tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post1908204689211234914..comments2023-08-27T15:36:01.227+05:30Comments on বাক্: 24tH pOstanupam mukhopadhyayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05319362107961137116noreply@blogger.comBlogger50125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-23870005646726657762010-04-11T18:27:53.878+05:302010-04-11T18:27:53.878+05:30Dhanyabad. khub bhalo lagloDhanyabad. khub bhalo lagloএক খন্ড ভুবনhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13144751157483313312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-91711662383615594472010-03-13T11:17:58.418+05:302010-03-13T11:17:58.418+05:30taraye taraye aami ,sohor gnethe choli ; nirghum a...taraye taraye aami ,sohor gnethe choli ; nirghum asheche : dorjayeeRANGEET MITRAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03447535490250468905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-6847693977464793842010-03-12T13:15:09.985+05:302010-03-12T13:15:09.985+05:30ebarer songkhya ....asaapuron korlona....tar modhh...ebarer songkhya ....asaapuron korlona....tar modhhey hrisikes.....indronil....somnath-er lekha khub bhalo legeche....<br /><br />bhaskarjyoti -hotas korlo ebare...INDRANIL BAKSHIhttp://indrakotha.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-61975082635015690952010-03-10T00:54:48.695+05:302010-03-10T00:54:48.695+05:30amar a kobita nia barindar vabna mene nichchi.anup...amar a kobita nia barindar vabna mene nichchi.anupam tumi ak notun dike alo felle.ami a vabe khakhono dhekhini.akta katha<br />--3rd line-e 'kobe'sobdo ti chilo._"ghorer lalon kobe achena douroaa".besh valo hoache 'baak'.ae mattro pora suru korlam . avijit dasgupta <br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /> <br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />-Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-37652431635393183172010-03-08T21:39:37.779+05:302010-03-08T21:39:37.779+05:30swapan da,
pather suru theke ses porjonto protiti ...swapan da,<br />pather suru theke ses porjonto protiti padhokkhepe thak kobita....pother ses eo thak, abar surur ageo thak.....<br />ei sankhay sobai ache,sob e ache...tao jano kichu ekta nei...Aryanil da k visan mis korlam BAAK er ei sankhatite....somnathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13340651803336799019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-3474906909213911642010-03-08T19:26:31.884+05:302010-03-08T19:26:31.884+05:30ei kobitata 'chaandromaas'-k dilaam . tobe...ei kobitata 'chaandromaas'-k dilaam . tobe onek bodle felechhi . prothom 2t line ure gechhe . 'sangsthan' shobdota ure gechhe . 'by God' hoe gechhe 'by chance'. 'maachhi' sompurno vanished . 'maachhi' shobdo-ta ekbaar esechhe maatro . 'sonaar shohor' hoechhe 'omega sonaar'.<br /><br />blog khub upokaar korlo kobitatar . bises kore barinda . naahole lekhaata nie aami aar kaatakuti kortaam naa .<br /><br />natun naam 'dhaakka'.<br /><br />'chaandromaas' patrikaa berole dekho blog-er bondhu-ra .anupam mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05319362107961137116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-10405048457095675272010-03-08T19:19:00.326+05:302010-03-08T19:19:00.326+05:30swapanda ... swapanda ...
