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ektaa joruri ghosonaa . dorshok-der BAAK-swaadhinotaa maathae rekhei bolchhi . keu jodi kaar-o proti , senior baa junior , ashaalin vaasa proyog koren montobyo koraar chhole , byaktigoto osuaa prokaash koren , byaktigoto aakromon hoe , sei montobyo ke korechhen naa dekhei aami delete korte baadhyo thaakbo . anupam mukhopadhyay

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  1. sudhu kabita nie katha hok . prochur katha hok . katha suru hok .

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  2. Thank you,Anupam, ei je Post chalu thaklo, se janyo abhnandan janai. Tabe tor 'judge'- er bhumikay filtration jaruri holeo aro darkar active sanchalaker bhumika. Or, 'Balmiky'r mato 'mukto-manche' je ja khushi boluk, open to all kore chokh bandho kore bose thak, parer post er janyo.Kobira kabe biradori, brotherhood shikhbe, kabe sahonshil habe, ekdin bhore habei.

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  3. Shuvankar,darun hoyeche kobitata.Mrityu theke rode parjanto pather ulto rath khub bhalo hoyeche. Etai atichetanar kathaa. Bididshar 'othom' e ese khub haslam majaay, shabdo dhwanir majaay.

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  4. SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYFriday, March 05, 2010

    Avijit, Manik, Bhaskarjyoti, Anupam valo laglo

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  5. Indro, football asadharan hoyeche.Er success story holo amar mathay kobitar bij pute deya. aj bosbo koyekta kobita likhte. football amake trigger koreche.

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  6. Abhijietr kobitatio (Moyur Legeche Jwale) bhalo laglo. Sanhato-baak, kintu upomar bhir ektu lose koreche bhasar texture.

    Abhijit Bera 3+2 matray khele geche kobitata. er built-ta sekele hoye geche bhai.

    Hrisikesh, kobitata amar bhalo lageni, karon kobitar modhye kobike etota performance korte dekhle sandeho hoy, se perform na korle ki kobitata thaktona! Kobi eto kaj kare keno?

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  7. Rongeet, tuio darshonik hoye uthechis.Kobir darshan thake, kobitay thakena .. tahole kemon hoy? try. ar decoration kobitay kono value add korchena, barong axargulo lukiye thakche.

    Sayontan, Abbas amar priyo. Taste of Cherry amio dekhechi.Tomar choto kobitata asambhab bhalo hoyeche, amake chintay feleche. Ar lekho erakam pl.

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  8. Bhaskar, tomar kobitay ami ebar darshan-er shese mantabyo pelam.Eta kobitake xunno kare, amar mone hoy.Tumi barong ektu alo dao.

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  9. Somnath, ebar kintu hatash korlo tor kobita. Feelingtai gore uthlona shesparjanto. aro bhalobasa,swapno,nirmamota,ar ektu paapi alo thakuk kobitay, mayakata rode poruk.

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  10. Sabshese Anupam, ei khelna garir tokkor ami shabde shunechi. Kobitatar unusual construction, unusual word placing chaos toiry korleo past linkage poriskar.Kobitar uddeshyo thakle sonar machi khun hoye jai.

    Ei post-e anek bhalo kobita pelam. Abhisek ar Sanjuke miss korlam.

    Baak - er jay hoke.

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  11. Souvik dar kobita ta besh laglo--alpo porisare anek katha bole jay--

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  12. barinda

    sonaar maachhi ... shakti ... haa haa haa ...

    kintu linkage-ta ki ? aami nije kintu jaani naa . ei kobita jokhon suru holo , kothae thaambe aami jaantaam naa . ses holo , baa holo naa , jokhon ... vule gechhi kothae suru korechhilaam .

    ektaa naam deoaar jonne fire takaalam . jaa hok ektaa naam dilaam .

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  13. souvik protik byabohaar korechho . kaak ... lenin-murti ... khaabaarer packet ... sawb protik . backdated . kintu interesting ebong from the depth of a true heart .

    flat tintawlaa keno ? bohutawl noe keno ?

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  14. avijit dashgupta sei olpo koeykjawn kobir onyotomo jnaara 90s ebong shunyo doshoker mailbondhon ghotaachhen bangla kobitae.

    avijit , ei byapaarta nie aami tomaar boi review korte gie likhchhi gourshankar bandyopadhyay-er CHAANDROMAAS potrika-e . ekhaane details-e bolle sekhaaner charm ebong interest nosto hoe jaabe .

