tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post4503663439549698378..comments2023-08-27T15:36:01.227+05:30Comments on বাক্: 22nd postanupam mukhopadhyayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05319362107961137116noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-63523141991102476902010-04-12T14:28:43.460+05:302010-04-12T14:28:43.460+05:30dure havelir naram cepia
more jai more jai...san...dure havelir naram cepia<br /><br /><br />more jai more jai...sanghamitradi asamvab valo.protiti shabde sachetan kalampeshe akkhorik.e sab samvab hole mone hay natun amar natun,jodio vetore ekhono roye gache puratan premer rirangsa...<br />Avishek ke hats off korchi<br />na<br />hats on<br />na<br />on/no<br />off/on<br />anon/off<br />evabe chalun shbde mati.eke kobita bolle kobita,utsab bolle tai,asole amader janan ek traumatic pranay.Nabenduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10939512027263108640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-91797926187372755342010-04-12T14:27:33.538+05:302010-04-12T14:27:33.538+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Nabenduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10939512027263108640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-64412875399794699442010-04-12T14:27:33.539+05:302010-04-12T14:27:33.539+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Nabenduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10939512027263108640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-66433355740408986862010-04-12T14:27:33.540+05:302010-04-12T14:27:33.540+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Nabenduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10939512027263108640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-14277820321492369712010-02-25T22:27:56.253+05:302010-02-25T22:27:56.253+05:30Dhonyobad barin da, aryanil da.
tomar suggestion m...Dhonyobad barin da, aryanil da.<br />tomar suggestion mathay rakhbo, jate pore lekhar samay kaje lagate pari...<br />kichudin out of station chilam, tai blog e asa hoyni....somnathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13340651803336799019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-76696511120674267642010-02-22T18:56:05.160+05:302010-02-22T18:56:05.160+05:30khub surelaa, nipuN, nirjan o lyrical astanirjaner...khub surelaa, nipuN, nirjan o lyrical astanirjaner kabitaa. "araNya shabder bhetar sheeter byaasaardha raye gechhe" - eman sab visceral pa`mkti. ebaar kabike anurodh karabo oi aaraNyak recipe chherhe, oi gheso gandha chherhe beriye ese anya kichhu kare dekhaate. Once again, I must restate - prakRiti baa nisarger abhyantar theke aa`nkashi mere aparUp kabitaa ber karaa nishchay art, kintu se bhaai aneker karen. nijeke aaro challenge karun. khu`njun aaro bhinnatara khani.<br /><br />khub chhoTo kabitaa aamaay etai kam Taane aajakaal Je kichhu balaar mata khu`nje paai naa. aamaar mane hay khub chhoTo kabitaa, atirikta mitabhaashhaN - egulo anek taruN kabir madhye thaake. bayaser sange sange keTe Jaay. laxya karaben Swadesh Sen-er matao mitabyaayee kabio bayaser sange sange kabitaake kataTaa barha karechhen. <br /><br />Manik-er kabitaay hayato rework karaar scope aachhe. "aamaar eeshbaree" shunale Binay ke mane naa haye upaay nei. kaajei oi cliche Taake badale kichhuTaa radabadal kare dekhate paaro, hayato khub natun ekaTaa raastaa khule Jaabe. baa natun ekaTaa jaanalaa. sbapnil chetanaar aastar-prastar abirata parate parate garhe oThaa o khule Jaabaar ekaTaa mejaaj aachhe, seTaake saariye tolaa Jaay. Manik tumi ki Buddhadeb Basu-r bai "droupadeer saaree" parhechho. purano kabitaa haleo parhe dekhate paaro. taar choraa mejaaj ekhaane aachhe.<br /><br />abhishhek er cheshhTaa khub bhaalo laagachhe. o khub despo haye ekaTaa nijasba uchchaaraN khu`njachhe. nijer garhan khu`njachhe. apexaay roilaam. <br /><br />prashnaateetabhaabe ebaarer seraa kabitaa Somnath-er. somnath daaruN lekhaa hachchhe, just daaruN. But no complacency ? Thik to?<br />aar ekaTaa chhoTo suggestion - oi 1,2 ityaadi sa`mkhyaa diye point naa kare anyarakam kichhu bhaabaa Jaay naa? anya kona chinha baa niden paxe bullet....