darshan aamar kaachhe n...swapanda ... swapanda ...<br /><br />darshan aamar kaachhe not = philosophy . ekta jawgot-darshan naathaakle keu kobi hoe naaki !aar sei darshan keu bolte paare naaki ? taahole to pawromo-hangsha hoe jetaam dada .<br /><br />ektaa natun maathaa aar puraano hridoe nie aami likhi swapanda . je daaker vetore kNepe othaa thaakbe , taar ektaa awrtho-o thaakbe ei je --- meyetaa vaalo gitaar baajaate paarto , keno haarmoniaam khule bose aachhe .<br /><br />etukui .<br /><br />darshan jotokkhon dekhaa ... aami taar haat dhore roilaam .<br /><br />tawbe philosophy ektaa western concept . otaa-r songe aamar kobita-r kono jog nei .<br /><br />ei kobitata pore keu bolte paarbe aamar 'philosophy' kichhu aachhe ? ki setaa , bolte paarbe ?<br /><br />paarbe naa . kaaron eta aasole mock-philosophy . aapni-e 'HIGHWAY'-r vumikaa-e likhechhilen ,''anupam juktir bivrawm raakhe kobita-e .''<br /><br />etaa-o philosophy-r bivrawm . dushan ki kore holo bujhie din ebaar .<br /><br />text nie khelaa-r-o to ektaa maja aachhe . setaa nebo naa ?anupam mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05319362107961137116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-50084179511895461302010-03-08T18:38:43.773+05:302010-03-08T18:38:43.773+05:30kabita pare kabir mon bhalo hole aar ki chai.subha...kabita pare kabir mon bhalo hole aar ki chai.subhankar,sayantan.indra,rangeet,soubhik,manik sabiai alada baishista nie likheche.bhalo lagbe na?rangeet tor lekhay kabir aanchan.kabi bolei to?kabir kichu hoy na re.kichui hoy na.sishirer ki hoy?kabita kono tarka noy.chetanar karukaaj.jaar kaache jemon.tabe<br />jadi puronor punrabritee hoy takhan bore kore.ei bloge boredome ta nei.tabe choto choto <br />dukhho,na-pawa,maya.bhalobasa,e sab jibane lege<br />aache.darshan ei sab dushito kare.ektu jeno abhabh sei dushaner.anupam ektu kheal koro nijer<br />kabitay.blog darun hochhe.chalte thakuk.somnath<br />ekta kabitai pather sesh noy.aar path jekhane sesh hoy,shuru hoy kabita.<br />SWAPAN ROY.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-33267288475847821742010-03-08T07:11:38.982+05:302010-03-08T07:11:38.982+05:30anupamdar kabitatite kakhanno ekta machir adale ka...anupamdar kabitatite kakhanno ekta machir adale kakhano ekta chhotto dhakkar adale ei bloger ba bakker ektu dhhakka debar ichheta anubhab karechhi.anekta dhhaka deua geche tahale ..........aro ...........ekta antahin..........কবিতা করিডোর https://www.blogger.com/profile/12749779499957639067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-62738202496836978112010-03-08T00:57:20.290+05:302010-03-08T00:57:20.290+05:30kono matobad sposhTo noy kono kichhu samne nei...e...kono matobad sposhTo noy kono kichhu samne nei...eirakom hahutash karar kono karoN nei...ke bollo amader samne kono tatwo-bishwo nei kono matobaD nei...aar shudhui ekta osthir samoy achhe....amader samne ager o notun samosto tatwo matobad ebo'm souvagyokrome eder konoTai amader gile felte pareni...aar amar dharoNa agami samoy-e-o aar parbe na<br /><br />amader samne ekTa khub ghaTonabohul onek onek kichhu miliye ekTa joTil samoy achhe aar taar prodhan karoN ei samoyTa abirato poribarton hoye jachchhe sei poribarton aar poribartoner prexite amader protikriyagulo-ke onek kichhu bala jaay...kintu ta jeno shudhu balar jonnoi na bala hoy...<br /><br />ei samoy-e likhte hole onek beshi poRte habe jante habe...seTa moulikata-r onyotamo sharto hoye uThchhe aar seTa bhalor jonnoi hochchhe...<br /><br />notun bhaSha aangik bairer saaj se to bodlatei thake thakbe-o kintu bhetorer poribarton-Tai asol poribarton..aar amra protyeke je poribartanTa niye likhte beshi utsahito bodh kori seTa niye likhi...kintu Jara sotti sotti likhchhe tara ei samoy-er modhye dariye likhe ei samoyTake perobar chesTa kore cholechhe...aar kore cholbeSayantan Mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01868239810204340268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-80698965726767838162010-03-07T21:13:26.054+05:302010-03-07T21:13:26.054+05:30রঙ্গীত, অভিষেক,অনুপম এদের কবিতা শুধু অনবদ্য নয় নি...