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  15. rangeet , kolkata-r tarun kobi-der moddhe ei muhurte sawbchaite saarthokvaabe nijer kobita-k nijer porisawr-er manifesto kore tulchhe . o kokhono 'vaalo kobita' lekhaa-r chestaa koreni aamader blog-e . se jonne oke thanks . oi chesta jeno kokhono o naa kore .

    he is going to give our future poetry a rude shock . shock treatment . sudhu establishment-er pichhone douronota ektu bondho koruk . dub dik nijer govir-e .

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  16. shuvankar , jodi 'mrityu shobdo' naa likhe 'mrityushobdo' likhte ... suchonaata aamar kaachhe priyotoro hoto . 'mrityu' je ektaa shobdo , setaa bole dite holo keno tomaake ?

    ekta kobitaar suchonaashobdo 'mrityu' ...

    shobdotaake naa raakhar byabosthaa korte paarte naa shuvankar ? aarektu bistaar suru thekei ...

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  17. aare barinda!!!!!

    sonaar maachhi . aami nijei likhechhi 'swarnomoe maachhi' !!!!

    ki kore holo etaa !!

    aamar sub-conscius-e Shakti Chattopadhyay !!!!!!!! eje dangerous byapaar !!!!!!!!!!

    ei kobitata CHAANDROMAAS-k debo . bhaaggis ekhono copy kore felini !

    paaltate hobe ekhuni .

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  18. SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYFriday, March 05, 2010

    Anupam, 3-tola , bohutol noy karon bohutol-e ar biriyani khawa hoyna, pizza khawa hoye, ar kaak biriyani orthat chaal chhaRa kichhu khete pabar ashao rakhena..

    jaani cliched ebong backdated, tobu 'interesting' kobita lekhar ekta ichhe shobsomoy kaj korey asoley..

    :)

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  19. souvik ,

    vul bujhle . tumi jaano tumi backdated lekho . ichhe korei lekho . kintu tomaar kobita aamar vaalo laage setaao jaano to ?

    aami interesting bollam , kaaron ei kobita ektaa saamajik ebong raajnoitik paath pes korchhe . setaa aagrojawnok . seta upovog-er noe , monojog-er saamogri .

    interesting maane kintu jaa theke aagroho jonmaae . taai naa ?

    kintu tumi nischoi bolbe naa , ei kobita 2010 saaler ekjawn tarun kobi-r signature bahawn korchhe ? ei kobita ki 70s baa 60s-er kono kobi likhle awBAAK hotaam aamra ? tumi bolo ?

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  20. aar aami to nijei awjante Shakti Chattopadhyay-er sonaar maachhi khun kore fellaam !

    oops !!!!

    bhaaggis lekhaata blog-e diechhilaam . ki kore holo bujhte paarchhi naa .

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  21. vote daao sokole . vote dite vulo naa . loktaake chhere jete dio naa .

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  22. mritu sabde ebar ekta jhar uthuk......kabitar surute mrittu sabder babhar ei ki natun...........barindar atichetanar katha mathai rekhe balchi jibaner kinba darsaner ulto dike hatle khub besi khati ki.......kabita jekhane ses hoy sekhan theke jeman aro ekta kabita suru hai temni mritu thekeo jibane fera jete pare...ete sabder babharniye aro katha hok.......

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  23. Shubhankar, amar poxe beshi kathaa balaa thik habe na.Tate bhul bojhar bij theke jai. Tui amar atichetanar refference-ta dhorte parlina. Kobir mrityuchetona thakte pare, kintu oi point theke chirachorito shabdaboli holo bishad,andhar,paap,parolok,shanti,leen hote chaowa etc. oi shabdota noy, okhan theke bristi,nodi,samudro,pa bhejabar furut,eibhabe unusual walking back..ei ichheta asadharan bhabe step by step disha peyeche,ei observation-er proshongsa korechilam.Dekhchi setao aro sabdhane korte habe erpar.

