobdoke otikrom kore ek aloukik jatrar proyas, jekhane ami chetona o obochetoner baireo ek utbhase pouche jai atohhpor likhte pari "he anuswar..."
etike invocation o bolte paro. kinba anno kichu.
avishek-er kobita-r ekta aalada byapaar aachhe . o je ghoraana-e likhchhe , setaa kichhuta Dhiman-k mone korie dae . o kintu seta nijei korechhe . mone hoe na Dhiman-k nie or khub chinta bhaabna kichhu chhilo . hoeto porei ni .
ReplyDeleteei lekhaa khub medhanirbhor . aabeg niontrn korte hole ei bhongi khub mulyobaan .
ektaa kaata kaata bhaab aachhe ... seta aamar vaalo bolei mone hoe . songhotir saadhona ei somoyer kobike korte hobe setaa khub joruri noe . borong naa koraai vaalo .
souptik lyric likhechhe . vaalo lekhaa . lyric ei muhurte ekta proshnochinho . o sei bipojjonok jaaega-e sundor khelechhe . BOSONTOBASIN vaalo proyog .
ektukro sfotkier moto ekti lekhaa diechhe Satyam .
eta darun.amra ai blog ke EKHON BANGLA KABITAR KAGAJER jure dilam.akhon theke ekhane akdam apnara apnader natun lekha gulo pathan.ja amra amader bhalo laga theke EKHON er print version a chapte chai.carry on anupam ar sakale.eta amader natun bhubaner akta sundar angso haye uthuk.kabita aro tar natun path ke hkuje pak.sakle bhalo thakben.bhalo rakhben. atanu bandyopadhyay.editor.ekhon bangla kabitar kagaj.jalpaiguri.amder mail id - atanubandyopadhyay_ekhon@rediffmail.com.mane karle ekhano o lekha pathate paren.m)9434746600/9609734155
ReplyDeleteproti saptaahe change karaar planTaa daarun.
ReplyDeleteRamit-er lekhaaTi ashaadhaaron laaglo, taar chaotic effect er janyo.
ei namkoronta chirokali amar somossya....
ReplyDeletear 'EKHON' pabo kamon kore? sompadok janaben?
....abar bolchi ghorita thik koro...golmal ache....!!!
ReplyDeleteekhon patiram college str a paoa jabe.nahale kolkata tei tarun kabi tanmoy roy er kache.or mobile no. 9832715126
ReplyDeletekobta-r kaaj somoy-k aswikaar koraa . tobu Indrani Bakshi-r katha mene nie ghori thik koraa holo .
ReplyDeleteporer post-e ei kobir kobita thaakchhe . sei songe nishigandha ... shuvrashankar nag ... hoeto amitava praharaj ... ebong indranil ghosh ... rangeet mitra ...
souptiker last line...pagol pagol...durdanta
ReplyDeleteManik osamanyo laglo..Souptik o bhalo.. Avishek er onyo podyo agey poRa chhilo tai jani o onek bhalo lekhe er cheye..Anupam bolechhey songhotir sadhona korar proyojon nei...amio mani..kintu eta ekta rekha matro...songhoto howar dorkar na thakleo pathoker kachhey ekta ortho asa proyojon...seta nirorthok ortho holeo..eibar ek ek pathoker kachhey oi rekhata ek ekjaygay tana.. amar nijer money hoyechhey Avisheker ei podyotay seitir khamti royechhey...kichhuta osonghoto..kintu sei osonghoto obostha ta kobi chan ni..orthat..seta kortey cheyechhen bolei kichhu chNeRa chitro dhoriyechhen eta money hoyni..tai amar poRey money holo kobi kothao ekta utterno hotey parlen na bodhhoy ei podye...
ReplyDeleteManik er bhasa chayan e jemon obhinobotwo achhey...procholito noy kintu samogrik podyer nirikhey, amar kachhey seta etotai sukho pathyo je tor tor korey khuley jaay kichhu janala... ami etai boltey chaichhilam... bhasa oprocholito, chitro osompurno kimba chhondo osongbodhho hok na kshoti nei...kintu pathok hisebe amar dabi oi janla khullo kina...
Amitava Nag
parle porer prakash e arupratan ghosh, aritra sanyal, sanghamitra haldar o animikh patrer kobita rakhun..
ReplyDeleteera shunyer gora theke likhe jachhe, so try to collect within the same frame.
arup-er kobita 1st post-e chhilo .
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ReplyDeleteDARUN KAJ KORCHOO..ANUPAMDA..AE SOMOYER MOTO HOYE UTHECHE KOBITA...PORIBORTON CHAI ..SORBORTRO........NOTUN KICHU LEKHA CHAI..TA BHALO LAGUK R CHAI NA THAKUK....NOTUN KICHU CHAI..PURNO DNACH AAMR R BHALO LAGE NA...R LAGE NA..MANUSH NOTUN JINISH CHAYE..KARON SHE SOTH....
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duswapna k ari kore, cigarater dhoya k duhate sariye, natun kore vabte basay.................
ReplyDeleteAmar ejta kobita dorkar nam ba kobir nam mone nei tobe shesher line bolte pari ”তখন এই কবিতাটির উপর নির্ভর করছে আনেক কিছু” onek porichito r jonoprio ekti kobita. karo kase thakle doya kore nhrayhan@gmail.com ei thikanay pathaben....othoba link pathtaben.
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