রঙ্গীত, অভিষেক,অনুপম এদের কবিতা শুধু অনবদ্য নয় নিজস্ব , একান্ত নিজস্ব . তার ভাষা গঠন প্রকাশ সবই একদম পোস্ট-modern . এর বিরুদ্বে আমরা মতামত প্রকাশ করতে পারি কিন্তু অস্বীকার করতে পারব না , কারণ এটাই হয়ত ভবিষ্যতের বাংলা কবিতা . কবিতা সবসময় বহুমাত্রিক , এখন তা আরো বেশি করে open - ended . তাই কবিকে এখন হতেই হবে intellectual . ন্যাকা ন্যাকা লিরিকের দিন হয়ত শেষ . যা বলা হযে গেছে তা আর কবিরা বলবে না. উত্তর রবীন্দ্র কবিতা যেমন তার নিজস্ব ধারা নিয়ে চলেছে , উত্তর জীবনানন্দ ,উত্তর শক্তি , উত্তর জয় কবিদের ও তাই নিজস্ব ধারা গ্রহণ করতেই হবে , বিরোধাভাস পেলেও হবে , কারণ না হলে কবিতা এগোবে না .nandanikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10558742674532638603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-57181688526828136312010-03-07T16:04:52.218+05:302010-03-07T16:04:52.218+05:30hrisikesh
thik likhechho . ei porisawr bivrawm-er...hrisikesh<br /><br />thik likhechho . ei porisawr bivrawm-er . eke prakash korte hole eko-roikhik ebong susonghoto kabyo-vaasa jawthesto noe .<br /><br />rangeet mitra-r kobita-e ei byapaar khub vaalovaabe ghotchhe . oke aami ei jonnei gurutbo dei .anupam mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05319362107961137116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-58297722748509296052010-03-07T13:06:28.476+05:302010-03-07T13:06:28.476+05:30আসলে আমরা এমন একটা যুগের মধ্যে বাস করছি যেখানে কোন...আসলে আমরা এমন একটা যুগের মধ্যে বাস করছি যেখানে কোনো ধারণা স্পষ্ট নয় . কোনো মতবাদ , কোনো তত্ব , সহজ করে কি বলা যাই আদৌ ? আর আমরা যা প্রকাশ করতে পারি তাই যদি গদ্য হয় আর যা প্রকাশ করতে পারি না তাই যদি কবিতা হয় তবে কবিতাকে তবে কবিতাকে প্রচলিত ধারণা আর গঠনের বিরুদ্ধ্বে না গিয়ে হয়ত উপায়নেই.nandanikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10558742674532638603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-18637801921280900542010-03-07T06:20:06.397+05:302010-03-07T06:20:06.397+05:30EI SAMAYER KABITAKI KATATA SBDA O ARTHA GUNKE CHAP...EI SAMAYER KABITAKI KATATA SBDA O ARTHA GUNKE CHAPIYE GIYECHE ?EI NIYE KATHA HOKকবিতা করিডোর https://www.blogger.com/profile/12749779499957639067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-3560172727241843502010-03-07T00:27:50.866+05:302010-03-07T00:27:50.866+05:30aami khub aahoto hoyechii....aami aamr moto...sytm...aami khub aahoto hoyechii....aami aamr moto...sytm birodhi...aamr mone how er theke beshi nijer somondhe na bollai bhalo...aamr akhn mon-mejaj bhalo na...bneche thakata o bhalo lagche na....hotash...akdom bhalo lagche na....;aami sopno dekhi...aamr nijer moto porashono r jogot r prem niye thaki...aamr songee na mishle bojha jabe na..aama k sobai bhul bojhe...k jane ami e bhul..oporadhi...aama k khoma kroo..aami akhn khub koste aachi..;aami to obhinow korte pari na..lukiye rakhte pari na....tai likhlm..nijer somondhee...jani na...kobe kobita likhte parbo..akta kobita....kobe parbo..k jane??ae niye ghum neye...paglamo bache..parchi na...bhalo lagche na..k u ama k bujhche na keno?? jani na..akhn 12.30 baje,,,rat hoyeche..aamr barir lokjn ghumoche...likhte iche korche khub..kintu jani na<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />sudu opekha korchii...kobe likhte parbo...aktakobita.<br /><br />ae blog aamr priyo...akhankar sob lekha i aamr bhalo lagee..darun lage...aami comnt na diye tai pori..porte bhalo lage..pathok to..tai kobita path kori....kore jachi..akta matal ashceh chnader jole ..........