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  24. bhai shuvankar

    tomaar kobita aamar etoi vaalo legechhe aami setaa die post suru korechhi . naahole aami sayantan-k die suru kortaam . he is one of the best , so far this particular post is concerned .

    aami sudhu bolchhi 'mrityu' sobdo-ta sawraasawri naa thaakle vaalo hoto . shobdo-ta bohu-byabohrito bole noe , shobdotaa boro besi nijer hoe katha bole . tomaar kaaj sohoj kore deoaar vaan kore , tomaake fnaade felaar chesta kore .

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  25. Barin da,
    Prathomei amar kobita bisleshan korar jonyo dhonyobad. kintu aro bhalobasa,swapno,nirmamota,ar ektu paapi alo thkuk bolte ki bolte cheychen jodi r ektu elaborately bolen, khub valo lagbe....Apnar kach theke aro sonar apekhay.

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  26. Anupam dake koyek saptaho age mail kore ami ekTu kaRa sampadok hote bolechhilam kintu tar bodh hoy darkar porbe na karon blog nijei nijer chhakni hoye uthchhe...kromosho

    ebarer post er sabcheye bhelo legechhe avijit, indranil aar ar anupam-da r lekha...avijit aar indranil darun likhechho..bisheshato je bistarTa niye likhechho seTa khub-i irshonoyo...ami otyonto sachetan bhabe irshoniyo byabohar korlam kintu

    kobitake notun samoy-e notun hotei habe erakom kono dharoNa amar antoto nei kintu ta bole khub predictable kobita lekha-r modhye-o khub beshi krititwo nei...aar se jonnoi mar bhaSkar aar souvik er lekha bhalo lageni

    manik kobitaTa-r onek jaygay onek ingit pele-o puro lekhaTa samonjasyopurN0 collage mone holo na...jani na keno

    rangit er lekha niye ami kono comment korbo na karon amar mone hoy or lekhagulo amar onek na likhte para expressions ke chhuye jaay...ebo'm amra dujon onek xetre-i eki bastob bhag kore thaki beche thakar prexite...

    amar lekha jodi karor poRe bhalo lage aar tara jodi Kirostami-r chhobi na dekhe thaken...tahole ekTai onurodh dekhe nin anondo paben

    kobita niye aar ei bhaSa o ei samoy niye aro joTil o byapok alochona r opexay roilam...

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  27. SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYSaturday, March 06, 2010

    Na na Anupam, thiky ache, ami bujhechi tumi ki bolcho. ar ta chhaRa ei byaparta ekdom cliche hoye gyache ekhon, maaney sammyobaad-er shopnovongo, communism er awlikota ittyadi..tao eta Amake chhere jayna, tai likhe feli majhe modhhye.

    ar hyan tumi jetake 'backdated' bolchho, ota ichhe korei..seta je tumi bojho, ebong aro keu keu bojhe, tar jonnye dhonnyobad..

    Shunnyo Doshok theke formally likhte shuru korleo amar kintu boyesh 33, ar amar bondhura jara ekhon praye onekdin likhe fello, tader shonge lekha shuru korle ideally amar 90 doshoker kobitalekhok howa uchit chilo- ei kawtha ami amar boi-er vumikateo likhechi. kintu agey ami likhini karon onnyo onek kichhute byasto chhilam..ekhono achi, kintu ekhon jore kore jaal chhhinno korechhi..:)

    Shunnyo Doshoker 'hallu' kobita amar valo lagena.. ebar hallu kobita bolte ki bujhi sheta ami ekhaney bojhate chaina, ar parbo-ona hoyto..kintu eta ekta awbosthan amar, ba awparogota..ei somoye dnaRiye je kobita likhche, taar kobita 'backdated' ki kore hobey? maane form ar kayday hoyto hotey paarey, kintu jiboner proti taar take backdated ki kaur hoye? jodi dhori kobita jibon thekei uthe ashe konovabey, ar ki..

    shunnyo doshoker hallu kobita boley ami kauke awpoman korte chaichhina, kono ushma-o prokash korchhina..asha kori notun kono jhoR uthbena..:)

    Ebarer Kobisommelon-e Anupam, tomar chithita khub valo. ei blog-er kawthao uthey eseche..valo laglo..