<br /><br />BAAK, ebhaaei daak<br />daakate thaakAryanil Mukhopadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07422709641052613731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-25379716420776177062010-02-21T17:30:01.245+05:302010-02-21T17:30:01.245+05:30PROTHOMEI ABHINANDAN ANUPAMKE.BAAK ER YATRA SUVO H...PROTHOMEI ABHINANDAN ANUPAMKE.BAAK ER YATRA SUVO HOK.22ND POST ER SUCHANA KABITAR NIL RANGER MODHYE KICHU SIRI THAKE ASHADHARAN.EMONKICHUR JONYOI BAR BAR BAAK E CLICK KORTE HOBE.ANIMIKH ER KABITA BHALO LAAGE AAR EI SANKHAY THE LAST SUPPER SEI BHALOKE DWIGOON KORLO.SOUVIK ER LEKHAY ADBHUT EK SAHAJ SURER REKHAPAT. TABU SETAI JANO ANEK ANEK.SAMIK ER TUPTAP ANGUL BAJCHE SONO BHALO LAAGLO AAR SANGHAMITRAR LEKHATIO BESH.<br /><br />from<br />AVIJIT DASGUPTAavijithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07974193266989057585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-8083024873341106782010-02-21T10:38:58.714+05:302010-02-21T10:38:58.714+05:30ami khub obak holam barin ghosal er moto ekjon man...ami khub obak holam barin ghosal er moto ekjon manush amar kobitatir eto sohoj sorol o ekti bhranto motamot dilen dekhe. eti anoo keu korle kichu blar chilo na. kintu barinda jodi emon bhabe byakkshya koren tobe bolte hoy tini khub seriously amader/amar lekha porchen na. <br />ami shocked.<br />bol auchit noy, kintu ishwari manabi noy. apni binoy majumdar tante paren. ami kharap hobo na. ami tar dharer kacheo jai ni. asole lekhar por dekhlam sobdo ti ar amar thaklo na. kintu baak e diye dilam. ekta halka experiment bolte paren-hoyto osofol.<br /><br />ami barinda ke ar ekbar kobiatati porte onurodh korchi. seriously. ebong isshwarike, isshwari ba manabi bhebe noy, anno kichu dhore niye- jemon dhorun amader prithibi............<br /><br />reference debar jonno khomaprarthi.Manik Sahanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-5849196366307518562010-02-20T12:01:32.661+05:302010-02-20T12:01:32.661+05:30eto sundar ekta path padhhati cholchhe...bandhyu r...eto sundar ekta path padhhati cholchhe...bandhyu ra kothay...?..nijer kabitar path i ba kamon laglo...jakhan nirman er por binirman cholchhe apnar kabitay...arthat lekhar por apni jakhan pathok nijer kabitar?..Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15029168796848252815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-67711495482919305892010-02-20T09:01:00.368+05:302010-02-20T09:01:00.368+05:30Aro ekta kathaa. kobita prokashito hoye gele ta ar...Aro ekta kathaa. kobita prokashito hoye gele ta ar kobir thakena, hoye pare paathaker. bibhinno paathaker nana matamat hoye thake. tai kono ekjan paathaker kathaay nirutsaho hote nei. Tabe kono paath protikriyar poxe ba bipoxe kobir kichu balaa saaje naa. jodi keu mone karo justify karaa uchit, tahole mone koro sei scope na rakhlei bhalo hoto.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-85188201793303425052010-02-20T08:31:09.975+05:302010-02-20T08:31:09.975+05:30Shouvik, tumi koyekta comments assemble korecho in...Shouvik, tumi koyekta comments assemble korecho in orderly way as stairs which are stairing ammusedly, bolche amader kobita karo, kobita karo. eguloke undone rakhle keno?<br /><br />Alamiti, Anupam. BAAK is very unusual webzin. kintu mone rakhte habe, in print etake tough competition-e porte habe. Good Luck.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-25706050000955354552010-02-20T08:25:45.037+05:302010-02-20T08:25:45.037+05:30Somnath, my congratulations ! ki je asadharan kobi...Somnath, my congratulations ! ki je asadharan kobita likhechis ! thik je kobita ami roj likhte chai. kobitay constructivity'r application darun hoyeche, incremental composition lay kore kore. ami janina katakhaani aware chili tui processtar byapare. pl, do it again and again.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-24326617099650428722010-02-20T08:21:57.846+05:302010-02-20T08:21:57.846+05:30Rongeet, kobitate rationalize karaar chesta anarth...Rongeet, kobitate rationalize karaar chesta anartho toiry kare. bhulbhal punctuation diyechis keno? 'kono karon jana jay na' balaa matro kobita theke kobita biday nilo. ki hoyeche tor? ekhano guide k potaate parisni? tahole guide-er meyeke potabi kabe ?Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-14311680219455584642010-02-20T08:17:42.341+05:302010-02-20T08:17:42.341+05:30Shomik, 'nodi' shabdota durbal korlo kobit...Shomik, 'nodi' shabdota durbal korlo kobitatake. Tabe sadyo bibahitoder janyo ei romantikota spare karaai jai, tai na Anupam?Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-25337762783542393182010-02-20T08:14:45.717+05:302010-02-20T08:14:45.717+05:30Sanghamitra, tor kobitateo MOM ! kintu kobitata ap...Sanghamitra, tor kobitateo MOM ! kintu kobitata apurbo. 'kingba' ei shabde je addition ba alteration ache ta kobitake weak kare. kobi soja kathaa bolbe, ekta kathaa ekbar bolbe. tor kobitay bakita dekh. ki asadharan composition hoyeche!Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-1098448369242002542010-02-20T08:08:08.454+05:302010-02-20T08:08:08.454+05:30Debashis, wonderfull legeche kobitata. lekha ar kh...Debashis, wonderfull legeche kobitata. lekha ar khela'r modhye immaging ache, note korlam, rasta ar gharer modhye alo andhakarer sei rakam immaging ache. ki likhecho !Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-49389099014505799292010-02-20T08:04:06.178+05:302010-02-20T08:04:06.178+05:30Hrishikes, tomake request kori, ei kobitati theke ...Hrishikes, tomake request kori, ei kobitati theke galper element gulo tule nile kemon hoy chehara ba impression, try kore dekho.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-48987664976972313712010-02-20T08:00:33.919+05:302010-02-20T08:00:33.919+05:30Sonju, kobitata mushre poreche matro, nihato hoyni...Sonju, kobitata mushre poreche matro, nihato hoyni to. Oi 1ta shabdo-nil- je eto bhabalo .. ei bhabnagulo kobita lekhar samoy ar paraar samoy duibhabe cholte thake. Ekbar nirmaner samoy, ar ekbar binirmaner samoy. ei time gross matching ba parallel na, mutually influence karenaa. dont worry.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-4811481013696799202010-02-18T13:49:40.473+05:302010-02-18T13:49:40.473+05:30sudhyu ekta rang evabe ekta kabitake hatya kore ei...sudhyu ekta rang evabe ekta kabitake hatya kore ei pratham janlam..er upolobdhi o korlam...chatim horbola....kothay paoya jabe...setao boro katha na...kintu eibar rang gulo bodh hoi amar kachhe paltachhe...ba paltabe....asadharan ei utoor ba kabita vabna amar mone thakbe barinda...Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15029168796848252815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-41376979910689549382010-02-18T09:44:37.742+05:302010-02-18T09:44:37.742+05:30Manik,kalpo'r(kobita+galpo) abhas pachhi. prat...Manik,kalpo'r(kobita+galpo) abhas pachhi. prathame metaphor mone hochhilo Ishworike, kintu 7 times ref er par ta human hoye commenplace hoye gelo. Bhalo laglona.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-91456541644435434922010-02-18T09:39:02.709+05:302010-02-18T09:39:02.709+05:30Abhishek,holona kobitata. Harappa theke kon bipass...Abhishek,holona kobitata. Harappa theke kon bipass dhore tui ba pakhi surdung-e pouchobi sta kobiar kahini hote pare na.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-63116338787397785512010-02-18T09:35:14.233+05:302010-02-18T09:35:14.233+05:30etobar Abhijit ! durdanto ei kobitay 'Pap'...etobar Abhijit ! durdanto ei kobitay 'Pap' ei shabdota golmal koreche.uncalled for mone hoyeche amar. Athacha fatafati hoyeche shasta.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-57652471513434090152010-02-18T09:31:56.819+05:302010-02-18T09:31:56.819+05:30Tomakeo duo, Palash. shes parjanto gitobitan theke...Tomakeo duo, Palash. shes parjanto gitobitan theke berote chaicho ei basante. hese uthche Singbhumer maath.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-85589874581840195032010-02-18T09:28:24.425+05:302010-02-18T09:28:24.425+05:30Bhaskar,nodi,jahaj,dheu...egulo eto obvious je kob...Bhaskar,nodi,jahaj,dheu...egulo eto obvious je kobita dhorte parena ar. kobitar bakita besh bhalo observation. ami tomake ekta link dhoriye di barong. maach,makor,maloy ba mon hente geleo ki dheu othe na? tahole egulo tumi bhable na keno?Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3132844125675064440.post-90557575122874631222010-02-18T09:15:32.303+05:302010-02-18T09:15:32.303+05:30Abhijit jeno 100 bachar agekar meyeder lekha nabel...Abhijit jeno 100 bachar agekar meyeder lekha nabel porche .. pl. dont mind my comment, Abhijit. bhabo, aro bhabo.Barin Ghosalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17419677008150732363noreply@blogger.com