<br /><br /><br />rangeetRANGEET MITRAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03447535490250468905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-23577072833816702352010-03-07T00:18:47.446+05:302010-03-07T00:18:47.446+05:3090 er sathe shunyer je mul mil bole souvik-da jeTa...90 er sathe shunyer je mul mil bole souvik-da jeTake ba je ghatonaTake chihnito korechhe seTail amar mone hoy shuNyer sathe 90 er mul parthokyo...bishwayon<br /><br />90 te bharote bishwayan esechhilo shudhu north block e aar shunye seta esechhe samosto koNe...tar sathe sab theke baRo byapaarTa hoyechhe jogajog e jeTa kono na kono bhabe protyek-ke eka korechhe ebo'm je jogajogTake shurur dike niyontroN kara samvob hochchhilo bishwayan er tool gulo diye seta porer dike (porun ekhon) aar samvob holo na ei jogajog toiri korte para aar na paraTa aabar na-paraTa ke otikrom karaTa-i shunyer sabcheye baRo boishishtyo o challenge....amar dharoNa prithibite er cheye joTil samoy aar kakhono aseni aar er cheye joTil o proshsto kobita lekhar samoy o aar aseni...Sayantan Mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01868239810204340268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-3676760700392267242010-03-07T00:17:10.011+05:302010-03-07T00:17:10.011+05:30একটা ছেলে অন্ধকারে আমাকে হাত ধরে টানছে ;
আমার ভয়ের...একটা ছেলে অন্ধকারে আমাকে হাত ধরে টানছে ;<br />আমার ভয়ের কোন কারণ নেই ভেবে<br />একটা ধাতব কিছু নিয়ে পিছু পিছু আসে<br />তারপর একটা বেড়াল জিক-জ্যাগ কেটে দিল<br /><br />আমি,পিছনে একবারের বেশি না তাকিয়ে,বেল বাজাতে থাকলাম ।<br /><br />রঙ্গীত মিত্রRANGEET MITRAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03447535490250468905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-2997390213250115362010-03-06T14:58:53.239+05:302010-03-06T14:58:53.239+05:30Bolo bhai Anupam, bolo..:)Bolo bhai Anupam, bolo..:)SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-28689793580635470622010-03-06T14:39:53.091+05:302010-03-06T14:39:53.091+05:30haa haa haa ... ki je bolbo ...haa haa haa ... ki je bolbo ...anupam mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05319362107961137116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-43287604103808046212010-03-06T12:56:49.172+05:302010-03-06T12:56:49.172+05:30ইন্দ্রনীলের ফুটবল (কিম্বা 'পদকন্দুক') অসাধ...ইন্দ্রনীলের ফুটবল (কিম্বা 'পদকন্দুক') অসাধারণ!! <br /><br />শুভঙ্করের লেখা ভাল লেগেছে। 'ছায়ালপনা' আর 'ওদোম' শব্দদুটি বেশ। <br /><br />রংগীতের প্রচেষ্টা ভাল লাগলো, তবে 'ছবি'র অংশে আরেকটু মনযোগী না হলে, সেটি তার প্রাসঙ্গিকতা হারাতে পারে।<br /><br />সোমনাথের লেখায় যে ভাবে দৃশ্যনির্মাণ হয়, গড়ে ওঠে ছোটো ছোটো মুহূর্তের ছবি, তা ভাল লাগে। <br /><br />অনুপমের দুটি লেখাই ভাল। তবে শিরোনামহীন ছোটো কবিতাটি ("সায়ন্তন তোমাকে ... আবার মনে পড়ল ।") আমার বেশি ভালো লেগেছে। খুবই ব্যতিক্রমী ও ভিন্নধর্মী লেখা।Samit Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04384213601656506824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-10710111883070827672010-03-06T12:51:58.044+05:302010-03-06T12:51:58.044+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Samit Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04384213601656506824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-60798928801410729482010-03-06T10:53:24.959+05:302010-03-06T10:53:24.959+05:30Ar amar sotti-i mon-e hoyna 90 er kobita ar jibond...Ar amar sotti-i mon-e hoyna 90 er kobita ar jibondorshon-er shongey Shunnyo-r kobita ar jibondorshoner khub ekta faraak ache. '91-e Bharat-e Bisshayan ashar porey, amader ekhono ghor kateni, amra tarporer shobai ekhono ekta integrated community more or less, eta ami mon-e kori, eta niye kagoje likheochhi 2 bochhor agey. 80-r shonge 90-er je parthokkyo, 90-er shongey Shunnyo-r totota noye, hotei parena..SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-18431289450591420652010-03-06T10:36:03.750+05:302010-03-06T10:36:03.750+05:30NA BARINDA amake vulbujhona ami sahaj vabe sab kat...NA BARINDA amake vulbujhona ami sahaj vabe sab katha balte valo basi tai nischit kare balte pari atichetanata amar aro rapta kara kabitar jannai prayojan,tomar ei alochanata ekjan kabir chokhke aro natun vabe dekhar ichhe jagiye tule..........tomar katha sabsamay amar kache kangkhita.