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  28. NA BARINDA amake vulbujhona ami sahaj vabe sab katha balte valo basi tai nischit kare balte pari atichetanata amar aro rapta kara kabitar jannai prayojan,tomar ei alochanata ekjan kabir chokhke aro natun vabe dekhar ichhe jagiye tule..........tomar katha sabsamay amar kache kangkhita.

    r anupamda kichu mane korona ami bujhte perechi tumi ja balte cheyecho.asale lekhata lekhar par lekhata nie besi vabini,satti balte ki mrittu sabdatake anna kono angike tule dharle kabitata aro ekta vinna matra peto .........ei katha mathai railo........bloger prai prtiti kabitai par lam darun sab kabita kabitar alochanate indrar kabita theke tomar kita pratheke sabder jeman natun bodh mith gare diche temni kabitar alochana kabitar bistare kabir vabna takre anekta jarita karche R Arjanilda tomake anurodh tumi chole jeo na ...........

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  29. SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYSaturday, March 06, 2010

    Ar amar sotti-i mon-e hoyna 90 er kobita ar jibondorshon-er shongey Shunnyo-r kobita ar jibondorshoner khub ekta faraak ache. '91-e Bharat-e Bisshayan ashar porey, amader ekhono ghor kateni, amra tarporer shobai ekhono ekta integrated community more or less, eta ami mon-e kori, eta niye kagoje likheochhi 2 bochhor agey. 80-r shonge 90-er je parthokkyo, 90-er shongey Shunnyo-r totota noye, hotei parena..

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  31. ইন্দ্রনীলের ফুটবল (কিম্বা 'পদকন্দুক') অসাধারণ!!

    শুভঙ্করের লেখা ভাল লেগেছে। 'ছায়ালপনা' আর 'ওদোম' শব্দদুটি বেশ।

    রংগীতের প্রচেষ্টা ভাল লাগলো, তবে 'ছবি'র অংশে আরেকটু মনযোগী না হলে, সেটি তার প্রাসঙ্গিকতা হারাতে পারে।

    সোমনাথের লেখায় যে ভাবে দৃশ্যনির্মাণ হয়, গড়ে ওঠে ছোটো ছোটো মুহূর্তের ছবি, তা ভাল লাগে।

    অনুপমের দুটি লেখাই ভাল। তবে শিরোনামহীন ছোটো কবিতাটি ("সায়ন্তন তোমাকে ... আবার মনে পড়ল ।") আমার বেশি ভালো লেগেছে। খুবই ব্যতিক্রমী ও ভিন্নধর্মী লেখা।

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  32. SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYSaturday, March 06, 2010

    Bolo bhai Anupam, bolo..:)

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  33. একটা ছেলে অন্ধকারে আমাকে হাত ধরে টানছে ;
    আমার ভয়ের কোন কারণ নেই ভেবে
    একটা ধাতব কিছু নিয়ে পিছু পিছু আসে
    তারপর একটা বেড়াল জিক-জ্যাগ কেটে দিল

    আমি,পিছনে একবারের বেশি না তাকিয়ে,বেল বাজাতে থাকলাম ।

    রঙ্গীত মিত্র

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  34. 90 er sathe shunyer je mul mil bole souvik-da jeTake ba je ghatonaTake chihnito korechhe seTail amar mone hoy shuNyer sathe 90 er mul parthokyo...bishwayon

    90 te bharote bishwayan esechhilo shudhu north block e aar shunye seta esechhe samosto koNe...tar sathe sab theke baRo byapaarTa hoyechhe jogajog e jeTa kono na kono bhabe protyek-ke eka korechhe ebo'm je jogajogTake shurur dike niyontroN kara samvob hochchhilo bishwayan er tool gulo diye seta porer dike (porun ekhon) aar samvob holo na ei jogajog toiri korte para aar na paraTa aabar na-paraTa ke otikrom karaTa-i shunyer sabcheye baRo boishishtyo o challenge....amar dharoNa prithibite er cheye joTil samoy aar kakhono aseni aar er cheye joTil o proshsto kobita lekhar samoy o aar aseni...

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  35. aami khub aahoto hoyechii....aami aamr moto...sytm birodhi...aamr mone how er theke beshi nijer somondhe na bollai bhalo...aamr akhn mon-mejaj bhalo na...bneche thakata o bhalo lagche na....hotash...akdom bhalo lagche na....;aami sopno dekhi...aamr nijer moto porashono r jogot r prem niye thaki...aamr songee na mishle bojha jabe na..aama k sobai bhul bojhe...k jane ami e bhul..oporadhi...aama k khoma kroo..aami akhn khub koste aachi..;aami to obhinow korte pari na..lukiye rakhte pari na....tai likhlm..nijer somondhee...jani na...kobe kobita likhte parbo..akta kobita....kobe parbo..k jane??ae niye ghum neye...paglamo bache..parchi na...bhalo lagche na..k u ama k bujhche na keno?? jani na..akhn 12.30 baje,,,rat hoyeche..aamr barir lokjn ghumoche...likhte iche korche khub..kintu jani na

































    sudu opekha korchii...kobe likhte parbo...aktakobita.

    ae blog aamr priyo...akhankar sob lekha i aamr bhalo lagee..darun lage...aami comnt na diye tai pori..porte bhalo lage..pathok to..tai kobita path kori....kore jachi..akta matal ashceh chnader jole ..........


    rangeet

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  36. EI SAMAYER KABITAKI KATATA SBDA O ARTHA GUNKE CHAPIYE GIYECHE ?EI NIYE KATHA HOK

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  37. আসলে আমরা এমন একটা যুগের মধ্যে বাস করছি যেখানে কোনো ধারণা স্পষ্ট নয় . কোনো মতবাদ , কোনো তত্ব , সহজ করে কি বলা যাই আদৌ ? আর আমরা যা প্রকাশ করতে পারি তাই যদি গদ্য হয় আর যা প্রকাশ করতে পারি না তাই যদি কবিতা হয় তবে কবিতাকে তবে কবিতাকে প্রচলিত ধারণা আর গঠনের বিরুদ্ধ্বে না গিয়ে হয়ত উপায়নেই.

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  38. hrisikesh

    thik likhechho . ei porisawr bivrawm-er . eke prakash korte hole eko-roikhik ebong susonghoto kabyo-vaasa jawthesto noe .

    rangeet mitra-r kobita-e ei byapaar khub vaalovaabe ghotchhe . oke aami ei jonnei gurutbo dei .

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  39. রঙ্গীত, অভিষেক,অনুপম এদের কবিতা শুধু অনবদ্য নয় নিজস্ব , একান্ত নিজস্ব . তার ভাষা গঠন প্রকাশ সবই একদম পোস্ট-modern . এর বিরুদ্বে আমরা মতামত প্রকাশ করতে পারি কিন্তু অস্বীকার করতে পারব না , কারণ এটাই হয়ত ভবিষ্যতের বাংলা কবিতা . কবিতা সবসময় বহুমাত্রিক , এখন তা আরো বেশি করে open - ended . তাই কবিকে এখন হতেই হবে intellectual . ন্যাকা ন্যাকা লিরিকের দিন হয়ত শেষ . যা বলা হযে গেছে তা আর কবিরা বলবে না. উত্তর রবীন্দ্র কবিতা যেমন তার নিজস্ব ধারা নিয়ে চলেছে , উত্তর জীবনানন্দ ,উত্তর শক্তি , উত্তর জয় কবিদের ও তাই নিজস্ব ধারা গ্রহণ করতেই হবে , বিরোধাভাস পেলেও হবে , কারণ না হলে কবিতা এগোবে না .

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  40. kono matobad sposhTo noy kono kichhu samne nei...eirakom hahutash karar kono karoN nei...ke bollo amader samne kono tatwo-bishwo nei kono matobaD nei...aar shudhui ekta osthir samoy achhe....amader samne ager o notun samosto tatwo matobad ebo'm souvagyokrome eder konoTai amader gile felte pareni...aar amar dharoNa agami samoy-e-o aar parbe na

    amader samne ekTa khub ghaTonabohul onek onek kichhu miliye ekTa joTil samoy achhe aar taar prodhan karoN ei samoyTa abirato poribarton hoye jachchhe sei poribarton aar poribartoner prexite amader protikriyagulo-ke onek kichhu bala jaay...kintu ta jeno shudhu balar jonnoi na bala hoy...

    ei samoy-e likhte hole onek beshi poRte habe jante habe...seTa moulikata-r onyotamo sharto hoye uThchhe aar seTa bhalor jonnoi hochchhe...

    notun bhaSha aangik bairer saaj se to bodlatei thake thakbe-o kintu bhetorer poribarton-Tai asol poribarton..aar amra protyeke je poribartanTa niye likhte beshi utsahito bodh kori seTa niye likhi...kintu Jara sotti sotti likhchhe tara ei samoy-er modhye dariye likhe ei samoyTake perobar chesTa kore cholechhe...aar kore cholbe

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  41. anupamdar kabitatite kakhanno ekta machir adale kakhano ekta chhotto dhakkar adale ei bloger ba bakker ektu dhhakka debar ichheta anubhab karechhi.anekta dhhaka deua geche tahale ..........aro ...........ekta antahin..........