<br /><br />r anupamda kichu mane korona ami bujhte perechi tumi ja balte cheyecho.asale lekhata lekhar par lekhata nie besi vabini,satti balte ki mrittu sabdatake anna kono angike tule dharle kabitata aro ekta vinna matra peto .........ei katha mathai railo........bloger prai prtiti kabitai par lam darun sab kabita kabitar alochanate indrar kabita theke tomar kita pratheke sabder jeman natun bodh mith gare diche temni kabitar alochana kabitar bistare kabir vabna takre anekta jarita karche R Arjanilda tomake anurodh tumi chole jeo na ...........কবিতা করিডোর https://www.blogger.com/profile/12749779499957639067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-64129457847994472232010-03-06T10:33:03.342+05:302010-03-06T10:33:03.342+05:30Na na Anupam, thiky ache, ami bujhechi tumi ki bol...Na na Anupam, thiky ache, ami bujhechi tumi ki bolcho. ar ta chhaRa ei byaparta ekdom cliche hoye gyache ekhon, maaney sammyobaad-er shopnovongo, communism er awlikota ittyadi..tao eta Amake chhere jayna, tai likhe feli majhe modhhye. <br /><br />ar hyan tumi jetake 'backdated' bolchho, ota ichhe korei..seta je tumi bojho, ebong aro keu keu bojhe, tar jonnye dhonnyobad..<br /><br />Shunnyo Doshok theke formally likhte shuru korleo amar kintu boyesh 33, ar amar bondhura jara ekhon praye onekdin likhe fello, tader shonge lekha shuru korle ideally amar 90 doshoker kobitalekhok howa uchit chilo- ei kawtha ami amar boi-er vumikateo likhechi. kintu agey ami likhini karon onnyo onek kichhute byasto chhilam..ekhono achi, kintu ekhon jore kore jaal chhhinno korechhi..:)<br /><br />Shunnyo Doshoker 'hallu' kobita amar valo lagena.. ebar hallu kobita bolte ki bujhi sheta ami ekhaney bojhate chaina, ar parbo-ona hoyto..kintu eta ekta awbosthan amar, ba awparogota..ei somoye dnaRiye je kobita likhche, taar kobita 'backdated' ki kore hobey? maane form ar kayday hoyto hotey paarey, kintu jiboner proti taar take backdated ki kaur hoye? jodi dhori kobita jibon thekei uthe ashe konovabey, ar ki..<br /><br />shunnyo doshoker hallu kobita boley ami kauke awpoman korte chaichhina, kono ushma-o prokash korchhina..asha kori notun kono jhoR uthbena..:)<br /><br />Ebarer Kobisommelon-e Anupam, tomar chithita khub valo. ei blog-er kawthao uthey eseche..valo laglo..SOUVIK BANDYOPADHYAYnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-55313995758265287532010-03-06T09:20:13.255+05:302010-03-06T09:20:13.255+05:30Anupam dake koyek saptaho age mail kore ami ekTu k...Anupam dake koyek saptaho age mail kore ami ekTu kaRa sampadok hote bolechhilam kintu tar bodh hoy darkar porbe na karon blog nijei nijer chhakni hoye uthchhe...kromosho<br /><br />ebarer post er sabcheye bhelo legechhe avijit, indranil aar ar anupam-da r lekha...avijit aar indranil darun likhechho..bisheshato je bistarTa niye likhechho seTa khub-i irshonoyo...ami otyonto sachetan bhabe irshoniyo byabohar korlam kintu<br /><br />kobitake notun samoy-e notun hotei habe erakom kono dharoNa amar antoto nei kintu ta bole khub predictable kobita lekha-r modhye-o khub beshi krititwo nei...aar se jonnoi mar bhaSkar aar souvik er lekha bhalo lageni<br /><br />manik kobitaTa-r onek jaygay onek ingit pele-o puro lekhaTa samonjasyopurN0 collage mone holo na...jani na keno<br /><br />rangit er lekha niye ami kono comment korbo na karon amar mone hoy or lekhagulo amar onek na likhte para expressions ke chhuye jaay...ebo'm amra dujon onek xetre-i eki bastob bhag kore thaki beche thakar prexite...<br /><br />amar lekha jodi karor poRe bhalo lage aar tara jodi Kirostami-r chhobi na dekhe thaken...tahole ekTai onurodh dekhe nin anondo paben<br /><br />kobita niye aar ei bhaSa o ei samoy niye aro joTil o byapok alochona r opexay roilam...Sayantan Mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01868239810204340268noreply@blogger.com