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  42. kabita pare kabir mon bhalo hole aar ki chai.subhankar,sayantan.indra,rangeet,soubhik,manik sabiai alada baishista nie likheche.bhalo lagbe na?rangeet tor lekhay kabir aanchan.kabi bolei to?kabir kichu hoy na re.kichui hoy na.sishirer ki hoy?kabita kono tarka noy.chetanar karukaaj.jaar kaache jemon.tabe
    jadi puronor punrabritee hoy takhan bore kore.ei bloge boredome ta nei.tabe choto choto
    dukhho,na-pawa,maya.bhalobasa,e sab jibane lege
    aache.darshan ei sab dushito kare.ektu jeno abhabh sei dushaner.anupam ektu kheal koro nijer
    kabitay.blog darun hochhe.chalte thakuk.somnath
    ekta kabitai pather sesh noy.aar path jekhane sesh hoy,shuru hoy kabita.
    SWAPAN ROY.

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  43. swapanda ... swapanda ...

    darshan aamar kaachhe not = philosophy . ekta jawgot-darshan naathaakle keu kobi hoe naaki !aar sei darshan keu bolte paare naaki ? taahole to pawromo-hangsha hoe jetaam dada .

    ektaa natun maathaa aar puraano hridoe nie aami likhi swapanda . je daaker vetore kNepe othaa thaakbe , taar ektaa awrtho-o thaakbe ei je --- meyetaa vaalo gitaar baajaate paarto , keno haarmoniaam khule bose aachhe .

    etukui .

    darshan jotokkhon dekhaa ... aami taar haat dhore roilaam .

    tawbe philosophy ektaa western concept . otaa-r songe aamar kobita-r kono jog nei .

    ei kobitata pore keu bolte paarbe aamar 'philosophy' kichhu aachhe ? ki setaa , bolte paarbe ?

    paarbe naa . kaaron eta aasole mock-philosophy . aapni-e 'HIGHWAY'-r vumikaa-e likhechhilen ,''anupam juktir bivrawm raakhe kobita-e .''

    etaa-o philosophy-r bivrawm . dushan ki kore holo bujhie din ebaar .

    text nie khelaa-r-o to ektaa maja aachhe . setaa nebo naa ?

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  44. ei kobitata 'chaandromaas'-k dilaam . tobe onek bodle felechhi . prothom 2t line ure gechhe . 'sangsthan' shobdota ure gechhe . 'by God' hoe gechhe 'by chance'. 'maachhi' sompurno vanished . 'maachhi' shobdo-ta ekbaar esechhe maatro . 'sonaar shohor' hoechhe 'omega sonaar'.

    blog khub upokaar korlo kobitatar . bises kore barinda . naahole lekhaata nie aami aar kaatakuti kortaam naa .

    natun naam 'dhaakka'.

    'chaandromaas' patrikaa berole dekho blog-er bondhu-ra .

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  45. swapan da,
    pather suru theke ses porjonto protiti padhokkhepe thak kobita....pother ses eo thak, abar surur ageo thak.....
    ei sankhay sobai ache,sob e ache...tao jano kichu ekta nei...Aryanil da k visan mis korlam BAAK er ei sankhatite....

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  46. amar a kobita nia barindar vabna mene nichchi.anupam tumi ak notun dike alo felle.ami a vabe khakhono dhekhini.akta katha
    --3rd line-e 'kobe'sobdo ti chilo._"ghorer lalon kobe achena douroaa".besh valo hoache 'baak'.ae mattro pora suru korlam . avijit dasgupta






























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  47. ebarer songkhya ....asaapuron korlona....tar modhhey hrisikes.....indronil....somnath-er lekha khub bhalo legeche....

    bhaskarjyoti -hotas korlo ebare...

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  48. taraye taraye aami ,sohor gnethe choli ; nirghum asheche : dorjayee

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  49. Dhanyabad. khub bhalo laglo

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